Noob needs help- My Thread

[Sombrero]

Germany vs. Australia- The Fakemons of these countries!

Hi, i wanna make my own edition with ca.50 new Pokemon in the land called "Germania". Here you can meet my Fakemon and some other Pokémons, which i'll post here. A Australian Prof. gives you one of 3 Asutralian Pokemon as the starters. Please take a li'l look and post something

Fakemon

Kiwiki

Grass/Normal
Pokedex: This small bird can't fly, 'cause it doesn't have any wings. But even if it would have wings, the giant kiwi-fruit at it's tail would be way to heavy to fly. It has to use it's camouflage abilitys to disguise itself. If it lies on the ground it looks like terra and it's head like grass because of the grass hairs. Even if it can't fly it's really quick and can defend itself with the kiwi-fruit and can attack with the seeds around it's neck.You can only find it on the island New Sealand
Classification: Fruitbird-Pokémon
Note: Your Australian Prof. can give it to you as the Grass-Starter. This Pokemon should be a kiwi-bird with a kiwi-fruit at the tail... Ironically.

Evo-Chain

--Lv16--> ? --Lv36--> ?


Attacks: -Peck, -Tail Whip, Lv5 Fruit Cannon, Lv 14 Bullet Seed , Lv17 Vine Whip, Lv22 Sand Attack, Lv 25 Quick Attack, Lv30 Synthesis, Lv35 Mirror Move, Lv 42 Solar Beam, 47 Agility
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Platiny

Water
Pokedex: Biologists aren't sure about this little fella. Some say it's a duck-similar Pokemon, other think it's more a mammal and others think it'S a reptile. It only lives in the swamps of Australia. It'S not a good fighter. 'cause it lies most of the time around. If you attack it, it won't strike back... Is there a mystery about this Pokemon or is it just way too lazy to fight?
Classification: Duck-like-Pokémon
Note: Your Australian Prof. can give it to you as the water-starter.

Platyquack

Water
Pokedex: This Pokemon can swim and walk. But it's feet are not the best , so if it runs or walsk to fast it'll stumble. It can't move it's tail because there are no bones and muscles in it, it is only a fat pool and you can see if it'S tail is fat, it has aten a lot, but if the tail is thin, i needs food.
Classification: Platypus Pokémon


Evo Chain:

--Lv18-->

--Lv32--> ?

Attacks: -Scratch, -Snore, Lv7 YAwn, Lv 15 Headbutt, Lv18 Aqua gun, Lv27 Rest, Lv30 Encore, Lv37 Belly Drum, Lv 42 Amnesia, Lv50 Muddy Water
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Pumpevil

Ghost/Plant
Pokédex: This Pokémon lives on fields. It comes out off his hideout at sunset. It loves to scare farmers and Pokémon. The It's weapon is a small Pumpkin on a chain hanging at a bar. But, don't be afraid! This Pokémon doesn't mean no harm. It's a vegetarian.
Classification: Pumpkin-Pokémon
Attacks: ???
Note: My first fakemon ever.

Evo Chain

--Trade+King's Stone--> ?

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Pichu

Electro
Pokedex: This is just a little baby and is just building it's fighting powers. If it's Pikachu Parents are nice to him it'll get stronger electr-powers but if they don't care about it, it'll lose it'S electr-powers and will get terribly mad!!!

Sarcatchu

Dark
Pokédex: This Pokémon is really rare because you can only find it on one place on the earth: In the Blackforest in Germania. This Pokémon is really mean: Sarcachu attacks out of the shadow innocent Pokemon ,with the sphere on it's tail. This sphere can send out dark flames and other mystic attacks. But ,whatever you do, don't mistake a Sarcachu with a Pikachu or it'll kill you
Classification: Goblin Pokemon

Satachu

Dark
Pokédex: A legend says that, people in the Middle Age thought this Pokemon would be the devil. They hunted it down , but the Satachus were too strong and won this battle and Satachus brought the balck death to the humans!It has bat wings and sharp theeth. It's red eyes can see everythhing with blood in it and this creature can smell fear of other things. It attacks outta the dark and is a killer. A predator with the killer instinct
Classification: Devil Pokémon

