My Sprites

[Yumi Yuko]

I'm new to this spriting thing, but I've discided to post some of my sprites. Since I've just started spriting, I'm not that great yet. Here they are:

Yeah they're all pretty random sprites. So, what do you think?

 

[jhoto moto]

Hmm first time hay well I can see its your first time you did mostly recouler there it seem off especialy the yellow girl she look to darkher stomach and shoulder should b a little lighter but with the fusions they look quite good try a little more on that placing of object do a little custom work to make it look like it matches that couple one you should try to make brendan smiling with a wide open mout like th original guy did so keep practising and update here try not to just focus on trainers though go for some pokemon fusions fakemon and all other things and we'll crit you but all in all its kinda good for a first if we were allowed number rating i'd rate

 

[Polursine]

The Ash sprite looks cool! Keep up the good work, and you might want to start on Pokemon if you're this good!

 

[Yumi Yuko]

Hmm first time hay well I can see its your first time you did mostly recouler there

it seem off especialy the yellow girl she look to darkher stomach and shoulder should b a little lighter

the fusions they look quite good

try a little more on that placing of object do a little custom work to make it look like it matches that couple.

one you should try to make brendan smiling with a wide open mout like th original guy did.

so keep practising and update here.

try not to just focus on trainers though go for some pokemon fusions fakemon and all other things and we'll crit you

all in all its kinda good for a first if we were allowed number rating i'd rate

Yeah, the recolors are easy for me...

I'll fix that.

Thank you.

okay.

Brendan isn't supposed to smile. He's being hugged by an unknown girl.

I'll keep praticing and updating.

I prefer trainers...but okay.

Thank you very much for the tips^^;; I'll work on my spriting.

The Ash sprite looks cool! Keep up the good work, and you might want to start on Pokemon if you're this good!

Thank you very much^^;; The Ash sprite is one of my favorite sprites I've done.

 

[jhoto moto]

Brendan isn't supposed to smile. He's being hugged by an unknown girl.

Ok I get it but he does for some reason under good looking seem to be smiling if he doesn't like it then you should make him trying to push her away or trying to stetch away ts all in the custom work that you truly make a sprite flow

 

[Dark Venusaur]

The coloring is off on the lass girl and the color looks weird on the FR/LG hero

;003;Dark Venusaur;003;

 

[Capt.Miko]

The FRLG girls, the Rocket member in purple and the girl in orange lost some of their outlines (or maybe they are too light) but overall, not bad for a first try. I think the Swimmer girl and May sprites were done the best.

 

[Yumi Yuko]

Thanks for the comments and improvements, I'll work on my sprites to improve them.

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

You seem to have used the deafult colours. The darkest deaful colours aretoo far apart in lum comared to the lightest deafut colours.

 

[Yumi Yuko]

You seem to have used the deafult colours. The darkest deaful colours aretoo far apart in lum comared to the lightest deafut colours.

No...I don't think I used default colors at all.

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

The colours are just weird then. >_<

 

[Ultimate]

The shadings are VERY bad.. some you use 2 colour and others you only use 1 colour.... more shadings...

 

[Eevee95]

work on the shading a little.

 

[Psychic]

They're not bad, but your shading isn't so great. Especially the FR/LG boy and girl. The boy's shirt is made up of blues that are too different in shades. Always use custom colors, and make them less bright. The girl wearing the orange just looks weird. The Ash is good, but needs more/better shading.

~Psychic