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Mysterious Encounter: a Special Shipping Story

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R95irth

Member
I like your fiction, even if your chapter aren't small, i can read its without be bothering, or disgutsting by all these paragraph !!

And i understand every little phrase, i ddn't have to look for my dictionnary in the middle of the text !
So your fiction is very good and easly to read....This is the first skill.

After, it's about Red and yellow...So : "YEahhh ! A good fiction about them in the original universe *_*, not a shool fic again !"

And at last, the story is good, i want to know what happened to red's mother, and understand how the naugthy pokemon can escape yellow's abilitie...

Then,What else ? to conclude, i like it... u_u You won't give up ? will you ?
 
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chamo-chan

:U
R95irth said:
I like your fiction, even if your chapter aren't small, i can read its without be bothering, or disgutsting by all these paragraph !!

And i understand every little phrase, i ddn't have to look for my dictionnary in the middle of the text !
So your fiction is very good and easly to read....This is the first skill.

After, it's about Red and yellow...So : "YEahhh ! A good fiction about them in the original universe *_*, not a shool fic again !"

And at last, the story is good, i want to know what happened to red's mother, and understand how the naugthy pokemon can escape yellow's abilitie...

Then,What else ? to conclude, i like it... u_u You won't give up ? will you ?
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Aww, thanks for the feed back.

Yeah, my story writing isn't exactly advanced....

And don't worry, I didn't give up on it yet...

I have the entire plot played out in my head, but I'm just too lazy to actually write it down...

(i need to though..........)
 
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ShadowXsoul

Three different path
Love it! Nice story! I really like the plot, and how Indigo is acting so childish. (like how she/he face blue) Oh and Is Indigo a girl or a boy??? Well i guess they don't have a gender do they?
 
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