Naruto: A New Generation. Let's talk.

[Hyuu]

Well, yeah, this is for Naruto: A New Generation v2.0 questions, where we'll keep updates about the plot, and suggestions mainly. Or, for anything that doesn't go in the sign-up.

This post will constantly be edited with the up-to-date information as to the RPG (such as when squads are formed, what each squad is doing, where they are, etc.)

Rules:
1) All RPG cafe rules apply.
2) Keep away from flaming.
3) I'd prefer you not swear/curse/cuss.

Yahoo! And we begin! Squads? Well... If you haven't checked the first post, it's currently looking to be... But you better read the DANG FIRST SIGN-UP ANYWAYS because it holds vital information!

Squad One
Team Hanabi
Led by Kaijura Hanabi (Kazuki Yukimura)
Yama Mon Tsuki (Renatoap)
Yudurzy Kash (Mawile XD)
Sohoko Nae (Jellybean)

Squad Two
Team Rin
Led by Hishimono Rin (Demise)
Chimamire Kiku (Literate)
Mizuhana Toraburu (Adzieboy)
Shindo Taichi (~Hyuu)

Squad Three
Team
Led by … (MerkelHog)
Shukumei Kyuuen (Scar)
Kaze Shikio (JeRiChI)
Nanashi [Rei Sumiko] (~Hyuu)

Squad Four
Team Kaili
Led by Takahashi Kaili (Mimori Kiryu)
Yorumane Yuki (Literate)
Shirose Yasu (Bandana)
Shinpuu Toko (The Darkness Incarnate)

 

[Mimori Kiryu]

Well, I think that unless there's a demand for another squad [as in, someone else posts with a bio at the same time someone else does] I say we shouldn't. Having three Jounin and having three Genin for each, I think, will be enough to handle for us all. Considering, we'll have a better chance of all being on at the same time to work together, but that's just me.

 

[Jerichi]

I think we should wait for the last spot to fill. If there seems to be anyone who wants to join still, then ok. But I think that the size of the RPG currently is perfect and relitivly managable.

 

[Literate]

Eh, I hope you haven't forgotten the ones who were in the original RPG. ^^"''

[SPFf is probably laughing at me]

Two consecutive posts I made nice and long were deleted. ;.;

Ick. I don't feel like explaining everything again.


To Jerichi:

Short term:

About kekkei genkai/bloodline trait: Even if wind is your kekkei genkai, it can still be your affinity. Affinity is the element that you perhaps is most good at, or have it mainly in your jutsu disposal.

Rin's affinity is wind and air, though his kekkei genkai is a combination of lightning and wind control.

Your is just wind control, and you also have a wide variety of wind jutsu in your arsenal. So affinity is wind.

And your dragon chakra thing. It works. Since Kiku has the same thing with her Phoenix but it's with blood instead of chakra. So if it's injured the blood disperses, just as your chakra thing. Kind of.

Hope I cleared some things up. And got some things off my mind.

*crosses fingers and hopes that it won't delete the post >.<*

EDIT: Yay! It didn't disappear!

Anyways, here's my RPG sample. Felt like putting it on here anyway. On of the best I could do in around ten minutes. >< And its from the original RPG.

~
He opened his still blurry eyes, his stance in a way, where his head band was covering his mouth. He turned to look at the pieces of rubble. That was left of the branch that was exploded. His mind reeled back.

'That's right...it exploded... I just had that fox...'

He rubbed his eyes, slowly standing up, and then felt a pain in his right leg.

'Great...'

His sight wandered around the area, reminding him that there were explosion nearby. 'Well, I can sense the places where the explosions are...' He closed his eyes, and placed his fingers into a handsign. A wave emitted from him, and etched in his mind was the exact places the explosions were, the surroundings black and dark, with white blowing holes, where the explosions are.

'Alright...' He opened his eyes, the white holes, just managing to disappear, so he knew where he was going.

He ran through the area, the best he could with a injured leg, wincing all the while. To make sure he won't step on any explosions, he often checked for chakra sources.

When he opened his eyes once more, a small white fox was standing near the bush and a patch of grass, one of the explosions. Actually, from his point of view, both of them were traps.

'Great, it seems that the fox knows where the traps are as well...' More sweat fell down the side of his face. He moved hesistantly towards the left, draggin his wounded leg along, trying not to step on any explosions. 'Make the fox injured from the explosion?'
He closed his eyes again, trying to determine which of the explosions were smaller.

He opened his eyes, grabbed a kunai knife, and threw it at the patch of grass. It instantly blew up, sending the fox flying. He ran up a tree and along it, haphazardly trying not to step on any explosions. Catching the fox, before it landed onto a branch, was hard, and it was also tired out.

