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Omg i have another sprite thread!!!

pika3

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Yay!

Thanks!
:p I'm sure yours will be fine. What charaters are you doing? (Personally I love Caterpie.)
Oops! Thanks for letting me know, I fixed it.
 
Time I gave others crit for once x3

Your splices/edits seem to be very good, although on the Sinnoh starters fusion, it isn't quite obvious what Turtig is fused with. Maybe adding Chimchars tail, but 3-way fusions are hard, so its aright. the rest seem very natural and you can tell easily what both pokemon are.

Your fakemon need a bit of work. Treed is positioned awkwardly; most pokemon sprites are facing to the left, and you would see the back legs if it was stood like that. And the chin would cause a shadow, so maybe look at the shading a bit.
Again, shading issues on Pember. The fire would cause a little highlight, and the shades you chose are very close together, so the shading isn't quite obvious. Maybe mix you own colours if you haven't already to get a slightly darker colour, or maybe take them of Mightyena?
Tanglesprout is well designed, and very cute <3

Can't say much on the pallets and maps, as I know nothing about them, but meh.

You revamps are very good too. You make them look very up-to-date and clean, although the way you shade it and the softer shades make it look slightly RSE-e. Maybe try resizing them now? (Although I have no idea how...)

My fav WSC entries are Week 46 and 59. Again, on the Typhlosion, the cloud thuing would cause a shadow on his back, but otherwise I really like them x3

Really good work here, and you seem to be improving. Keep it up x3
 
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pika3

Snowball attack, go!
-looks surprised-

Suicune? Really? Your crit'ing? YAY!!!

Now to the serious stuff....

Thank you! I know, no one is just gonna look at that and say: "Hey look! Pika3 fused Turtwig, Chimchar, and Piplup!" He was just done quickly for Kelecoshrew's contest.

I know my fakemon's sprites(and names)(With the exception of Tanprout....I think he's good) aren't good, but remember they're some of my early works and desperately need redone. I would like to say a few things though: 1. Treed has 2 legs so no matter how he stands you won't see 2 more legs, lol. 2. I don't normally make my own colors, I will remember Mightyena for when Pember is re-sprited.

:D

Thank you! What do you mean softer shades? I use the colors from the D/P/Pt or HG/SS sprites. I don't like resizing them, I like how they look from their G/S/C sprites. (FYI it would be 'RSE-y' not 'RSE-e'....not that it matters, I know what you meant.)

Thanks! I don't agree with your favorites though, as my favorites are WSC 59 and WSC 60. I agree I should have changed the shading some....I wonder why I didn't do that....

Thank you very much for crit'ing my sprites! And I think I've gotten better too. (If anyone thinks that sounds like I'm bragging(which I'm not), go check out 'Pika3's Dunsparce Fusion Thread'.....if you don't agree with me after that, you must not be able to see the sprites! LOL)

Oh! Hey! It's NEW STUFF!!!

WSC 60:
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It's Violet and Dash from 'The Incredibles'. I think I might have a pretty good chance of getting to the Champion Poll this week, and if I'm lucky I might be able to win it! I'd really love if that happened!

I'm working on Helen and Bob(Elasti-Girl and Mr.Incredible) too. I hope they turn out as good as Violet and Dash!

Here's individual sprites of Violet and Dash:
violetparr4675117083iaz.gif
dashparr7662162483iaza.gif


Here's two edited Cool Trainer Female's from HG/SS:
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newhgsscooltrainer29444.gif


I'm problely not gonna get this posted today in the first post, but I'll get it up there tommorrow or the day after, if I don't get it there tonight.
 

pika3

Snowball attack, go!
I got the trainers in the first post!

NEW REVAMP:
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Obviously it's Spearow. I don't think it's as good as most of my others...eh it's not bad.
 

pika3

Snowball attack, go!
WOULD SOMEONE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST IN MY THREAD WHO ISN'T ME?!?!?!

Anywho...I have:

NEW STUFF:
persiandelcattyfusion34.gif

It's a fusion of Persian and Delcatty. Everything added is 100% scratch. There's 2 version, the only difference beign which pokemon I took the colors from. The first version has delcatty's colors,a nd the second version has Persian's colors.
 

