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Cursed

Heroic Sociopath
Here are the comics.

Plot: Chris, Connor, Lucas, Noah, and Levi are friends who decided to wait out going on a Pokemon journey so that they could go together. Connor and his brother Lucas are idiots, and Noah isn't too interested in Pokemon. So, only Chris and Levi are the only serious trainers out of the whole group. Right now, they're heading for Saffron City and its airport, as they are heading for the Sinnoh region (or possibly hoenn).

Levi's adventures are pretty much meaningless at this point. Just an exercise of spriting technique.

Anyone who has a good name, please let me know of it.

Constructive critique greatly appreciated.
 
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nashie1

Well-Known Member
Just a link to freewebs... you did upload it to an image hosting place like photobucket or imageshack right?
 
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.Bright Side.

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This is superb, everything exept the plot...

Well, IDK, maybe yours will be a surviving Journey like Pokemon Supreme...
Just try to get a good plot twist.
 
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Cursed

Heroic Sociopath
I take it the problem is that the plot is a journey comic? Or is there something else in the plot that you disapprove of?
 
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ΩOmega WeavileΩ

Skinning every bears
Its okay, but the intro was kind of a rip off of Ace of Abra...And the cheap-o robot was just, weird. It could of used more work, and more cheap-o than it is. Like rusty cogs or something. :p
 
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Cursed

Heroic Sociopath
Yea. The intro came mostly from Ace of Abra; I was having writers' block. The cheap-o robot is going to undergo repairs, just like the battles themselves.
 
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LGameboyR

Pokemon Battler
Desperate Milotic said:
...maybe yours will be a surviving Journey like Pokemon Supreme...
Click to expand...

Hey! I consider my comic too!....but yeah its good! & it made me laugh, & Cheap-o was funny...but I can't see the plot, or is it random? & you already said the battle is UNDER CONTRUCTION, so I can't crit about that...soo...uh 8.9 out of 10(Only because I'm seeing a Journey comic out of this) Keep it up!
 
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Cursed

Heroic Sociopath
The plot is that Chris, Connor, Lucas, Noah, and Levi are friends who decided to wait out going on a Pokemon journey so that they could go together. Connor and his brother Lucas are idiots, and Noah isn't too interested in Pokemon. So, only Chris and Levi are the only serious trainers out of the whole group. Right now, they're heading for Saffron City and its airport, as they are heading for the Sinnoh region (or possibly Hoenn).

Cursed is a meaningless plot device that'll possibly be used later. Maybe for specials or something.
 
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Nixx

Waiting for the Worm
It's pretty poorly thought out. It's mediocre visually, the comics take forever to load, and you're using a default Freewebs template (which essentally sucks anyway).
 
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Cursed

Heroic Sociopath
Well, Nixx, is there anything in the comic you actually like? And what do so many people have against journey comics?
 
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Cursed

Heroic Sociopath
Is the cliche part because it's a journey comic?

In other news, the newest comic, Adventures in Viridian City Part II, is up.
 
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