Odd-Dish: A comic with oddish

[kinglerking]

Okay this is my first attempt at making an internet comic so it's a little crummy, the whole thing was done on paint since I don't have Photoshop/Paintshop Pro on my computer yet.
Anyway the comics are basically about two weird colored oddishes on crazy 4-pannel adventures so enjoy

Chapter 1: Creepy Place 3000

Mail http://img179.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic18tr.png
The Will http://img14.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic25wl.png
Bad Vibes http://img279.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic31wc.png
Running http://img206.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic47rg.png

Chapter 2: A watery war!

Beach Party http://img227.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic57ng.png
War http://img451.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic63ye.png


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[Carpetted!]

*Eyes burn*
The paint colors are BAD. Don't use the defaults. The oddish brothers are reading the envelope before it was opened. You draw good, though. The names are corny though >_>

 

[kinglerking]

1. good point about the colors and envelope I'll be sure to change the colors next time
2. the names are supposed to be corny

 

[Torchic23]

I can't read the text.It's almost like it's cut off.

 

[kinglerking]

I don't see anything wrong with the text
ps May I remind you It's done on PAINT!

 

[kinglerking]

here is a new ep I've finally been able to upload, (it features a badly drawn Scizor)

Bad Vibes http://img279.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic31wc.png

 

[Aqua_Charlie]

Yes, i agree with Kinglerclaw, the mixes are good!

 

[P-Man]

I like this. I don't know why tho XD

 

[blueguy]

This is actually pretty well done, but your first comic totally stole from Stewie Griffin: The Untold Story. I believe it was the bit with the Diabetes commercial. Anyways... there are a few grammatical errors I see...

 

[Blueray]

Well...
you ripped off family guy in the first episode... not that it's bad... just for a first episode I wouldn't do that. I did that once. It wasn't too smart.
The drwing/sprite thingers for oddish aren't too good. But I think this comic would be much better if you'd shade the characters. Then youd be going good. I'll keep an eye on this to see if you improve.

P.S. Please don't blame paint.... Paint is the best program possible for making comics in my opinion.

 

[Ilex]

Attention: Oddish nerd coming through!

Anyway, I must state what's wrong with the actual Oddish's. Oddish has 5 leaves, not 3. Oddish's body has a greater width than hieght, in your comic, they're taller then they are wide. The leaves are also supposed to be larger than the body, not vice-versa. Also note that Oddish's large leaf curls back at the top, and that thier mouths are small.

Default paint colors make me weep. Default paint colors on Oddish make me commit suicide. And May I ask where the shading is? It's okay for most of the characters to be unshaded but the main ones should stand out.

 

[Carpetted!]

Only you would know all that, Ilex...

 

[May's brother]

I quite like this comic. it kinda has a good plot, and i like the idea of recolouring those oddishes.

I do see some grammer errors though. so thats what i think you need to improve on.

 

[kinglerking]

Ilex you weren't kidding when you said 'Oddish Nerd coming through!
(ps) Good point about grammar you lot! I will fix that

 

[kinglerking]

here is the final comic in chapter 1 (it was a short chapter I know but it's a pilot after all)

Running http://img206.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic47rg.png

 

[P-Man]

Yuck. Personnaly I thought it was better before.

 

[grim reaper]

i like this comic cant wait to see the next episode!

 

[May's brother]

With the edits the characters look much better.

Can't wait for the next eppie!

 

[kinglerking]

you wanted a new epi you got one here's the start of...
chapter 2: A watery war!

Beach Party! http://img227.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic57ng.png

 

[grim reaper]

lets see....................good......in the title the oddishes are missing a leg but everything else is fine