Aquakip

Mud in my veins
Wow. You've gotten very good over the past year or so. I'm surprised.

I thought it was a basic fusion, but when i read scratch, I was like: WUT!?!? Of course the base isn't scratched, I knew that. :)

The only thing I would possibly change would be the colors on the second one, maybe make your own shade of red? It just contrasts too much and makes my eyes hurt. But great job on this one.

Now...let's see. Another sprite.

The Spearow I guess.

You did most of steps right when revamping. Most. You reshaded, recoloured, and redid the outline(colour) a bit too. But, you forgot one thing, that kind of bothers me when it's forgotten. You forgot to change the body proportions. That sprite looks nothing like the modern Spearow. It should. So, take your newly developed scratching skills and scratch some. Leave the pose the way it is, just scratch some of the parts e.g. wings, feet and neck line. It will make it look much better, trust me on this.

The Violet and Dash now.

Wow. Great cosplays(although I'm pretty sure that wasn't the medium, but seeing as most people took it that way, it was allowed.)

Some small things I noticed though. On Violet: Near the top of her thigh, there is an awkward outline. It's kind of rugged in a way. I'm pretty sure it was the part where teh cool trainer's shirt started. if you could smoothen that out, I would feel much better about the sprite. Also, the arm (without pokeball) seems a bit jumbled. Try not to stick to the EXACT outline of the original sprite. Possibly bring the arm out a pixel and change the back of the arm's outline to black instead of red, it would define it better.

On Dash: The hair is REALLY bothering me. Can you PLEASE make your own color for the darkest yellow? It would be SO much better. Actually, take the colors from the guitarist. His hair is blonde and would go well with the sprite. Maybe make his head bigger too(cause it is in the movie) lol. Just kidding. Um, but the yellow on the shirt is very bothering, maybe cut down on it near the belt line, take away a few pixels or so?

I hope I'm making sense. I tend to not word my critiques right. :/

For the Blastoise cosplays. Yay. Bowser is ALMOST perfect. Some little things that would make it 100% perfect. Edit the knee outline closest to us) and make it smoother. Possibly change the outline color for the spikes, it seems to be very light. And try to use no dithering on the hair.

Now for Bubbles. Oh my. Oh oh my. Those feet are really annoying. That's the only thing I didn't like about your entry, and the fact that bubbles' skin tone was too dark. you should've taken a trainer's skin tone and shades Bubbles. The feet, though, they need some work. You should've made them look more like boots, and possibly slimmed them down a bit as they got closer to the ground. Edit the shading on the boots. Make them congruent with the shading on the legs.

And now I'm done with you. :)
 

pika3

Snowball attack, go!
First off:
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR POSTING!!! I MISS GETTING POSTS!!

Now in bold I shall comment on your comment :p

Wow. You've gotten very good over the past year or so. I'm surprised.

Thank you very much! I think it's beacause I've felt more creative and less lazy lately :p Before it was like: 'I could scratch that -insert random piece of random pokemon- or I could just stick it on there and reshade it alittle and it would look bad....', and now I'm really trying my hardest. :)

I thought it was a basic fusion, but when i read scratch, I was like: WUT!?!? Of course the base isn't scratched, I knew that. :)

The only thing I would possibly change would be the colors on the second one, maybe make your own shade of red? It just contrasts too much and makes my eyes hurt. But great job on this one.

:D Thanks! LOL, I hoped so!

I agree. I just used that one cause I liked Persian's body color better than Delcatty's....why I didn't just use his color and the purple, I can't tell you cause I'm really not sure, lol. I did actually make the darkest and lightest red colors.


Now...let's see. Another sprite.

The Spearow I guess.

You did most of steps right when revamping. Most. You reshaded, recoloured, and redid the outline(colour) a bit too. But, you forgot one thing, that kind of bothers me when it's forgotten. You forgot to change the body proportions. That sprite looks nothing like the modern Spearow. It should. So, take your newly developed scratching skills and scratch some. Leave the pose the way it is, just scratch some of the parts e.g. wings, feet and neck line. It will make it look much better, trust me on this.

I know, I was going to change him, but he was just a quick 'filler' for between bigger things. I know what you want me to do to the wings and feet, but what should I do to the neck?

