• Be sure to join the discussion on our discord at: Discord.gg/serebii
  • If you're still waiting for the e-mail, be sure to check your junk/spam e-mail folders

My three Pokemon

Shadow_Fox

Shadow_Fox

Chaotic Dreamer
The Groudon is probably the best here, but they could all use work. The colorings very flat and rushed looking and puting them in original poses would be a good idea as well.
~
 
S

superjolteon

TEH-MEH!!!
Well I think these drawings are quite good for your age. But I think shading could be a little better and improved. Try to blend colours from dark to light as a tone if you want to achieve that realistic effect. Jirachi's proportions are fine but head is slightly crammed up. Blastoise's right arm and leg need to be in better proportion and scale as well as the head. And Groudon's left leg needs to be in better proportion too. Looks like it's stretched out and slightly out of place. Apart from that well done on first pokemon sketches on this forum! ^ ^

Groudon is the better out of all of them in my opinion.
 
Z

zuloon

Bboy Zuloon
You should put more effort into your work. YOu look like you have much potential but don't use it. Try to work hard on just one piece. Spend at least three days on it.
 
L

Luxuria

_
Alright, they're okay.
You should outline darker on them all and when you colour, be sure to colour in ONE DIRECTION as well as colouring DARKER. It looks very sloppy if you don't colour dark and outline. I can't really tell if you coloured the Blastoise or not either. And they all look sort of lopsided. They all also have kind of wobbly-ish lines, TOO WOBBLY.
On your Jirachi pic, it's mouth is to big.

The best one you drew is Groudon like many others said. Not as much wrong with it.
[/CRIT]
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Top