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Naruto: The Six Heavenly Paths

The Doctor

Absolute Beginner
Plot

Chakra.

That is what we call the energy that resides inside our bodies, and makes us sentient, makes us strong. We don't know how this energy came to be, but it's safe to say it was created and placed within every human that ever was and ever will be. Such is the order of life. We have two ways of circulating chakra and using it to our advantage: we combine it with our Spiritual Energy that is inherent within our trillions of cells, and through sheer force of the human will and spirit, the need to drive ourselves forward and to keep advancing, called Body Energy. When these two are combined, when we perfectly fuse the mind and the body, we create chakra.
It is through chakra that we are capable of defying the laws laid by the Sage of the Six Paths, through our jutsu, or techniques.

Ninjutsu allows us to perform the impossible, to breathe fire, create water, escape within the earth, and walk on water. Genjutsu lets us fool our opponents using their own chakra, allowing the creation of illusions and phantasms, and deceiving the five senses. Taijutsu is the only technique of which I know of that does not need chakra; while it can serve as a boost, the Body Energy is used as an offensive. Whilst it is weaker than ninjutsu or genjutsu, it is much quicker to access, and should not be crowded out so easily.

Even beyond these three types, there exists so much more at our disposal. The fuuin jutsu, for example, allows us to seal objects, weapons or even sentient beings inside anything we wish. It is through this that the art of Summoning has been granted to us, the incantations and contracts to call them forth sealed forever in parchment. Then there's hiden jutsu, the techniques that are passed down only through a clan, from generation to generation, and can be learned by no one else. It may even be a kekkei genkai, in a sense. Also, the kinjutsu, the techniques that are immensely powerful; so powerful in fact, that our weak human bodies cannot handle it, and can only be detrimental to us in the long run, or it may simply be against nature and God Himself. Such jutsu are used only as last resorts. In the darker recesses that obscure fact and fiction, the juin jutsu, those that rely on cursed marks; such methods are crude and life threatening, trading in your sanity for power.

What interests me most, however, is the kekkei genkai, the bloodline limits. These cannot be learned by anyone but those chosen, and are unique within a certain clan's bloodstream. The genetics of the body are altered somehow; I do not know how, but these are all gifts granted by God. The laws of nature and the limitations of Man are cast asunder with this. Unfortunately, some shinobi fear this. They fear that the possessors of these traits will abuse these somehow, and try and reclaim the land they owned. Such fear led to the extinction of many clans, and the demise of the kekkei genkai. It brings me sorrow to see that Man is so afraid of what they cannot comprehend. But I plan to change that. I will change the world forever. I possess the first great kekkei genkai, that which created jutsu and chakra, and established the world. I have the power to recreate the world, but I am unfortunately hindered. There exist nine keys scattered across the world, each one with the power to unlock my kekkei genkai to its full potential. I must obtain them all if I wish to succeed in my goals.

I came into the world as a vagrant, a beggar child, but as I came in, I would become the Dawn of Mankind. I would represent the light that would reach into the hearts of men and bring them into utopia. I will eliminate war, famine, greed, and prejudice. I will create a new kingdom.

I must open the Six Heavenly Paths.


This extract was found from a rather weathered and ancient scrap of paper lying around the outskirts of the hidden village of Amegakure (Hidden Rain). The finders were a team from the Niju Shotai, or the Twenty Platoons, a group of elite shinobi created for the sole purpose of maintaining world peace. The current adjective is to find all the members of the criminal organization the Akatsuki and capture, or if necessary, eliminate them; it started within the Land of Fire, but with the support of the other Great Shinobi Nations of Water, Earth, Wind and Lightning, it has now become a worldwide search. It was not originally known what the unknown writer was trying to address - why was he writing about chakra, when every child knew about it already? Why was he so obsessed with the kekkei genkai? And just what were the Six Heavenly Paths? It was only until heavy research was performed that a conclusion could be met.

The Six Heavenly Paths referred to the six different types of chakra that were available. While it was true chakra was the formation of mind and body, they most commonly took the forms of elements; the ones most largely known were fire, water, earth, wind and lightning. Each of these elemental chakra types operated in a cycle that left them simultaneously stronger and weaker than each other, and it was a well-known fact that it was how the Five Great Shinobi Nations were formed, because each land was supposed to be formed from those types of chakra, and the children of each land would likely gain that element as their chakra nature. But if there were six types of chakra, why where there are only five countries?

This answer proved slightly harder to find. It took several hours, many research into books on jutsu, chakra, what have you, and many sleepless nights, but the answer yet again revealed itself. Whilst it was true chakra molded itself into an element depending on certain conditions, there existed a sixth type of chakra, but it was a hidden one. Very few could access it and fewer still could master it: the yin-yang chakra. The ANBU agent Yamato once mentioned light and dark chakra, but in truth yin-yang chakra is a fusion of the two, in a delicate balance between shadows and light. While the elemental chakra natures are influenced physically, yin-yang chakra changes to either light or dark depending on the user's aptitude and goals. Those who seek to protect and defend at all costs will gain light chakra; those with intent to kill and cause malice will receive dark chakra. Even if someone isn't even aware of it, it's there, hidden away, maybe never even accessed for a lifetime.

It may have seemed unusual that there was no sixth country to accommodate this, but given that few knew about yin-yang chakra, it's understandable; a few people couldn't just set up a country based on a chakra affinity that was by-and-large unconfirmed to exist. But this led to the question of the Six Heavenly Paths. It sounded almost like the stuff of fairytales and storybooks. Further research answered that question, plus the curiosity as to why there was no nation for the hitherto unknown chakra type. The Land of Yin-Yang, to give a rough title, had existed at one point and was, like the other countries, created by the Sage of the Six Paths, who had founded the world and brought peace to the previously eternally chaotic universe. The Land of Yin-Yang was instead robbed of the land because of the pressure it had put on terra firma, and the six paths that connected it and kept it on our dimension were severed. It was then that it all clicked, the understanding of the Six Heavenly Paths floating somewhere in the consciousness between wishing to get home and to have a long sleep. The writer wished to reawaken the Six Heavenly Paths and become, according to the legend, a godlike figure with the power to create life or to bring the world back into the darkness and confusion of chaos. What would this mysterious writer do? Would he do what the memoir said and bring mankind to paradise? Soft Option of campaigning and protest? Or would he completely wipe out life on the planet, allowing for a new civilization to be built? It was most likely to be the latter, as it was clear whom the writer was. A kekkei genkai that created jutsu and chakra, nine keys that could unlock its full potential, the godlike description; it all pointed towards Pein, the leader of the Akatsuki. Following a report by one of the Legendary Sannin (Three Ninja) Jiraiya, it was revealed Pein was in possession of the Rinnegan, the kekkei genkai that was used by the Sage of the Six Paths, so naturally he would believe himself to be the reincarnation of God. The locals of Amegakure told under interrogation, and when necessary torture, about the red-haired man who became God, and the black-haired kunoichi who was his Angel. The "nine keys" he wished to obtain could mean the "bijuu", or the tailed beasts, nine demons with an amount of times ranging from one to nine. And seven of them had been captured.

The reaction was swift. Lady Tsunade, the Fifth Hokage of Konohagakure, ordered for the immediate capture of the one remaining wild bijuu, the Hachibi (eight tails), and for it to be sealed within a valuable object kept under lock and key by Lady Hokage. It is said it sits on the shelves of the Hokage's office, hidden amidst several heavy and complicated-looking books. There was also the matter of the Kyuubi, a nine-tailed fox that had attempted to destroy Konohagakure 15 and a half years ago, which had been sealed away within the only active jinchuuriki when he was just a baby; a fifteen-year old blond-haired Genin (Low Ninja) named Uzumaki Naruto. Lady Hokage demanded that the boy be monitored and protected when the situation arose, after it transpired he was chasing the missing-nin Uchiha Sasuke, who was chasing after his older brother and Akatsuki member Uchiha Itachi. If Naruto were to reach Sasuke successfully, he would be playing right into the Akatsuki's hands. A group of ANBU agents have been dispatched to shadow him, but the more urgent matter is the Akatsuki itself. It quite frankly needs to go. And time is running out; Naruto and the Hachibi can only remain under close watch for so long. It's time to act.

And this is where you come in. Lady Hokage has created a group of shinobi from the ANBU, the Konoha Military Police, the hunter-nin, and the Niju Shotai, to act as a direct form of combating the Akatsuki. With the Niju Shotai predisposed with finding all possible leads, the gap needs to be addressed immediately. This covert group of ninjas, shinobis, etc. is not just her brainchild, either; it's a unanimous decision by the Five Great Shinobi Nations, and the five official Kages themselves. The plan is to create a twelve-man formation, or Koudoutai (Zodiac), from the various nations and villages, and have them one-by-one track down the Akatsuki and eliminate their members. A secondary objective is to protect the jinchuuriki Naruto, but the priority has been made clear; the Akatsuki must go first. These shinobi are the ace in the hole for the free world, all equal, none superior, and highly skilled. You are one of the members of Koudoutai, and you all have a special skill that makes you ideal for the job. You're all that stands between the Akatsuki and the rest of the world.

...So no pressure.​

Summary:

You've just been assigned to become part of Koudoutai, an elite group of shinobi, having answered the call and you've been given complete freedom. Far above most Jonin, the ANBU Black Ops, and even the Niju Shotai, you're not given the limitations that usually befall most of the Five Great Shinobi Nations' ninja; you can use any methods you'd like, so long as it gets the job done. There are no squad leaders or superiors here; everybody is equal, all working towards one goal, and all masterminds in ways of completing it. You can come from anywhere; Konohagakure, Sunagakure (Hidden Sand), Kirigakure (Hidden Mist), anything goes. Of course, this perfect balance may not always remain the same. You will gradually learn about each other as the plot progresses; you may make friends, you may become rivals, and you may even hate each other with a vengeance and yet secretly need the target of your frustration to help you develop. And you may never come back; the role of a shinobi assassin is one where you're just a tool for killing when your death is just reduced to data on a sheet. You may remain loyal to Koudoutai, or you may turn traitor to the Akatsuki, or just cast off all loyalties to fill your own goals. I'll leave that to the members themselves. But in the meantime, enlist today; what happens to you is your choosing in the future.

Oh, and before I forget; if you want to enter the RPG, you must act like a true shinobi; that is, analyzing the data available and scanning for useful hints and details, or for deception that can catch you out. In technical terms, you need to find the password. It's hidden inside the plot, and if you can find it, you've found your entry to the RPG. But it's not as simple as finding one password; every time someone guesses it correctly, the password will be changed. This is to flush out those who will just glaze over the plot and come up with something random, from the more dedicated RPers who will look closely for details. It's too much to assume someone will just use someone else's code without actually having read it thoroughly. Just to make it that more challenging!

Akatsuki

The main antagonists of the RPG, indeed in Part II of the Naruto manga and anime. The Akatsuki organization consists of nine S-Ranked criminals, all listed in the Bingo Book, a journal marking targets for assassination, and they're all very powerful, each possessing a special ability or type of jutsu that makes them ideal for criminal activities. Initially, they operate from the shadows, performing assassination and espionage missions that attract little attention, and mainly join for their own targets. However, they have a much larger goal in mind, one that has been divided into three parts by its leader. First, they need a large amount of money to support the organization; they obtain this by doing assignments for private contractors and anyone who can afford their prices. One member in particular was obsessed with money, making this somewhat easier. Second, they need to set up a group of mercenaries loyal only to Akatsuki. The process for this is slightly longer and more complicated; they have to build up their reputation. For this, they are willing to accept any assassination/espionage mission at below the usual cost, and then operate off the excess funds earned from the first stage of the plan. Due to a distinct lack of wars in recent years, disregarding the attempted invasion of Konohagakure by Otogakure and Sunagakure, established shinobi villages can't afford to pay such low prices, but the smaller countries can, potentially gaining a mass of support along the way. Once the tailed beasts have been captured, Akatsuki can both start wars then quell them, convincing the various countries that their services are needed, and forcing other businesses to collapse due to lack of funds. The third and final stage is once they become the top ranking shinobi organization, they can move to betraying the trust of the countries that hired them, and conquer all countries that dare stand in their way, indeed all countries in general.

The capturing of the bijuu, the nine tailed beasts, is crucial for this to work. The members of Akatsuki are divided into pairs and are assigned to capture the bijuu's jinchuuriki or the beasts themselves, and seal them away. Once the bijuu or jinchuuriki has been captured, they are escorted, albeit forcibly, to the nearest Akatsuki lair, the other members assembling via astral projection, with the leader summoning a statue designed to sealing the bijuu called the King of Hell, emitting nine dragon-like effigies from its mouth to seal the beast away within itself. If it's removed from the human, then the host will die due to the force of extraction and their dependency on the bijuu. There are drawbacks to this, however; the bijuu must be sealed away in chronological order based on tails (i.e. the one tailed beast first, then the two-tails, three-tails, etc.), otherwise the statue will be destroyed. Also, since one of the members, the Konoha missing-nin Orochimaru, defected and his ring was left un-replaced, the sealing takes three days to complete, much slower than it would normally take with all the rings. This is the key to the leader's plans to awaken the Six Heavenly Paths.

Out of the nine bijuu, Akatsuki has sealed only seven; Lady Hokage has sealed the eight-tails and the nine-tails was sealed inside the Konoha Genin Uzumaki Naruto. The Akatsuki originally had nine members following their first assembly to put their plan into motion, but due to defections or deaths, only six are left, one a very recent addition. Their attire can distinguish the members; a long black trench coat decorated with crimson clouds, their fingernails painted and manicured purple, the headband of their village with a slash through it to demote their abandoning it, and the golden rings they wear on certain fingers. The symbols of the rings are the first letters of the agent's title, all based on astrological patterns. Their details in the latest version of the Bingo Book are listed as follows:

PEIN

Physical Profile: Tall, (height and weight measurements unknown), wiry, multiple piercings across face. Auburn hair, slightly ruffled, thin mouth, unusually slanted and peculiar eyes; consists of several silvery-grey spirals with a small black iris in the middle of the rings. NOTE: Subject is believed to have multiple bodies; this physical profile is of the only body known. Wears headband of Amegakure with slash mark through symbol.

Age: ?

Psychological Profile: Relatively unknown; described as adamant in his decisions and rather calm and level-headed. Believed to be quite arrogant and egotistical; calls himself "God" and his partner as his "Angel". Further information pending.

Abilities: Born with the kekkei genkai Rinnegan (Samsara Eyes); grants access to all types of elemental chakra; believed to be the kekkei genkai of the Sage of the Six Paths who founded the world, hence possible God complex. Jutsu mostly based on creation similar to deities: can summon multiple bodies with little effort and move in between them for various purposes. One body talented in the Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Summoning Technique), possibly to illustrate a god creating beings from his blood, can summon multiple creatures based off Buddhist monsters (chameleon, multi-headed dog, etc.). Makes use of Shouten no Jutsu (Shapeshifting Technique) to use human sacrifices to impersonate his subordinates; reference to creation of humans?

Partner: Konan

Ring: Rei (Zero)

KONAN

Physical Profile: Rather tall, no visible eyebrows, blue hair curled into Oriental bun, held in place with origami rose on left side of head. Blue eyes, heavily lidded, slightly covered in eye shadow.. Bottom lip pierced. Headband not viewed, but confirmed to be originally from Amegakure.

Age: ?

Psychological Profile: Relatively unknown; possibly similar to partner. Believed to be rather kind as child according to Lady Hokage.

Abilities: Talented in origami and marksmanship. Jutsu based around field of origami conversely. Capable of dividing her body into sheets of paper that can be controlled individually and formed into various objects like butterflies (scouting), weaponry, and even wings. Abilities limited when wet, as paper clings to itself and loses stiffness, thus losing her abilities.

Partner: Pein

Ring: Byakko (White Tiger)

UCHIHA ITACHI

Physical Profile: Shoulder-length black hair, tied up in ponytail at base of neck, with two shorter bangs framing face. Slightly high cheekbones. Black eyes, though due to owning the Sharingan kekkei genkai (see Abilities), can appear either scarlet with three black tomoe or red with a black kaleidoscope pattern. Wears Konohagakure headband with slash through symbol.

Age: Twenty

Psychological Profile: Dispassionate, rather emotionless, does not move much even in combat. Focused on carrying out jobs quickly and efficiently. Polite, yet rather uncaring and aloof most of the time, with exception of partner's well being. Described as genius (became ANBU commander at 13), self-reliant. Killed entire family with exception of younger brother, Konoha missing-nin Sasuke, who's currently chasing him.

Abilities: Possesses Sharingan (Copy Wheel Eye), capable of copying movements and jutsu, used to assess opponent's fighting strategy and respond accordingly. Possesses enhanced version, Mangekyou Sharingan (Kaleidoscope Copy Wheel Eye), for longer battles. Knows two abilities useable only through the Mangekyou Sharingan; Tsukuyomi (Moon Reader, Shinto moon god), an advanced genjutsu capable of torturing opponents for what seems like days in matter of seconds; and Amaterasu (Shining Heaven, Shinto sun goddess), tying in with Uchiha clan's specialty in fire-based jutsu, capable of producing black flames as hot as the Sun which can burn for seven days. Overuse of Mangekyou Sharingan can result in poor eyesight. Very talented in genjutsu, capable of reversing an opponent's with juts a glance.

Partner: Hoshigaki Kisame

Ring: Suzaku (Vermillion Bird)

HOSHIGAKI KISAME

Physical Profile: Unusual; pale blue skin, small white eyes with tiny black pupil, gill-like facial structures, sharp triangular teeth. Spiky dark blue hair, prominent cheekbones, sharp face, tall, well built. Wears Kirigakure headband with slash through symbol. Carries large sword on back, blade covered in bandages, yellow hilt with skull at the end.

