no doubt i've done something stupid, but here goes

[falco_lombardi_the_watche]

right, i'm trying to build a team to beat my m8's who don't EV (neither do i) don't use natures (neither do i). this is a double battle compo between us. the difference between our teams, is that they've got their teams ready. they use alot of legendaries and ubers (everyone has either moltres or entei, hence the extra large water selection)

i don't mind criticism (constructive or just random insults) and suggestions for improvement would be greatly appreciated (as i suck at pokeomon)

i've got:

mantine swift swim mild
wing attack
supersonic
water pulse
take down

seadra(can't get kingdra, don't know how, help would b greatly appreciated) sassy poison point
smokescreen
leer
water gun
twister

if i'm gonna use it, i know that something will have to be changed there

golduck lonely damp
disable
confusion
screech
psych up

starmie naughty illuminate
waterfall
ice beam
refresh
recover

cloyster shell armor docile
protect
surf
spikes
attract

in case you haven't noticed, i've used this one before. turned out ok, not completely satisfied with it though.

walrein careful thick fat
aurora beam
rest
surf
earthquake

love something that can last i do. yeah, i used this for xd. good defense or good hp, i don't care. as long as it can last, i love it.

vapoureon calm water absorb
surf
bite
ice beam
shadow ball

not the eevee evo i picked for xd. i used vapoureon for fire red.

dewgong relaxed thick fat
aurora beam
rest
surf
take down

snorlax modest thick fat
solarbeam
snore
rest
block

gengar bashful levitate
curse
dream eater
hynosis
shadow ball

if i am going to have this one, the only move i might change is curse. i was wondering about having giga drain/nightmare instead

dusclops hasty pressure
shadow ball
curse
will-o-wisp
psychic

altaria modest natural cure
dragonbreath
heal bell
solarbeam
aerial ace

dragonite sassy shed skin?(can't remember)
surf
dragon claw
aerial ace
slam

jolteon naughty volt absorb
double kick
thunderbolt
pin missile
hidden power (psychic)

i like this one. this was my xd eevee evo and has served me well.

flygon relaxed levitate
giga drain
steel wing
earthquake
dragon claw

umbreon naughty sychronize
bite
iron tail
return
moonlight

as i said before, i love something that can last

steelix rash rock head
rock tomb
hyper beam
iron tail
earthquake

espeon careful sychronize
psychic
return
morning sun
attract

houndoom impish early bird
crunch
shadow ball
flamethrower
hyper beam (don't kill me)

alakazam lonely inner focus
psychic
role play
recover
calm mind

venasaur quirky overgrow
synthesis
leech seed
sludge bomb
roar

pidgeot lax keen eye
rest
whirlwind
fly
toxic

metagross quirky clear body
shadow ball
aerial ace
meteor mash
psychic

yes, that is finally it. whaddaya think?

 

[Hapless Hero]

Whoa. Lots here.

First of all:

Kill Water Gun. Insert Surf/Hydro Pump. Water Gun's low power isn't worth it.

Venasaur might want Sunny Day instead of Roar.

Houndoom's attack isn't high enough to sjustifyuper HBeam.

Umbreon's Att (and Sp. Att for that matter) are too low for Iron Tail and possibly BIte. Use Crunch if possible. Umbreon is typically an annoyer.

Jolteon's Pin MIssle and Double Kick are weak.

Hypnosis misses too often.

Don't let your Starmie have Illuminate. It is useless in battle.

If you want to use Psych Up, let your pokemon know something like Swagger first. (I wouldn't pick Golduck anyway.)

Kingdra: Trade with Dragon Scale. Leer is useless unless it knows a physical move.

Water Pulse isn't necessary. Surf or Hydro Pump. You already have SSonic.

Most of your problems stem from Too Many Attack Attacks. (Not enough defensive.) Also, too many of your Pokémon have conflicting movesets. You don't need two physical and two special attacks (like on your Dragonite.) Stick to either Sp Att or Att, and give it more defensive/stat-or-status changers.

 

[Kalavinka]

lol @ Swagger + Psych Up, anyone with a brain will switch out on their next turn.

~Thunderstar ;121;;373;

 

[The Flat World]

Asking for too many pokemon rates (in your case, 23) kinda deters raters IMO.

 

[snorlax]

they use ubers?

kyogre Screams LOL

alot to rate

lol sunny day w/ all of those waters

 

[Tazzler]

Since you don't ev train and I am assuming this is in-game so no Hidden Power:

Mantine@Leftovers
Trait: Water Absorb
Calm Nature
-Surf
-Ice Beam
-Rest
-Haze

Kingdra@Lum Berry
Trait: Swift Swim
Modest Nature
-Surf/Hydro Pump
-Ice Beam
-Dragonbreath (No HP)
-Rain Dance

Golduck@Leftovers
Trait: Damp (Or Cloud Nine, but you lose the suny weakaning but rain strengthening)
Timid Nature
-Surf
-Ice Beam
-Calm Mind
-Hypnosis/Psychic

Starmie@Leftovers
Trait: Natural Cure
Timid Nature
-Surf
-Ice Beam
-Thunderbolt
-Recover

I doubt the opponent will use spikes.

