New Discoveries

[Untamed Fear â„¢]

This comic is about two people, Kate and Phil, the heros from FR/LG.
They have been dragged to johto to solve the mysterys of the legendary pokemon, BIOs etc coming soon,

Episode one : The noise.
Episode Two: The new discovery

Pokemon Caught/obtained so far:

Kate:

Phil:
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Credits:

Gridiron for Johto maps.
Coronis for 4th gen sprites.

 

[ash5550]

Looks good, but wheres te egg? Should'nt it be there? You don't need two exclamation marks n the end of reason, just one. I wish you lukc with your comic!

 

[Untamed Fear â„¢]

The egg is buried under the sand, there is a lump in the ground showing where the egg is.

 

[Tip The Waitress]

Nice story. Can't wait for next episode!

 

[Stanley]

Good comic and plot. But the panels are pretty big. Make them smaller and you might also have more space for other panels.

 

[Untamed Fear â„¢]

Episode Two: a new discovery

 

[Tip The Waitress]

cool new episode is great as well

 

[Marril_Man]

Nice but I was confused at the placement of speech bubbles in the second panel. I didn't know who was talking first. Make it that they go down in order not up

 

[munchlaxboy]

Hi Untamed Fear. Biggest fan here. It's an ok comic. But i'm getting confused. the speech bubbles look out of order

 

[Stanley]

As above the new episode is out of order. Try making them higher than the next one. It's a bit better because it has smaller panels.