Age: Thirty-one

Psychological Profile: More light-hearted than most Akatsuki members. Aware of height and build and uses it to his advantage. Gets along better with partner than most, rather concerned for his well-being and obeys instructions without hesitation. Name (meaning demon shark) and appearance suit rather sadistic nature; loves violence and mutilation, notorious for removing the limbs before killing. Easily amused, usually chuckles during battle or when performing jutsu. Former member of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist.

Abilities: Wields sentient sword named Samehada (Shark Skin), which only he can wield; should anyone else try, spikes protrude from handle and returns to his side. Blade covered in dark-blue scales that are designed to shave and rend flesh as opposed to cutting it, capable of absorbing chakra. This ability links to his large stores of chakra; even at 30% power is believed to be similar to part of the Kyuubi's chakra. Specializes in water-based jutsu, most notably water formed into the shape of sharks from bodies of water; examples include Suiton: Suikoudan no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Shark Blast Technique). If no water is present, can use Suiton: Bakusui Shouha (Water Release: Bursting Water Shockwave) to create body of water similar to a lake.

Partner: Uchiha Itachi

Ring: Nanju (Sagittarius - Southern Star)

ZETSU

Physical Profile: Believed to suffer from vitiligo (pigment cell based disorder) - half of skin is white, the other black. The white side looks most human; black side has no eyebrow and a perfectly round eye. Scruffy brown hair. Yellow, pupil-less eyes. Large Venus flytrap (for show?) surrounds head, capable of enveloping entire body if need be. Does not wear headband, but confirmed to be from Kusagakure (Hidden Grass).

Age: Early twenties

Psychological Profile: Suffers from multiple personality disorder, based on white and black halves of face. White half speaks formally and politely, calmly, slightly robotic, black half rude and sadistic, rather prone to verbal outbursts. Rather quiet, anti-social. Tends to have conversations with his multiple personae, arguing (apparently) to himself. Cannibalistic, serves to destroy unwanted bodies. Stealthy by nature. Despite lacking a partner, viewed as being quite superior.

Abilities: Specializes in Leech All-Creation Technique, allowing him to merge with plant life and use it to spy on rival teams from at least 100 meters away. Serves as Akatsuki's hunter-nin, devouring bodies and collecting rings from former Akatsuki members.

Partner: None (former subordinate: Tobi)

Ring: Genbu (Black Tortoise)

TOBI

Physical Profile: Tall, one of the taller Akatsuki members, short black hair, rather untidy. Doesn't show any skin; face covered by large mask with orange swirls (vaguely resembles a fingerprint), the swirls start from a hole over his right eye. Wears black gloves; underneath Akatsuki uniform wears cloak held together by pins. No headband visible.

Age: ?

Psychological Profile: Rather childlike; immature, foolish, clumsy, loudly outspoken, and playful. Short attention span, very polite. Appears to like complaining. May suffer from multiple personality disorder; refers to self as Uchiha Madara on occasion (founder of Uchiha clan, died at least 60 years previously). When as 'Madara', more serious and arrogant, darker voice.

Abilities: Unknown as of yet; shown to survive otherwise lethal and potentially fatal blows with no blood drawn. Possibly owns the Sharingan; believed to be incomplete. Future plans to restore Sharingan?

Partner: None (former partner deceased, superior: Zetsu)

Ring: Gyokunyo (The Virgin / Virgo)

Terminology

Yeah, odds are you lot will know what this all means, but it's always good to do this for the odd chance someone won't. I'm going to list weaponry, the types of jutsu (including kekkei genkai), familiars, that sort of thing basically. It's always good to refer to this in case you're stuck in the middle of your sign-up.

Weaponry / Tools: Every ninja needs to carry at least one form of weaponry, no matter how simple or complicated they may be. The type of weaponry varies from country to country, but it does mostly consist of the two same tools: kunai (throwing daggers) and shuriken (multi-bladed projectiles). Other countries use different weapons; those from Sunagakure may use poison-tipped kunai and shuriken that they can manipulate at will, but some make use of specially customized puppets. Unlike regular marionettes, these puppets are classified as weapons because they can be kitted out with various tools; popular ones include poison-tipped needles and scythes. Those from Kirigakure use swords in combat, and medical-nin and hunter-nin use senbon; while they don't have a large area of impact, they're very precise and can stop most functions of the body. Aside from weapons, ninja often carry various tools to use in tandem with, like tripwire to set traps and summoning scrolls to perform the Kuchiyose no Jutsu or to call out hard-to-carry weapons like giant shuriken.

Chakra: I think I explained this very well in Pein's letter, but I'll run through it again. Chakra is a source of energy that runs through the body and is actually a combination of two types of energy. The two ingredients for creating chakra are Body Energy, the vital force generated in the cells in the body, and Spiritual Energy, generated by physical and mental fortitude. When these two are merged, chakra is created. After that, chakra moves freely about the body like blood to the body's 361 release points, via a network similar to the circulatory system, and can be released and molded to perform jutsu (techniques). The chakra circulatory system is invisible to all but the Byakugan, the kekkei genkai of the Hyuuga clan.

Eight Gates: Throughout the chakra circulatory system, there exist certain points in the body that are designed to limit the body's flow of chakra. These are called the Eight Gates. While they make the body weaker, they prevent it from expiring, otherwise the total flow of chakra will produce a Big Bang effect, killing the user instantly. Certain ninja can open these gates forcibly, bypassing their own limits at the cost of extreme damage to themselves; as such, opening is considered forbidden except in extreme circumstances. If all eight gates are opened, the ninja will gain immense power, but death is guaranteed at the end of it all. The gates are listed here.

Ninjutsu (Ninja Techniques): This is the type of jutsu that ninjas make most use of, and is the most plentiful type of jutsu. Ninjutsu relies on the molding of chakra and allows ninja to perform actions they would otherwise not be able to perform. To do this, the ninja performs hand seals, each one designed to show a different animal of the Chinese Zodiac; a list of hand seals can be found here. Specific positions mold the chakra in the body into the manner in which jutsu can be performed. Simpler jutsu can be performed by more experienced ninja without the use of hand seals, and even unconsciously, such as walking on water. Most ninjutsu are classified by element, if a specific element is used.

Genjutsu (Illusion Techniques): Essentially an advanced, more intellectual version of ninjutsu, genjutsu involves using the target's own chakra in their nervous system against them and force them to see and hear things that are actually illusions. Those of high intelligence and with a certain kekkei genkai (most notably the Sharingan) have an easier time performing genjutsu; to make it really effective, you must have great attention to detail so the target cannot tell the difference between reality and illusion. Genjutsu messes with the five senses, causing them to see, hear, touch, smell and taste things that don't actually exist, and those under the influence either freeze or lose consciousness, depending on whether they can recognize and defend against it effectively or not. Since genjutsu uses the victim's chakra against them, the easiest way is to disrupt the flow. There are two ways to do this: forcibly disrupting the chakra flow using Genjutsu Kai (Genjutsu Release), or by physical contact and pain to snap them out of it.

Taijutsu (Body Techniques): Basically hand-to-hand combat, taijutsu is a rather broad term as it refers to martial arts techniques in general. Taijutsu is accessed by directly tapping in to the user's stamina, and as such is much quicker to execute than (though not always as powerful as) ninjutsu or genjutsu. In addition, taijutsu is the only type of technique used by ninja that doesn't require chakra to be used effectively, although it obviously helps some by enhancing it. There are specific styles of taijutsu as well; some rely on just delivering blows, such as the Gouken (Strong Fist, notable users include Rock Lee and Might Guy), Juuken (used by the Hyuuga clan) and Suiken (Drunken Fist, used by Rock Lee).

Kuchiyose (Summoning): A recurring technique that ninja make use of is the Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Summoning Technique), which can be used to summon highly powered animal familiars referred to as 'Summons'. Before the summoning can be performed, the user must sign a contract with the animal group of their choice (examples include toads, dogs and snakes) using their own blood; each contract is different depending on the creature summoned. Once this is done, the user spills a few drops of blood from the hand they signed the contract with and perform the needed hand seals, and often slam their hands onto an object allowing the creature to be called forth. Larger creatures, such as the chief toad Gamabunta, require much more chakra, as the amount used for the jutsu is proportional to the size of the creature summoned. The animals summoned aren't just ordinary creatures, as they have their own abilities and supplies of chakra; some are so powerful they may even challenge their summoner or demand something before hand. Similarly, weapons can be called forth with the Kuchiyose: Tobidougu (Summoning: Projectile Weapons). Rather than creatures that are called forth from their habitats, weapons are stored within the scroll itself and are commonly used to store large or multiple weaponry. While storing them requires a blood contract, they can just be forced out using chakra and no blood.

Kinjutsu (Forbidden Techniques): This is an informal rank of jutsu and can extend to ninjutsu, genjutsu and taijutsu. As the name might suggest, kinjutsu are those techniques that are declared forbidden by the country's Kage and Daimyo (warlord and ruler) to learn or perform. In some circumstances, however, exceptions can be made, but even then they are only to be used as a last resort. Jutsu may be forbidden because while it is extremely powerful, it is also lethal to the user and possibly even fatal. The most recent jutsu forbidden for this reason is Fuuton: Rasenshuriken (Wind Release: Spiralling Shuriken), a variation of the Rasengan jutsu developed by Uzumaki Naruto that moves so fast it damages every cell in the opponent's body; Lady Hokage compares this to a poison rather than an attack. However, the user's arm is devastated as well, and the damage cannot be consistently healed each time. A jutsu may also be forbidden if it is sinister or considered a violation of the laws of nature like Kuchiyose: Edo Tensei (Summoning: Impure World Resurrection), which resurrects human life at the cost of human sacrifices. The ANBU and Koudoutai have been given a certain amount of leeway regarding kinjutsu; they are cleared to perform them, but they should be used as a last resort.

Kekkei genkai (Bloodline limit): These characteristics are unique and rare; as they are genetic qualities passed down in specific clans and are exclusive to the clan members. Unlike regular jutsu, these can't be copied or taught to anyone outside of the clan, as they are burnt directly into the user's genetic code. Clan members even make use of certain jutsu revolving around these advantages they possess. Few clans exist with the kekkei genkai, as during Shinobi Wars, these users were blamed for wars and whole clans were wiped out unless they proved their loyalty to their village. Kekkei genkai can be divided into three categories (note: the last two were names I just made up):

  • Doujutsu (Pupil Techniques): The clue's in the title; these are jutsu that revolve around focusing chakra into the eyes. Depending on the clan, certain properties are activated, and usually differ from each other, but the majority revolve around bypassing regular eyesight. Examples include the Byakugan (White Eye), which can see through objects, even people, and has a nearly 360 degree field of vision, and the Sharingan, which is capable of copying movements and jutsu.

  • Taisoujuu (Body Manipulation): Again, this is relatively self-explanatory, as it lets the user manipulate his/her body structure and the chemicals inside it. This can range to converting chakra into certain elements, or controlling the bone structure in such a way it can be used as a weapon. Kekkei genkai involving this type include Shikotsumyaku (Dead Bone Pulse), a former trait that allows the user to manipulate his/her bones into weapons, such as the spinal cord can be used as a whip.

  • Butaiyuugou (Element Fusion): Not many kekkei genkai fall into this category, because the majority of this type was wiped out during the cull of those who were in possession of bloodline limits. Those born with this trait have two types of elemental chakra born into them, but they can immediately access them from a young age, in contrast to regular ninja who take years to master this. The users can merge these elements together to form a new type of element that only they can perform. Examples include Hyouton (Ice Release), which merges water and wind to create ice, but the last user of this was killed. The First Hokage founded the village of Konohagakure using his Mokuton (Wood Release) kekkei genkai, which was a fusion of earth and water. The only other user of this is the ANBU agent Yamato, confirmed to be a clone of the First Hokage.
Rules

1. Please don't make your character invincible by giving them loads of strengths and very little weaknesses. If I feel your character is swerving down that path, I will deny you.

2. If your sign-up is not up to par, I will deny you, but you will be told why and what you can improve on. I will do an evaluation of your sign-up pointing out either the highlights or flaws of your character, but if you fail to improve three times in a row, you cannot join. Three chances are lenient enough.

3. Please skim, if not read, the other people's posts just to get a general idea what's going on. Trust me, it gets very confusing when one member kills an Akatsuki mercenary and someone else is fighting it. This isn't Pulp Fiction.

4. Try and keep your posts long, minimum two paragraphs. I'm lenient with this, but try not to post too many short posts too often. If you consistently do this, I will kill your character off.

5. If you think you're going to be away for some time, PM me beforehand. I'll think of the scenario in which your character disappears. Any ideas would help, though...

6. This RPG is rated PG-13, as it will contain mild language. I don't mind too much swearing, but no Tourette's dictionaries-worth of swearing please. If your character is going to cuss, post a warning somewhere at the start of your post.

7. Bunnying is strictly prohibited, but I will make exceptions if two of you have agreed over PM and it remains in character.

8. Both the RPG Sample and the password must be present if you wish to sign up or reserve. You only need to post it once, not multiple times.

9. No double posting, SPAMming, flaming, trolling, etc.

10. No God-modding - this may be pretty freeform but don't twist the plot for your own ends. If you have an idea, post in the Discussion Thread or PM it to me, and I'll see if I can work it into my plot.

11. Good grammar and spelling is required when posting. If you use poor use of the English language, I will politely warn you. Keep it up and you will be killed off.

12. There can be some mild romance but nothing involving sex. There are children on this forum and I don't want the thread to become the rough template for Hentai.

13. Fail to follow this rule and you will be out, with no chance of returning - FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE, HAVE FUN!

Sign-Up Sheet

This is related to the plot of Naruto thus far, and from hereon in some assumptions will be made, but try not to make it as though they know everything. They wouldn't know about the Hachibi being sealed, they wouldn't be aware that Naruto would be chasing Sasuke; they'd have just been told they have to dissolve Akatsuki, no major details needed. Also, though you're from a division of ANBU, you won't have the mask or attire, but unless stated otherwise, you will have a ninjatou (ninja sword). Plus, you will already know most necessary jutsu, like Substitution, Clone (plus Shadow Clone, not to be used too much), and Transformation, plus the Temporary Paralysis Technique.

Name: (Try and keep this Japanese, state whether it's in Eastern order - surname then first name - or Western order and if possible try and make it a pun; most Naruto characters' names are puns or references to literature; the Sannin are named after the characters in Jiraiya Goketsu Monogatari (The Tale of the Gallant Jiraiya). This isn't necessary, however. You won't be related to any of the clans mentioned in Naruto either.)

Code Name: (Optional)

Age: (20-onwards. Kids get all the fun, don't they? Not for this, they don't!)

Gender: (Simple. If you can't decide, you're hopeless.)

Description: (5-6 lines minimum)

Personality: (5-6 lines minimum, don't make your character too similar to Naruto, Sasuke, et al.)

History: (1-2 paragraphs minimum. Don't make it clichéd like 'parents died', 'children of millionaires', etc.)

Kekkei genkai: (This is entirely optional, plus I don't want too many characters with this. Not many people have a kekkei genkai due to the culls performed by paranoid shinobi and if I can't trust you to overpower this, then I will deny it. Any techniques using this should be listed here as well.)

Armaments: (Basically, any tools you own. Summoning scrolls, swords, etc., anything goes. You will already have kunai and shuriken, plus the ANBU ninjatou unless stated otherwise)

Form of Taijutsu: (How adept or clumsy you are at taijutsu, plus how you fight in close-quarters. If you have a specific style, put it here.)

Ninjutsu: (Yeah, the fun part. However, I'm putting a few limits on this; characters have a maximum of seven ninjutsu, but they should only use a maximum of three at the start, gradually learning the others as the plot progresses. List all current ninjutsu and future ninjutsu here, and feel free to make up custom jutsu)

Genjutsu: (Clones do not fall into this category; they don't manipulate the user's five senses, do they? You can have a maximum of five, but this includes current and future genjutsu. Again, feel free to make up your own)

Kinjutsu: (Your strongest jutsu, but also you're most dangerous to both the opponent and you. This should be custom, so describe it in as much detail as you'd like. This has to have some lethal drawback, so you can't abuse it. You're limited to just the one, I'm afraid.)

Other: (Basically anything that doesn't fall into any of the fields above, or anything you feel like mentioning)

Koudoutai Members

1. The Doctor - ???
2. ?
3. cdra1617 - Shirou Aika
4. PokemonBreederChris - ???
5. enflamedsteelix - Seiteki Ryou
6. Mimori Kiryu - Shizuka Yume
7. ?
8. Tundra_Wolfmane - Garou Seishou
9. .:Lemon Tea:. - ???
10. ~Hyuu - ???
11. Skeith - ???
12. RMelody_009 - Amatou Karen
 
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Ejunknown

be creative
...Whilst I do like what you've done here on this rpg, I can't help but notice that the personalities and descriptions for the members of the Akatsuki are just KK's (Katiekitten's), from her thread, rewritten slightly? I only know because I know her views of the Akatsuki (we have argued and discussed at length over msn) and know that they are very different from mine, and unique, as everyone has different perceptions, their own twist of the characters (whether correct or incorrect), and, especially for Pein and Konan, as no one knows their personalities really at all, those are her views. It's fine if you like her views and agree with them, and have asked her whether you can use her views, and if you have, I apologise.

