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Not Another Journey Comic

Reubo

Yeah, baby!
NOT ANOTHER JOURNEY COMIC
This is a comic that I made a while ago, but I didn't update enough and it died. So here it is again! This comic is PG- 13, because it will contain swearing and some sexual themes. Maybe violence too if I feel like it. :) I aim to update at least once a week.

CHAPTER 1 - The Mintendo TS
Comic 1: NOT in Pallet
Comic 2: MINTENDO POWER!
Comic 3: Perverted Gary (And also main characters)
Comic 4: Mintendo TS
Comic 5: The plan! (Kinda)
Comic 6: Ask Your Parents First
Comic 7: Everyone Knows That This Will Be An Ekans
Comic 8: Finally, Some Action.
Comic 9: Loading
Comic 10: STILL Loading
Comic 11: Pisscakes
Comic 12: Pokeball Time
Comic 13: No Balls
Comic 14: Wait Here
Comic 15: Heal Your Idiot
Comic 16: Go Get Some

CHAPTER 2 - Getting Some Balls
Comic 17: Stick Figures
- TEH NEWEST!!!!11

Enjoy.
 
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ΩOmega WeavileΩ

Skinning every bears
Special Effects = Great
Facial Expressions = Awsome, especially the one in the first comic
Origionality = Good (OMFG, this is rare!)

A good way to pull of a journey comic (sorta) without being a bit cliche.

Mesa gives you a
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!! Im watching this comic thread.
 
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Tabby Catty

Courtney loves Ruby
Once again great! You are one of the few people that pulled off a journey comic without copying Pokechow and what not.

I loved the ball joke it sort of make sense depending on your perv levels. I'm glad it came back for a second their I thought you gave up.
 

Treeckoman7

Stickers are ghetto
This is excellent! Good facial expressions and such! I really like it! You make Cliche funny! Unlike other people here...
GOOD JOB!
 

Treeckoman7

Stickers are ghetto
Excellent! I really like this. You make cliche funny! Good expressions also!
 

Blaze Dragon

T3h Blazing Ranger!
Good, but I suggest that you use the panels like the first comics, not like the last 2
 

Reubo

Yeah, baby!
Good, but I suggest that you use the panels like the first comics, not like the last 2

Sorry, but I'll be using them like the last two, because using that format, I'm not limited to six 256x256 panels. I'll try to improve with using the new format though, because I understand it looks a little messy now.

Comic 14: Wait Here
 
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AerialAce!

Inconceivable!
Wow. That was one of the most creatively-done battle scenes I've ever witnessed in a fan-comic. Plus, the Loading screen had me, and I quote, "ROFLMAO."

Anyway, well done. Original, excellent effects, and someone with a Porygon. I am happy.
 

SamsGFX

<< May Is Sexci!
I love it, loved Porygon [Read any good books lately]
keep it up xP
 

Reubo

Yeah, baby!
Okay, then! I'll get to work on the next comic, but it may take a little while cause some custom maps will be in the comic.

Oh yeah, this is a BIG maybe, but I MIGHT get a graphics tablet which MAY mean that I MIGHT convert NAJC into hand-drawn.

Your comments on this?
 

AerialAce!

Inconceivable!
could be interesting. I guess it all depends on your ability in this department. If the visual style work well with the comic, then I'm alll for it. If it doesn't work out--stick with what you're good at!
 

AerialAce!

Inconceivable!
Abso-fricken-lutely awesome. I literally didn't stop laughing for three minutes.

I'll just have to wait and see if your art is "worthy"... ;)
That is, if you get the tablet.
 

Blaze Dragon

T3h Blazing Ranger!
"Welcome to the idiot center"
LOLZ, I didn´t expected that. Good job!
And I can´t wait to see your drawed comic!
 

Kinginsoar

Advanced Spriter
Pretty good. It's just thatyour panel order and size is a little odd sometimes. Oh, and since they are trying to get through Nugget Bridge, will this be a short comic? Oh, and what about Misty and Gary? Will we see more of them? Anyway, good comic, keep it up.
 

Reubo

Yeah, baby!
Pretty good. It's just thatyour panel order and size is a little odd sometimes. Oh, and since they are trying to get through Nugget Bridge, will this be a short comic? Oh, and what about Misty and Gary? Will we see more of them? Anyway, good comic, keep it up.

1. Any specific tips on how I can get better?

2. This comic will continue after the Nugget Bridge chapter. It will actually continue until I lose inspiration, and in that case I will end it sensibly (They get enough money, the buy the MTS)

3. Misty and Gary... Hmm I dunno. Dan and Brian will battle Misty eventually, but I don't know about Gary. You will however see a different Gary later on in the comic, just not the perverted, chest-grabbing one.
 
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