New Deck Garage (get ya game on!)

[necrosham]

I have no idea if I'm breaking any rules here but I'd like to start a new deck garage. However for all I know this whole set of threads could be a deck garage. Now, because my hand is cramping up I'll be brief: Please post your decks here if you need help I and the other members of the site will help if we can. I'd prefer if you stick to advanced format decks but traditional format will still be accepted and fixed. Follow the rules or I'll call in a moderator. Now, as the starter of this thread I'll post my deck first.

It is a fiend deck for advanced format tournaments so please keep that in mind. Please be respectful of others attempting to help me out, and please rate if you feel like it. Thank you in advance, here is the deck

Monsters
Dark Ruler Ha des x2
Dark Necrofear x2
Giant Germ x3
Slate Warrior x3
Goldd, Wu-Lord of Dark World x2
Newdoria x2
Sangan x1
Night Assailant x1
Breaker the Magical Warrior x1
Exiled force x1
D. D. warrior lady x1
Magician of Faith x1

Spells
Smashing Ground x2
Scapegoat x1
Snatch Steal x1
Premature Burial x1
Book of Moon x1
Mystical Space Thypoon x1
Brain Control x1
Dark World Lighting x1
Heavy Storm x1
Graceful Charity x1

Traps
Sakuretsu Armor x2
Return from the Different Dimension x2
Deck Devastation Virus x1
Torrential Tribute x1
Call of the Haunted x1
Mirror Force x1
Magic Cylinder x1
Dust Tornado x1

Hope you like the deck, any constructive comments will be appreciated

 

[cheekie3]

I have no idea if I'm breaking any rules here but I'd like to start a new deck garage. However for all I know this whole set of threads could be a deck garage. Now, because my hand is cramping up I'll be brief: Please post your decks here if you need help I and the other members of the site will help if we can. I'd prefer if you stick to advanced format decks but traditional format will still be accepted and fixed. Follow the rules or I'll call in a moderator. Now, as the starter of this thread I'll post my deck first.

It is a fiend deck for advanced format tournaments so please keep that in mind. Please be respectful of others attempting to help me out, and please rate if you feel like it. Thank you in advance, here is the deck

Monsters
Dark Ruler Ha des x2
Dark Necrofear x2
Giant Germ x3
Slate Warrior x3
Goldd, Wu-Lord of Dark World x2--->out for 2 giant orc
Newdoria x2
Sangan x1
Night Assailant x1
Breaker the Magical Warrior x1
Exiled force x1
D. D. warrior lady x1
Magician of Faith x1

Spells
Smashing Ground x2
Scapegoat x1
Snatch Steal x1
Premature Burial x1
Book of Moon x1
Mystical Space Thypoon x1
Brain Control x1--->nobleman of crossout
Dark World Lighting x1--->nobleman of crossout
Heavy Storm x1
Graceful Charity x1

Traps
Sakuretsu Armor x2
Return from the Different Dimension x2
Deck Devastation Virus x1
Torrential Tribute x1
Call of the Haunted x1
Mirror Force x1
Magic Cylinder x1--->dust tornado
Dust Tornado x1

Hope you like the deck, any constructive comments will be appreciated

made some fixs in the quote nice deck.

this basically is a deck garage thing, but i'm not 100% sure of all the rules, as i don't come here that often i tend to go to more yugioh focused sites

 

[necrosham]

thank you for the fixes, I hope more people reply. I don't use the orcs because I don't like forced defense and magic cylindeer has saved me too many times thanks again.