But there is a problem with the wording, it seems as if it as been tweaked so it isn't exactly word for word, but is extremely similar to what she posted. (She put copious amounts of blue eye shadow, you put copious amounts of eye shadow, that'd just be a coincidence were it not the only one like that I spotted. XD; ) And I couldn't help notice as I know her writing inside out as I am her beta and she mine, and I help her out a lot. XD;

XDD I want to join, but a) I am exceedingly busy at the moment and b) I love the Akatsuki, so in the end my character would probably join them. XDDD
 
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Hi i would lilke to join.

Name: Traosk (pronunced Tr-a-sk)

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Description:Traosk wears a black shirt like the one Sasuke wore when he was 12, but without the Uchiha symbol. Black pants and standard leaf ninja shoes. Black hair that is spiky like Naruto's. His headband has a scratch going across the leaf symbol diagnolly from a kunai knife. He wears his ninjatou on his back along with a large scroll. He wears his headband on his leg as he hates it on his head.He is 5'5" and wieghs 148 poends.

Personality: He won't back down at all. He doesn't trust most people unless they prove themselves to him. In a fight he is cruel and merciless he won't stop attacking until he is sure they are dead. He won't use his kinjutsu unless he needs to as he even finds too much to use on somebody. He likes to end things quickly as he hates using a lot of chakra because most of his jutsu use about one-eighth of his chara.

History: When Traosk was in the chuninn exams he fought his best friend in the finals and the fight ended up severly injuring both of them. The jutsu that Traosk used to injure both of them was called the Thunder Rasengan. He invented the jutsu and this was the first time he used it and the injuries were so bad he barely made it out alive and his best friend died. Since then he hasn't trusted anyone so he doesn't lose anyone precious to him anymore.

Kekkei genkai:Byakugan. He can use 8 trigrams large palm rotation, 8 trigrams 256 palms, and Thunder point jutsu(he summons thunder and uses it to attack the chakra points of his opponents).

Armaments:Demon Wind Shuriken, special kunai he made that he can enffuse his chakra with, and fire charms.

Form of Taijutsu: Out of 100 most people would give him a 95 because of his Byakugan and his Gentle Fist Style.

Ninjutsu: Ones he knows now:
-Rasengan
-Fire style giant fire ball jutsu
-Summoning Jutsu( a monkey)
Ones he will learn:
-Water style:Water Dragon jutsu
-Ultra Sound wave jutsu ( sends sound waves thruogh the ground)
-Ultimate Tyrano Bolt ( a giant dinasaur head comes out from the ground and shoots lightning out of its head)
Genjutsu: Not really good at them but can do one:
Spiral Shock,makes the opponent think that lightning is shocking them and everything around them.

Kinjutsu:Thunder Rasengan: it is done by throwing a kunai into the ground and summonig lightning. Since the kunai is made of metal the lightning will strike it and when it does he will have his hand on it so he can absorb it. Then he spins the electricty with his chakra to make a stronfer, more compact Rasengan with electricity shooting out. The draw back is that the user takes half the damage the opponent takes from the electricity and explosion on impact.

Password: Summoning
 
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Hexagram

Sic Transit Mundus

Name: Yamato Mozuke

Code Name: Apocalypse

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Description: Yamato has pitch black skin, and wears his armaments, as well as sunglasses, and leather shoes. His hair is red and orange like fire, and his eyes are white like ivory. He is approximately 8’6”, and is covered in lean muscles, making him flexible and strong. His eyes are normal size, but look like demon eyes( wide, but curve a bit downwards and to the right to belie sinister intentions. His eyes also have a golden pentagram in the middle- the sure mark of the Kamigan.

Personality: Yamato is quiet, and mysterious. He hates socialization, and prefers to just get the job done. He almost never talks, and usually not much. Yamato is also very smart, which may be why he hates to plan- he knows what to do, he just wants to get the job done. He has never considered a relationship, and prefers to be alone, in absolute solitude. This attitude leads him to carelessness- he just wanders, as he has nothing planned for his life- he’ll just drift along, alone, and ultimately, happy.

History: He lived in a now-destroyed village a long time ago, at the beginning of the Ninja Wars- the Sky Village. His whole clan was sealed away by the clan of Pein when he was born. Years later, erosion broke his seal, and he got two spirits- the male lord of Heaven, Deos, and the female lord of Hell, Sinara. Over 21 years, he was raised by various families, but never got really attached. Finally, he just wandered all around the world, training. He finally, at age 18, reached the Village Hidden In The Leaves. After getting settled in, he joined ANBU, and has lived in the Leaf Village ever since.


Kekkei Genkai: Kamigan Eye. This feature is exclusive to his clan. It allows the use of greater spirits, greater than even the bijuu. It also enhances the abilities of said spirits. This also allows control over all body parts. However, he can not use his body as a weapon. The spirits often have element fusions, so he can do that as well. However, the energy required by these jutsu is enormous, and oftentimes, he does not use the spirit abilities; just the element fusion. The weakness of this eye is that if your spirits are too powerful, they may change you. In Yamato's case, it is his quiet nature and vicous battel style. He has no mercy, and almost no compassion for others he doesn't know. The Hell Lord took his personality, and changed it, Yamato, instead of a kind, warmhearted person, is a cold, robot-like person, and it worsens every time he uses the Hell Lord. However, he has begun using the Heaven Lord more- but only time will tell how Yamato, the perpetual "ball of clay" for his inner spirits will turn out. these spirits also have influence over his conscience, like the famous angel and devil on someones shoulder.

Armaments: Yamato does not have a standard sword, as he has his own. This sword is golden, with a black hilt. He wears diamond armor, and a fur jacket over that. He also uses: ruby kunai, sapphire shuriken, emerald senbon, projectiles embedded in seals hidden in armor. Finally, he has a summoning scroll for summoning dragons. Therefore, he is seen as the Dragon sign of the Zodiac.

Form of Taijutsu: Yamato is just as good at taijutsu as he is at ninjutsu: pretty good. He uses the Spirit Style, or Spirit Fist. By channeling energy of his angel, demon, or both, into his body, he can use his fists to destroy his enemies. He punches, kicks, or otherwise hits, and can do a variety of things:

  • Destroy chakra lines (NOT SEALING! HE DOES NOT HAVE BYAKUGAN!)
  • Decay organs or tissue
  • Disrupt thought process
  • Disorient
  • Destroy them (channels chakra into them until they explode)

    Ninjutsu:
  • Hell Torture Jutsu- Uses Demon Side to torture his enemies
  • Heavenly Judgement Jutsu- This jutsu smites the enemy with divine judgement.
  • Plague Jutsu- Makes 10 plagues: meteors, earthquakes, disease, blizzards, eruptions, hurricanes, tsunamis, wild animals, lightning and hail, and then a tornado. Yamato learns this much, much later on, but it tires him severely.
  • Hell Lord Summon- Yamato summons the hell lord. This is learned a bit later.
  • Heaven Emperor- Yamato summons the heaven emperor. This is learned a bit later.
  • Chaos Jutsu- Absorbs enemy by using chaos itself.
  • Ragnarok Jutsu- This jutsu, learned at almost the end, unleashes all the forces of his clan to fight the enemy. Extremely effective against villages or armies.

    Genjutsu: Yamato is very good at dispelling genjutsu, but has very few of his own.
  • Psychological Destruction Jutsu: This genjutsu reads the persons mind, and created images that push all of their buttons. As they see these horrible images, they are imprinted in the brain. It causes them so much psychological damage that their nervous system malfunctions. This jutsu is often used by Yamato so well that the images stay in the persons mind for a while, giving them more psychological destruction.
Texture Illusion Jutsu- This jutsu confuses the opponents sense of touch, making them feel pain as comfort so wonderful, that they won’t even care when they see weapons or a deadly jutsu.. Yamato learns this later on, and uses it to fool his enemies so that he may kill them without any resistance

Kinjutsu: Apocalypse Jutsu- Yamato summons all of his energy to himself, and unleashes it in a mighty explosion that can go an extremely far distance. Like an atomic bomb, this jutsu severely injures the user. In Yamato it will make him unable to move due to injury for at least 3 months, depending on how his spirits will help him.

Password: Dawn
 
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I'd like to reserve a spot please. My password is "times". There's a part in the plot that says it, but I don't think it fits the sentence, as it should be "tails" instead. Well, cheers to my hoping!

“Hello, Keyblade wielder! I need you to come to Town Square, First District, at six tonight. Bring your Keyblade and be ready for a wild ride; this is gonna get crazy!

Yours Truly, That Dude With the Keyblade and the stuff.”​


Walking down a dark alley he used to get to the First District, Lucas stared at the piece of paper in his hand. The writing was clear and seemed to carry a carefree tone to it. It also bore a familiar aura that Lucas had only felt one time. He managed to find it in the place where he usually had his training.

After finding some food and a stable place to sleep, he had decided that if he was destined to be some sort of hero, he'd need to become better at fighting. Heroes seemed to have a knack for that. He was glad he had taken those lessons from Geode, or he presumed he'd be hopeless. Every noon, he'd usually be found practicing his basics, or the basics that he remembered. Strangely, people, at least the ones that saw him, didn't seem to find it odd that he kept on using an oversized key as a sword. He would also occasionally try some complex moves, but he usually ended up mucking them up. Still, he was quite a sight to see, especially with his queer set of clothes.

"Well, you can't expect to learn all of them at once, can you?" he remembered Geode telling him one time.

'If only it were so,' he had thought then, as he did so many times after he arrived in the town of never-ending twilight.

Lucas repeated the words "Dude With the Keyblade" in his mind. The image of the man with the white tiger ears appeared in his mind's eye, especially since he was the only one who ever uttered the word 'Keyblade' to him. Ever. He felt a tiny, bittersweet smile tugging at his lips. It was his fault that he was in this town, and he felt mixed feelings towards the man. It was his fault he felt so lost in this town. He had left him to fend for himself the second he opened his eyes. However, it was also his fault that he had been saved by that...Heartless, as he remembered what it was called. He was also his last connection to his home. Besides, he seemed like a nice man, a strange one, but nice nonetheless. He didn't mind the fashion sense; it was just as an oddity as Clath's. (Oh, how little did he know!)

However, the whole letter itself gave him an uneasy feeling. What did he mean by 'wild ride' exactly? Whenever he heard anyone use those words, it was never pretty. Especially when used in conjunction with the word 'crazy'. However, with those feelings, curiosity was mixed in. In short, Lucas felt a bit torn. He wanted to go so much to know what it was all about, but at the same time, he wanted to stay clear in fear of troubles.

Lucas stopped for a moment and let out a breath. 'You gotta take a risks, or life isn't really worth living,' he thought to himself. After all, the 'Dude With the Keyblade' had said that Gar was taken by the Heartless, and he couldn't deny the probability. He shook his head and looked at the letter one more time, rereading its contents.

Lucas stopped walking as he noticed he was right in front of a dead end. He blinked. He looked to his sides and found himself standing inside a narrow alley. He frowned as he finally realized that he had gotten lost! It had happened a few times before when he was so focused on his train of thought, and half the time, it took him almost half a day to find a familiar scene or object.

'Oh no,' he thought as he started to feel a bit worried, 'I can't be late!' He pivoted and jogged out of the dead-end and scanned his surroundings. He was in between two paths, but he didn't remember which one he took. He started to feel a little bit of panic.

He then closed his eyes, took a deep breath and let it out. "Calm down, you have to think clearly," he told himself, opening his eyes. He heard a familiar chime sound nearby, and he matched it with the sound of the Second District clock. That meant that it was already noon!

Hoping for the best, Lucas ran down the alley, not noticing that he had passed the same old Accessory Shop that he first went to for information. He was also oblivious to the figure positioned on its rooftop.

Please note that I chose this post as my RPG Sample because it is my newest, and thus, probably not my best. At least, I think it isn't; I don't keep track of the 'beauty' or 'skill' in my posts, but I can assure you that I try my best to make it a worth-while read/post. Also, how long do reservations last?
 

The Doctor

Absolute Beginner
Ejunknown: Um, the Akatsuki bios were based on military intelligence, hence the fractured, brief style. Looking back, however, I see what you mean. I'll edit it right out, to avoid similarities. And don't worry; this is pretty freeform. If your character wants to help Akatsuki, then he/she can, albeit later on.

assassinsceptile: Let me just run through what's wrong with your sign-up.

Description:Traosk wears a black shirt like the one Sasuke wore when he was 12, but without the Uchiha symbol. Black pants and standard leaf ninja shoes. Black hair that is spiky like Naruto's. His headband has a scratch going across the leaf symbol diagnolly from a kunai knife. He wears his ninjatou on his back along with a large scroll. He wears his headband on his leg as he hates it on his head.

The description should be at least 5 lines long. This is too short and it seems to me your character is a clone of Sasuke and Naruto; the hair and the attire. I want to try and avoid making the characters carbon copies so revise this please. This can be lengthened and avoided, however.

He won't back down at all. He doesn't trust most people unless they prove themselves to him. In a fight he is cruel and merciless he won't stop attacking until he is sure they are dead. He won't use his kinjutsu unless he needs to as he even finds too much to use on somebody. He likes to end things quickly as he hates using a lot of chakra because most of his jutsu use about one-eighth of his chara.

Again, this is far too short, and needs to be lengthened. Unfortunately, it's only four lines long which doesn't even scrape the minimum. Plus, it's incredibly hollow; you say what he's like in battle, but you scarcely touch on his general persona. Again, this can be lengthened.

History: When Traosk was in the chuninn exams he fought his best friend in the finals and the fight ended up severly injuring both of them. The jutsu that Traosk used to injure both of them was called the Thunder Rasengan. He invented the jutsu and this was the first time he used it and the injuries were so bad he barely made it out alive and his best friend died. Since then he hasn't trusted anyone so he doesn't lose anyone precious to him anymore.

Seriously, you need to elaborate so much more. Wait...the Rasengan? NOOOO! The Rasengan was only ever taught to Jiraiya, Kakashi and Naruto, and the only way you could learn it is by being taught by them, which is a real no-no because there's no reason for Jiraiya, Kakashi et al. to teach you. Besides, Kakashi tried to bond lightning to the Rasengan and ended up with the Chidori. Lightning can't be bonded to the Rasengan for the time being. This is still incredibly bare; what was his childhood like? How did he get into ANBU? Why did he try and injure both of them? EXPLAIN.

Kekkei genkai:Byakugan. He can use 8 trigrams large palm rotation, 8 trigrams 256 palms, and Thunder point jutsu(he summons thunder and uses it to attack the chakra points of his opponents).

Yet again, you're copying the characters. You're not a member of the Hyuga clan, are you? No, therefore you can't have the Byakugan. It's exclusive to the clan and nobody outside the Hyuga clan can use it, let alone master it. Even if it was surgically transferred, the body would have to be dieing, but the dying Hyuga would have their brain destroyed so it couldn't be used. I'm really getting fed up with your cookie-cutter character! Tell me, what do the Eight Trigrams attacks look like? Describe, describe, describe.

Armaments: Demon Wind Shuriken, special kunai he made that he can enffuse his chakra with, and fire charms.

Meh, this is fine, but elaborate on what the charms and the Demon Wind look like.

Form of Taijutsu: Out of 100 most people would give him a 95 because of his Byakugan and his Gentle Fist Style.

Oh joy, the Byakugan! Explain the Gentle Fist style to me; don't assume everyone knows what you mean. So, you're very strong, and have a powerful kekkei genkai; so far, you're a Gary-Stu.

Ninjutsu: Ones he knows now:
-Rasengan
-Fire style giant fire ball jutsu
-Summoning Jutsu( a monkey)

You really are copying characters, aren't you? How does one perform the Rasengan, the Goukakyuu (Fire Ball) and the Summoning? What does the monkey look like? Why do you know the Rasengan? Traosk comes off to me as a Gary-Stu who magically knows the main jutsu of the protagonists. There may be more to this character, but I don't know. YOU DIDN'T GIVE ME MUCH.

Genjutsu: Not really good at them but can do one:
Spiral Shock,makes the opponent think that lightning is shocking them and everything around them.

This is passable, but just barely. Could you elaborate on this? Can an opponent break out of it? Description is needed. The more you put, the more likely you'll get in.

Kinjutsu:Thunder Rasengan: it is done by throwing a kunai into the ground and summonig lightning. Since the kunai is made of metal the lightning will strike it and when it does he will have his hand on it so he can absorb it. Then he spins the electricty with his chakra to make a stronfer, more compact Rasengan with electricity shooting out. The draw back is that the user takes half the damage the opponent takes from the electricity and explosion on impact.

No Rasengan, OK? I'm getting seriously annoyed by the fact your character seems to be copying jutsu. Aside from that, this would do fine, but needs more description and the Rasengan part ditched.

On the whole, Denied. I did say in the first post that I didn't want characters who were related to the existing characters in Naruto or to be too similar. While your personality veers away from this, your description and jutsu are all cherry-picked from existing characters. Also, the sections were lacking pretty much everywhere.

You have two chances remaining.

darkbradlor:

Name: Yamato Mozuke

Code Name: Apocalypse

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Well, you could've stated whether your name is Western or Eastern order, but I'm easy on that. And...the code name is sort of unnerving. It gives a brief glimpse into his abilities, and given your...fascination, shall we say, with the armageddon and the powers you give...OK, I'll stop.

Description: Yamato has pitch black skin, and wears his armaments, as well as sunglasses, and leather shoes. His hair is red and orange like fire, and his eyes are white like ivory. He is approximately 8’6”, and is covered in lean muscles, making him flexible and strong. His eyes are normal size, but look like demon eyes( wide, but curve a bit downwards and to the right to belie sinister intentions. His eyes also have a golden pentagram in the middle- the sure mark of the Kamigan.

