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OMG!! The Sun is falling!! ahhhh!!!

A

Alfonc

D/P is almost here!!
My team:


Starmie@Bright Powder
Modest nature
Trait:Natural Care
Ev's 252 Sp.Attack/Speed,6 HP

Surf
Psychic
Thunderbolt
Ice Beam


Salamence@Choice Band
Adamant nature
Ev's 252 Attack/Speed,6 HP

Aerial Ace
Brick Break
Earthquake
Double-Edge


Metagross@Lum Berry
Adamant nature
Ev'a 252 Attack,162 Sp.Defense,90 Speed

Meteor Mash
Earthquake
Brick Break
Shadow Ball


Heracross@Lum Berry
Hasty nature(I know,Jolly would have been better)
Ev's 252 Attack/Speed,6 Sp.Defense

Megahorn
Brick Break
Earthquake
Rock Slide


Dragonite@Lum Berry
Mild nature
Ev's 252 Sp.Attack/Speed,6 HP

Dragon Claw
Ice Beam
Dragon Dance
Earthquake


Slaking@Choice Band
Adamant nature
Ev's 252 Attack/Speed,6 HP

Return
Earthquake
Shadow Ball
Aerial Ace


Looks okay?
 
M

metjulio

Guest
5 out of 6 pokemon have EQ... not that EQ is bad... just what if you're stuck with a flying or levitate pkmn after starmie is dead??? i would probably change dragonite to something other than a physical sweeper, but other than that it looks good
 
G

Gamesfreak13562

Guest
How did u get so many Earthquakes...0_o

Anyways. I say good.
 
K

Kalavinka

Well-Known Member
Shiny Mewtwo said:
Starmie@Bright Powder
Timid nature
Trait:Natural Care
Ev's 252 Sp. Atk/variations from here
Surf
Recover
Thunderbolt/Rapid Spin
Ice Beam/Rapid Spin


Salamence@Choice Band
Adamant nature
Ev's Salamence@Choice Band
Adamant nature
Ev's 252 Attack/Speed,6 HP

HP Fly
Rock Slide
Earthquake
Fire Blast

Aerial Ace
Brick Break
Earthquake
Double-Edge


Metagross@Choice Band
Adamant nature
Ev's Ask someone else

Meteor Mash
Earthquake
Explosion
roulette of physical moves/Thunderpunch for Skarm


Heracross@Choice Band
Adamant/Jolly
Ev's 252 Atk/don't know rest of spread

Megahorn
Focus Punch
Rock Slide
Brick Break

Hera doesn't need EQ, he can wipe through a team w/o it.

Dragonite@Leftovers
Mild nature
Ev's Ask someone else

Thunderbolt
Ice Beam
Substitute
Focus Punch

or:

HP Flying
Thunder/Thunderbolt
Dragon Dance
Earthquake

Haven't used Dragonite, can't really help.

Slaking@Choice Band
Adamant nature
Ev's 252 Attack/Speed,6 HP

Return
Earthquake
Shadow Ball
Focus Punch
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File > export to text plz

Smogon plz

~Thunderstar ;121;;373;
 
A

aipomkong

prophecy fulfilled
Shiny Mewtwo said:
My team:


Starmie@Bright Powder
Modest nature
Trait:Natural Care
Ev's 252 Sp.Attack/Speed,6 HP

Surf
Psychic
Thunderbolt
Ice Beam

Brightpowder is gay, leftovers is so much better
Recover over Psychic
Psychic may get STAB, but you gain no advantage that Beam/Bolt/Surf won't get you, except for weezing, which isn't going to stay in and let you psychic it
also timid, and it doesn't need max speed

Salamence@Choice Band
Adamant nature
Ev's 252 Attack/Speed,6 HP

Aerial Ace
Brick Break
Earthquake
Double-Edge

hp flying > aerial ace
rock slide > brick break
fire blast >>>>> double-edge

leave CB D-E to Aerodactyl

Metagross@Lum Berry
Adamant nature
Ev'a 252 Attack,162 Sp.Defense,90 Speed

Meteor Mash
Earthquake
Brick Break
Shadow Ball

@ leftovers

STAB MM power = 150
SE Brick Break = 150 power

conclusion, BB is a waste ov a moveslot

Explosion/Agility/EQ/MM - enough evs for, 336 hp / 360 atk / 340 def / 200 speed / rest in sdef

