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My weird PMD comic
- Thread starter darkness_the_umbreon
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darkness_the_umbreon
FIRE!
I just don't have anything else. I can only do PMD. Chapter 2 will be up later.
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flamingoozaru
Well-Known Member
Like the others, I also advice guide reading, you can find alot of sprites over the interne. Reorder the boxes to which to read first, make your textboxes easier to read and your joke is bland and weak. Hope you improve!
EDIT: Cool, I became Cascade and I wasn't even counting!
EDIT: Cool, I became Cascade and I wasn't even counting!
Ghez, be a bit kinder to the newbie, okay? We're not God himself when we start making comics. It takes time and effort.
Telling him where some things are will help more than saying "lol, this sucks".
This is the pokémon page of the Spriters Resource. Go ahead and download whatever you need. Although, I would personally recommend drawing
http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintendo/pokemon/
Add some backgrounds and stuff like that and you'll have a comic going. If you need some extra help on something, please PM away.
Telling him where some things are will help more than saying "lol, this sucks".
This is the pokémon page of the Spriters Resource. Go ahead and download whatever you need. Although, I would personally recommend drawing
http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintendo/pokemon/
Add some backgrounds and stuff like that and you'll have a comic going. If you need some extra help on something, please PM away.
darkness_the_umbreon
FIRE!
I can't draw...
Alright this needs... work.
to start, changec the "I am"s to I'm, they sound like robots or something from a baby tv show currently *(just finding examles no offense itended)
that and even though there arent many eps yet i can see no plot, the boxes are also vey lacking in number.... never use such bright colors, there are very few who can pull off scratching a background, just use normal grass if you wont use md tiles.
in the first chpy thing.... theres1 sceen and somee hard t understand dialouge
so basicl, more actual sceens and better dailouge, looks lke the plot has a fir bit of pontntal with a split team though.
to start, changec the "I am"s to I'm, they sound like robots or something from a baby tv show currently *(just finding examles no offense itended)
that and even though there arent many eps yet i can see no plot, the boxes are also vey lacking in number.... never use such bright colors, there are very few who can pull off scratching a background, just use normal grass if you wont use md tiles.
in the first chpy thing.... theres1 sceen and somee hard t understand dialouge
so basicl, more actual sceens and better dailouge, looks lke the plot has a fir bit of pontntal with a split team though.
Treeckoman7
Stickers are ghetto
Well I see some things wrong with this,
1.) Too random.
When a comic is too random it is hard to follow.
2.) Bad speech bubbles.
You could have the best comic in the world ruined by your bad speech bubbles.
3.) Work on Spriting skills.
I am not saying I am the best spriter here, but you do need some work.
If you work on these things your comic will be really good. Don't give up. Do you thing Picasso gave up when he, himself was horrified at his first attempt at art? No! He started again and that time made something good! Keep going and this comic will go far! Keep Going!
And to Infinity who made the first post here, we are not being mean to the creator. Flaming Goozaru wasn't being rude or anything, he was saying it in a nice civilized manner. Infinity it is people like you why we cannot post a nice civilized opinion here without being torn apart for hurting the feelings of the creator. Are you the self esteem police? Really, don't say that we can't give any criticism because they are new here. }=)
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1.) Too random.
When a comic is too random it is hard to follow.
2.) Bad speech bubbles.
You could have the best comic in the world ruined by your bad speech bubbles.
3.) Work on Spriting skills.
I am not saying I am the best spriter here, but you do need some work.
If you work on these things your comic will be really good. Don't give up. Do you thing Picasso gave up when he, himself was horrified at his first attempt at art? No! He started again and that time made something good! Keep going and this comic will go far! Keep Going!
And to Infinity who made the first post here, we are not being mean to the creator. Flaming Goozaru wasn't being rude or anything, he was saying it in a nice civilized manner. Infinity it is people like you why we cannot post a nice civilized opinion here without being torn apart for hurting the feelings of the creator. Are you the self esteem police? Really, don't say that we can't give any criticism because they are new here. }=)
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