Interesting, there hasn't really been a black character in Naruto, but maybe because not many of the Japanese are black. Well, except Mr. Mikato in the Alex Rider books. What are his armaments exactly? I know there's a section for them but you should ideally put how you carry them. White eyes gives a sort of zombie, undead theme to them.

8'6" however is too tall. People hardly ever reach that height, if at all; besides, those of taller height have a tendency to die young. Even at 21, you could only hit 8ft by steroids, otherwise it's just...unrealistic. The section on the eyes is a bit conflicting; from what I read, they were pure white balls, but now they've changed. Also, a golden pentagram in the centre...ooh-er. Perhaps I should explain that Western religious imagery is different from Eastern; pentagrams are demonic, yes? So why would the gods (with Kamigan meaning "god eye" or "divine eye") use that? They'd use kanji for "holy" or "god", not something so demonic. Anyway, you need a pupil of some kind; eyes just can't function without them.

All that from three lines? Don't be surprised. There wasn't much to glean from this.

Personality: Yamato is quiet, and mysterious. He hates socialization, and prefers to just get the job done. He almost never talks, and usually not much. Yamato is also very smart, which may be why he hates to plan- he knows what to do, he just wants to get the job done. He has never considered a relationship, and prefers to be alone, in absolute solitude. This attitude leads him to carelessness- he just wanders, as he has nothing planned for his life- he’ll just drift along, alone, and ultimately, happy.

The whole purpose of elite teams like Koudoutai is for the members to work well today. If one member isn't very social, already knows what he's doing, and doesn't include anyone else, then you can't really be in the team; taking down obstacles, i.e. the Akatsuki, must be a team effort. It seems to me that you may make Yamato the center of things and that just can't happen. Again, this is too short.

History: He lived in a now-destroyed village a long time ago, at the beginning of the Ninja Wars- the Sky Village. His whole clan was sealed away by the clan of Pein when he was born. Years later, erosion broke his seal, and he got two spirits- the male lord of Heaven, Deos, and the female lord of Hell, Sinara. Over 21 years, he was raised by various families, but never got really attached. Finally, he just wandered all around the world, training. He finally, at age 18, reached the Village Hidden In The Leaves. After getting settled in, he joined ANBU, and has lived in the Leaf Village ever since.

A village...in the sky? You know, someone actually created a village like that in the Naruto fanon, Sukaigakure, held in place by a meteor that negates gravity. But that's still standing, well, floating more like it. Is that the one you mean? If not, then how does it remain airborne? You didn't really elaborate on this; was he born when the village was destroyed? If so, why did he survive? Oh, and Pein was orphaned when he was a baby or at least very very young, so his clan can't exist. How can erosion break his seal? Is it an earthly seal that's affected by minerals, or is it one that requires chakra to unlock? Seals involve the latter, and nature doesn't have its own supply of chakra. It can't manipulate Body Energy and Spiritual Energy.

How did he get these two spirits? You didn't explain, and having the King of Heaven and the Queen of Hell as part of you is overpowering; it's like having divinities at your side which is just too uber. Plus, your knowledge on Japanese religion is lacking; there's no Heavenly King, there's a pantheon of gods, but the one in charge is the sun goddess Amaterasu. The ruler of Hell, or Yomi, is Izanami, the Grand Deity Queen. If you want to impress me, do your homework, mate.

So, he's been wandering about the world for 18 years since he was born? That's what I got. And I hardly need tell you it's INCREDIBLY UNREALISTIC. A baby can't survive like that, alone in the world, for that long a period of time. The only way you could is if your pet gods (that's the only real way of describing them) protected you, which is Gary-Stu material. I also asked for 1-2 paragraphs minimum and you barely scraped that.

Kekkei Genkai: Kamigan Eye. This feature is exclusive to his clan. It allows the use of greater spirits, greater than even the bijuu. It also enhances the abilities of said spirits. This also allows control over all body parts. However, he can not use his body as a weapon. The spirits often have element fusions, so he can do that as well. However, the energy required by these jutsu is enormous, and oftentimes, he does not use the spirit abilities; just the element fusion. The weakness of this eye is that if your spirits are too powerful, they may change you. In Yamato's case, it is his quiet nature and vicous battel style. He has no mercy, and almost no compassion for others he doesn't know. The Hell Lord took his personality, and changed it, Yamato, instead of a kind, warmhearted person, is a cold, robot-like person, and it worsens every time he uses the Hell Lord. However, he has begun using the Heaven Lord more- but only time will tell how Yamato, the perpetual "ball of clay" for his inner spirits will turn out. these spirits also have influence over his conscience, like the famous angel and devil on someones shoulder.

If his clan was sealed away/killed/whatever, how could he know how to use this? Even with the weaknesses you set, Yamato is still rather proficient with this overpowering bloodline limit. I mean, spirits greater than the bijuu (which you failed to elaborate on), and the ability to control every part of the body! Come on! I thought the Lord of Hell was a Lady, that's the female form of Lord. I'm confused and I shouldn't be. You mentioned Yamato would normally be a kind, warmhearted dude; so he's normally a nice guy with uber powers. Perfect, Gary-Stu, etc. In your favour, however, the angel and devil motif is really quite clever, albeit a bit uber.

Armaments: Yamato does not have a standard sword, as he has his own. This sword is golden, with a black hilt. He wears diamond armor, and a fur jacket over that. He also uses: ruby kunai, sapphire shuriken, emerald senbon, projectiles embedded in seals hidden in armor. Finally, he has a summoning scroll for summoning dragons. Therefore, he is seen as the Dragon sign of the Zodiac.

Judging from the large amount of gems you use in your armaments, Yamato's loaded with cash. How else could you customise your battle wear so gaudily? How is a fur jacket a weapon? O_O Besides, gemstones would actually weigh your weaponry down, and ninja need to be light and nippy ideally. You didn't really describe them much either. What does the armour look like? What hidden projectiles does he use? What do the seals look like? How big is his summoning scroll? Dragons don't really exist in Naruto anyway. The various jutsu named after them would have been named after old myths, and the more fantastical creatures would be bijuu. Seven of them have been sealed and the eighth is under Tsunade's watch. You can't have dragons, sorry.

Form of Taijutsu: Yamato is just as good at taijutsu as he is at ninjutsu: pretty good. He uses the Spirit Style, or Spirit Fist. By channeling energy of his angel, demon, or both, into his body, he can use his fists to destroy his enemies. He punches, kicks, or otherwise hits, and can do a variety of things:

  • Destroy chakra lines (NOT SEALING! HE DOES NOT HAVE BYAKUGAN!)
  • Decay organs or tissue
  • Disrupt thought process
  • Disorient
  • Destroy them (channels chakra into them until they explode)

Using divine and demonic powers is...wait for it...overpowered! If you had common spirits, like the ones used for the Mind Body Exchange Technique, instead, then it would be plausible, but you'd need to play it carefully.

Looking at what he can do, I notice it isn't just like the Byakugan, it's stronger than the Byakugan. You need to see the chakra network to sever the lines to get the best results. All the abilities you listed are too powerful, with no drawbacks whatsoever.

Ninjutsu:
Hell Torture Jutsu- Uses Demon Side to torture his enemies
Heavenly Judgement Jutsu- This jutsu smites the enemy with divine judgement.
Plague Jutsu- Makes 10 plagues: meteors, earthquakes, disease, blizzards, eruptions, hurricanes, tsunamis, wild animals, lightning and hail, and then a tornado. Yamato learns this much, much later on, but it tires him severely.
Hell Lord Summon- Yamato summons the hell lord. This is learned a bit later.
Heaven Emperor- Yamato summons the heaven emperor. This is learned a bit later.
Chaos Jutsu- Absorbs enemy by using chaos itself.
Ragnarok Jutsu- This jutsu, learned at almost the end, unleashes all the forces of his clan to fight the enemy. Extremely effective against villages or armies.

What the hell is Demon Side? Do you mean his demonic side? Again this range of jutsu is too overpowering; being able to summon divinities, creating world-threatening forces and using godly powers is a definite negative. There aren't really any drawbacks or realistic ones. I think you'd get a little more than tired out from being able to summon ten plagues, said with more than a hint of sarcasm.

Genjutsu: Yamato is very good at dispelling genjutsu, but has very few of his own.
Psychological Destruction Jutsu: This genjutsu reads the persons mind, and created images that push all of their buttons. As they see these horrible images, they are imprinted in the brain. It causes them so much psychological damage that their nervous system malfunctions. This jutsu is often used by Yamato so well that the images stay in the persons mind for a while, giving them more psychological destruction.

...Do you know what pushing buttons means, good sir? It means to please. If this is devoted to destroying someone's mind and sanity, you'd hardly present them with stuff that made them happy. This is also too powerful; if he isn't good at genjutsu, why does he have such effective stuff? That's for skilled genjutsu users only.

Kinjutsu: Apocalypse Jutsu- Yamato summons all of his energy to himself, and unleashes it in a mighty explosion that can go an extremely far distance. Like an atomic bomb, this jutsu severely injures the user. In Yamato it will make him unable to move due to injury for at least 3 months, depending on how his spirits will help him.

I knew you'd have something relating to the armageddon. If you're turning yourself into a weapon of mass destruction. You'd have to self-destruct, and inevitably kill yourself, for this to work, not just get burned out. With his pet gods turning him into an indestructible bomb, he truly is invincible Gary-Stu man.

Denied for obvious reasons. I'd refrain from using the angel/demon motif you seem to like using, unless you've got a good grasp on Japanese mythology. Yamato is protected by fictional gods and can turn himself into a living bomb and live to tell the tale, and that just can't work.

You have two chances remaining.

Tundra_Wolfmane: Actually, I rather like your sample, plus I know you're a brilliant RPer and would like to welcome you. But that's not the right password; it isn't a word, it's a phrase. Allow me to give you guys a clue; look for something rather random or out of place in the plot. Odds are that's the password. Feel free to try again, however.
 

Gentleman Skeleton

Well-Known Member
I would like to reserve a place in this RPG.

here is my sample:
One Piece: Straw Hat Liberation Force

-Episode 1-
Meet the Willow Pirates: Chaos on the High Seas

-Penance: Grand Line-
Bartholomew Kuma stood at the gates of the massive floating prison, Penance. Standing in front of him, shackled and humiliated was the captain of the Straw Hat pirate crew, Monkey D. Luffy. He was alone, his friends scattered across the Grand Line to keep them from being able to reuniting and turning against the World Government.

“Do what you want with me,” Luffy said, his eyes tearing up with untold rage. “My friends will not abandon me. I will sail the seas once again, and I will be king of the pirates.”

“No, they will not,” Kuma replied. “Face it, you’ve lost. By the time this month is over, you will be hanged like your friends. And once we figure out what to do with your reindeer and skeleton friend, they will be punished as well. Mark my words.”

“They will come. I have faith in them.”

-New World: Six months prior-
The Lady Fortune was far out to sea when the Navy set out their surprise attack. Cannonballs flew through the air, although none of them hit. A man, at least ten feet tall emerged from the ship to see the chaos around him.

“Rebecca, hide the children!” He shouted. A woman emerged and slowly began to escort a young boy and a young girl below deck. The sound of a baby crying could be heard from within the ship. “Amos m’boy, it’s time for the both of us to defend this ship, eh? Follow m’lead!” A pair of small cannons appeared out of the palm of the man’s ands and the boy, no older than fourteen drew a sword from his belt. Several other crew members appeared on deck and activated their individual Devil Fruit powers, or drew their weapons if they didn’t have any. All one man did was rip off his shirt to reveal a twelve pack. “Well, m’lads. This is it! If they want us, they can damn well try and take us! We make our final stand here and now!” The men all cheered and roared. “Let us show these navy cockroaches what we salty dogs are capable of! ATTACK!” The Navy ships came in dangerously close as men swarmed the ship. Amos grabbed his blade tightly and tried to go to town, but the men were many times his size, and he was quickly knocked to the ground and broke his sword in half. As soon as he gained his composure, he rose to his feet and continued to hold a pair of soldiers back. All around him, fellow crewmates were being stabbed and shot. He could only continue his focus on the task at hand. He soon found that the crew of the ship was outnumbered ten to one. One soldier emerged from inside the ship holding the woman from before by the arm, dragging her out to the deck of the ship. The crowd of soldiers parted as an aristocratic looking officer stepped aboard and approached the man and woman.

“Nathaniel and Rebecca Willow,” He announced. “You are both wanted for the crime of piracy and providing safe haven for wanted pirates. The penalty is execution by firing squad. You are to stand and take your punishment like the scum you are. Finish them.” All Amos could hear was the shots from the guns and the footsteps of the officer as he walked away. The woman died instantly while his father spawned cannons across his body and fired away, taking a few soldiers with him. His wounds eventually became too much and he collapsed partially over the edge of the ship. “What a pity and here I was going to give you a gentleman’s death if you survived. Too bad.” The officer approached the man and pushed him over the edge of the ship. The man was dragged into the depths thanks in part to his Devil Fruit’s curse. Amos’ eyes welled up with tears. He snuck away, only to be caught by one of the officers.

“Sir, what should we do with this one?” The officer asked. “He was trying to sneak away.”

“What’s your name, boy?”

“A-Amos Willow, sir,” Amos struggled to fight tears back as he said his own name. “Th-those were my parents you just killed.” Amos hacked up all the phlegm he could muster and spat it into the face of the officer. This action was met with a rifle butt to the face and multiple kicks from navy issue boots. The head officer wiped the phlegm from his face and looked at a large pile of wanted posters to find the name Amos Willow, and a bounty of two hundred and fifty belli.

“Leave the boy and the other children. They’re not worth our time. Salvage “Cannonball” Willow’s body and take Rebecca’s corpse. We’re eating steak tonight boys!” The naval officers cheered as Amos slumped into the cabin of the ship. Inside, Amos found the store of Devil Fruit below deck and ate one fruit in particular that always interested him, the Sumi-Sumi Fruit. Grabbing a fountain pen, he stabbed himself in the finger, allowing the blood the flow enough for the pen to soak up. He started to draw and within a minute, he had drawn a sword. He reached out to touch what he had drawn, thinking to himself, I wish I could actually use this. Suddenly, he found his hand being absorbed into the wooden plank he drew the blade on. When he pulled his hand away, his sword drawing stuck with him. He ran out to try and take out one of the guards, but it was too late, they had already gone, but Nathaniel and Rebecca’s corpses remained on the ship. They had salvaged Nathaniel and taken pictures of the corpses, then left like that. It dawned on Amos at this moment, they weren’t coming back. He fell to his knees and sobbed, letting his emotions take hold of him.

-Isla del Fuego: New World Border: 6 Months Later-
Deep inside the volcano, amidst the lava and dangerous heat laid an underground base. This base now belongs to Amos and the rebuilt Willow pirates, his father’s crew. Amos was now the captain and although the original crew was slain that bloody night before they knew it, Amos had gathered a new crew in their honor. It was much smaller, but they did their duty quite well. Someone entered Amos’ chamber with a look of concern on his face. He was not a member of the Willow Pirates, but instead a member of the Red-haired Pirates, a crew that Amos and his father were supporters of.

“What brings you here?” Amos asked. “I can tell you’re a Red-hair. How is Shanks?”
“Doin’ well,” The man replied. “I have some awful news for you, young Amos. Have you heard of Straw Hat Luffy?”

“Who hasn’t? Heard stories of him through other Red-hairs. What about him?”

“He’s been captured in the Florian Triangle. Red-Haired Shanks is unable to help him and he wants you to do the rescuing. How big is your bounty?”

“Forty-eight mill.”

“Forty-eight mill in less than six months, I’m impressed, but by the time you rescue Luffy and his crew, prepare to have your bounty skyrocket. I have maps and information for you, but I want you to address your crew first to see if they wish to undertake this mission as well. You could easily be killed out there, so I’ll only let you go if you’re really willing.”

“I am, and so is my crew. We’ll go brief them right now.”
And I believe your password is 'wishing to get home and to have a long sleep.'
 

The Doctor

Absolute Beginner
dragonic_man: Well, your sample is satisfactory, but unfortunately that's not the password. Good try, though. Passwords are usually with capital letters too.
 

Sir Forgets-A-Lot

The Forever Amnesiac
I would like to reserve a spot, if you please.

Originally from Psychic's Plight at the Power Plant RPG

“Get your filthy paws off me, will ya!” Zip yelled at the two stoned faced Ampharos holding him still. “I’m starving! Let me go and find an electric source already. They had me in that electronic deprived hole called a prison. You two can even chose the source for me. I promise not to escape. After all, you two are stronger than me.”

The two guards looked at each other for a second before looking down at their charge and simultaneously bellowed “NO! Now shut up, we are almost at the entrance of the basement. Our orders are to bring you there no matter what!” And with that they looked forward and started to march once again.

“Whatever, you dingbats. You are all the same, brainwashed by the freakin’ Overseers. When was the last time they actually got off their lazy asses and did something for the Plant. I tell you, they are all a bunch of right old gits.” Zip blabbered on while the guards tuned him out as they usually did when he got like this.

When they arrived at the entrance, the two guards lead Zip straight up to Overseer Jubncoil as they were instructed. After they made sure that they Overseer had Zip, they left with a slight jump in their step as they were finally happy to be rid of their annoying charge.

