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My Town!

Dean

Wonder of Thunder!
This is the town i made :)

Wild pokemon in the Gass:
Growlithe (Rare)
Houndour (Uncommon)
Electrike(Common)
Pidgey (Common)
Hoothoot (Rare)
Wingull (Uncommon)
Rattata (Common)
Sentret (Uncommon)
Pochyena (Rare)

Pokemon in the Water:
Totodile (Rare)
Squirtle (Rare)
Mudkip (Rare)
Marill (Uncommon)
Magicarp (Common)
Carvana (Rare)
Psyduck (Rare)
Feebas (Common)
ChinChou (Uncommon)
 
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Typhlojoe

Thunder Trainer
Your town looks really nice, it's your first right? The only thing that I don't like is that the sides are kinda cut off.
Your fakemon is terrible though, it's really just shapes that are thrown together. To make a fakemon you have to make individual shapes with a freehand tool, and make them come together like an actual game sprite.
 

Bu†cH

Braaiiiiiinss......
Just totally simple cut and paste.

Try editing (recolor, reshape, mix with other building material) the buildings and use tiles to make your town look more organized.
 

Jerichi

ASB Overlord
Staff member
Ok, I'm not exactly a spriting expert, but here are some tips:
1) Make sure everything is on one line. The steps are uneven. To check it, draw a line down the area, and fix what doesn't touch it.
2) Edit things, like BiZ said. Recoloring things or moving them around isn't enough to make it look good. Use a variety of pieces from diffrent buildings, or even make your own.
3) Make sure all the buildings are about the same size. You can have bigger buildings, but it helps to have ones that look good with the smaller ones.
4) Add a border. You can use water, trees, fences, partritions, and other things.
5) Use a variety of land forms. Make it interesting. Put buildings in interesting places. Make land jut out into the sea. Form the water in an interesting way. Make the cliffs diffrent. Mix up the ground tiles (within reason).
6) Make something unique. Make your own sprites and incorporate them. Edit buildings to make them diffrent. Recolor ground or flowers to cacth attention.
7) Add details. Add flowers or plants. Make an interesting design. Change the colors of the plants. Make it a diffrent season. Put down bricks. Make docks. Put lighthouses.

Hope that helped. :)
 
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