Nessman

[+Erin+]

A comic with Ness!
Characters
[URL="http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a67/therocktripleh/nessman1.png"]Ness knows a secreat 1#
[URL="http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a67/therocktripleh/nessman2.png"]Happy times on lava world 2#[/URL]









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[Magical Trevor]

The sprites are good and i really like the plot getting othr characters from different games and putting them in one comic. keep up the good work

 

[+Erin+]

The sprites are good and i really like the plot getting othr characters from different games and putting them in one comic. keep up the good work

glad you liked it,character cast is up

 

[Rikori]

Hmm.. Too much spelling errors.. A little bad grammar.. Everything else is.. okey. o.o You still have a long road to walk. =I

 

[Politoed]

It looks great ^^

 

[Blues]

Work on your spelling, there are tons of errors. That comic was too random, you've got too many characters showing up at once. I'm not sure what was going on at all, either. I'm not sure if this was supposed to be humor, because that comic was nothing but randomness. There isn't much I can say about this comic, since there's only one right now, so work on those problems...

 

[+Erin+]

eppy 2 is almost up,maybe

 

[Kutie Pie]

Looks like Ness is a bad guy. And I like Ness...NO I DON'T! He's pretty stuck up to me, thinking he's so cool because he's psychic. And the cursing...I think you may have to star them out. Dr. Eggman getting blown up was funny. Well, keep it up!

 

[+Erin+]

finaly episode 2 is done