Zip knew that if he tried to run away, he would just be captured and brought back to the entrance. So he conceded himself to just floating in silence until it was time to go. As he looked around, what he saw disappointed him. It seemed that part of the exploration team consisted of young pokemon, which annoyed Zip to no end. There was one young Electrike that Zip already wanted to strangle based on the hyperactive behavior he exhibited since arriving at the basement entrance. What he was most disappointed in was the fact that leading this little ragtag group of pokemon was the crazy Overseer Jubncoil. Once again the Overseers showed just how lazy they were by sending her. There had to an Overseer that was better suited to lead such an important mission. Just when Zip was going to say something smart-alecky, Jubncoil started to speak.

“Greetings, everyone, I would like to thank you all for being here; both those joining the expedition and those supporting us. It is comforting to know that so many inhabitants of the Power Plant care so much for it that they are willing to do whatever possible to save it. Your courage is to be greatly commended, and will surely be remembered for years to come.”

Yeah right. Zip thought to himself. I’m being forced to do this and like anyone would give a crap about what I did.

“This place is home to some truly amazing Pokémon, and I am proud to say that these Pokémon are the ones standing in front of me today.”

God, she is crazier than I thought. Most of the pokemon coming are weaklings who think that they can help but really they will only get in the way. What truly amazing is how dumb you sound right now.

“The Power Plant has served as home, as refuge to us all from any time from the past week to all our lives, however we each treasure this sanctuary dearly. Because of this we must fight for it with all our hearts and souls, and we will not rest until we find the source of the electrical current that is rendering so many of our comrades – friends, family and strangers alike – weak and helpless. We must preserve this place so that it may serve as a haven for Electric Pokémon for years to come, a safe place where we know we can live away from danger.”

Blah. Blah. Blah. Can we get this show on the road already? Jeez, this woman talks too much.

“So join me now as we head into the basement, into the unknown, together as one strong entity so that we may save our fellows and make sure the Power Plant remains the safe haven it has been for so long!” Jubncoil proclaimed through the cheers that Zip found annoying

Bout freakin time, Chatty. And jeez, these guys will clap for anything. Guaranteed most zoned out about halfway through that speech. Zip smirked as he followed behind the rest of the pokemon down into the basement.

And I believe the password is
Rusted Slug Statue
 

/Exiled/

EternallyParadoxical
having this kind of password system might not work to well. It could detract relatively good RPers that would make this RP better from joining because, they're getting tired of rereading the huge wall of text. :p If I read the plot much more I think i'll slit my throat.

Very, Very nice RP though.
 

cdra1617

Not a Seadra
Ack! I'd like to reserve a spot as well. The password is:
[SPOIL]Rusted Slug Statue[/SPOIL]

I'll edit a sample in momentarily. *digs through posts* Ah, here.

[SPOIL]In the breifing room, Zo Kachina stood completely composed despite the fearful aura emitted by her superior. The gray-armored man might have frightened some, but Zo just comfortably positioned herself, not looking so formal as she should have. Her expression was dull, as if she did not notice the oppressive pall that the man gave off, and she seemed to scan over her comrades as she stood. Her weight was shifted to her left foot and her back slouched slightly, making her appear all the shorter (like she wasn't a midget already!). As he stared at her, Zo only glanced dully at the superior, wondering mildly if he could see her aura. It was unlikely that any human could do such a thing, so she discarded the notion.

As the man finally began to speak, her eyes lit up and her head perked to meet her superior's gaze. “You four, along with your…companions…” Zo couldn't help but wonder why he frowned at the pokemon; wasn't Yushita a strong enough partner? She constructed the notion that he was no fan of pokemon; he had given even the hybrids a nasty look. He continued: "...have been specially chosen and recruited for a special mission. Some of you are fairly new to Red Crystal, but we cannot risk any of our older members being recognized by the enemy forces. And apparently, you were the only choice among…other greenhorns.”

The ghostly woman gave a tiny scowl at this. Greenhorns to Red Crystal, maybe, but she was a powerful and experienced mercenary. She displayed no emotion still, not wanting to upset anyone; they were, after all, her employers, whether she liked it or not. Zo's expression faded to dullness once more as he resumed, “This mission is top priority,” his voice was low and his pose intense, though it didn't bother Zo; people would act in such a way when saying something important. “You are to infiltrate the most…annoying…and troublesome…of the kingdom’s foes: the Tri-Peace group. We have infilitrated it only a few days ago, but we still lack information. One of our spies has found out about their next recruiting phase, and you have to find the recruiters in one of three areas: Mount Eclipse, Lake Ozmas, or Ysteria’s Beach. If they ask why, then make something up."

She nodded slightly, barely at all. Knowing that Yu would most likely prefer to climb mountains over traversing sand and field, she concluded that Mount Eclipse would be her destination. Zo watched as the man tossed some scrolls across the desk. She listened to him as he spoke once more, “You will find more information on those scrolls." Idily, the hybrid took one and pocketed it; she would read it after the breifing ended.

Another man, the only one who was without a doubt human in the room, spoke out. “Sir, how will I be able to read when I am blind?” Zo looked at him breifly. Indeed, with those eyes he was certainly blind. Hopefully it didn't impare his ability, she thought, remaining utterly silent.

“Get that freak of an overgrown lizard of yours to read it to you, I’m not going to spoon-feed you,” the superior snapped, and Zo turned her glance sharply back at him. Her expression barely shocked, she couldn't help but wonder why he was so sharp. It was somewhat refreshing; she wasn't one to be kind like that either. However, she didn't raise her voice to utter a mumble of approbation or disproval. Somehow she worried for the human; would he be able to fight at the same level as the hybrids?

“You will have to speak a password; how, I don’t know nor do I care to know,” the man continued, disregarding what he had just said to the blind one. "It’s there in your scrolls.” Zo nodded impatiently as he gestured his lack of care. “You will be required to leave and start the mission tomorrow in the morning.” She met his glares silently, wondering when he was going to dismiss them. “Well!? You’re dismissed!” The haunter gave a sigh of relief.

Zo turned away imediately, walking towards her large absol partner. "Finally..." she uttered, the first sound that her thin lips had formed since early this morning, when she was coming to the base. She wasn't much of a talker, only to Yu. He was the only one who knew much of anything about her, and he was neither human nor hybrid! An interesting pair to have such a close bond... leaning against the pokemon that turned out to be taller than her even when sitting, Zo read over the scroll.

"We're going to Mount Eclipse. That's favorable for you, isn't it?" she asked in a low tone, looking into Yushita's cool blue eyes. He nodded slightly and she grabbed onto his fur, leaping onto his back effortlessly. He then stood up and began to walk out, carrying his dear partner out of the Red Crystal base and towards Mount Eclipse.[/SPOIL]

Oh and I just noticed (I hadn't read the posts above before xD)-- Sir-forgets-a-lot and I got the same pass. XD *hopeful*
 
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PokemonBreederChris

UnlimitedBlade Works
Well, as I, the original creator of the concealment password technique see that you as well are using it, I must say, how you did it is a slight pain on my overstressed tired mind right now, haha.

As I PMed you the password earlier, but apparently I assume you haven't read it, I'll post the password on here, although the other's have posted it here as well. However Slug statues that rust and are made of Iron are so last season, I await your next order of shipment :p, possibly a delicately delicious food of some sort? Well Rusted Slug Statue.

I'll work on this sign up when Im done finished with another I promised to complete tonight, and thanks for making a naruto RPG. I've had a character in mind for quite some time.

~Chris



Ashi, with a hesitant step, slightly knelt as she gave her ritual of greeting. It was the introductory bow, to the group that gathered around Uruhara-sama. Ashi’s arms held firm against the v-neck of Yoruichi's kimono she had borrowed. The kimono twirled around Ashi more as a loosely fit toga rather then a festive dress. The slack of the clothing became very evident as Ashi moved it was easy to catch attention. The slack that brought eyes to Ashi was the loose fabric that hung around her chest. Ashi worried most about holding the kimono to avoid a certain wardrobe malfunction. Boasting a naive attitude, and a ruby-red-blushed face, Ashi gave her introduction as Uruhara introduced her. She had a larger role then she expected … Helping assimilate this group … into my High School?

As she nodded her head, Uruhara rose from his seat. Startled, Ashi let out a small squeal, instinctually hopping behind a then-confused-startled Alba Gatillera, who was the closest to the doorframe that Ashi had entered. Uruhara gave out a small chuckling snort; a reaction from that of Ashi’s sudden jump. As Uruhara smirked at what Ashi had done, he released a small sigh as he turned his head from Ashi to a stern gaze at the window. This outer window was a small but had a decent outlook towards the inner workings of Karakura City … Was he … expecting someone?

Uruhara stood gazing out the window for a few seconds, then looked back at Ashi. His face now lacked his smirk. This meant a serious undertone for that of Uruhara. Ashi feared that she had done something wrong, to upset her master, Uruhara-sama. Uruhara-sama walked over towards Ashi; Ashi could feel her heart beat race faster and faster. Uruhara-Sama, why me? Why me? Why me? He beckoned to Ashi, who then looked at Uruhara-sama with more of a confused timid expression. Ashi did not move. She felt something emitting from Uruhara that made her feel huge quantities of discomfort. … Uruhara-sama … P-please … make it go away … Uruhara, seeing Ashi’s face in discomfort, took a deep breath, and closed his eyes. He calmed his Reitsu, for he realized that he had released an infinitesimal amount of Reitsu, which put an unwarranted pressure upon Ashi.

Ashi was already breathing heavily, being surrounded by beings made purely of spiritual energy. She knew that, although being trained for a good month now, one of her largest difficulties was that of withstanding spiritual pressure. To her, small amounts would shift the atmospheric pressures around her body causing extreme stress and tension. Uruhara smiled again as he saw Ashi. He walked over to her, and rested his palm upon her shoulder. With a calming nature, he guided Ashi towards the glossy-long haired girl who was appeared somewhat older. Ashi obeyed instantly, side stepping herself towards the Alba Gatillera, who still held a confused look. Alba Gatillera, like Ashi Yokujin, was an ugly duckling of the group. Alba Gatillera took an immediate liking to Ashi, for she was the first to acknowledge Ashi's presence, and well, talk to Ashi. The others of the weird enigmatic bunch of misfits that Uruhara had summoned to his stead all quietly and awkwardly stared at the two; Ashi felt an even greater discomfort with everyone being so close to her … staring at her. “Claustrophobia” was trumping Ashi, or rather a dense amount of spiritual pressure.

The Arrancar girl, Alba, noticed Ashi’s discomfort and spoke aloud. Her voice had a leering assertive tone. Ashi, who was bouncing her left leg out of nervousness, looked upward towards the ceiling, trying her best to avoid eye contact with the Arrancar. Alas, eye contact could not be avoided. The mere mention of the English word “foot” perked Ashi’s eyes towards Alba.

"Ashi? Eh, doesn’t that mean 'Foot'?"

The Arrancar shrugged as Ashi’s eyes met Alba’s.

"I don't know much ‘bout Japanese, I know weird stuff--”

Ashi’s eyes widened as the Arrancar verbalized the English word ‘Foot.’ Her face again turned bright red out of embarrassment. She was hoping no one would figure out her ‘real’ name that simple. She was expecting the group a bunch of laughter, which is what she had always received when people compared her with a ‘foot.’ Curse father! Ashi thought. There was silence however; no one made a snickering feature with exception to a brunette ‘black robbed Arrancar.’

“Mucho gusto, Foot … I'm Alba Gatillera,"

The Arrancar, Alba spoke boastfully and proud, she pointed her thumb to her chest. Ashi’s shocked gaze turned to a stare of admiration. As Ashi looked towards Alba, Alba smiled fiendishly, and scanned the entire room, the people enclosed within. People sat sipping their tea, playing with sugar, or juggling small objects. No one really cared for a human’s introduction, however when the Arrancar spoke, everyone’s interests glimpsed up at Alba. With Alba’s words, it seemed that Alba had gained a commandeering atmosphere. However, the brunette ‘black-robbed Arrancar’ did not care, and still piled sugar after sugar into her tea. Alba then, having almost everyone’s attention, spoke with a hesitant yet friendly commanding tone.

"It kills me to say this, I hope you know, but I'm willing to help out."

Ashi, who had now settled herself in a leaning position against the wall, brushed her wavy amber-brown hair back. She was still admiring -- looking onwards towards Alba Gatillera. Alba did not appear foul to Ashi; opposite to those who held foul skeptical snares towards Alba. Because Alba wore her Gigai, Ashi did not see Alba as an Arrancar, she saw Alba as a "Hispanic oriented human female; roughly around the age of eighteen." Ashi's amber eyes grew radiant as she Ashi scanned Alba.

She … Alba Gatillera … it … it sounds Hispanic … yah … she … she must be! She must be Hispanic … I mean … that has to be it ... but … she … seems paler ... paler then Yasutora-kun at least… he's Hispanic ... right? It’s rare to see someone of their origin here …. Could they … Could they be possibly ... related? Is Gatillera-san a relative of Yasutora-kun ... visiting him? ... it can’t be … Well … Hmm I wonder …

Unbeknownst to Ashi however Ashi looked, and pondered at Alba Gatillera, trying to figure out that of a resemblance between the two. Ashi, being too distracted with Alba and Sado, was too absent minded to hear another shinigami speak attempting to give out his name. His comment, however, was shuttered down for people focused mainly on the tension between alba gatillera and suzune Suzuki. The hispanic girl: Alba, and the black robbed Arancanar: Suzume had begun a long cold war between them, Ashi double checked the two girls, thinking to herself:

I wonder who'll crack first, th-that arancanar looks like she could easily snap Gatillera-san's neck, just by the tension i can sense ... i wish i could see the ... faces of spirits ...

Ashi, contemplating thoughts in her head, became almost oblivios to comments and looks directed at each other, one shinigami in particular, human to Ashi due to his Gigai, kept giving her gross expressions as if he thought humans were just weak and a disgrace. Ashi looked at Suzume, who was tapping her finger on the table rather aggressively, she turned to Alba as well, only to hear Alba speak of Ashi's name truely meaning foot. Ashi did not care, she was even far to distracted to even worry. She was always teased with that name through middle school, not a tease that was meant to hurt someone, but a friendly tease.

As Ashi pondered about this Alba hispanic girl, that had an odd peculiar stench to her, that smelt like ... death. Ashi politely looked around the room to see the many people upclose, the only black robbed being was the brunnette who bcan munching on a nikuman looking in the opposite direction of alba humming a tune of some sort; the munching from her snack keeping the beat. Ashi looked back at the hispanic human as the hispanic human spoke again.

"Only problem'd be if none of the rest of you want me around." There was a slight pause, everyone with exception to Suzume was looking at the Hispanic girl Alba.

"--Which has been the case so far."

Alba gave an intense stare at the girl loudly, and rudely munching on the snack, the brunnette she-nigami did get sharp rude glances as she munched loudly, which was chagrim to everyone's ears; except Ashi. Ashi was used to this for it happened daily in her school where many fomalities lacked usage in the cafeteria. She guessed by seeing the crowd look at Shuzume occasionally with quick glances that they were used to polite militarist rankings. Those that dressed as out of fashion humans, that had a weaker but same stench as alba weren't that picky over Suzume's behavior either. Alba's glare soon reach Suzume's eyes; one could tell Suzume was ******, her hand was trembling about to slam onto the small table. Ashi hopped that the brunette would not knock over the tea tray Ashi had just recently placed, the last thing one would want would be to be drenched in staining brown liquid. As the two girl's eyes connected, Alba and Suzume, Alba gave a slight smirk and boastfully spoke:

"I understand though. Shinigami are completely racist towards Arrancar, anyhow."

That is what seemed to be the breakign point between the two girls, suzume's temper erupted, with a valcanoe's magnitude. Ashi looked at Alba, why was the hispanic girl speaking of shinigami like this? She pondered to herself, was Uruhara making an Arancar 'task force' group to rebel against Aizen and his army? Why would this human who now had on a differant garb then the white robe previously say something like that, it was...contradictory. Why was this hispanic girl speaking about Shinigami being racist to arrancar when the arrancar she was speaking to had no mention of shinigami, the black-robbed arrancar who came to be known as Suzume. Suzume became furious though Slamming her fist against the table, with such great force the tea tray jumped a few centimeters, Suzume barked at Alba, with an evil devil glare to boot.

"Not ALL shinigami are racist to Arrancar! Look here, I only attacked you because I saw a fellow shinigami being fired at and kicked out of a building, -- with you just standing there as if you were the person who attacked him first! It's standard protocol to protect your fellow shinigami, you know!"

Urahara smirked as this witchy girl screamed at Alba, Suzume tossed her brown hair, it seemed the shinigami, who's introduction was not focused upon, become increasingly upset. People were urged to speak but the loud mouth brunnette carried on. Her voice began to rise as her eyes grew instensifyingly.

"How is the Soul Society meant to know that all Arrancar aren't trying to roast us in a pit and eat us? All hollows are trying to do when they meet us are to either eat us, or participate in some massive diabolical Aizen-hatched plan to explode the Soul Society! How can you not expect shinigami to act defensively when all Arrancar are trying to kill us with their "hai Aizen-sama" attitudes? The Soul Society has issues, I know, but how you dare tell me Hueco Mundo doesn't have problems too!"

Suzume pouted and began venting steam, she gobbled down her tea full of sugar, and with a full mouth of tea, and puffed cheeks she beckoned Ashi for a refill hasty and angry with her arm. Ashi looked at Suzume confused.

"Me?"

Ashi said sofly, as Suzume gave af inal instense swing of her arm.

