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XD, What were you apologizing for? Crying's a good thing in this case; it means your writing is emotion-inducing and well-written. =)
Very nice; I felt really bad for Logan, and ESPECIALLY for Rikelec and Bulby. Poor things; their time with their trainer was so short and ended so suddenly...but I'm glad they died with their master, even if that sounsd mean. They can be with him in heaven. =)
Epilogue was interesting, but it seems like no one lived. Did this story take place so long ago? =P
Another thing...as of yet, replacing or repairing the spinal cord is impossible. Did you purposely have it there? I'm guessing you did, because the Pokémon world has proven to have better technology than ours, but...yeah. ^ ^;
Nice work, Bulba! =D
Very nice; I felt really bad for Logan, and ESPECIALLY for Rikelec and Bulby. Poor things; their time with their trainer was so short and ended so suddenly...but I'm glad they died with their master, even if that sounsd mean. They can be with him in heaven. =)
Epilogue was interesting, but it seems like no one lived. Did this story take place so long ago? =P
Another thing...as of yet, replacing or repairing the spinal cord is impossible. Did you purposely have it there? I'm guessing you did, because the Pokémon world has proven to have better technology than ours, but...yeah. ^ ^;
Nice work, Bulba! =D