Cloyster@Leftovers
Trait: Shell Armor
Lax Nature
-Explosion
-Spikes
-Surf
-Ice Beam

Walrein@Leftovers
Trait: Thick Fat
Modest Nature
-Surf
-Ice Beam
-Toxic/Rest/Substitute
-Encore

Vaporeon@Leftovers
Trait: Water Absorb
Bold Nature
-Wish
-Roar
-Surf
-Ice Beam

Dewgong@Leftovers
Trait: Thick Fat
Modest Nature
-Surf
-Perish Song
-Encore
-Ice Beam

PS for phazing.

Snorlax@Leftovers
Trait: Thick Fat
Careful Nature
-Curse
-Shadow Ball
-Return
-Rest

Gengar@Leftovers
Trait: Levitate
Hasty Nature
-Hynosis/Substitute
-Focus Punch
-Thunderbolt
-Ice Punch

Dusclops@Leftovers
Trait: Pressure
Impish Nature
-Will-O-Wisp
-Shadow Ball
-Pain Split
-Focus Punch/Night Shade/Seismsic Toss

Altaria@Leftovers
Trait: Natural Cure
Calm Nature
-Dragon Claw
-Heal Bell
-Roar
-Rest

Dragonite@Leftovers
Trait: Inner Focus
Adamant/Lonely Nature
-Dragon Dance
-Aerial Ace
-Earthquake
-Thunder/Thunderbolt/Fire Blast/Flamethower/Focus Punch/Heal Bell/Thunder Wave

Jolteon@Leftovers
Trait: Volt Absorb
Timid Nature
-Substitute
-Baton Pass
-Thunderbolt
-Bite/Wish/Agility/Thunder Wave/Charm/Hidden Power (Grass/Ice/Fire/Water/Dark)

Flygon@Choice Band
Trait: Levitate
Adamant Nature
-Fire Blast
-Rock Slide
-Earthquake
-Quick Attack

Umbreon@Leftovers
Trait: Sychronize
Bold Nature
-Mean Look
-Baton Pass
-Wish/Moonlight
-Taunt/Toxic

Steelix@Leftovers
Trait: Sturdy
Impish Nature
-Rock Slide
-Earthquake
-Roar
-Rest/Toxic/Explosion/Iron Tail

Espeon@Leftovers
Trait: Sychronize
Calm/Timid Nature
-Calm Mind
-Substitute
-Baton Pass
-Psychic

Houndoom@Leftovers
Trait: Flash Fire
Timid Nature
-Fire Blast
-Crunch
-Will-O-Wisp
-Pursuit/Substitute/Beat Up

Alakazam@Leftovers
Trait: Sychronize
Timid Nature
-Calm Mind
-Psychic
-Fire Punch
-Recover/Ice Punch/Thunderpunch

Venesuar@Leftovers
Trait:Overgrow
Careful Nature
-Leech Seed
-Sleep Powder
-Sludge Bomb
-Synthesis

Pidgeot@Choice Band
Trait: Keen Eye
Jolly Nature
-Aerial Ace
-Return
-Quick Attack
-Steel Wing

Metagross@Choice Band
Trait: Clear Body
Adamant Nature
-Meteor Mash
-Earthquake
-Rock Slide
-Explosion

HUGE Botlbeam and Heracross weakness.

 

[lime_green_hero]

Wow. Lotsa pokes.

If you're trying to beat ledgendaries who don't use natures or EVs, the odvious stratagy it to use natures and EVs.

The major flaw of your team is that the Jolteon is the only things that could possibly survive even a sub-par Kyogre.

 

[SHUCKLE MAN]

The best Poke there seems to be Metagross. Metagross could be better with Sluge bomb, Earthquake, Meteor mash, Agility. (You may also want to put Explosion here).

 

[Rufinito18]

Ok...wow this is TOO much pokemon.
1.Lose all water attacks and replace them with Surf.
2. Naughty Starmie? You might not do natures but thats just plain stupid..lower defence for attack? On Starmie= USELESS
3. No special attack on physical sweepers and no physical attacks on special sweepers. Simple?
4. Lose all the attacks with power lower than 60

thats all I have to say.. and

pidgeot lax keen eye
rest
whirlwind
fly
toxic

this works better with noctowl....
which woul dbe

Toxic
Fly
Reflect
Psychic

 

[SHUCKLE MAN]

No Hyper beam on Houndoom. I want to kill you!!! jk. Have a sunnybeaming houndoom instead.

 

[Delta]

Have a sunnybeaming houndoom instead.

ROFL

Sunnybeaming Doom sucks, nuff said

 

[The Flat World]

The best Poke there seems to be Metagross.

The 'best pokemon' is hard to define...

But I'd say the most overused is Snorlax. It seems like every serious team has one.

 

[SHUCKLE MAN]

The 'best pokemon' is hard to define...

But I'd say the most overused is Snorlax. It seems like every serious team has one.

He is the most useful imo. It is opinion anyways.

I use the Houndoom moveset on smogon but since this does not seen like a Netbattle team, I think that a sunnybeaming Houndoom may actually work for once (and it will be better than some of the other pokes he is using)

 

[dynamo]

I don't think you know what you're talking about