"...uh." Ashi looked at the other people, a war was about to start, two other men, one who had a simular black robe as the brunnette arancanar exploded, was in fact the one who stopped the two girls previously. He had a differant garb on now (Right Doctore? He has gigai on right?) "...ok"

Ashi picked up the tea kettle and poored it into suzume's cup, suzume now swallowing what she had gulped. Ashi decided not to be rude and offered to refill the other's cups, some declined and other's thanked. One of the one's who thanked was the one known as katashi, he began to role his finger around the cup as Ashi poored more into it. As ashi left, a good safe distance away from this Katashi, Katashi erupted with anger at Suzume again. Ashi immediately regretted refilling his cup, his cup was airborn with him. The tea all dumped out onto his chair as he hurled his empy cup towards suzume. Tessai who was in the doorway gazing in, primarily for Ashi's comfort if she felt isolated, cringed as he saw one of his tea cups shatter on the table.

"Yet you'll attack someone just because you're told to do so! You're no better than a 'racist', you'll rush blindly into battle without knowing all, if any of your opponent's reasoning and intentions. Why try to convince her that you'll accept her, when you've already attacked her simply because she was an Arrancar engaged in battle with an acting Shinigami. It didn't dawn on you that Tenrai-san could've started that fight. That makes you just as ignorant as any 'racist'."

Katashi, seeing the tea on his seat decided to lean against the wall now, and conduct self meditating skills by closing his eyes going into a blissful state of mind in the process, heightening his senses, and avoiding the now soon to be flaming war. He said his piece, there was no need for him anymore. He, like everyone else, did expect the black robbed arancanar--or was it actually, were the black robbed people--shinigami--to fight verbably back. Ashi thought more, was the hispanic girl right? If so, the shinigami were actually aweful, no wonder Yoruichi-chan and Uruhara-sama abandonned Soul Society, no wonder Kakashi did as well, for now Ashi understood why Kakashi was like that.

Anyway, Suzume, again pooring heaps of sugar into her newly poored tea looked up and again her temper throbbed, however before she said anything else, a more calmer, gentlemanly figure, whom would get along with any girl, well ashi atleast, spoke. Ashi twirled her hair slightly looking at him, twirling her hair to keep her mind on track and not wander off to this "tenrai." Tenrai was the type that everyone liked, you couldn't find a thing to hate him, well that was Ashi's thoughts of him. Calmly, Tenrai spoke, he spoke in a voice that could never be described as provokitive.

"Kata-kun has a point there, y'know. I disturbed Alba-san, and come on, who wouldn't get disturbed by someone barging in demanding "What the hell?" in a large voice, amplified no doubt by a fear of Shinigami, being an Arrancar at all, which is perfectly natural. I started that little brawl so I had to end it."

Ashi, in her mind, gave a cute "awww" sigh, a man of his caliber owning up to something like that, he was indeed chilvilrous and noble. Ashi did not have a crush for him persay, but more of an honorable fandom, he was her prince charming in silver armor of movies she could look forward to.

And sorry, ladies," Tenrai continued, "about using kidou. It was all I could do, really."

Again, Ashi sighed, this Tenrai was so noble and honorable, unlike the other men of her school, bleargh. Suzume, now with two iceberge piles worth of sugar, gulped down her newest batch of tea and sighed, from an angry breathing, her breath quickly reverted to a cutsey sigh. Her eyes began to sparkle, he lips turned her frown upside down. He pouting face soon grew into a large vibrant smile; soon she had lost all signs of malice and anger. She spoke in a whiney cutsey kawaii voice, which slightly sickened Ashi, Ashi hated when girls did that kind of voice, however she was a hippocrit, she did it to guys too. Suzume whined/spoke:

"Apart from that, I'm really sorry for attacking you Arrancar-san! Let's start from the beginning! Hi, my name's Suzume Suzuki, 4th Seat of the 2nd Division! Nice to meet you! Wanna a cookie?"

Arrancar-san!? Who did the brown-haired-black-robbed ... THING just call an Arrancar, Suzume's eyes affixiated at the hispanic girl, who ackwardly blinked at the comment; well as did everyone else. Ashi slowly quirked her head, mainly her eyes towards the Hispanic girl that she stood beside. Was this girl an arrancar? Impossible, the hispanic girl seemed to nice and freindly to be a cold blooded killer. Ashi quietly looked at Alba, scanning Alba with her eyes; how could Alba be an arrancanar, the black robbed woman have HAD to of been mistaken. Then, suddenly, the brunnette hopped across the table jumping into Alba's arms, almost knocking Alba back, Suzume gave one intimitate hug, way beyond Alba's comfort zone. The arracanar, now shocked, began to stubble in audable words. Suzume, groping Alba tightly, began to speak loudly and very very fast. Everyone was looking, the two girls were inches away from Ashi, Ashi feeling slight discomfort, why did she not like Suzume being this close to Alba? She didn't mind things like it before, infact one of her female classmates, was always trying to go out on a date with Ashi, if Orihime was not there that is. If it wasn't for Itchigo and Tatsuki, the lesbian girl of Karakura Highschool would be all over Ashi. Suzume, now had rubbing against the arrancanar's chest in this very embracing hug, lifted her head and spoke.

"I'm really sorry about that, I didn't know that you meant no harm to the shinigami boy. Oh, your hair looks really glossy in that gigai- how did you get it to be so shiny?"

Suzume suddenly released her grip, Ashi felt relieved for some reason, why was she caring about Alba and Suzume being this close? she dismissed the feeling, and looked pityingly at the very confused arrancanar who kept mumbling "I'm Sorry." Who was that directed to? Thought Ashi as she took a small step near Alba now with the intention to protect Alba if another attack from Suzume occured.

Suzume then turned towards Ashi's master, Uruhara-Sama, and spoke to him, Ashi was too engaged with thought about the hispanic human who smelt slightly of death, and the blonde noble chivalrous man known as Tenrai. Ashi looked at the door only to see Yoruichi with loose clothing on, the clothing was not fixiated right on Yoruichi, it was as if she put clothing on fast, her hair was wet, she must of recently come from a bath or shower of some sort. Yoruichi added onto Suzume's and Uruhara-sama's converstation, Ashi could see that the three had come to an agreement when suddenly a large crackling bang was heard, it was so shocking, that Ashi flew herself into Tenrai's arms, only to seconds later bluch and quietly leave his grasp; it led to a confused Tenrai.

Yoruichi looked grim, and spoke "Everyone, move out, we're under attack!" Katashi and the only one not to introduce himself in Ashi's precense, the elder vizard, lucifer, hurried out along with Uruhara and Yoruichi. Katashi vanished as if he teleported infront of the door then disappeared once again. Tea again was spilt on the table as if it like dropped there by magic.

Then one of the runts, the red headed one, shouted to those already outside "Over there, look!" Ashi could hear him, but did not run out to see who the invaders were, almost instantly she felt queasy and faint like she was about to collapse, her footing was off as she wobbled to the wall. A dark sinister aura was felt, far more powerful then anything she had seen, and she even felt Ichigo's aura once, fighting simular foul auras. Ashi clapped her hand to her mouth she felt as if she was going to get sick. Ashi did so, well an air sickness, to help ease herself with the sudden pressure change, her body forced out a large belch, luckily NO ONE was there to hear it.

Ashi thought that staying inside would be safer, but after seeing a stray dark energetic blast, the same thing that almost hit herself earlier, enter into the room, she immediately came to the conclusion to stay with Uruhara-Sama, he'd protect her. Ashi struggled out the door, only much to her disappointment, the 'gravitational pull' was 100x stronger outside then inside, and she saw fiendish smiles upon four people who her companions were actively fighting, uruhara and yoruichi were facing off in one-on-one matches, it seemed yoruichi and uruhara had the upperhands of the battle, Uruhara was facing someone that seemed depressed, it wore the same white garb as the hispanic girl Alba wore earlier, by the way, where was Alba?, thought Ashi, she did not want to reveal her presence but stray attacks that were deflected were raining on the ground from everywhere.

As Ashi witnessed the skies, she saw Katashi battling...himself? Wait, no six Katashi in a battle royale, which one was the real one? Each Kakashi's face was slightly blurry, Ashi could not purely see spirits, especially their faces. With Panic Ashi ran to see where her master and yoruichi landed off to, but as she did, she was met by a familiar face: Alba. Alba looked very simular to the white robbed figures, her facial features had slightly changed, and tatoos over her face appeared. What seemed to be a simular subtance of bone, was Alba injured, did she break her bone? but wait, that was an odd fomality to be a structure of her skull, what was this white adorned object that seemed to be attached to her face? Ashi wanted to talk to Alba, but suddenly collapsed with all the pressure.

As Ashi collapsed and began to fall to earth, Alba suddenly caught her. Ashi with a faint smile was glad Alba had come to save her, Alba was no arrancanar, she was not blood thirsty, so what if she looked like them, or even was one of them, to Ashi, Alba was a friend. Alba brought Ashi to her feet, holding onto her wrist.

"Foot-san, Stay by me," Alba declared with the utmost seriousness.

Ashi wanted to reply, but she couldn't, her voice only let out a grunt that Alba acknowledged as an "oh kay!" Alba began to drag Ashi, first softly and carefully, but as Bala blast kept colliding, Alba quickened her pace. Alba soon hurried along barely dragging Ashi. Ashi with her arm outstreched far in Alba's grasp, and her feet in an almost jogging leap so they would not drag, struggled as Alba forgot that humans weren't as agile as shinigami/arancanar.

"Al--Ple--Alba-sa---"

Ashi could not get Alba to stop, or slow down, Alba was too focused on shooting back Bala blasts and not to be detected as in not to remain stationary. Ashi, being observant in this struggle of almost tripping and having her arm ripped off noticed that Alba reminded her of a dragonfly, why? She did not know. As Alba shot a blast at Szayel to help the one named Katashi, Alba suddenly stopped, whipping her arm that held Ashi's wrist making Ashi tumble right on top of Alba. Neither did fall, but like Suzume hugging Alba, a simular event occured; only this time Alba and Ashi. This was by mistake though. Ashi, now leaning onto Alba, her arms across Alba's shoulders, looked into Alba's eyes momentarilly, and grew bright red. Ashi quickly let go with the same inaudable "Im sorries" Alba gave to Suzume.

Alba with a confused look to seeing two girls 'attack' her now, just stared blankly at Ashi, an ackward silence ensued until a clone of katashi fell right into a trashcan right near Ashi and Alba. They did know if it was the real one, but that Kakashi woke their silence as he quickly got up from the trashcan and continued his battle.

Alba shook what ever feeling Alba felt about the group of people who were defending her, Suzume, Ashi, or Kakashi, she had to primarily focus on survival, if she lost, she would be killed by Aizen-sama himself; or more commonly one of his lackies. She recharged a bala blast and shot it at the white robbed being that was laughing at he spectated the six kakashi battling each other, one kakashi began to look tired and fatigued, that was probably the real one. Alba looked intensily at Ashi, who stood next to Alba saying nothing, Alba moved her eyes with a "come" motion as she grasped Ashi's wrist again. Alba began to take off fast, however Ashi intervined. Yelling wait! in a raspy inaudable voice, Ashi took her open palm and grabbed Alba's wrist. Time stopped instantly for Ashi, well her speed increased dramatically. Aba's now immobile body, as such a figurine, had a purple radiance, the shinigami had other auras as well, the blond vizard had a light greenish yellow glow, Suzume had a pink glow, Kakashi a light blue one. There was only one Kakashi that was light blue, the others had a simular aura as the white robbed arrancanar that laughed at Kakashi. Ashi looked at the immobile Alba again, her eyes turned into a lightblue color, she began to see Alba's innerworkings with Reitsu, one of Ashi's predominante dormant abilities.

Ashi began seeing things from Alba's eyes, she saw Yoruichi greeting Alba in Hueco Mundo, she saw Alba, being bored, tossing a sword up and down, contesting with other arrancanar, Ashi was seeing memories within Alba, they all came in a bright rush, Ashi could not see all of them, however, she did she a more human Ashi being attacked by hollows, or what appeared that way. Ashi closed her eyes and released her grip. The world came back to normal, only Ashi was extremely out of breath and pale faced. her eyes still remained lighblue, she could still see the indiviual auras of each combatant. She looked up to see a faint purple bubble like shield atop from her, Alba was sheildnig Ashi from the negative Reitsu with her own.

Ashi looked up at Alba, Alba had the facial expression as if something suddenly pinched her. The memories Ashi saw of Alba were quickly stored in the subconscious mind for Ashi had no time to think about them, there was war going on, on the outside of the battle. Alba noticed Ashi's eye color change, as when she suddenly felt Ashi's arm was not being held.

Ashi accidently absorbed some of the arrancanar's reitsu, and with it, she began to fell very sick, it was like recieving a negative blood type to your own, arrancanar reitsu would only work with Vizard Reitsu, Vizard Reitsu was the Reitsu type AB, while Human was possibly type O; but some how Ashi could not take in Alba's Reitsu and felt extremely sick.

Ashi tried to release the negative reitsu she had absorbed desperately, and that she did. A giant dark orb of energy propelled from her arm into the air, and exploded, bomb-like, in teh midst of everyone's battle; Alba's location was discovered.
 

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Sic Transit Mundus

Name: Mozuke Yamato (Eastern Order)

Code Name: Apocalypse

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Description: Yamato has pitch black skin, and wears his armaments, as well as sunglasses, and leather shoes, and a fur jacket He got these through hunting and raiding. His hair is white like ivory, with streaks of gold, and his eyes are red and orange like fire. He is approximately 7’6”, and is covered in lean muscles, making him flexible and strong. His eyes are normal size, but look like demon eyes (wide, but curve a bit downwards and to the right to belie sinister intentions. His eyes also have a black pentagram in the middle- the sure mark of the Kamigan. This mark is from when the August God came to be; when the chaos was defeated, it formed a pentagram. This August God used this to create the parents of the current gods. In the middle of the pentagram is a golden pupil. He wears armor over his naked body, and then his white fur coat. He also wears a leather belt that is red in color that contains his sword sheath, and all three of his weapon types. He wears the bigger shuriken and special Mozuke weapons, in a small cube in his belt. When he channels chakra into said cube, it opens.

Personality: Yamato, from never really having a village, is a quiet, secretive human being. He is intelligent, and has always been- he learned basics very fast once he found a village. He is sometimes social, but is often uncomfortable in the village- he feels much more open around his team. He jokes, he uses wit, he goes wild, but in the village, he is a shell of his other life. He is loyal to his friends- they helped him when he was sad, and have always been close to him. He usually follows orders, but does not perceive the emotional aspects of battle- against enemies, he is heartless: he kills and destroys until the mission is done. When he is controlled by Susano, he is bloodthirsty- he ignores everything until he has killed every enemy he can find, as well as anything else Sometimes, he’ll even resort to villagers, if his thirst is not sated. This is why he started using Amaterasu more. She makes him a compassionate, nice, social person- a saint in some respects. This has a lasting effect on him as well- it makes him more social every time- but only a bit.

History: His whole clan was sealed away by Pein’s clan, by Rikudou, long before Pein was born. Yamato was just a baby, and unfortunately suffered this fate. Years later, erosion broke his earthly seal, and he got two spirits- the female lord of Heaven, Amaterasu, and the male lord of Hell, Susano. He fell on the seal- and the two gods just rushed into him. His Kamigan appeared, by force, but he did not know how to use it. In his first moments, both forces fought over control of his tiny body. The fires of Amaterasu turned his skin pitch black, while Susano poured fiery storms of hell into his eyes. Yamato writhed in pain, for days, as the two gods, estranged siblings, fought over him. Finally, they both ceased fire. In that one moment of armistice, Yamato seized control over them. However, both influence his life: if he acts cruelly, he becomes more like Susano, but if he does good deeds, he is saved by Amaterasu. His humanity is truly gone; he is a shell for divine force, a powerful vessel that just contains the two spirits. After his birth, he was shocked by pain and agony, and nearly died. However, the two gods saved him, but also gained more influence as a result. First, he was found by a wandering ninja, who raised him till he was four. Then, Yamato was in the Kumogakure orphanage. At age 10, he wandered away to Sunagakure, and was raised by a family on the outskirts of the country. Finally, at age 15, he just wandered. However, Susano gained control of him- Yamato used demon power too much, and Yamato, for a while went into a haze- he killed, raided and destroyed people on the road, taking their possessions along with the meager weapons his first father had saved from where he found Yamato, close to death. He finally, at age 18, reached the Village Hidden In The Leaves. After getting settled in, he joined ANBU, and has lived in the Leaf Village ever since.


Kekkei Genkai: Kamigan Eye. This feature is exclusive to his clan. It allows the use of greater spirits, greater than even the bijuu. The bijuu are mere servants of these gods, butb are noticed bacuse the gods were sealed away by accident. It also enhances the abilities of said spirits. This also allows control over all body parts. However, he can not use his body as a weapon. The spirits often have element fusions, so he can do that as well. However, the energy required by these jutsu is enormous, and oftentimes, he does not use the spirit abilities; just the element fusion. However, this eye erodes mental emotions, if used too much, like in Yamatos case, they become cold and merciless in battle, and easier for their spirits to kill. In Yamato, he risks death every time he uses a Kamigan jutsu, as his two spirits are powerful- if he uses too much of his natural power, he will die. In him, the tow spirits, Amaterasu and Susano, toy with him like a ball of clay. He is often a mere puppet for their psychological exploitation, but around his friends, Yamatos real self shines through.

