My sprites.....

[miken park]

0_o. I have been spriting for a while now. So I'm posting my sprites..

Chaohttp://*******.com/flj7yp.gif
Mixeshttp://*******.com/flj5uv.png http://*******.com/flj5w4.png http://*******.com/flj5zp.png http://*******.com/flj62d.png Credit to Coronis http://*******.com/flj679.png http://*******.com/flj68z.png http://*******.com/flj6ec.png http://*******.com/flj6hj.png
Dolls
Angel http://*******.com/flj5hv.png Credit to pokesho for the manea http://*******.com/flj5m8.png
Devil http://*******.com/flj5nn.pngDragon free for revamp
WTF's
Rcoulors http://*******.com/flj829.png
Revamps http://*******.com/flj52u.png http://*******.com/flj61e.png http://*******.com/flj6lx.pnghttp://*******.com/flj6mx.png
None yet though!

 

[LBB]

umm where are they?

 

[MysticFlames]

....Shouldn't you make the thread when you already have sprites to post? >.>;;

 

[Koneko]

umm...maby you should make a threed if you actuly have something to POST

 

[miken park]

They are there now. I had to get off the net just after I posted.

 

[LBB]

hmm you need a little bit more improvement, but overall they are all pretty good.

 

[Electabuzz]

LuGiA_bLaStOiSe, that isn't gonna help at all...because you're not giving any critism.

Chaos: I've never done chaos, but your main problem is that the shading is very choppy. This is especially prominent on the Quilava-whatever chao. It has a couple random splotches of dark...

Mixes: Very choppy...the parts need to be blended together. Then you must recolor/reshade/reoutline the entire sprite...

The angel is really choppy, and needs better blending and shading. The Suicune thing looks pretty good...probably your best. The recolor has a bit of outline work/shading work needed, but in general is good. The devil wings aren't blended, and one juts out looking unatural. The revamps are really bad...they need shading help, and need work on outlines.

For a beginner, you're alright. You should read some tutorials, because they'll help you improve. Nice try though...

 

[miken park]

LuGiA_bLaStOiSe, that isn't gonna help at all...because you're not giving any critism.

Chaos: I've never done chaos, but your main problem is that the shading is very choppy. This is especially prominent on the Quilava-whatever chao. It has a couple random splotches of dark...

Mixes: Very choppy...the parts need to be blended together. Then you must recolor/reshade/reoutline the entire sprite...

The angel is really choppy, and needs better blending and shading. The Suicune thing looks pretty good...probably your best. The recolor has a bit of outline work/shading work needed, but in general is good. The devil wings aren't blended, and one juts out looking unatural. The revamps are really bad...they need shading help, and need work on outlines.

For a beginner, you're alright. You should read some tutorials, because they'll help you improve. Nice try though...

I do use the tutorials. I think that Suitops is my best and I love the Suicune too. Thanks for the CC.

 

[Mikau]

I think the Suiangel is awesome.

 

[MysticFlames]

I think the chaos are cute, especially the Entei, the Typlosion/Quilava chao has odd shading though. The mixes need to blend better, like the Rukario just doesn't look natural with the arms like that. The devil Suicune...the wings are oddly positioned. The recolor is nice, no noticable mistakes...and the revamps...well, you need to work on those. The shading's a bit messed up and there's lots of spots that are colored the wrong color. Like the Blastiose has lots of random blue pixels on its shell...

They are generally okay, but maybe you need more practice...