My Team ^^

[Celtic Guardian 101]

This is my team Help me fix it or give advice. I never really played competitive so i still don't know much but i am trying to be somewhat good and/or competitive.
Can you Help me with this team that i have assembeled. I still haven't leveled them up to 100 yet so don't just say to level them up

Also, if you think that i am missing something (which i know i am with all sweepers) please suggest a pokemon type (Wall/Tank, ect.) and a moveset for me to learn from

Zapdos Lv84@Amulet Coin
Impish Nature
-Fly
-Rain Dance
-Drill Peck
-Thunder

Gyarados Lv58@Leftovers
Serious Nature, Trying to get a shiny, i dont care what nature the shiny will be, so just fix the moveset/Item
Ability: Intimidate
-Thrash
-Flamethrower
-Hydro Pump
-Hyper Beam, (EQ soon)

Haunter LV43@Leftovers, though Gengar can use focus punch....
Hasty Nature
EV: Speed-252, Sp.Atk-238, HP-20
-Confuse Ray?(should i change it to HP(Bug)???)
-Destiny Bond
-Psychic
-Shadow Ball

Charizard lv70@Leftovers
Naive Nature
Breeding for Bellyzard, this is what i have now though
-Wing Attack
-Substitute
-Flamethrower
-Focus Punch

Nidoking Lv45@Leftovers
Calm Nature
-Sludge Bomb
-Thrash
-Earthquake
-Megahorn

Syther LV42@Leftovers
Modest Nature
-Morning Sun
-Silver Wind
-Slash
-Swords Dance(eventually)

Currently not using Sneasel, but still i still like it so you can Help me with it if you want...

Sneasel LV51@Leftovers
Jolly Nature
-Ice Beam
-Faint Attack
-Slash
-Beat Up(eventually)


Thanks for the help

 

[Nightcat]

OK, this is the first time i've edited teams, but i've seen lots of other people do it, so don't call me a n00b or anything.

Zapdos, give it rain dance or froget thunder. You might want to EV train it in speed more, since thats it's weakest stat. Also, unless you absolutely NEED fly for flying, trash it and give it like calm mind or a stat booster. drill peck is much better.

Kingdra, why twister??? to beat dragon, it's only weakness (just answered myself) ice beam>>>>blizzard, surf or hydro pump, depends on if you want power or reliability, whichever one you get rid of, again, give it a stat booster.

Nidoking, pretty good, just give it leftovers and EV it for awesome atk and def, definite tank possibility.

Why flamethrower??? I know, grass, but I say EQ, because it's double weak to electric.Can he learn steel wing? if so, teach it to beat rock and ice, but still EQ might be better. Oh yeah, if your gonna have it with hydro pump, then EV it's sp. atk. you also could have HP ground type, instead of EQ, if you want to hit flying types too.

Haunter: a few things. #1: evolve it. Gengar has awesome speed, and sp atk. #2: either shadow ball or punch. like i said before reliability or power.
#3: ev it in def and sp def, especially def. #4: maybe don't do the hypnosis/dream eater/ nightmare combo, because it right now has nothing to beat it's weakness, dark. Can haunter or gengar learn focus punch? if so also teach it substitute. Heres how it goes:
____ sent out tyranitar!
Gengar used substitute!
T-tar used crunch! (hopefully you have enough evs that your sub will survive this)
Gengar is tightening it's focus!
T-tar used crunch! (even if your sub dies, it doesn't matter)
Gengar used focus pucnch!
It's super effective!
Foe T-tar fainted!

Charizard: either blast burn or flamethrower, again, power or reliability. Get rid of wing attack, we can already pwn bug and grass, and quite possibly fighting types. Ev train it in Hp, atk, sp def, and maybe speed.

Hope this helps!

 

[Celtic Guardian 101]

Thanks, One thing though- I will not evolve haunter........sry

 

[Nightcat]

You mean you can't trade it? Oh well, just work extra hard with the Evs then! Good luck!

 

[Celtic Guardian 101]

okay, any advice on the Natures?

 

[magnemiteZ]

This is the format for posting teams. It is also a sticky. GORSH read it please

Zapdos
Item: Leftovers
Hasty/Mild Nature
Ability: Pressure
-Thunder Wave
-Drill Peck/Hidden Power [Grass]/[Special] (If you can be bothered to try for it)
-Thunderbolt
-Substitute

Kingdra Lv54
Item: Shell Bell <-- Leftovers is best
Modest Nature
Abilityosion Point
-Ice Beam
-Surf
-Rest
-Rain Dance

Nidoking Lv45
Item: Choice Band
Jolly Nature
Abilityosion Point
Sludge Bomb/Rock Slide
Shadow Ball
Earthquake
Megahorn/Rock Slide
Have EITHER Megahorn or Sludge Bomb, not both. You need RS over one of them. You choose.