Armaments: Yamato does not have a standard sword, as he has his own. This sword is golden, with a black hilt. He wears diamond armor. This armor is light, an engraved with various kanji- they hold the later projectile weapons. There are two indentations on the shoulders- possible where his inner spirits stand like the devil and the angel. He also uses: special chakra absorbing kunai, chakra channeling shuriken(like Asumas trench knife), poison senbon, and chakra powered projectiles(think a primitive gun, like a ball of chakra infused metal fired with chakra) embedded in seals hidden in armor.
Form of Taijutsu: Yamato is just as good at taijutsu as he is at ninjutsu: pretty good. He uses the Spirit Style, or Spirit Fist. These moves are often a starter to disrupt the enemy. He punches, kicks, or otherwise hits, and can do a variety of things:

  • Decay organs or tissue.
  • Disrupt thought process
  • Disorient
  • Destroy them (channels chakra into them until they explode). However, he risks a very high chance of losing control of himself.

    Ninjutsu:
  • Hell Torture Jutsu- Uses Susano to torture his enemies. This makes Susano have more psychological power.
  • Heavenly Judgement Jutsu- This jutsu smites the enemy with Amaterasu’s judgement. This makes Amaterasu have more psychological power.
  • Hell Lord Summon- Yamato summons the hell lord. This is learned a bit later.
  • Heaven Emperor- Yamato summons the heaven emperor. This is learned a bit later.
  • Chaos Jutsu- Absorbs enemy by using chaos itself.
  • Ragnarok Rasengan- After learning Rasengan as a young boy from his blond adoptive father, he eventually channeled his own special powers into it. This jutsu is extremely large, effective at destroying armies. This, however, makes him absolutely unprotected for the dangers of his spirits.

    Genjutsu: Yamato is very good at dispelling genjutsu, and is very skilled at them as well.
  • Psychological Destruction Jutsu: This genjutsu reads the persons mind, and created images that unleashes their worst nightmares.. As they see these horrible images, they are imprinted in the brain. It causes them so much psychological damage that their nervous system malfunctions. This jutsu is often used by Yamato so well that the images stay in the persons mind for a while, giving them more psychological destruction.
Texture Illusion Jutsu- This jutsu confuses the opponents sense of touch, making them feel pain as comfort so wonderful, that they won’t even care when they see weapons or a deadly jutsu.. Yamato learns this later on, and uses it to fool his enemies so that he may kill them without any resistance

Kinjutsu: Apocalypse Jutsu- Yamato summons all of his energy to himself, and unleashes it in a mighty explosion that can go an extremely far distance. Like an atomic bomb, this jutsu severely injures the user. In Yamato, it will trigger a state of the gods waging war over him, with a more than likely chance of death. Fi he survives when he uses this, he will more than likely either be on his killing haze again, or completely changed psychologically. In fact, due to this, he is more than likely to literally blow his brains out- that is why he will not use it unless it is absolutely necessary- and only if it is for a REALLY good cause.


Password: Rusted Slug Statue
 

enflamedsteelix

Enflamed to the end
*dusts self off* Well I guess this has peeked my interest enough to come out of retirement lol.

I would like to reserve a spot if ya don't mind, rpg sample is the most recent thing I have.

Blech everyone else said the one I was thinking...But is it Rusted Slug Statue...?

The sun sat abnormally high in the afternoon sky causing the trees’ and other objects to hold strange shadow formations. Despite this, young professor Kouba, had managed to find the perfect spot to lay down and take and rest for a while. He had been traveling for quite a long while now and had just recently made it into the town that had asked for his assistance. Seeing how his journey to this town was long and for the most part exhausting, he saw it fitting to simply lay down and relax a while, it couldn’t hurt anyone. He managed to find a small grove of trees’ over looking the ocean from which he had arrived from, and as soon as he hit the land he plopped himself down against the trunk of the biggest tree he could find. The opposite side of the tree he carelessly chose to lie against happened to be the last tree before a small cliff overlooking the ocean, however being the lazy person he is, he failed to notice.

After much thought he decided against letting his pokemon out from their resting chambers, because between Tropius and its hormones, and Dusknoir and all its practical jokes he would not be able to catch a wink of sleep. He thought it unfair to only let a few of his friends out and leave the others stuck in their little red and white prisons.

Eventually he managed to drift off into sleep, the warm sun basking around him,slightly glimmering off of his glasses resting in his pants pocket, the gentle sound of the waves crashing against the shore echoing in the back of his mind. Most would give it all away to be relaxing in a place like this, however though relaxing, it was still a cursed town. After about 45 minutes had passed the sun had let up on its attack on the earth and allowed the landscape to cool. However, much to Ryuma’s dismay the curse on this island began to take effect as he so happily slept against his little grove of trees’ he failed to notice the fact that they were fading away the longer he laid there. As the disappearing tree disease finally found its way to the tree the young professor was sleeping against, it seemed to happen in a heart beat. First there was tree, then there was not and Ryuma found himself waking up to a falling feeling in his stomach which was shortly followed by wet…lots and lots of wet.

Without even putting a second thought to it he released Starmie from its chamber and kindly asked it to keep him from drowning in the seemingly unexpected ocean that he found himself in. The psychic link came in as loud as ever,

“RYUMA YOU IDIOT HOW DID YOU GET INTO THIS ONE!” He sighed and brought himself to the surface of the water and looked casually for shore, “…I was sleeping…tree disappeared…now I am wet…need I say anything else?” The purple star placed itself underneath its friend and pulled him close enough to the shore to the point he could see the shore, “Thanks for that…I can swim from here, return” A red light surrounded the sea star and then it was gone. “Such a troublesome pokemon sometimes…”

After his little unexpected swim, he managed to pull himself ashore and reached down to his belt and pockets to see if anything was missing. After notifying his brain that nothing was missing he moved to head back to where he was resting and retrieve his items he left after the trees…vanished.

Before he could pull himself entirely out of the water, however, he saw something shiny in the sky and it seemed to be coming towards him.

It all happened so fast, one moment he was dusting himself off after his little unexpected swimming adventure, next minute he had a lovely view of the sand, and the faint odor of lilacs wafting into his nose. The first thought, “What the hell hit me…ugh its heavy enough to be a snorlax…and smells like…flowers…and steel..”

Then before the thought was done processing a hand found itself across his face, which was quickly followed by many sharp things piercing his skin. He quickly lifted himself up to try to get out of this torture pit that he was being put through, and saw the cause of his pain and now throbbing headache.

To his surprise he found adolescent girl who was more or less on her back, it didn’t take him long to realize that it wasn’t a snorlax that fell from the sky but something just as troublesome…a female.

A thought just occurred tom him, he had just stood up with her on his head, which probably explained why she was laying down in the shallow end of the water...meaning it was his fault that she was soaking now. The young professor figured he should help her out seeing how it was technically his fault, so he casually walked out to where she was lying.

“Oi…my bad, I thought you were a flying snorlax or something…” He sweat-dropped realizing that probably wasn’t the best thing to tell a girl.

“Well…its not like I am calling you a snorlax or anything, honestly you aren’t as big as snorlax, not even close…” Again…a poor choice of words…

He extended his hand outward and opted to help the poor girl up from the unexpected salt water bath.

“What is a young girl like yourself doing flying on a skarmory at that speed anyways?”

He figured he didn’t look that normal in her eyes either, with is face covered in a mix of sand and hair, and the rest of his clothes totally drenched.
 

Mimori Kiryu

Well-Known Member
Gah, everyone's saying the same password after I sat there and read it all. xP Well Rusted Slug Statue is what I found after reading it twice. XD I've still gotta read it and concentrate on the timeline.

Could I reserve a spot? Here's an RPG sample:

It was all because of that day.

It was that day that everything changed.

I never really had feelings anyway, but it was because of that one day when I saw the bullets pierce my parents that I changed. I felt the blood as it seeped through my fingers. It was warm and it felt much different than the paint I had colored with. It smelled and tasted like iron. Because I had opened my mouth in surprise, I had tasted my mother’s blood. I hadn’t meant to. If I could, I would take back even going to that park that specific day.

I had begged my parents to take me to the park. They said they’d rather go to the nearby mall since it would be safer there than in an open public place. I had screamed and cried, begged and pleaded with them just to take me there. I was so tired of not being able to play outside because of our bad neighborhood. They had finally caved and took me.

Not even after ten minutes of being there; they had been shot by a random driver.

I don’t really remember much about what happened after that. Complete strangers kept me from my parents, hugging me and telling me that everything would be alright; but I simply stared at my parents. The blood, the despaired look, the trauma that would forever be locked into those eyes…

That look would haunt me…

Because it was my fault.

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“Sasori! Dammit, Sasori, are you completely crazy?! Watch where you’re driving!” a voice snapped the young boy out of his memories and back to what he was supposed to be doing. Driving. His eyes snapped back to the road and even though he wasn’t looking at his partner, he could hear the growling man. “Geez, you’re going to get us killed, un.”

The dark haired boy ignored his partner’s gripes and brushed his dark orange hair from his eyes. His skin was almost completely pale and his thin boned face showed no emotion to the memory that he had just recalled. Sasori knew that even if he did dwell on the past and the death of his parents, it wouldn’t get him very far in the real world. He gripped the wheel tight; his knuckles almost pure white.

“Deidara, you know that we’re going to do this and leave? Please don’t take forever in there.” Sasori commented to his blonde haired partner. “I hate waiting on people.”

Deidara scoffed. “Yeah, yeah, I know. The Leader said to get this mission done fast, right? I guess its time for my art to bang. Un.” He looked out the window toward the city across the bridge, a smirk plastered across his face.

Sasori, even though he had known his partner for quite some time, still didn’t understand his love for sudden and explosive art. Art was something that was created with your very own hands and it lasted forever, not for only a couple of seconds. Art could be anything…even the despaired faces of his departed parents were a form of art, ones that lasted forever in the deep resonance of his mind. His eyes, heavy lidded and quite sullen, glanced around the inner city once they arrived. To any other tourist outside the city, the buildings would’ve seemed to all be the same. Tall, dark and gloomy places of work that people went to everyday just because they had to make some type of income for their families to live off of. But to the young, inquisitive Sasori; each looked different and some more original and misconcepted than the rest. Deidara turned; his eyes boring into his partners.

“Are you sure you know where you’re going, un? It’s mainly because you’re driving around in circles.” He huffed, in a ****** off tone. He held something securely in his grip, playing with the wires every few seconds as he continued to rant. “For someone who’s impatient, you really take forever when trying to do something. If I didn’t have to work with you-”

“We’re here, Deidara. If you’d close your mouth for two seconds, you would know that I was losing some cops who were following us.” Sasori explained, his expression and tone of boredom not changing. He stepped out of the car, walking up to the building. Deidara ignored Sasori’s point and followed him up into the structure, keeping his lion like grip on his package.

The building was very unappealing and Sasori couldn’t believe that someone so important would live in a place that was this filthy. Keeping his eye on the patrolling policemen, he and Deidara silently walked through the automatic door entrance. A musty smell welcomed them; the room completely bland and unappealing to the eyes. The décor consisted of a simple desk and chairs for visiting and a Help Desk for the workers to sign in and out at. Sasori walked up to the woman behind the counter. She was, if not more, dirty than the building itself. Her messy brown hair was pulled into a bun and her clothing lay on her as if she had rolled out of bed and come to work. Her sharp hazel eyes looked up to them; questioning as to why they were standing there without even muttering a word.

“We have an appointment with Mr. Nagato at 3:00pm.” Sasori muttered to her.

She shrugged like she didn’t really care and pointed to a nearby area which led to the elevator. Both of the men strolled over and after they were safely in the elevator, Deidara sighed exasperatedly.

“Geez, these people are weird. Why aren’t they defending this supposed important President?” Deidara questioned, not really asking for an answer. He was too busy sitting on the ground, playing yet again with the wires on his package, muttering to himself every few seconds. “Unless it’s a cover.”

Sasori sighed, not saying anything, but pulled a shotgun out of his back pocket. However, it was a modified gun, not a normal one. He unzipped his side bag and pulled out a small green bullet that seemed to glow with a purple smoke. His eyes changed looks for the first time that day. Sasori’s expression morphed into an almost fanatical gaze at the bullet and gun.

‘I’ll finally get to try this out. I know that this man is more protected than they want us to believe.’ He looked up when the elevator stopped; his eyes again heavy lidded with no emotion.

Deidara stood, leading the way, now carrying his package like it was a simple box. The hallway had no decoration, but just a simple door led to the office of the man they were after. Sasori glanced around the vicinity. No one was around, but there was a possibility that the man wasn’t alone in his office. He loaded his gun with four of his specialized bullets before cocking it back into place. Deidara reached for the door handle and the door was locked.

The blonde man smirked. “Fine, we’ll get in the old fashioned way.” He raised his foot, kicking in the door with much ease. Walking in, neither man saw the target they were after. The room was almost completely empty with only a desk and a laptop sitting on top. A chair was behind the desk but it was unoccupied. “Where the hell is he?”

Sasori looked to the window to see it ajar. A slight breeze was filtering in from the outside, moving the curtains in an even rhythm. The light from the city outside revealed the hasty handprint on both panes of the window. Striding over to the windowsill, he looked out toward the ground below. Splattered onto the sidewalk below was a burly man with messy brown hair in a fitted suit. Sasori looked to the crowd that surrounded his body. “Seems our target preferred not to be killed by us, hm, Deidara?”

The man walked up next to his comrade, pushing his hand into his right eye. “****. I really wanted to use my art today. Dammit.” Deidara growled glancing back into the room. He spied a ladder and laughed to himself. “Come on, Sasori. Let’s go to the roof.”

Following Deidara, Sasori climbed up the ladder after him, reaching the roof of the building. Deidara placed his package near the middle of the top of the building; fiddling with the wires, connecting certain ones together in a perfect synchronized rhythm as Sasori noticed. It was a specific order of blue, yellow, red, green, red, blue, yellow and then it repeated backwards twice and then forwards once. It took Sasori about one round to notice and Deidara sped up, trying to get it done quickly. His face was enlightened with a smile as he completed his task. Sasori tapped his foot, tired of waiting. Waiting reminded him of waiting to see his parents at the funeral; waiting for someone to take him in; a constant never ending cycle of waiting and waiting.

He snapped toward Deidara when his partner grabbed his shoulder. Sasori simply looked at him. “We might wanna leave. It’s about to start.” Deidara smirked. Sasori nodded and climbed down the stairs back into the office and both of them made their way back through the musty smelling main room. After exiting the automatic doors, they picked up the pace and quickly got into the car, pulling away from the building and out of the city. Deidara turned around in his chair, counting down from five under his breath.

“Five…four…three…two…one…”

BBBBBBBBBBBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMM!

“Art is a bang!!” Deidara declared, pumping his fist up toward the ceiling of the car. “Magnificent art! It is so perfect!”

Sasori glanced out the back window, seeing the building falling down in almost a very slow move. For just a moment, Sasori did see the beauty that Deidara saw, but it was gone as soon as it came. Eventually, the building, smoke and fire were out of their view and Sasori sighed.

They had completed their mission.
 

The Doctor

Absolute Beginner
Sir-Forgets-A-Lot, cdra, Chris, enflamed, Mimori Kiryu: That's Wordwang!

...Which basically means, you got the password correct. Plus, your RPG Samples are up to scratch, and I'm aware you all have good RPing skill, so you're all Reserved.

The password will also be changed.

darkbradlor: Sorry, but you don't appear to have taken my advice entirely onboard, mate. I suggested that you ditch the whole "angel and demon thing" and though you changed them, it's not entirely up to par; Susano is the God of Storms and slayed the demon Orochi, not the ruler of Yomi, that's Izanami. You also didn't remove the Kamigan's pentagram (that's WESTERN, not EASTERN) and it can still be power-played; Yamato still has pet gods. Those jutsu are also too overpowered. The Rasengan irks me as well; his adoptive father is Namikaze Minato, the Fourth Hokage, yes? No. Just no. That would make you [SPOIL]Naruto's half-brother or something.[/SPOIL] Sorry, Denied.
 
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Okay then, I'll try it once again. May I please reserve a spot?

“Hello, Keyblade wielder! I need you to come to Town Square, First District, at six tonight. Bring your Keyblade and be ready for a wild ride; this is gonna get crazy!

Yours Truly, That Dude With the Keyblade and the stuff.”​

Walking down a dark alley he used to get to the First District, Lucas stared at the piece of paper in his hand. The writing was clear and seemed to carry a carefree tone to it. It also bore a familiar aura that Lucas had only felt one time. He managed to find it in the place where he usually had his training.

After finding some food and a stable place to sleep, he had decided that if he was destined to be some sort of hero, he'd need to become better at fighting. Heroes seemed to have a knack for that. He was glad he had taken those lessons from Geode, or he presumed he'd be hopeless. Every noon, he'd usually be found practicing his basics, or the basics that he remembered. Strangely, people, at least the ones that saw him, didn't seem to find it odd that he kept on using an oversized key as a sword. He would also occasionally try some complex moves, but he usually ended up mucking them up. Still, he was quite a sight to see, especially with his queer set of clothes.

"Well, you can't expect to learn all of them at once, can you?" he remembered Geode telling him one time.

'If only it were so,' he had thought then, as he did so many times after he arrived in the town of never-ending twilight.

Lucas repeated the words "Dude With the Keyblade" in his mind. The image of the man with the white tiger ears appeared in his mind's eye, especially since he was the only one who ever uttered the word 'Keyblade' to him. Ever. He felt a tiny, bittersweet smile tugging at his lips. It was his fault that he was in this town, and he felt mixed feelings towards the man. It was his fault he felt so lost in this town. He had left him to fend for himself the second he opened his eyes. However, it was also his fault that he had been saved by that...Heartless, as he remembered what it was called. He was also his last connection to his home. Besides, he seemed like a nice man, a strange one, but nice nonetheless. He didn't mind the fashion sense; it was just as an oddity as Clath's. (Oh, how little did he know!)