'Alright,' he thought as it tried to move away, but failing to, and because it was tired out, he held it in his hands. His eyes closed, trying to sense Rin-sensei, but there were too much chakra holes. 'I should move out of the radius of these explosions...'

He walked along the branch, for a while, and then teleported towards the end of the radius, away from all the explosions. He tried the technique again; he sensed Teiken, his other class mate, but nothing other. He teleported into thin smoke again, his chakra even more drained. Then, it worked; Rin as somewhere nearby, but moving fast.

'Can't run with this leg...'
~

~Literate

 

[Jerichi]

To Jerichi:

Short term:

About kekkei genkai/bloodline trait: Even if wind is your kekkei genkai, it can still be your affinity. Affinity is the element that you perhaps is most good at, or have it mainly in your jutsu disposal.

Rin's affinity is wind and air, though his kekkei genkai is a combination of lightning and wind control.

Your is just wind control, and you also have a wide variety of wind jutsu in your arsenal. So affinity is wind.

And your dragon chakra thing. It works. Since Kiku has the same thing with her Phoenix but it's with blood instead of chakra. So if it's injured the blood disperses, just as your chakra thing. Kind of.

Hope I cleared some things up. And got some things off my mind.

That works for me then.

:/ RPG samples... I can't say I know of a good one for me. Most of my old RPing is a bit dead by now. The closest thing I have to show is an RPG I made a while ago, and content from Fizzy Bubbles. So...

 

[The_Darkness_Incarnate]

Eh. Assuming that this hasn't started, and you can find more people besides me who would like to join, I would be appreciative if you opened up a new squad. Just dropping by to say I would like to join, as per instructions.

 

[Literate]

Alright, yeah, you can start your sign-up because four more space for genin. The jounin space that Merkelhoog wanted is in this squad.

So four jounin and 12 genin.

[Opened up a squad.]

~Literate

 

[renatoap]

ok now we have to open a new squad and wait, or just start the rpg the way it is. According to the sigh ups i saw in the list that the spots were all filled or reserved. So my question is if we will start or wait for new menbers?

 

[Hyuu]

ok now we have to open a new squad and wait, or just start the rpg the way it is. According to the sigh ups i saw in the list that the spots were all filled or reserved. So my question is if we will start or wait for new menbers?

I thought it was agreed that we weren't starting until all RPers signed-up are approved? So less chance of someone having to play a temporary NPC role like I did?

However, this is mounting my frustrations. And other council members as we've had chances to talk about it.

We are having too many RPers end up with the same affinity and JUTSU that other RPers are using, which end up with the characters being similar in their combat abilities, which will end up as "not good". While certainly its coincidental, it frustrates people who orginally had the jutsu. We currently have 3 wind users (Demise, Jerichi, and Darkness Incarnate), 2 water users (Adzieboy and Literate), and possibly 3 lightning users (Renatoap, Darkness Incarnate, and I'm considering redoing my sign-up.) And it's just becoming frustrating with how similar the jutsu and abilities are appearing.

Adzieboy and Literate have compromised somewhat. Literate has made her jutsu concentrate on rain and clouds while Adzie should be changing his to plainly H2O jutsu. I am hoping the wind users can talk about this and adapt like they did. As for the lightning users, from what I see, my revised sign-up should be sufficently different from Renatoap's and DI's, so there should be little problem.

However, we are going to, unfortunately have to limit the affinity for the elements of lightning, wind, and water. Unless you can have creative differences like Lit and Adzie happened to make, than you will have to settle for Earth, Fire, Ice, or something entirely new and creative.

Yeah, an update. Rather spontaneous, but if we let it drag anymore, there would be more problems.

 

[Jerichi]

Ok. Save Wind Blades no Jutsu, my character's other ninjutsu consintrates on using the body to control the wind or enhance his fighting ability (I probably should submit a revised edition of Gale no Jutsu to better encompass this). His jutsu's focus more on using his whole body, movement and other things of that calliber to control wind or uses wind to enhance his fighting ability. From what I've read, The Darkness Incarnate's are more like "magic", where as they attack the foe without direction other then focusing on where the foe is. This is a relitivly large diffrence without going outside of the Wind affinity. I could retool Wind Blades no Jutsu to be more of a full body jutsu, although I'd prefer not to change it so drastically.

Any other input would be greatly appruciated.

 

[Hyuu]

Ok. Save Wind Blades no Jutsu, my character's other ninjutsu consintrates on using the body to control the wind or enhance his fighting ability (I probably should submit a revised edition of Gale no Jutsu to better encompass this). His jutsu's focus more on using his whole body, movement and other things of that calliber to control wind or uses wind to enhance his fighting ability. From what I've read, The Darkness Incarnate's are more like "magic", where as they attack the foe without direction other then focusing on where the foe is. This is a relitivly large diffrence without going outside of the Wind affinity. I could retool Wind Blades no Jutsu to be more of a full body jutsu, although I'd prefer not to change it so drastically.