Gyarados Lv58
Item: Leftovers
Adamant Nature
Ability: Intimidate
Dragon Dance
Return
Earthquake
Thunder Wave/Taunt

Gengar Lv61
Item: Leftovers
Hasty Nature
Ability:Levitate
Thunderbolt
Shadow Ball/Sludge Bomb
Fire Punch
Destiny bond/Giga Drain/Ice Punch/Hypnosis

Charizard lv70
Item: Leftovers
Naive Nature
Ability:Blaze
Wing Attack/Aerial Ace
Belly Drum/Swords Dance/Dragon Dance
Earthquake
Flamethrower/Fire Blast

You have a serious Rock Slide+EQ Problem.
Bolt Beam also really hurts you.

 

[Celtic Guardian 101]

One Question, How do you teach a Pokemon Substitute, is there a move tutor in Sapphire, FR, LG, Colloseaum, or XD, that teaches you it?

 

[DragonDance]

in FR/LG talk to the man standing by the Kangaskhan to get Sub. in Emerald, talk to the chick on the roof of the Lilycove Department store.

 

[Celtic Guardian 101]

Thanks Very Much *runs and starts updating team*

does anyone have a better replacement for kingdra.......2 water types might be a bad idea........what about aerodactyl.......though that would make my entire team allergic to rock type, except Nidoking

 

[Zero Nexus]

This is my team Help me fix it or give advice. I never really played competitive so i still don't know much but i am trying to be somewhat good and/or competitive.
Can you Help me with this team that i have assembeled. I still haven't leveled them up to 100 yet so don't just say to level them up

Now:.............................Thinking of changing to:

Zapdos Lv80
Item: None
Impish Nature........................Rash Nature
Ability: Pressure
HP:264
Attack:200
Defence:199
Sp.Atk:207
Sp.Def:186
Speed:178
rain dance
Drill Peck
Thunderbolt...................................???
thunder

Seedra Lv54
Item: Shell Bell
Quiet Nature..................................Naughty
Abilityosion Point
HP:132
Attack:96
Defence:125
Sp.Atk:128
Sp.Def:63
Speed:111
dragon dance
Surf..................................???
Blizzard............................Ice Beam
Hydro Pump.......................???

Nidoking Lv45
Item: Leftovers
Calm Nature...................................Serious
Abilityosion Point
HP:134
Attack:82
Defence:77
Sp.Atk:91
Sp.Def:83
Speed:91
Sludge Bomb
flamethrower
Earthquake
Megahorn

Gyarados Lv58
Item: None
Serious Nature............................Trying to get a shiny, i dont care what nature the shiny will be, so just fix the moveset/Item
Ability: Intimidate
HP:197
Attack:170
Defence:123
Sp.Atk:89
Sp.Def:128
Speed:126
arial ace
Flamethrower
Hydro Pump
thunderbolt

Haunter Lv61
Item: Spell Tag
Brave Nature....................................Hasty
Ability:Levitate
HP:152
Attack:106
Defence:76
Sp.Atk:169
Sp.Def:89
Speed:126
Shadow Punch
Shadow Ball
Hypnosis
Dream Eater

Charizard lv70
Item: Lax Incense
Naive Nature
Ability:Blaze
HP:206
Attack:144
Defence:137
Sp.Atk:184
Sp.Def:127
Speed:195
rock slide
fly
Flamethrower
Blast Burn............................?????

Thanks for the help

nuff said.

 

[aipomkong]

gj, gyarados doesn't even learn aerial ace, dragon dance seedra is stupid with no physical attacks to even benifeit from it.

also lol at fly suggested for charizard

 

[Celtic Guardian 101]

I edited My team??? What do you think now?

After Thinking i thought of some pokemon that i want to use that might be good.....but i cannot think of what ones to use

 

[magnemiteZ]

What did you change? That format that you used bugs me so I only looked briefly.

 

[Celtic Guardian 101]

Well I am undecided on which pokemon to use now....also i changed some moves and am EV training my pokemon

Edited, again

 

[ZNtelle]

You double-posted this team. Delete the other thread. One thread is fine.

You think you're gonna go competitive with this team, eh? Well, you're never going to succeed unless you get:

- At least two Pokemon that can take a hit
- BoltBeam resistance
- Earthquake/Rock Slide resistance
- A (p)hazer
- More EV training

That being said, you have a long way to go.

 

[snorlax]

1-At least two Pokemon that can take a hit
2-BoltBeam resistance
3-Earthquake/Rock Slide resistance
4-A (p)hazer
5-More EV training

That being said, you have a long way to go.

1 [Special]-Blissey/Regice/Snorlax [Physical]- Bulky Waters/Skarmory/Cradily
2 a good special wall or at least two pokes that resist one or both
3 somthing with Flying/Levitate[EQ] Physical Wall/Steel
4 Roar/Whirlwind/Haze
5 Nuff said

 

[ZNtelle]

Snorlax fits 1 and 2, while Weezing fits 3 and 4.

 

[Celtic Guardian 101]

Updated Haunter, finally EV trained him

 

[magnemiteZ]

What are the other Evs on Haunter?
And can you make your format like this.

 

[Celtic Guardian 101]

What are the other Evs on Haunter?
And can you make your format like this.

Okay i Formated it like that.....Better now?
Team Edited, what do you think now?