Heracross@Lum Berry
Hasty nature(I know,Jolly would have been better)
Ev's 252 Attack/Speed,6 Sp.Defense

Megahorn
Brick Break
Earthquake
Rock Slide

Adamant nature @ choice band
Megahorn / focus punch / rock slide / brick break

EQ on hera is lol and redundant

Dragonite@Lum Berry
Mild nature
Ev's 252 Sp.Attack/Speed,6 HP

Dragon Claw
Ice Beam
Dragon Dance
Earthquake

lol this does nothing for your team, and just helps give you a huge ice weak

Slaking@Choice Band
Adamant nature
Ev's 252 Attack/Speed,6 HP

Return
Earthquake
Shadow Ball
Aerial Ace

Focus Punch > AA

Stab return = 153
SE AA = 120
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any kind of physcial wall will just laugh at this team, all they need to do is attack starmie on the switch until it dies, and then you can't touch it.

this team also has NO staying power and you can't switch into metagross at all, let alone what heracross does to this team
 
B

Boba Fett675

Pen15
Shiny Mewtwo said:
My team:


Starmie@Bright Powder
Modest nature
Trait:Natural Care
Ev's 252 Sp.Attack/Speed,6 HP

Surf
Psychic
Thunderbolt
Ice Beam
This one is ok.

Salamence@Choice Band
Adamant nature
Ev's 252 Attack/Speed,6 HP

Aerial Ace
Brick Break
Earthquake
Double-Edge
Take out Double-Edge for Flamethrower.

Metagross@Lum Berry
Adamant nature
Ev'a 252 Attack,162 Sp.Defense,90 Speed

Meteor Mash
Earthquake
Brick Break
Shadow Ball
I don't know about this one. I never bothered to train one.

Heracross@Lum Berry
Hasty nature(I know,Jolly would have been better)
Ev's 252 Attack/Speed,6 Sp.Defense

Megahorn
Brick Break
Earthquake
Rock Slide
never trained one but I am trying to catch one.

Dragonite@Lum Berry
Mild nature
Ev's 252 Sp.Attack/Speed,6 HP

Dragon Claw
Ice Beam
Dragon Dance
Earthquake
Take out Dragon Claw for Dragonbreath.

Slaking@Choice Band
Adamant nature
Ev's 252 Attack/Speed,6 HP

Return
Earthquake
Shadow Ball
Aerial Ace
Never trained one.

Looks okay?
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That was what i think you should do with your team.
 
L

leafgreen386

no troll
This is competitive team rate? Wow the raters have really dropped in quality. W/e happened to this place?

Thunderstar and nooblet are the only two people here who I saw make an actual effort in HELPING the team. I guess I could throw Nine Thou in that list of names since Thunderstar had already posted.

Anyway, why don't I give my take on this?

Starmie@Leftovers
Timid nature
Trait:Natural Care
Ev's 252 Sp.Attack/Speed,6 HP

Surf
Recover
Thunderbolt
Ice Beam/Rapid Spin

You don't need psychic as previously mentioned, and you lack a rapid spinner, so spkes will hurt you, which is why I added RS in there.

Get another special attacker for this slot. Salamence can be cool, but when your only form of special damage is through starmie, it isn't a good thing.

Metagross@Lum Berry
Adamant nature
Ev'a 252 Attack,162 Sp.Defense,90 Speed

Meteor Mash
Earthquake
Agility
Explosion

I saw the lum berry and thought that this could be fun, especially because you already have a CBer. Fake a CB then late game Agility up and start attacking random junk. I hope you have at least 198 Spd, otherwise this might not be as effective. When you're about to die, explode in their face.

Heracross@Choice Band
Hasty nature(I know,Jolly would have been better)
Ev's 252 Attack/Speed,6 Sp.Defense

Megahorn
Brick Break
Sleep Talk
Rock Slide
Lum berry is lol on this thing. What happened to Guts? Sleep Talk is an old favorite of mine on this thing, since all your attacks get a boost from Guts while asleep, plus the CB boost.

Replace Dragonite with some form of physcial wall - preferably Skarm, but others work too.

You should replace Slaking with some form of special wall such as Regice, Snorlax, or Blissey. I'm personally not a big fan of blissey but meh.
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Um... yeah. WAY too much physical and little to no walls. Btw, is this an ingame team? You really should state that when posting.
 
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