Evo Chain:

--Hate-->

--Moonstone-->

Pokémon Bronze
I wanna make my own game and i'll post the stuff here.
Map of Germania

Attacks: -Thundershock, -Charm, Lv6 Tail Whip, Lv 8 Thunderwave, Lv11 Sweet Kiss, / -Bite, -Tail Whip, -Mean look, Lv8 Quick Attack, Lv16 Pursuit, Lv 25 Confuse RAy, Lv30 FAint Attack, Lv 40 Torment, Lv 52 Crunsh / -Crunsh, Lv 61 Air Cutter

More is coming soon.

 

[Kingdra55]

Why don't you try and make a sprite wersion of i, that would be good

 

[Sombrero]

Is this not a sprite?

 

[Zac Rhodes]

A sprite is ussaly smaller, you should try making it about 64/64 pixels

 

[mau]

that's pixel-art.
it's good but it needs better shading, and outlines.
and yes maybe you could make it a sprite.

 

[yanma024]

64/64 is like this

 

[Sombrero]

Like this?
@mau: What the hell does that mean? I don't get it. How can I do that better?

 

[Zac Rhodes]

It looks good, some adding darker colors to the out line might make it better I think the head should be attached straight to the body with no neck.

 

[Sombrero]

Thx, let me try it... But I don't know if I can do it today 'cause right now it is 2:00 at night (in Germany)-.-"

edit/: OK, hopefully finished

 

[Sombrero]

Sry for doubleposting but I've got a new pixel art:

This is a bad, mean Pikachu called Sarcachu which lives only in Germania and it's type is Dark. Hope you like it.
I didn't use a normal Pikachu and colored it new I drew it new. But I'm not finished with it 'cause I don't like it so much. I don't know what's wrong but I think I gonna change something! Plz help me 'cause I think there is something weird with this Pikachu but I don't know what!
Sprite is coming soon.

And I'm working on a map. I'm kinda making my own edition which plays in a land called "Germania". I gonna create some new Pokémon and post all the other Pokémons you can meet there, try to make some citys and the bad team.

/edit:

Sprite'S done. And so is the map.

 

[Sombrero]

So, I'm really sorry for tripple posting but my last post is a cupple of weeks old and i've done some new sprites.

Kiwiki-The kiwi-bird with the kiwi fruit at it'S tail is the grass-starter. Teh australian Prof. can give it to u.

Platiny- It's the water starter of teh australian prof.

Platyquack- Pltinys evo.

Satachu- Sarcachus evo.

 

[MiTYH]

platyquack is very nice

 

[miken park]

On the Sarachu ,the shading needs to go with the shape of the sprite, not sorta straight down.You also might want to consider changing the pose, as the offical sprites never face you head on, they're always at an angle.
Also, use some black and reverse dot's in your outlines.

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

Shouldn't Pichu be Electric/Dark then? If not, maybe it's evos should be.

 

[Sombrero]

@ruzy: Yeah, I think I'll make a new sprite of sarcatchu!

/edit: Is this better:

@ø®??G? ??*: Oh c'mon , i don't want Sarcatchu to be electric. It should be a pure dark type!
@mityh: Thx, It's my latest creation^^

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

Eh, the shading is still kinda bad. It seems that all you did is slightly change the pose. And what about Pichu?

 

[Wietse]

Yor map of germany has is very bad. The cities are OK, but there's no relief.

 

[Sombrero]

Eh, the shading is still kinda bad. It seems that all you did is slightly change the pose. And what about Pichu?

yeah, i was too lazy. it was 0.00 o' clock and i was tired like crap! Plz tell me what to do betetr, I'm a nooooooob! But, what about pichu?

@Wietse: What do you mean with no relief?

 

[Wietse]

Well, no mountains and no difference in green spots. only three wich ar not good. Look at the hoenn map and see the difference.

 

[Sombrero]

But germany is sort of build like that, it used my german atlas. There are mid-high mountains in the south only three or four high mountains in the south west. And the north is really low. No mountains, nothing! i try to make it a bit better but I'm not sur eif it's going to look any better.-