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Not so Lucky

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Sora

AKA Snagger Outlaw
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Yosuki: Why are you smiling?
Lucky: What do you mean?
Yosuki: Someone you cared about did something terrible to you! Aren't you upset?
Lucky: By getting upset, I have given them control over my life. Why give someone control with a frown when you can take control with a smile?

A sufferer of the infamous Metal Virus, Lucky. Hence why her shoulders are cracked and white

Despite the title, Lucky as a character is a very optimistic upbeat soul. She's a Quilava/Sandslash/Chikorita/Houndoom

Time: 6 hours
Program: Photoshop CS
Tools: An ancient optical mouse
 
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Clockworkz

SURPRISE BUTTSECKS
Everything about her, save her clothes, are unbelievably flat and static. Shading is not nearly prominant enough, especially on the jewel on her chest. The face seems out of shape on her left side and the facial features are unsavory at best. Nose and mouth are far too simplistic, and the eye has no white in it, and the soft shading, while decent, is a half-hearted display of skill. What tools on PS did you use exactly for the shading?
 
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Sora

AKA Snagger Outlaw
Clockworkz said:
Everything about her, save her clothes, are unbelievably flat and static. Shading is not nearly prominant enough, especially on the jewel on her chest. The face seems out of shape on her left side and the facial features are unsavory at best. Nose and mouth are far too simplistic, and the eye has no white in it, and the soft shading, while decent, is a half-hearted display of skill. What tools on PS did you use exactly for the shading?
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Dodge and burn. Nothing too fancy
 
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Clockworkz

SURPRISE BUTTSECKS
May wanna try the airbrush on Screen and Multiply with 100% hardened and 0 spacing. That's what works for me most of the time. Just a suggestion.
 
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The Smore

Coral Eye Trainer
I like some of the shading on the body. I don't like it on the ear band thingamajog. It's a nice pose though.

Also the belly buton is .. A straight line. I feel that could be improved. Erm, and I don't like the eye. It looks ... un - eye like :/
 
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Infinity

Gone...
Six hours? And you post all sorts of stuff every day? When do you eat and sleep?

I do think this is one of your better drawings. Although you could shade the armpit and follow what clock said. Your shading is a bit unrealistic, but I always like your art anyway.
 
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Haunt of the Vile

Well-Known Member
Funny how nobody else here seems to not notice one thing-
You have cut and pasted that eye to you friggin artwork!
It's "TOO GOOD" to be made by you when you're looking all that other stuff in that doodle. Do not do that again.
 
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Sora

AKA Snagger Outlaw
Haunt of the Vile said:
Funny how nobody else here seems to not notice one thing-
You have cut and pasted that eye to you friggin artwork!
It's "TOO GOOD" to be made by you when you're looking all that other stuff in that doodle. Do not do that again.
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Um, I didn't cut and paste it o.o It's called effort
 
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Clockworkz

SURPRISE BUTTSECKS
No, you're wrong on this basis: the eye isn't that good to begin with.
The shines are far to hard; no passive shading from teh color to the shine at all. The lower part of the eye, where there is the darker shading... It doesn't even come all the way down to the bottom of the eye, and it leaves a noticable lighter area of clue underneath it.
So to say that that eye is of professional quality would be a poor deduction at best.
 
The Admiral

The Admiral

the star of the masquerade
Clockworkz said:
No, you're wrong on this basis: the eye isn't that good to begin with.
The shines are far to hard; no passive shading from teh color to the shine at all. The lower part of the eye, where there is the darker shading... It doesn't even come all the way down to the bottom of the eye, and it leaves a noticable lighter area of clue underneath it.
So to say that that eye is of professional quality would be a poor deduction at best.
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Because **** quality is always an indicator of lack of cut/paste. Where is "professional quality" mentioned?

-PM
 
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Infinity

Gone...
Sora doesn't steal art she even wrote tutorials for the way she makes eyes. May I introduce you to this link? http://www.sunkentemples.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=675 That's her. The look of the eyes she makes is personal preference, methinks. I personally like how she does them, it's her style.
 
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