My YGO TRAD Untitled Deck

[Gliese]

Well the name is confusions because it has a mix of all cards.but i dont think its good so im gonna get reveiws to see.

Monsters:
Toon Cannon Soldier
Red Eyes Darkness Dragon
Giga Gagagigo
Suijin
Freezing Beast
Burning Beast
Armed Dragon Lv3
Mr.Volcano
Torpedo Fish
Obnoxious Celtic Guard
The Fiend Megacyber
Orga Mega-Fortress of Darkness
Beta The Magnet Warrior
Over Drive
Elephant Statue of Blessing
Red Eyes B. Dragon
Element Dragon
Twin Headed Behemoth
Luster Dragon
Dark Dust Spirit
Armed Dragon Lv5
Legendary Jujitsu MAster
Wingweaver
Kazejin

Spells:
Tremendous Fire
Shield & Sword
Premature Burial
Inferno Tempest
Nobleman of Crossout x2
Emergency Provisions
Mystical Space Typhoon
Heavy Storm
Great Trunade
Painful Choice
Swords Of Revealing Light
Gravekeepers Servant

Traps:
Formation Union
Return From The Different Dimension
Chain Destruction
Solemn Wishes
Call of the Haunted
Cursed Seal of the Forbidden Spell x2
Trap Hole
Trap Jammer
Dust Tornado


Thats all so how is it

 

[Judai Yuki]

I'll fix it next time i'm on.k?

 

[Haruka's Swimsuit]

I give it a two.
It's horribly put-together and looks like it is the result of randomly buying Starter/Structure decks and booster packs.
On the otherhand, it could be worse...

 

[Rudibaker]

Hm...

I cant fix it because I dont know what you are trying to do...every deck has to have some kind of purpose.

Basic Tip #1: Try to stay around 40 cards...

Basic Tip #2: Avoid using too many Tribute monsters...

 

[Aquadon]

No, I'm sorry. I don't see this being any good.

The problem with this is that it's too... random. You need a theme if you want to go anywhere. Even Chaos was still a theme.

Seeing how it's Traditional, use BLS and CED. Then use Light/Dark cards that will help you draw cards, thin out your deck, and get these bad boys out FTW.

 

[Haruka's Swimsuit]

No, I'm sorry. I don't see this being any good.

The problem with this is that it's too... random. You need a theme if you want to go anywhere. Even Chaos was still a theme.

Seeing how it's Traditional, use BLS and CED. Then use Light/Dark cards that will help you draw cards, thin out your deck, and get these bad boys out FTW.

Hmm, you might have a good point there. A well thought-out Traditional Chaos deck could possibly be quite formiddable. Unfortunately, it would be a tad difficult to pull off since Chaos Sorceror was completely unlimited in the last format and now that it's banned, that would limit it to one in Traditional.