The Violet and Dash now.

Wow. Great cosplays(although I'm pretty sure that wasn't the medium, but seeing as most people took it that way, it was allowed.)

I thought we were supposed to do cosplays...

Some small things I noticed though. On Violet: Near the top of her thigh, there is an awkward outline. It's kind of rugged in a way. I'm pretty sure it was the part where teh cool trainer's shirt started. if you could smoothen that out, I would feel much better about the sprite. Also, the arm (without pokeball) seems a bit jumbled. Try not to stick to the EXACT outline of the original sprite. Possibly bring the arm out a pixel and change the back of the arm's outline to black instead of red, it would define it better.

ok I see what you mean, I'll finish that when I finish the rest of the family. What exactly do you mean about the outline on the arm?

I'll finish commenting later, g2g, thanks for posting!
 
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pika3

Snowball attack, go!
On Dash: The hair is REALLY bothering me. Can you PLEASE make your own color for the darkest yellow? It would be SO much better. Actually, take the colors from the guitarist. His hair is blonde and would go well with the sprite. Maybe make his head bigger too(cause it is in the movie) lol. Just kidding. Um, but the yellow on the shirt is very bothering, maybe cut down on it near the belt line, take away a few pixels or so?

Ok when I finsih the family I'll change the colors. That's the problem with the yellow/orange belt thing. His is only 2 or 3 pixels tall(I'm pretty sure it's only 2), so if I cut it down you won't see it at all. I'll try it though and see how it looks.

I hope I'm making sense. I tend to not word my critiques right. :/

For the most part I understand what you mean. :D

For the Blastoise cosplays. Yay. Bowser is ALMOST perfect. Some little things that would make it 100% perfect. Edit the knee outline closest to us) and make it smoother. Possibly change the outline color for the spikes, it seems to be very light. And try to use no dithering on the hair.

Thank you! I see what you mean on the knee...if I go back and edit him later(possiblely I could make a Peach, Mario, and/or Toad sprite to go with it :) ) I will fix it. What do you mean about the outline color? Well I didn't want it to be too dark, plus the black bands use some very similar and some of the same colors so if I darken it too much the outline will blend in completely.

Now for Bubbles. Oh my. Oh oh my. Those feet are really annoying. That's the only thing I didn't like about your entry, and the fact that bubbles' skin tone was too dark. you should've taken a trainer's skin tone and shades Bubbles. The feet, though, they need some work. You should've made them look more like boots, and possibly slimmed them down a bit as they got closer to the ground. Edit the shading on the boots. Make them congruent with the shading on the legs.

I completely agree with you. Her legs got really screwed up. Doh! *smacks forehead with palm* Why didn't I think of that for the skin?! LOL, I don't think I'll be fixing it though. I think the attemped truely failed because, as my friend Suicune lover said that I was: 'attempting to fuse an overweight turtle with water cannons with a small little girl.' LOL, I was thinkign about tryign to make the PPG as trainer sprites, I'm sure it would look better!

And now I'm done with you. :)

Thanks for crit'ing my sprites! Please come back regularly!

P.S. Currently I'm working on a few fakemon, they are currently my priority project, only beign bumped for WSC 61(If that ever goes up...)
 

Darksteelix900

torterra master
sorry :)
oh i have a question, can we use those coulor palates?
 

pika3

Snowball attack, go!
sorry :)
oh i have a question, can we use those coulor palates?

Ok...what are you sorry for?

Maybe. Which one and what for? Also I want credit.

Please don't spam. If you want to reply to this in this thread, also crit some sprites, if your not going to crit anything, please PM or VM me. Thanks and goodbye!
 

pika3

Snowball attack, go!
*UPDATE*

WSC 62:
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Second version of WSC 62:
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They are Torterra's dressing up for the holidays.
 
Man, you've got some serious talent! I love to see your region map when its finished (unless it is finished :S)
so jelous :) & i might even try making own region :D

just a question does the cave in the first town connect to the cave in the right town???

all in all i'm well impressed :D
keep up the great work

,Issaaacc
 

pika3

Snowball attack, go!
Hello Issaaacc! I hope you come back often :D

Thank you, I really love my maps too. Someone is observant! The cave that starts in Cozi Town goes through Stonepass Village(there's an entrance there too), but it goes farther than that. It's gonna lead to something(like a secret town, a town with a gym, a place like the battle tower, the elite 4, or somethign special(like a ledgendary pokemon)), but I'm not sure what yet.

