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:: New Picture : The DYWAL rumble XD ::

Kand@ [ カンダ ]

☆★ カンダ コトブキ ★☆
Hello Hello ^_^
Today I show you one of the artwork of my manga DYWAL ( which i'll translate in english soon n_n ), you can find it on my site, but in french only sorry >_<

DYWAL_groupe2006.jpg

It took me a lot of time, but I had a lot of fun! XD
pink hair : kasumi
green hair : mymy
orange hair : mayura
blue hair : minako

Hope you'll like ^_^~
 

SugarFairy

I love Dara <3
these are pretty good.. I dunno.. but their skin color is bothering me >_> That might just be me though XD Very well drawn!
 

Flame Haze SnS

Yin-Yang
Is it me or am I in the world of Chobits? Anyway, they're very very identical to Shojo Beat manga. You definitly have gift for drawing these pics. Kudos to ya! ^_^
 
Awww kawaii! I have nothing bad to say about them. Good job! You have talent! ^.^
 

Chelc

Well-Known Member
Yay, new art! :]

They're so kawaii! I love the brightness of the colors, especially the way their nails are painted. Awesome. =D
 

whiteabsol

.:Daisy Dancing:.
Very nice. The only thing that I don't like is that the girl's torso is somewhat long O_O
 

Kand@ [ カンダ ]

☆★ カンダ コトブキ ★☆
Is it me or am I in the world of Chobits? Anyway, they're very very identical to Shojo Beat manga. You definitly have gift for drawing these pics. Kudos to ya! ^_^

No, they're no CHOBITS XD, it's more neko-girls ^^
Thank you all for your comments ^_^
 
Long time no see : P

Pretty nice colouring and some nice compositions, the proportions looks ok too : )

I think you need to focus on the eyes a little more and hair as well (great eyes and hair in the ones you did before) and I think your style has changed from the previous, but looking forward to your works! : )
 

Myuuvuirocon

<--- Destoria
aren't they from chobits? someone else said the same thing... I can tell by the ears... if they aren't... er... I dunna what.... XD

anyways, great job! ^^
 

Demise

...An orange blob...
The girl who is standing in the middle, her left foot looks really out of place. Seeing that her leg is facing front, the shoes seem wavered to the side. The torso is too long the pants seems to be alright from the top, but when it comes down it gets bigger. It looks so heavy, and if there are giant pant feets and the girl's leg is skinny, wouldn't there be a small sign of wrinkles.

The shoes are tall...o_O

The ears are weird.

Aside from what I said, it looks good. The shading and the backgrounds are nicley done.

-;197;
 

Kand@ [ カンダ ]

☆★ カンダ コトブキ ★☆
darcstars said:
The girl who is standing in the middle, her left foot looks really out of place. Seeing that her leg is facing front, the shoes seem wavered to the side. The torso is too long the pants seems to be alright from the top, but when it comes down it gets bigger. It looks so heavy, and if there are giant pant feets and the girl's leg is skinny, wouldn't there be a small sign of wrinkles.

The shoes are tall...o_O

The ears are weird.

Aside from what I said, it looks good. The shading and the backgrounds are nicley done.

-;197;
thank you for this comment ^_^
about the torso etc... I love to draw very long character, i don't know why, but i find that beautiful XD sorry if that bugs you :'(
About the feets, yes you're right, but i'm not very good in anatomy * blushes *
About the shoes, i love very high platform boots, i think it's very funny XD
Thankyou all for your comments & support ^_^
 

Minako

オタク
Aww, now, isn't that just adorable?

I really love the orange-haired girl...Mayura, eh? Cute name, too. ^_^

As a whole, this piece is very stylish; it's nice when you can find artwork that prompts you to sit staring at it for hours, trying to find all the details that might be hidden in it...Which is what this pic makes me want to do. :0~

I do think that you could afford to improve your anatomy, but it's not a major problem, really. I'm not one to talk in that department, anyway. XD;

Anyhow, I'd like to see this manga of yours translated. :3 [My French is a crying shame. +cough+]
 

Demise

...An orange blob...
thank you for this comment ^_^
about the torso etc... I love to draw very long character, i don't know why, but i find that beautiful XD sorry if that bugs you :'(
About the feets, yes you're right, but i'm not very good in anatomy * blushes *
About the shoes, i love very high platform boots, i think it's very funny XD
Thankyou all for your comments & support ^_^

Well, I suggest that you take art lessons or someting like that. Or just study manga books and how the artist draws the feet, hands, faces, etc.

This may be the first time I ever said this to anyone who is an artist...
You're very talented in drawing and in that measure. Shading, coloring, and anything else, it's seems so impossible for me to do something like that.

Keep up the good work!

EDIT: And about the anatomy, I have analyzed the pose that you put the girl in. Her right foot should be a bit identical to her left. Except her foot should be shifted a bit off. And I don't mind about the torso, it doesn't bug me at all.

-;197;
 
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Kand@ [ カンダ ]

☆★ カンダ コトブキ ★☆
Minako said:
Aww, now, isn't that just adorable?

I really love the orange-haired girl...Mayura, eh? Cute name, too. ^_^

As a whole, this piece is very stylish; it's nice when you can find artwork that prompts you to sit staring at it for hours, trying to find all the details that might be hidden in it...Which is what this pic makes me want to do. :0~

I do think that you could afford to improve your anatomy, but it's not a major problem, really. I'm not one to talk in that department, anyway. XD;

Anyhow, I'd like to see this manga of yours translated. :3 [My French is a crying shame. +cough+]

Thank you very much for all your compliments ^_^ i'll work more my anatomy skills soon >_< it's a promise!
Or just study manga books and how the artist draws the feet, hands, faces, etc.

This may be the first time I ever said this to anyone who is an artist...
You're very talented in drawing and in that measure. Shading, coloring, and anything else, it's seems so impossible for me to do something like that.

Keep up the good work!
Yes I'll do that! Anyways, thank you for your critisms, i think it's with these comments we can improve! ^-^ Thank you very much again!
 

Kaiviti

Polynesian*
aaaah I LOVE....dont worry about the anatomy...you have your own style of drawing bodies...and i LOVE IT THAT WAYS!! like always...beautiful colours...you have such a wonderful imagination kand@!!
 
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