Naruto:
The Legend of The Mountain Village
A lost hope.
A great fear.
A forgotten place.
A boy with powers beyond imaginataion
A legend lives on
The Legend of The Mountain Village
A lost hope.
A great fear.
A forgotten place.
A boy with powers beyond imaginataion
A legend lives on
Prouloge: A lost village
"Wake up yoshi" said yoshis mom with her face in a smile and her midnight hair glowing in the moon "what time is it mommy"? asked yoshi who was still very young about 6
"about 3:00" said his mom her voice was cheerful yet there was much sorrow on her face.
"wheres daddy" said yoshi yawning
"at work,come on we have to hurry" his mom said still very sad
They arrived in the great canal wich connected every village in the world together. "yoshi your going away for awhile your aunt will take care of you it'll be lots of fun won't it" said his mom trying to act happy but she had tears in her eyes. "whats wrong mommy" asked yoshi half crying himself "nothing go on i'll see you later go on" she said she hugged him and he huged back her face was wet with tears. the boat yoshi was on started to move. "MOMMY!!!! MOMMY!!!! MOMMMMY! COME BACK" screamed yoshi "don't worry we'll see each other again" his mom said. After about an hour yoshi was queit. Then he saw a shadow. it was huge with a head shaped like a fox but it had nine tails. Yoshi was a very resourceful boy he jumped off the boat. "hey kid come back" the guy in the boat said then the fox like creatures tail crashed the boat into the water.
"huh" said yoshi lookin for his mom
It had destroyed the canal it self the mountain village was were he main point of the canal was so all the villages canals had ben destroyed to. Then he saw there was not one but three of the creatures.There were dead bodies everywere then he saw his dads dead body he froze he looked at it "no" he said he stayed there for about an hour he could'nt move he gave his dad a proper burial. And paid hi respects his eyes were swollen and he was still crying. ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAR!!!!!!!!!! Yoshi looked up there it was the fox creature "is that all you got"? asked yoshi a huge amount of chakra came from yoshis body it was yellow like the sun the fox stepped back growling yoshis eyes were red the fox split in half. Yoshi kept running. He saw his mom cornered by a fox "NOOOO" he screamed again his eyes glew red again the fox split in half.All three of them were now dead the hokage killed one yoshi asumed this beacause the hakage was dead beside the creature.
His mom had an arm and leg cut off and was breathing heavily. "y-yoshi" said his mother "mom dads dead" said yoshi "no now who'll take you in" said his mom "yoshi...." she said she closed her eyes and lay there dead.
"no no no NOOOO" screamed yoshi crying yet again he fell asleep beside his dead mom.
The next morning after the leaf had suffered there own losses jounin and chuunin were sent to find any survivors. "what've we got here" said kakashi hatake who had just spoted yoshi.
Chapter
One: Enter:Yoshi Kizuin
After that inccident in the mountain yoshi came to he leaf and lived across the hall from Naruto Uzamaki in the acadmey he was a very optimistic boy and had a big ego to match his mouth he got average grades like sasuke he was a very talented boy and was a prized jewel like Sasuke uchia he also felt loss and greived but he forgotten much about himself as the third had erased memories about his parenthood it did'nt work completly he still remembers quite alot of the past but its still a blur to him.
"HUUUH"! yawned yoshi "10:00 OH NO IM AN HOUR LATE"!!! he screamed. He quickly brushed his teeth and put on his clothes a red sweater with a hood but with short sleeves and black pants he had Bandages on his right arm in the wrist hand and elbow area. he ran out the door his black hair was long and messy it went from the top of his head to the bottom of his neck and was in his eyes very frequently to. He ran as fast as he could and he made his way to the class. " now that your ninja.. yoshi late again" said iruka sensei "only...." said yoshi but he was interuppted as iruka said "an hour and 54 minutes late, take a seat". Yoshi made his way to the seat. "I was held back belive it! some dude with gray hair and a mask on held me over in the hall" said naruto who just busted the door open. I still can't belive he graduated thought yoshi "take a seat next to sakura and sasuke naruto" said iruka. Naruto hated yoshi almost as much as sasuke he was very popular among the girls his polite attidude toward them and his appearence was very appealing to them he really did'nt care though he was'nt like that. "here are your teams ive explained this naruto you'll find out later" said iruka sensei reading narutos mind. "Kizuin,Yoshi Spereo,Mizuki,Hyuuga,Takito" said Iruka reading the paper. Mizuki was the fastest ninja ever he had light brown hair it touched he top of his neck and was very loose he wore a white shirt with a hood. Takito seemd to have no pupils wich meant he belonged to the hyuuga clan he wore long shirt and long pants it was a style of fighting they had everyone would expect to beat a kid who can't even find clothes to fit in he had raven black hair it was really long hair his cousin neji's hair was about the same legnth, his stregnth was outmatched. They recived there headbands and were told they'd meat there teachers in an hour.
"what the hell are we doing here everyone else has left even uchia" said yoshi
"he'll be here you dope" said Takito
"just an hour late" said Mizuki
Then suddenly the door opened. A man about 6 feet tall came in he had white hair his hair was a decent legnth it was about as long as Mizukis he had no pupils wich meant he belonged to the hyuuga clan like Takito exept Takito did not know him to well wich probably meant he was in a different branch.
"sorry im late but kakashi-kun held me back for awhile" he said.
"thats great now when do we get a mission" said mizuki rudely
"now I guess" said the teacher "by the way my name is Rakino well thats Rakino sensei to you"
They had alot of unusual tasks first was waliking the dog or well it was dragging the dog for Mizuki,yoshi and takito did'nt even have to move a muscle it was done in about ten minutes.
After ten or so minutes Rakino sensei had said "well you seem like a strong bunch of kids kakashi had told me to do this but I wanted to see if you were ready first so I guess" "its time for your tests".
I know this was a little kind of boring less more talk less action but it was explaining what he characters are like
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