Oliver is Back, Go Tell Your Friends!

[-Espacio-]

Guess what? I'm back with some new sprites!

Red/Blue (i think) Oddish Revamp

Silver Horsea Revamp

One of my old fakes, Talik, redone

My first mix, Ho-Ohgon, redone

Comment and Crit please ​

 

[~Kitty~]

Yup it's my time to crit, lets see...

Oddish is good, looks like the new sprite a lil

Horsea looks lineless but good

Talik is good.. i suggest a evolution there!

*Vannah*

 

[-Espacio-]

Cool, thanks a lot for the crit ~Kitty~. Yeah, I have to work on the outline on Horsea a bit. Sweet, I'll work on the evolution. Also, it's based on the Aron line, so I might make the evo have arms and legs this time

~*Oliver*~

 

[Kinginsoar]

Talik is alright if it's supposed to be pillow-shaded. I personally like Oddish the best. On Horsea's head shading, the lightest shade should be circular instead of trailing off the head as a half-circle. Otherwise, they are all awesome.

 

[Aptenodytes]

Horsea is shaded too flat, and Oddish has too many black outlines. The third one however, looks pretty good even though it appears pillow shaded. Keep up the good work.

 

[-Espacio-]

Thanks both of you And yes, Talik is supposed to be pillow shaded. I could really shade it right. Your right, I'll work on Horsea's shading soon. And thanks for the comment on oddish Hazy. And yeah, I'll work on Oddish Bonemerang. Thanks again for the very good crit

~*Oliver*~

 

[The Scizor Master]

the talik one is too much like aron

 

[-Espacio-]

Too much, well it is based off Aron. I don't think it looks that much like it. I'm working on the evo now

~*Oliver*~

 

[Captain Murkrow]

Talik looks like an Aron after being digested and pooped out. seriously, try to make your fakemon have limbs and look less blocky.

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

Oddish's foot has a thick outline. Horsea could use some dark shading on the curl. You should make more creative fakes, as opposed to blobs.

 

[-Espacio-]

Well, I've been reading a lot fakemon tuts. So my next sprite/fakemon will be very compicated(hopefully). Wish me luck everyone and thanks for the wonderful crit

~*Oliver*~

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

It doesn't have to be complicated, just not a blob.

 

[-Espacio-]

Thanks, I was thinking about that. Also, it's going to be Water/???? type. I'm working on the outline now.

~*Oliver*~

 

[Team Elecwater]

not bad but not good cant think of anything really constructive to say. im leaning on the good side though

 

[-Espacio-]

Well, that's good to hear. I'm glad you like them I worked on the outline of one of my first mixes that I re-sprited:

~*Oliver*~

 

[Aptenodytes]

That's a pretty decent mix in my opinion. However, the middle looks strange, but I can't quite see what's wrong with it yet

 

[-Espacio-]

Thanks for the complement Yeah, i think it might be the outline or shading. I'll look into it later. I'm almost done with a pixel over.

~*Oliver*~

 

[spareux]

I always remember that Flygon/Ho-Oh mix. It's pretty good.

Glad to see you're back. Oh, and Horsea could use come more black outlining.

 

[zipzap713]

Good on all of 'em

 

[Light Venusaur]

Very nice!
May I use that Oddish if someone asks for it in my shop....plz?
Thank you if I can.