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One of my very first sprites

Pokemoder

Dedicated
This was one of my very first sprites. It is kind of bad but....well i dunno. Post your reviews please.
I call it.........Minew!
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ellie

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Staff member
Admin
Is this serious?
Fix the shading so it doesn't look flat and shade the outlines. It's a good idea, but poorly executed.
 

ellie

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Staff member
Admin
Read the revamping tutorial and it will show you how to shade. There was already shading on the old sprite, so you shouldn't need to reshade the whole thing.
 

maxxa

~her last bounty~
umm i cant see the shading i cant see the spite its all blurred did you resize it?
 
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lightspeed

Guest
You should make the pic smaller, it's very blur. The shading is slightly better compared to the first. It's not that bad but could be improved.
 

Electabuzz

Normal Coordinator
Sorry, this is absolutely horrible. You really need to read the tutorials and follow them carefully. Here are some tips:
- NEVER resize the sprites in order to mix them. Instead, use the zoom buttom to focus in on details.
- Remember to reshade and reoutline to make the sprite flow.
- Also, you need to remember to give it some outline, just make sure it's not totally black.

Follow tips, and realize that this is not very good, but you can definetly grow. If you want to improve, however, you need to follow advice and not just listen to comments saying that it's perfect and nothing can be changed, because there's always something to improve on.
 
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