My Uber-Smexy Art

[Luna Umbreon]

http://img464.imageshack.us/img464/1171/bunnyumbreon4rv.png

Only one pic for now, but I might get some later.

THe art is of an Umbreon in the form of a bunny rabbit. ^^

 

[Hakuryuu]

I wouldn't say "Uber smexy" but your art is okay for what it is. ^^

Needs shading though. I can see you used crayons and markers. Try colored pencils. They work better.

I don't like how simplistic this is either. You did a nice job, but still. Your coloring seems to go out of the lines, and the head shape bothers me. Its too much like an egg IMO. The body structure is really simple too. =/

Keep practicing! You'll get better soon!

 

[The Smore]

I like the idea but like Kyuumaro says the colouring goes out of the lines.

Also I think that the colouring could be a bit more even andn varied.

Its a nice peice of art - but the colouring let you down