My towns and all that

[Magical Trevor]

Hi these are towns i do. It's my first try. I would like you to comment on them so I can improve. Ask me before you use them. And if you do give credit
Undergo town
http://*******.com/maf7sp.png
Britch city
http://*******.com/maf7uh.png

 

[Polursine]

Meh, not rating. Create actual towns. The first one is just the maze thing from the Underwater Cavern in R/S/E. Some buildings you can't get to!
And the second one is just buildings galore!

Do an fresh idea, and I'll rate it.

 

[Dafearo(svensk)]

Undergo town: What he said. And wouldn't those buildings sink?
Britch city: It looks a bit sloppy but it's creative!

 

[Cheez Puf]

they're...okay for a beginner. The first one is okay, but the second one is kinda bad. First, the trees overlap the fence in places. And, you might want to use real grass rather than use one solid color. Why do you need all of that space anyway?