Uzamaki Hinata
Bye bye!
Sorry for not reviewing earlier! I guess I just got busy with school stuff. Anyways, I'm happy that you got more reviews for your fic, but, dammit, it deserves more lol!
Anyways, like always, your writing was awesome and they way that you played out the story was very cool too. lol at how Dawn was the **** of the sotry, making out with Drew and then Ash! I love how you made May not want to jump in to Drew's arms immediately after his confession and also at how she was stillkindabutnotasmuchassheshouldhavebeenhaditnotbeenforthefactthatshewasinlovewith him mad
And also, that was a great way to end it. I loved this fanfic very, very, very much! And I hope to see more things from you soon! btw, you wrote advanceshipping very good! *coughcoughMAYBETHENEXTFICCANBEADVANCESHIPPINGcoughcough*
whoopsie, ignore that please xDDD
yes, yes, and yes! The deleted scenes sound very funny and I'd love to read an alternate ending where Ash is not in pain *shotxD*
Anyways, like always, your writing was awesome and they way that you played out the story was very cool too. lol at how Dawn was the **** of the sotry, making out with Drew and then Ash! I love how you made May not want to jump in to Drew's arms immediately after his confession and also at how she was stillkindabutnotasmuchassheshouldhavebeenhaditnotbeenforthefactthatshewasinlovewith him mad
And also, that was a great way to end it. I loved this fanfic very, very, very much! And I hope to see more things from you soon! btw, you wrote advanceshipping very good! *coughcoughMAYBETHENEXTFICCANBEADVANCESHIPPINGcoughcough*
whoopsie, ignore that please xDDD
I have an alternate ending and deleted scenes for this fic! The alternate ending is what the Gala would've been like if Ash hadn't broken his ankle (seeing that was like a last minute idea). Things are pretty much more difficult for Drew.
And the deleted scenes are also mostly from the Gala, including some smexy Originshipping, a ****** off Paul, a drunken Caroline, and a crazed Solidad-obsessed Harley attempting to break into the Maples' Mansion...
Sounds like fun, no? If you're interested in reading, lemme know in a review and I'll put them up eventually!
Again, thanks for reading! See ya in another fic...
-The Renowned Obscurity
yes, yes, and yes! The deleted scenes sound very funny and I'd love to read an alternate ending where Ash is not in pain *shotxD*