Thanks for commenting!
 
Comment time

I love how you did your winter Torterra! The red one looks more festive, but there still seems something off about it. Or maybe it's just me.

The scratched snow looks very good and realistic, but the presents under the tree are minuscule. I barley noticed them until now. Maybe make them a bit bigger, or more noticeable.

That's all for now.
 

pika3

Snowball attack, go!
Comment time

I love how you did your winter Torterra! The red one looks more festive, but there still seems something off about it. Or maybe it's just me.

The scratched snow looks very good and realistic, but the presents under the tree are minuscule. I barley noticed them until now. Maybe make them a bit bigger, or more noticeable.

That's all for now.

Thanks! I know, I couldn't decide between them.

Thanks it was mostly a change to the shading so it looked like it was piled up, instead of flat. Well if I make the presents bigger they look ginormus....I think if I had used brighter colors they would have been fine.

Ok I know I haven't posted anythign in awhile but I'm working on a fakemon. So far I don't think the sprite looks great but I'm gonna do some work to it and hopefully it will be fine :D
 

Serris

Specialist Operator
Some of your fusions are good. The Persian/Delcatty ones might need work as their heads don't sit too right. And what I mean by that is the ears on the Persian. The Torterra is quite funny. You might want to repose Treed. He looks too... still. I understand he's a tree, but he still looks stuck and unable to move. Pember's head is too big compared to the rest of the body. And I'd prefer it be called Tansprout. That name flows easier. And I also think the sprite for him is way too small, although it's a good idea. I also like the palettes. Keep them coming.
 

pika3

Snowball attack, go!
Some of your fusions are good. The Persian/Delcatty ones might need work as their heads don't sit too right. And what I mean by that is the ears on the Persian. The Torterra is quite funny. You might want to repose Treed. He looks too... still. I understand he's a tree, but he still looks stuck and unable to move. Pember's head is too big compared to the rest of the body. And I'd prefer it be called Tansprout. That name flows easier. And I also think the sprite for him is way too small, although it's a good idea. I also like the palettes. Keep them coming.

Hm, I don't see what you mean....could you try maybe explaining it alittle more?

Thanks, I like him too :)

I know Treed needs a new sprite(and if anyone can think of a better name please let me know!), it's on my list of things to do soon. :)

Pember also needs a new sprite, possibly more than Treed does! I'll put it on my to-do list.

I like that name better, I thought that's what I had gone with, lol. I don't understand why everyone thinks he's too small. HE IS A BABY POKEMON. He's already bigger than all the other baby pokemon sprites(though Pichu may be taller cause of his big ears), and if I make him bigger he'll be almost the same size as Tangela, and I do not want him to be that big. Thanks, I thought it was a good idea too :)

Thanks, I haven't made a new pallette in awhile, maybe I'll make a special one...?


NEW STUFF/UPDATES:
Violet:
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Helen/Elastigirl:
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Violet/Dash Team-Up:
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Ok I fixed Violet's leg where Aquakip had pointed out. I think it looks better now :)
I fixed/posted the Violet/Dash Team-Up.
I made Helen/Elastigirl!!! I think she looks really good. Her hair is 100% scratch(even the colors!!), and her 'bendy' arm is all scratch except for the hand. :D

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(m/f)
Name: Calffy (Corruption of Calf)
Foot-Print:
calffysfootprint9528456.gif

