Enjoy my fan-fic its a short chapter but hey im only 11 but i can guarentee the next ones are going to be longer rated pg
Naruto: The legend of the mountain village
Prologue
Silence rang through the mountains. This day was a miserable one indeed the mountain village had been in war with the stone and had very limited army many dead few injured and most left the village as its prosperity was gone due to the sixth hokage not being nearly as good as the other 5 he cheated his way into the title, by cheating on tests in the academy and taking credit for what other nins have done.
“ Hokage-san this is very bad we have no alliances we weren’t there when the leaf was being attacked and almost half of our men have gone mad saying there was a giant creature with NINE TAILS”! said Hayoa the leader of the Kizuin clan the most powerful clan in the known Thunder country he had short spiked hair and was very tall “and to top that our country which was once the strongest of them all is know in war with its self”!
“We still have the b-boy a-and h-he’ll kill all of them” said the Hokage stuttering cowardly he had long black hair.
“You disgust me the fifth”………… “NEVER SPEAK THAT NAME IN FRONT OF ME KIZUIN”!!!! screamed Hogake “Try me” said Hayoa.
“arrgh”…………! grumbled the sixth and put his hands into the ninjustu position and said “kage bushinin no jutsu” “Thundres no jutsu”! said Hayoa
Yoshi awoke this nightmare he had shoulder length it was black.
“What is it” asked his brother who had the same exact style except it was in a pony tail
“I saw……… Hayoa-sama and Hogake-sama having an argument and then………” yoshi was cut off as they saw all the village’s nin getting ready for battle and they jumped out there window.
They landed on there feet.
“What’s happening” asked yoshi’s brother Shikino
“Nothing listen go to the under ground chambers you’ll be safe their” said a Young chuunin leveled very skinny and long brown hair”
safe…
“wait I want to fight show some respect I’m a jounin”! said Shikino .
It was true he was a Jounin only 14 years old too very skilled defeated everyone in the village.
“Yes that’s your assignment to protect the children and women that’s what Hayoa- who by the way just got promoted to Hokage level- ordered you to do” said The man.
’’ Hayoa…… come on Yoshi we have an assignment” said Shikino
All the children and women were gathered and brought to the main chamber.
They stood there and heard all the screams and crashes outside all the women hugged their children tightly and were crying as they heard the screams of precious husbands ,fathers and sons dying as the screams were silenced.
Then suddenly there was a boom and another then CRASH the wall was broken as everyone let out a scream of terror, for a giant fox like creature was standing above their heads flashes of pain raced through Yoshi’s mind and in Shikino’s mind to the setting of the sacred gardens “………… I did it”! said a Two year younger Shikino. “SHIKINO”! said Hayoa “……… you must use this move under one condition”……… the memories flashes back to the present and Shikino getting in a ‘chidori’ like position and continuing his sensei’s words by saying “To protect the life of someone precious”! the creature had slaughtered everyone in the chamber and then he had said “ DOUSHININ” said Shikino his eyes know blue with three triangles pointing at the pupil and a huge beam of chakra emitted from his hands and the creature fell with a huge crash and Shikino uttered his last words
“………… goodbye…………… red dragon………………”
“red dragon”? said yoshi not knowing his brother had just fallen before him dead.
“shi.. No.no.no.no NOOOO!” yoshi screamed for having realized his brother died. He felt something in the back of his neck and fell unconscious.
He awoke tied in chains the hokage in front of him he turned around and grabbed his right hand and said
“Even seal unsealer” Yoshi felt as if he couldn’t remember anything happy only rage filled his mind his eyes were red his teeth sharpened claws grew out of his fingers he felt as if he could do anything he slashed through the chains and through the guards also and got to the hogake
“There stop save it for war” said the hokage
“What war” said yoshi in a low growling animal voice “The one you are about to fight…” said the hokage but when he turned he saw kakashi who said “chidori”! and reached yoshi and said “Ultimate seal” yoshi didn’t know what the move was or what it did all he knew was he had to get away or else………
But he was to late to get away it hit him the demon inside him was gone he fainted.
Chapter one: Grads
5 years after the incident at the mountains
Yoshi awoke with a yawn an a turn to the calendar. October 1st thought yoshi end of term for some but for others the beginning of many life risking adventures were any day could be your last it was graduation day.
“Finally a ninja…… finally” said the long haired boy named yoshi he put on his red hooded sweatshirt with no sleeves over his black T-shirt. He ran out the door.
“Hi yoshi” said a nervous girl with brown hair touching her back she was actually quite pretty but right know all yoshi cared about was the graduations but he did have time to say hi back.
At the academy yoshi took his seat next to sasuke he saw Naruto in front of sasukes desk when he fell off and on top of sasuke.
“Settle down class” Iruka said he rambled on for hours but yoshi wasn’t listening he was much too exited for that a real shinobi finally at last
“yoshi are you listening”!?. Yoshi jumped slightly and started to talk “err well um yeah I kinda sorta”
“enough” said Iruka “tell me the number one rule of being a ninja”
“The number one rule-of being a nin that is is that never reveal emotions it gives an opponent to much information” said yoshi
“correct”…
“But I disagree it is inhuman not even the most powerful of nins can control rage or tears or laughter its an act against nature in some ways immoral”
“You disagree with nins not only older and wiser than you but nins that live there lives off this principal”?
“Yes Iruka-sensei I do”
Iruka sensei smiled
“You guys were my family I see you more than anyone else but now I finally have to let go.
At the head bands ceremony
Yoshi and the class lined up and were very very anxious Kizuin, Yoshi. Yoshi went and grabbed his headband and left he could see many smiles as he and the class passed by.
