Jerry_Francis
Evil=Immense Fun
I will just delete the story. I don't know how to delete the topic all together, so if it stays here I don't know how to take it off.
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HB5squared
I'm Back
Please use paragraphs. This is an eye sore and it's very rushed. There is next to no description and overall it just sucks. Please format it correctly. If you'd like I can point out the specific Grammar mistakes but I feel that it is useless as you have to reformat this and revise it to extreme lengths. While doing this you will probably find those stupid mistakes. Please read the advice for aspiring authors sticky and perhaps some other fics. 