Type: Normal
Ability: Cute Charm/Run Away
Stats: Hp 45, At 35, Df 45, SpAt 20, SpDf 30, Spd 50
Egg Group: N/A
Color: Brown
Gender Ratio(m/f): 50%/50%
Species: Calf Pokemon
Dex Entry1: CALFFY are gentle, loving pokemon. Many People keep CALFFY as pets becaus ethey are cute and people-friendly.
Dex Entry2: CALFFY prefer to run from battle, but can unlease strong HORN ATTACKS to defend themselves.
LVL-Up Moves:
1. Tackle
1. Tail Whip
4. Sand-Attack
6. Horn Attack
10. Charm
12. Stomp
16. Milk-Drink
18. Moo*
22. Double-Kick
24. Detect
Egg Moves: Headbutt. Helping-Hand, Present, Heal-Bell, Snore, Mud-Slap, Quick Attack, Me First, Faint Attack, Mud Bomb, Assit, Follow Me, Baton Pass, Amnesia, Covet, Agility, Wish, Yawn, Feint, Reversal, Slam, Counter, Recover
TMs/HMs: 03, 06, 10, 11, 13, 17, 18, 21, 23, 27, 30, 32, 34, 37, 39, 42, 43, 58, 73, 82, 83, 90, HM6
Evolutions: Calffy--lvl up w/Moo*(if boy/if girl)-->Tarous/Miltank​

Here's the fakemon pre-vo I've been workign on. I think it turned out well, though the eyes and nose could probly use alittle work. 100% scratch, most of the colors are actually from Miltank, though I made some of them. I put a ton of work into making all the info about him, hope you guys like it! (Anyone notice the heart shape in is footprint?)

Moo is a new move and with it a new section!

Name: Moo
Type: Status
Damage: ---
Accuracy: ---
PP: 20
Effect: lowers SpDf, raises At and SpAt
Description: The user moo's loudly.
 
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Serris

Specialist Operator
Hm, I don't see what you mean....could you try maybe explaining it alittle more?

Thanks, I like him too :)

I know Treed needs a new sprite(and if anyone can think of a better name please let me know!), it's on my list of things to do soon. :)

Pember also needs a new sprite, possibly more than Treed does! I'll put it on my to-do list.

I like that name better, I thought that's what I had gone with, lol. I don't understand why everyone thinks he's too small. HE IS A BABY POKEMON. He's already bigger than all the other baby pokemon sprites(though Pichu may be taller cause of his big ears), and if I make him bigger he'll be almost the same size as Tangela, and I do not want him to be that big. Thanks, I thought it was a good idea too :)

Thanks, I haven't made a new pallette in awhile, maybe I'll make a special one...?
I'm not sure what I was trying to say, but the ears look like they don't sit well on the head.

Try one of Treed sitting down, and Pember standing up and hunching. That may work.

I understand, but It looks like, because of the size of his body, that he's smaller than a Cleffa sprite. And I'm not sure how he compares to Tyrogue. But it's a great sprite otherwise.

You could make Crystal pokemon paletees, much like the Crystal Onix from the anime. Or even Shadow pokemon palettes. I have my own for that, but I've seen other people use different colours, so who knows, you could do the same.
 

pika3

Snowball attack, go!
I'm not sure what I was trying to say, but the ears look like they don't sit well on the head.

Ok see that, to me, is mor specific and easier to understand. While I still don't really see what you mean, I think it's caus ethe ears are so much bigger than the head, and it's not as smooth of a tansition as on Delcatty's head.

Try one of Treed sitting down, and Pember standing up and hunching. That may work.

Ok maybe I will try Treed sitting down :) However the idea for Pember won't work. He's not supposed to be able to stand up on his back legs, his evos will be able to though.

I understand, but It looks like, because of the size of his body, that he's smaller than a Cleffa sprite. And I'm not sure how he compares to Tyrogue. But it's a great sprite otherwise.

Oh I forgot about Tyrouge he might be taller....I think the actual body of Tansprout is bigger than Cleffa's sprite XD I'm guessing maybe it's cause the vines make the body look smaller, but without making it's body bigger, I don't know how to fix that.

You could make Crystal pokemon paletees, much like the Crystal Onix from the anime. Or even Shadow pokemon palettes. I have my own for that, but I've seen other people use different colours, so who knows, you could do the same.

Maybe....not sure how to shade a pokemon in the crystal style though...

Comments in bold.

Hey can some people crit my new stuff? (Calffy's sprite and stats and Helen Parr) I'd like to hear what peopel think of them :)
 

Ash-kid

Ash-kid
Torterra and Magcargo's sprites are the best, I think.

All the rest are fine, I love how you changes Wobbuffet's collor.
 
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