Oliver Is Back (again)

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Remember me, the sucky spriter?: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=109496

Well, I think I'm a little better:

- Bulbasaur Revamp

- Spinarak Revamp

- Wooper+Magnemite

- Random Blue Jar

- Phanpy Avatar

Squirtle disguised as Torkoal with rain drops

- Morty Revamp( morty's brother ) My first trainer, but tis also my worst

- Sprite Button in sig​

Please vote on the poll and post with C & C


P.S. More coming soon

 

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Oh no!! I'm so sorry everyone, my computer got frozen and I kept pressing the post button. Well, I deleted the other threads, so can you please re-post your comments Sorry again (esspecially sorry to the mods)

Oliver

 

[OmegaDragon]

Its ok if your computer froze.
As I said in the other thread, the spinerak has the light coming from two different places. Also, the bulbas mouth is a little too round, there should be a small beak at the end, like in the old version. Other then that, great job. =D

 

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Thanks

Comments: Yeah, I noticed that, I might change it later. I knew there was something wrong with the mouth on Bulbasaur, I will work on that first. Yay, I'm cool


EDIT - ICKYVICKY, why is it so weird

 

[OmegaDragon]

ICKYVICKY, good job at spamming.
I just noticed the wooper/magnemite, so Ill crit that. Its good, but I would suggest adding more magnemite to it, such as the screws. And whats that thing at the bottom of its head?

 

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Yeah, I was thinking about that. I'll do that when I do the bulbasuar, maybe after I eat dinner. The white thing on the bottom is supposed to be a screw, but its too light. I'll fix that also

-Oliver

 

[Rayquaza777]

I dont know, but it looks like a blimp.... The spinarak's shading looks bad because the light is coming from two spaces. Thats about it.

 

[-Espacio-]

Thanks Here is an over-dithered sprite:

Some Blue Jar thing

C + C?

 

[spareux]

The Spinarak has two light sources. =/

There's also a small gap in the outlining of Bulbasaur's back-seed thing (It's one of the internal lines). Other than that, I'd say you've improved. =)

The jar has pretty colours.

 

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Yeah, I really have to fix that

Whoops, I have to fix that also

Pretty, yippie Maybe I should make it into some kind of Fakemon thing. Thanks for saying I improved

 

[miken park]

On the spinarak, You've left some thick outlines(ie, two pixels wide), Espcially on the back.

 

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Really? O NOES!! I'll fix that soon. Here is a Phanpy avatar I just made:

Is it good?

-Oliver

 

[miken park]

It's ok, but the light source is stuffed. The moon(the light source) is in the background right and your light source is top left. o.o

 

[HWarrior]

I quite like the revamps myself.

 

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Thanks for the crit, it really helps. Also, thanks halowarrioe v1, I like them also

Here is a revamped fake:

Its original name was Roist, but I changed it to Bubblet. Here is it all by itself:

How is the shading?

 

[OmegaDragon]

Wow, the difference is amazing on the new one 0_o. The shading is great, and matches the design of the fakemon well. the only flaw I can see at the moment is that the top bubble looks a little squashed, but other thewn that, excellent job!
Edit-Also, the color is too dark in the bottom left corner of the sprite, try to make it lighter.

 

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Yippie, I knew someone would like it Yeah, i worked on the shading for a while. Little squashed, I'll fix that, and I'll fix the outlining also. Thanks for the help

 

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No Replies? Happy Thanksgiving everyone

And this post is NOT spam, ha! J/K, but seriously, its not:

And last, but not least:

My first trainer sprite in a while, and it sucks How can I make it better?​

 

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O no, my thread tis dead!! Here is a batch of sprites to bring it back to life:

- Quick revamp of old fake

Last one: http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/8868/greencharmandernf7.png (its what I'm going to work on next)

C + C please​

~*Oliver*~

 

[TiagoGR]

Here is a little tip: do a darker outline.