Nuzlocke Challenge: RED

[aggiegwyn]

So, here is my Nuzlocke challenge, not incredibly original, but still has that old sense of humor I guess. I intend to update pretty often, so here you go.

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Please make sure to give feedback, ask questions, or give suggestions~

 

[Kutie Pie]

Not bad. The humor's subtle, and I like subtle humor. I'm sure it's rather common in Nuzlocke comics to make the art a bit rushed to give it this... word-I-can't-think-of-at-the-moment feel, but looking through your gallery, I can see you do have a style I'd like to see more of. While I can see it, if the art was a little bit cleaner, I'd pick it out in a flash.

And of course, I'm always envious of people when it comes to the size of comics like this. I can never seem to get it, and I get frustrated way too easily xD. So yeah. I'd like to see some more of these adventures, and see how creative you can get.

 

[aggiegwyn]

Well thank you! I'm happy to hear it. And yes, reading through it again I noticed it was very rushed, so this time I'm slowing things down, so that the reader can actually sort of grasp what's going on. And thank you! I'm glad that you like my other style as well, it's very relaxing to draw those, and I enjoy making them. I should have an update sometime this week, hopefully.

 

[aggiegwyn]

Here's the second page: [link]

 

[Kutie Pie]

Not a bad page, I had a good chuckle here and there, but the text should be readable. It'd look better if you just type them out through PhotoShop or whatever program you're using.

 

[aggiegwyn]

yah, I considered that after the last page. I may edit it later so that that's how it works. Thank you!

 

[★ Lucario ★]

I like making reviews:

Protagonist

Name: Red
Gender: ♀
Job: Trainer
Age: 10
Nature: Bad-***

Team

;008; ♂ Spongebob Lv 17 or higher
Moves:
Tackle
Water Gun

;019; ♀ Dee-dee Lv 15 or higher
Nature: Timid
Moves:
Hyper Fang

;017; ♂ Aang Lv 7 or higher
Nature: Sassy

;041; ♂ Dexter Lv 7 or higher
Nature: Fiesty
Moves:
Leech Life
Supersonic

PokéDex:

Seen:
;001;
;007;
;008;
;010;
;011;
;014;
;016;
;017;
;019;
;021;
;035;
;039;
;041;
;074;
;095;
;129; (not in battle though)

Owned:
;007;
;008;
;016;
;017;
;019;
;041;

Bag

PokéDex
Map

Badges

Boulder Badge

 

[aggiegwyn]

Yah, that's pretty accurate. XD

I have run into Caterpie, Metapod, and Spearow, but they did do much beyond die, so there wasn't a point to adding them into the comic. XD

thanks for the review!

 

[Eeveeon8]

First of all: YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYNUZLOCKEYAYAYAYAYAYAYPOKEMONYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYHUMORYAYAYAY
Second of all:YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY
Third of all: Not what the first and second things are.
Fourth of all: Never knew that the trainers could be so bada**. Wish they could in the games.

 

[aggiegwyn]

First of all: YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYNUZLOCKEYAYAYAYAYAYAYPOKEMONYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYHUMORYAYAYAY
Second of all:YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY
Third of all: Not what the first and second things are.
Fourth of all: Never knew that the trainers could be so bada**. Wish they could in the games.

Aww, thank you!

And the next comic should be coming up this week, I want to finish it before I leave for *woopee* another vacation.

 

[aggiegwyn]

update

Oh god that one ended up being huge.

 

[aggiegwyn]

Well, long story made short my aunt saved over my file on the game, so the question is...is it really over?