Any other input would be greatly appruciated.

It would be appreciated, though if it's too much trouble... Yeah, after re-reading it, it is marginally different from DI's.

Errr... Yeah, I very recently varified what genjutsu (cause reading over some of the sign-up, you have clones for genjutsu.) When you're trying to distinguish a genjutsu, it has to be a jutsu that only your opponent (or mass of opponents) are affected by. You (or more your character, if you want to get technical) won't, giving you amble leeway to attack. So clones are not a genjutsu.
Another way to think of it is can the opponent dispel the genjutsu by using Kai (Release)? Or has it taken control and is deceiving one of the five senses? If not, than it's a ninjutsu. Clones are a ninjutsu since you can see it, are not deceiving one of the five senses, and cannot be dispelled by the opponent, therefore are not genjutsu. Some of you may need to re-evaluate your genjutsu.
Ah, sorry, this was a mistake of mine for not thinking ahead ^^;;;

Sorry JeRiChI... I noticed this as I was re-reading your sign-up and spent like fifteen minutes thinking about it. If you want to send me hate PMs for giving you the frustrating task of changing your sign-up again, I can totally understand xP

 

[Jerichi]

Gah, more things to change. But yeah, I'll go and put that part of my sign up in the Registration thread.

But I have an idea for a Genjutsu. So, its not a big deal.

 

[Hyuu]

Well, our affinity collision is to a close ^^
Thanks for cooperating Demise, JeRiChI, Darkness Incarnate, Adzie, and Literate! You guys are good at diverging in Jutsu descriptions ^^

 

[Adzieboy]

Hi-yah!!

I own.

 

[Adzieboy]

I don't get to use my clones... how ****.

 

[Hyuu]

I don't get to use my clones... how ****.

Blame Kishimoto.

Ah, we BEGIN!

Squads? But you better read the DANG FIRST POST THAT HAD ME SPENT AN HOUR AND A HALF PAST 11:00. Please... Because of this, I'm starting school with only 5 hours and 30 minutes of sleep (I find RPGs fun. 'Nuff said.)

Squad One
Team Hanabi
Led by Kaijura Hanabi (Kazuki Yukimura)
Yama Mon Tsuki (Renatoap)
Yudurzy Kash (Mawile XD)
… (Jellybean)

Squad Two
Team Rin
Led by Hishimono Rin (Demise)
Chimamire Kiku (Literate)
Mizuhana Toraburu (Adzieboy)
Shindo Taichi (~Hyuu)

Squad Three
Team
Led by … (MerkelHog)
Shukumei Kyuuen (Scar)
Kaze Shikio (JeRiChI)
Nanashi [Rei Sumiko] (~Hyuu)

Squad Four
Team Kaili
Led by Takahashi Kaili (Mimori Kiryu)
Yoruame Yuki (Literate)
Shirose Yasu (Bandana)
Shinpuu Toko (The Darkness Incarnate)

 

[Literate]

Something Hyuu forgot to put up, since he had to go to sleep. >>;;;

Posting Rules:

1. At the top of every post, please fill in the following form and place it in all the posts that your character makes.

Squad ?, Genin/Jounin
Location
Name

2. Never post below 4 lines. Only on exception, like in battles. (We had a problem with that in the original RPG.)

3. Don't bunny characters. (Without the permission of the RPGer)

4. We really want to keep it neat, so follow the instructions, per see, so you would know how to start.

5. No godmodding either. If we see this, you'll be kicked out of the RPG.

6. Don't post at irregular times. Don't go onto a different subject with someone in your team lagging behind.

7. Literate will be occasionally informing everyone of the time, with the approximates of the day, like early morning, late morning, noon, tc. Since everyone follows the same clock, please don't leave anyone behind.

That's all for now. Will add on more if needed or remembered.

~Literate

 

[The_Darkness_Incarnate]

I'm just wondering. What are we going to do when the characters who haven't signed up yet, such as MerkelHog, need to make appearances? I'm just wondering. >_>.

 

[Literate]

<< We will have our ways... Just make sure that everyone else post first...

Or if he replies to my PM and he cannot play, then we'll have a substitute.

It's all good. You didn't think we'd look at this, did you?

~Literate

 

[Mawile XD]

Um... I'm going away for dsix days tomorrow. Would anybody take over my character, Kash, for that time? They don't need to do a lot with him, just answer people, or respond in fighting or something. Just remember that he's arrogant, not mean.