Noob Team!

[WIZkid1696]

Hi, this is my very first competitive battle team, please rate and improve, as this will likely be the WORST team that you have ever seen.



Heatran:
Modest EVS: 252 Spec. Att/252 Speed/4 HP/ Flash Fire
Occa Berry
Stealth Rock
Explosion
Flamethrower
Dark Pulse

Heatran is my suicide lead. People will probably think he has a scarf on him, so this may take people by suprise. Sets up stealth rock obviously, while flamethrower deals with Jirachi, Skarmory, Celebi and Metagross. Dark Pulse deals with Azelf, although he has trouble dealing with Infernape.

Hitmonlee:
Jolly EVS: 252 Attack/252 Speed/4 Sp. Defense/Limber
Life Orb
Rapid Spin
Close Combat
Earthquake
Stone Edge

Yea, Hitmolee. Very unorthodox, but in my 8 battles so far, incredibly effective. He is my rapid spinner, as my team gets hit hard by stealth rock. He also deals with steel types, which my team is walled by.

Gyarados:
Adamant EVS: 156 HP/72 Atk./96 Def./184 Speed/ Intimidate
Leftovers
Dragon Dance
Earthquake
Waterfall
Ice Fang

My main sweeper and offensive threat. Basic Gyarados, albeit a more bulky version. I prefer this E.V. spread for survivabilty, because once he gets dragon dance up, he is a beast.

Raikou:
Timid EVS: 252 Sp. Att/252 Speed/ 4 HP/ Pressure
Choice Specs
Extrasensory
Thunderbolt
Shadow Ball
Hidden Power Fire

My secondary sweeper, and who I switch in when I fear Gyarados is about to be elecrecuted. I have tried him and Jolteon, and have like his bulkiness better as I find Jolteon far to frail.

Bronzong:
Relaxed EVS: 164 HP/168 Defense/ 174 Sp. Defense/ Levitate
Leftovers
Gyro Ball
Hypnosis
Stealth Rock
Explosion

My support/wall. If Heatran cannot get up stealth rock, he will. I went with the mixed style wall, and it has worked well. Gyro Ball for some offense, hypnosis to disrupt sweepers, explosion to go out with a bang. Switches in for Rakiou in case of earthquake.

Sceptile:
Modest EVS: 252 Sp. Att./252 Speed/4 HP
Choice Specs
Focus Blast
Leaf Storm
Hidden Power Fire
Dragon Pulse

My last resort, late game sweeper. He has great speed and special attack. Leaf Storm straight punishes, Dragon Pulse hits dragons hard, Focus Blast catches some pokemon off guard, and hidden power fire hits skarmory, who walls my team otherwise.

Please be harsh, I need the honest help!


edit: Raikous moveset

 

[WIZkid1696]

Anbody?........

 

[Purple_Tangrowth]

Raikou@Leftvoers
Timid
252Spe 252SpA 4HP
-Thunder Bolt
-Substitute
-Calm Mind
-HP Fire

idk if the ev's are good but wtv. HP ice wood be obviously better
but since you have something that's decent already, go with HP fire

 

[WIZkid1696]

wow, no raters... im thinking of changing my lead, any ideas?

 

[M4zz]

If you want a better lead, try Azelf/

Azelf@Focus Sash
Naive Nature
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
IVs: 28 SpD
~Stealth Rocks
~Fire Blast / Psychic
~Explosion / Thunder Wave
~Taunt

This is one of the most common leads today. If you get through the first turn after using taunt without any damage, I prefer setting up T-Wave aside from Exploding. This allows Azelf to one, live, and two, become a pest. Most people go with Explosion, as most leads do attack, either to break Focus Sash or to OHKO. Make sure the IVs are 28 in Sp.D. They help.

 

[ASB]

wow, no raters... im thinking of changing my lead, any ideas?

Chill, it was over 2 weeks before someone rated my first team.