Naruto: The legend of the mountain village
Prologue
Silence rang through the mountains. This day was a miserable one indeed the mountain village had been in war with the stone and had very limited army many dead few injured and most left the village as its prosperity was gone due to the sixth hokage not being nearly as good as the other 5 he cheated his way into the title, by cheating on tests in the academy and taking credit for what other nins have done.
“ Hokage-san this is very bad we have no alliances we weren’t there when the leaf was being attacked and almost half of our men have gone mad saying there was a giant creature with NINE TAILS”! said Hayoa the leader of the Kizuin clan the most powerful clan in the known Thunder country he had short spiked hair and was very tall “and to top that our country which was once the strongest of them all is know in war with its self”!
“We still have the b-boy a-and h-he’ll kill all of them” said the Hokage stuttering cowardly he had long black hair.
“You disgust me the fifth”………… “NEVER SPEAK THAT NAME IN FRONT OF ME KIZUIN”!!!! screamed Hogake “Try me” said Hayoa.
“arrgh”…………! grumbled the sixth and put his hands into the ninjustu position and said “kage bushinin no jutsu” “Thundres no jutsu”! said Hayoa
Yoshi awoke this nightmare he had shoulder length it was black.
“What is it” asked his brother who had the same exact style except it was in a pony tail
“I saw……… Hayoa-sama and Hogake-sama having an argument and then………” yoshi was cut off as they saw all the village’s nin getting ready for battle and they jumped out there window.
They landed on there feet.
“What’s happening” asked yoshi’s brother Shikino
“Nothing listen go to the under ground chambers you’ll be safe their” said a Young chuunin leveled very skinny and long brown hair”
safe…
“wait I want to fight show some respect I’m a jounin”! said Shikino .
It was true he was a Jounin only 14 years old too very skilled defeated everyone in the village.
“Yes that’s your assignment to protect the children and women that’s what Hayoa- who by the way just got promoted to Hokage level- ordered you to do” said The man.
’’ Hayoa…… come on Yoshi we have an assignment” said Shikino
All the children and women were gathered and brought to the main chamber.
They stood there and heard all the screams and crashes outside all the women hugged their children tightly and were crying as they heard the screams of precious husbands ,fathers and sons dying as the screams were silenced.
Then suddenly there was a boom and another then CRASH the wall was broken as everyone let out a scream of terror, for a giant fox like creature was standing above their heads flashes of pain raced through Yoshi’s mind and in Shikino’s mind to the setting of the sacred gardens “………… I did it”! said a Two year younger Shikino. “SHIKINO”! said Hayoa “……… you must use this move under one condition”……… the memories flashes back to the present and Shikino getting in a ‘chidori’ like position and continuing his sensei’s words by saying “To protect the life of someone precious”! the creature had slaughtered everyone in the chamber and then he had said “ DOUSHININ” said Shikino his eyes know blue with three triangles pointing at the pupil and a huge beam of chakra emitted from his hands and the creature fell with a huge crash and Shikino uttered his last words
“………… goodbye…………… red dragon………………”
“red dragon”? said yoshi not knowing his brother had just fallen before him dead.
“shi.. No.no.no.no NOOOO!” yoshi screamed for having realized his brother died. He felt something in the back of his neck and fell unconscious.
He awoke tied in chains the hokage in front of him he turned around and grabbed his right hand and said
“Even seal unsealer” Yoshi felt as if he couldn’t remember anything happy only rage filled his mind his eyes were red his teeth sharpened claws grew out of his fingers he felt as if he could do anything he slashed through the chains and through the guards also and got to the hogake
“There stop save it for war” said the hokage
“What war” said yoshi in a low growling animal voice “The one you are about to fight…” said the hokage but when he turned he saw kakashi who said “chidori”! and reached yoshi and said “Ultimate seal” yoshi didn’t know what the move was or what it did all he knew was he had to get away or else………
But he was to late to get away it hit him the demon inside him was gone he fainted.
Chapter one: Grads
5 years after the incident at the mountains
Yoshi awoke with a yawn an a turn to the calendar. October 1st thought yoshi end of term for some but for others the beginning of many life risking adventures were any day could be your last it was graduation day.
“Finally a ninja…… finally” said the long haired boy named yoshi he put on his red hooded sweatshirt with no sleeves over his black T-shirt. He ran out the door.
“Hi yoshi” said a nervous girl with brown hair touching her back she was actually quite pretty but right know all yoshi cared about was the graduations but he did have time to say hi back.
At the academy yoshi took his seat next to sasuke he saw Naruto in front of sasukes desk when he fell off and on top of sasuke.
“Settle down class” Iruka said he rambled on for hours but yoshi wasn’t listening he was much too exited for that a real shinobi finally at last
“yoshi are you listening”!?. Yoshi jumped slightly and started to talk “err well um yeah I kinda sorta”
“enough” said Iruka “tell me the number one rule of being a ninja”
“The number one rule-of being a nin that is is that never reveal emotions it gives an opponent to much information” said yoshi
“correct”…
“But I disagree it is inhuman not even the most powerful of nins can control rage or tears or laughter its an act against nature in some ways immoral”
“You disagree with nins not only older and wiser than you but nins that live there lives off this principal”?
“Yes Iruka-sensei I do”
Iruka sensei smiled
“You guys were my family I see you more than anyone else but now I finally have to let go.
At the head bands ceremony
Yoshi and the class lined up and were very very anxious Kizuin, Yoshi. Yoshi went and grabbed his headband and left he could see many smiles as he and the class passed by.
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