However, the whole letter itself gave him an uneasy feeling. What did he mean by 'wild ride' exactly? Whenever he heard anyone use those words, it was never pretty. Especially when used in conjunction with the word 'crazy'. However, with those feelings, curiosity was mixed in. In short, Lucas felt a bit torn. He wanted to go so much to know what it was all about, but at the same time, he wanted to stay clear in fear of troubles.

Lucas stopped for a moment and let out a breath. 'You gotta take a risks, or life isn't really worth living,' he thought to himself. After all, the 'Dude With the Keyblade' had said that Gar was taken by the Heartless, and he couldn't deny the probability. He shook his head and looked at the letter one more time, rereading its contents.

Lucas stopped walking as he noticed he was right in front of a dead end. He blinked. He looked to his sides and found himself standing inside a narrow alley. He frowned as he finally realized that he had gotten lost! It had happened a few times before when he was so focused on his train of thought, and half the time, it took him almost half a day to find a familiar scene or object.

'Oh no,' he thought as he started to feel a bit worried, 'I can't be late!' He pivoted and jogged out of the dead-end and scanned his surroundings. He was in between two paths, but he didn't remember which one he took. He started to feel a little bit of panic.

He then closed his eyes, took a deep breath and let it out. "Calm down, you have to think clearly," he told himself, opening his eyes. He heard a familiar chime sound nearby, and he matched it with the sound of the Second District clock. That meant that it was already noon!

Hoping for the best, Lucas ran down the alley, not noticing that he had passed the same old Accessory Shop that he first went to for information. He was also oblivious to the figure positioned on its rooftop.
I essentially put the same rp sample, so I hope that's all right.

Venomous Cappucinos
Just a note, this one was painfully obvious...although it helped that I practically read the plot over four or five times before you editted it. ^_^
 

enflamedsteelix

Enflamed to the end
Alright here we go, sorry I got a little sloppy at the end of the history part...


Name: Seiteki, Ryou
Age: 22
Gender: Male


Appearance: Ryou is completely average without much standing out about him, he stands about 5’8 and just topping over 120 lbs, giving him a twig like look to him. He always seems to wear clothing that is at least a size too big for him, adding to the image of his underweight appearance. His common attire is a green collared jacket with a black undershirt they both hang over his waist and dangle over the tip of his plain grey shorts. Hanging from his neck rests his Hidden Cloud headband which often finds itself slip from its resting place due to Ryou’s laziness when tying it. His black hair finds itself spiked in a messy fashion, usually falling down across his face continuously obstructing his vision, which continuously makes his techniques and weapons misfire. He prefers to keep a general attire to his outward appearance, as to not raise any suspicion to who he is or what he might be doing.

He carries with him dual 2 foot metal poles from which he uses his magnetism jutsu, one is carried on a holster on his back, with the hilt facing left; while the other is at the right side of his waist dangling down. He conceals a hidden pouch of special iron dust on his right thigh which he uses only in very special occasions, as his supply of it is very scarce. When he releases it in the area of his jutsu’s activation, their power and duration are increased ten fold. His ninja pouch holds itself on the left side of his waist carrying with him a few smoke bombs holding bits of normal iron in them, along with the ninja necessities.

Personality: Ryou never makes a move without thinking it through first. To some it would seem like a flaw, but Ryou can think up a solution, or plan within minutes of the problem’s arising. Even in the midst of a battle he keeps a strange and almost unnatural calm attitude. Which gives him the ability to come up with a plan on how to support his team, since none of the jutsu he was blessed with were made for offence. Ryou knows that he cannot be headstrong do to his lack of attacking jutsu. Making himself at home on the side lines helping those who are his allies with support when the situation calls for it.

Despite his intellect, he keeps with him a care free out look on life, taking it each day at a time not letting the future worry him. He manages to keep a rather optimistic look on things, never really looking on the bad side of things and only looses this outlook in the worst of situations. Though with his care-free attitude comes procrastination, which makes him late frequently, even to the most important occasions. When amongst friends he can be talkative at the same time out of it, he never seems like he is listening to you even though he is processing every word in his mind. He is known to carry out a conversation with out even making eye contact. This trait about him causes many people to become easily frustrated with him, when what they see is him not paying attention.

History:
The Seiteki clan is known well for their mastery of paralysis and lightning based techniques; the whole clan being excellent ninja in the arts of support and healing. Along with the Seiteki’s ability to control and manipulate electricity, they are all quite profound in alternate healing styles such as aroma therapy, acupuncture, and chiropractics but were never blessed with a true "Kekkei Genkai". The Seiteki’s style of healing is known to enhance chakra output, and heal stressed limbs, and internal injuries, making them a very useful teammate. Ryou found himself having a strange gift in the ways of his clans healing arts, making him continuously toying around with different pressure points and physical remedies.

Ryou being the second son of his family found himself in a steady living environment nothing too big or flashy happening in his life. His elder brother being the “prodigy” of the clan Ryou often found himself with less stress when it came to needing to succeed for the clan’s sake. He quickly taught himself most of the clan’s paralysis jutsu but because of this no one thought of him as the clan’s second “prodigy”; only as the younger brother of the savior of the clan. However, this really never seemed to get to him as he always was proud and happy of his brothers experience and fame since his brother always looked out for him. Although his brother was more skilled at the clans lightning based attacking jutsu, Ryou found himself much better at the clans healing techniques especially in the field of acupuncture. Whenever his brother was hurt during training or, when his chakra system was all tangled do to over practicing with his jutsu, Ryou was there to heal him as best he could, and that usually put his brother back out training the next day.

He hails from a small village just on the outskirts of Kumogakure (village hidden in the clouds), consisting mostly of his clan members, and a few others who wandered in and weren’t shooed away. One day a messenger bird arrived with a message from the main city, stating that if they had any ninja they thought to be capable of combating the Akatsuki…, at first all eyes turned to the “savior” Ryou’s older brother. However, the offer was promptly declined, as the elders as well as most of the townsfolk, when given time to think about it, didn’t want to send their protector off leaving them unguarded. From that, Ryou stepped up and proved his worth to the cause, displaying his knowledge of the clans healing techniques, as well as his ability to utilize the paralysis techniques effectively despite their initial useless appearance. After delegation from the counsel, they decided that his skills were good enough to provide supple support to the Koudoutai.

Armaments: Two 2 and half foot steel poles,When fully extended, at the point the hilt meets the base of the metal a part branches outward and upward forming a sort of J shape. Each pole when not in use can retract downward shrinking to about a foot in length equaling the size of the branches. The branch equals roughly one third the length of the metalic pole itself. The on carried on his back is generally extended at all times, where as the one along his side is generally retracted to make it easier to carry.


Taijutsu
: Ryou isn’t a complete failure at taijutsu but he knows how to throw a punch…around the Genin level, despite this he managed to teach himself a few general fighting styles. To which he then added his own little twist by charging his punches and kicks with a small charge of electricity giving his physical attacks a little kick to them, to make up for the fact that punches wouldn’t be hitting that hard. In addition even if the punch or kick misses the target by a few inches the electricity charged in the limb could still arc across and shock the limb closest to the area of impact. When his chakra supply allows it he can create a small electrical wrap around his feet and hands, giving the next thing he manages to make contact with a strong burst of electricity causing a strong paralysis to take over the target for about 2 minutes.

Ninjutsu:
Seiteki Denka, Koutei- Insei: Literally Static charge, positive negative,it charges an object that can hold an electric charge, with either a positive or negative charge of electricity. Though it does nothing to externally harm the target.

Seiteki Denka, Naibu Raishuu: Literally Static charge, internal assault, the user uses one of his ninja tools, such as a senbon or kunai, and charges it with a bolt of electrical chakra. The user then throws the charged metal weapon at the opponent, and makes its effect depending on where it hits on the target, making the outcome of this jutsu entirely left up to chance.

Effects of electricity on:…
Nerves in the hands and legs: Causes random spasms in the joints making the user loose control of the limb for a minute or so
Nerves in body: Numbs the nerves in the body making, the pain caused to the chest region to be either reduced or diminished for a short period of time.
Chakra points: If a chakra point is hit with the charged projectile, it is temporarily shut off, until the paralysis wears off.
Chakra lines: If a chakra line is hit, the chakra will be stopped from flowing into the punctured area for a very short amount of time. Ex. If a kunai with the charge hits a chakra line in the arm, the arm would loose the ability to mold chakra for a short time.


Denkou Tenshoku no Jutsu: Literally lightning calling, Ryou drives his two poles into the ground and charges them one with positive energy, and one with negative, this creates an attraction between the two forming a stream of electricity between the two. Ryou then manipulates the electric stream in the middle and forces it forward, paralyzing the enemy causing them to lose movement for at least 5 minutes. However if the poles are moved even the slightest bit the stream is ended and the paralysis subsides.

Genjutsu: Shippuu Tenshoku no Jutsu: Literally calling hurricane, it manipulates the mind into thinking that a great storm is coming, complete with lightning and rain. If not released in time the target is stricken with a bolt of lightning, slowing movements for a short period of time, it is usually used in unison with the Denkou Tenshoku.

Kinjutsu: Jinteki Koudo Kyokusei, or human earth polarity, first this technique requires the opponent to be held in a stationary position making it hard for the jutsu to hit in the first place. Then he must first take two metallic objects, which usually are his two poles, and stick them on opposing sides of the enemy(s). From there he magnetizes each pole with the positive charge, keeping each pole a steady distance from the other and the two poles discharge a bolt of positively charged electricity giving the person a positive charge. Almost directly after, he releases his iron dust onto the ground, he quickly drops the palm of his hand to the floor and charges the metal he dropped to the ground with a negatively charged burst. The two opposites attract each other, pulling all positively charged objects towards the negatively charged area. At that point his two poles drop down from their position, into the dirt due to being charged positively as well, Ryou can no longer remove his hand from the ground as if he did the negative charge would stop leaving his foe’s able to move again. This move was specially designed to be used in a team battle situation as when the enemies are driven to the ground they cannot defend themselves thus leaving them open to any other attack by his teammates, this is the soul reason it is dubbed kinjutsu. After this jutsu his pole’s cannot be magnetized with either charge for at least a day for reasons unknown. There is one major flaw to this jutsu, if the wind should happen to pick up as the jutsu began, the metal dust would pick up into the wind and the jutsu would be lost.

In worst case scenario, he can produce a maximum of 2 Kage Bushins (shadow clones), each brandishing a pole, while the original focuses more on the negative charges. This makes the technique a little easier to pull off, but the risks still remain the same, the if either the dust or Ryou is moved…The technique is canceled, and his poles rendered unable to hold a charge. This jutsu is an absolute last case option, as a failure would result in the loss of nearly all of his techniques.
 
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Gentleman Skeleton

Well-Known Member
I finally found that damn password on my own. Is it,
Venomous Cappucinos?

Anyway, I'm recycling my sample, so here it is.
One Piece: Straw Hat Liberation Force

-Episode 1-
Meet the Willow Pirates: Chaos on the High Seas

-Penance: Grand Line-
Bartholomew Kuma stood at the gates of the massive floating prison, Penance. Standing in front of him, shackled and humiliated was the captain of the Straw Hat pirate crew, Monkey D. Luffy. He was alone, his friends scattered across the Grand Line to keep them from being able to reuniting and turning against the World Government.

“Do what you want with me,” Luffy said, his eyes tearing up with untold rage. “My friends will not abandon me. I will sail the seas once again, and I will be king of the pirates.”

“No, they will not,” Kuma replied. “Face it, you’ve lost. By the time this month is over, you will be hanged like your friends. And once we figure out what to do with your reindeer and skeleton friend, they will be punished as well. Mark my words.”

“They will come. I have faith in them.”

-New World: Six months prior-
The Lady Fortune was far out to sea when the Navy set out their surprise attack. Cannonballs flew through the air, although none of them hit. A man, at least ten feet tall emerged from the ship to see the chaos around him.

“Rebecca, hide the children!” He shouted. A woman emerged and slowly began to escort a young boy and a young girl below deck. The sound of a baby crying could be heard from within the ship. “Amos m’boy, it’s time for the both of us to defend this ship, eh? Follow m’lead!” A pair of small cannons appeared out of the palm of the man’s ands and the boy, no older than fourteen drew a sword from his belt. Several other crew members appeared on deck and activated their individual Devil Fruit powers, or drew their weapons if they didn’t have any. All one man did was rip off his shirt to reveal a twelve pack. “Well, m’lads. This is it! If they want us, they can damn well try and take us! We make our final stand here and now!” The men all cheered and roared. “Let us show these navy cockroaches what we salty dogs are capable of! ATTACK!” The Navy ships came in dangerously close as men swarmed the ship. Amos grabbed his blade tightly and tried to go to town, but the men were many times his size, and he was quickly knocked to the ground and broke his sword in half. As soon as he gained his composure, he rose to his feet and continued to hold a pair of soldiers back. All around him, fellow crewmates were being stabbed and shot. He could only continue his focus on the task at hand. He soon found that the crew of the ship was outnumbered ten to one. One soldier emerged from inside the ship holding the woman from before by the arm, dragging her out to the deck of the ship. The crowd of soldiers parted as an aristocratic looking officer stepped aboard and approached the man and woman.

“Nathaniel and Rebecca Willow,” He announced. “You are both wanted for the crime of piracy and providing safe haven for wanted pirates. The penalty is execution by firing squad. You are to stand and take your punishment like the scum you are. Finish them.” All Amos could hear was the shots from the guns and the footsteps of the officer as he walked away. The woman died instantly while his father spawned cannons across his body and fired away, taking a few soldiers with him. His wounds eventually became too much and he collapsed partially over the edge of the ship. “What a pity and here I was going to give you a gentleman’s death if you survived. Too bad.” The officer approached the man and pushed him over the edge of the ship. The man was dragged into the depths thanks in part to his Devil Fruit’s curse. Amos’ eyes welled up with tears. He snuck away, only to be caught by one of the officers.

“Sir, what should we do with this one?” The officer asked. “He was trying to sneak away.”

“What’s your name, boy?”

“A-Amos Willow, sir,” Amos struggled to fight tears back as he said his own name. “Th-those were my parents you just killed.” Amos hacked up all the phlegm he could muster and spat it into the face of the officer. This action was met with a rifle butt to the face and multiple kicks from navy issue boots. The head officer wiped the phlegm from his face and looked at a large pile of wanted posters to find the name Amos Willow, and a bounty of two hundred and fifty belli.

“Leave the boy and the other children. They’re not worth our time. Salvage “Cannonball” Willow’s body and take Rebecca’s corpse. We’re eating steak tonight boys!” The naval officers cheered as Amos slumped into the cabin of the ship. Inside, Amos found the store of Devil Fruit below deck and ate one fruit in particular that always interested him, the Sumi-Sumi Fruit. Grabbing a fountain pen, he stabbed himself in the finger, allowing the blood the flow enough for the pen to soak up. He started to draw and within a minute, he had drawn a sword. He reached out to touch what he had drawn, thinking to himself, I wish I could actually use this. Suddenly, he found his hand being absorbed into the wooden plank he drew the blade on. When he pulled his hand away, his sword drawing stuck with him. He ran out to try and take out one of the guards, but it was too late, they had already gone, but Nathaniel and Rebecca’s corpses remained on the ship. They had salvaged Nathaniel and taken pictures of the corpses, then left like that. It dawned on Amos at this moment, they weren’t coming back. He fell to his knees and sobbed, letting his emotions take hold of him.

-Isla del Fuego: New World Border: 6 Months Later-
Deep inside the volcano, amidst the lava and dangerous heat laid an underground base. This base now belongs to Amos and the rebuilt Willow pirates, his father’s crew. Amos was now the captain and although the original crew was slain that bloody night before they knew it, Amos had gathered a new crew in their honor. It was much smaller, but they did their duty quite well. Someone entered Amos’ chamber with a look of concern on his face. He was not a member of the Willow Pirates, but instead a member of the Red-haired Pirates, a crew that Amos and his father were supporters of.

“What brings you here?” Amos asked. “I can tell you’re a Red-hair. How is Shanks?”
“Doin’ well,” The man replied. “I have some awful news for you, young Amos. Have you heard of Straw Hat Luffy?”

“Who hasn’t? Heard stories of him through other Red-hairs. What about him?”

“He’s been captured in the Florian Triangle. Red-Haired Shanks is unable to help him and he wants you to do the rescuing. How big is your bounty?”

“Forty-eight mill.”

“Forty-eight mill in less than six months, I’m impressed, but by the time you rescue Luffy and his crew, prepare to have your bounty skyrocket. I have maps and information for you, but I want you to address your crew first to see if they wish to undertake this mission as well. You could easily be killed out there, so I’ll only let you go if you’re really willing.”

“I am, and so is my crew. We’ll go brief them right now.”
Oh, I'm sure this isn't going to be much of a problem, but do you mind if I use a fanon viliage I made for another, larger scale RPG that I'm never going to take part in? Here's a link to the info:
http://narutofanon.wikia.com/wiki/Tankougakure
 
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The Doctor

Absolute Beginner
dragonic_man: Like I said, your sample's adequate, plus you got the password, so you're Reserved. BTW, I said you can come from anywhere in the Naruto universe, so there's no reason why you can't make up a village. Hell, I edited that article and even considered calling the kekkei genkai Kaneton until someone beat me to the punch.

So yeah, I'll hold a place. The password shall be changed once again.

enflamedsteelix: I'll get to your character later. I've got limited time on this computer at school, so just bear with me, OK?

Tundra_Wolfmane: Reserved.
 
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