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Operation: Celebi (Sequal to HHNF)

Ash_Junior

Irredeemable Nerd
All right...for those of you who have read Hell Hath no FUry, this is the sequel. Some of you, such as Purple_drake (*waves*) will probably be reading this because it has LANCE in it. And Agatha, Lorelei (one of my favorites), Karen (Dark Elite in G/S/C), Bruno, Steven (Steel dude), Sabrina, and others (yes, Jessie/James/Meowth, Giovanni, Butch/Cassidy will be in it too)...

please note that while some of the stuff in here is drawn from HHNF, most especially the final chapter(s), it CAN be read as a stand-alone, and, in fact, it's pretty good as a stand-alone.

plus, it will have created Pokes and created countries. I've got about 70 pages of stuff to draw from (76, but who's counting :p), and that's just the first third or so!

this will be BIG. And there are two sequels to it after this!

:D

without further ado...

Operation: Celebi


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Disclaimer: I do not own Pokemon. I do not own Janera. I did not make up Janera. Janera was created by Obsidian_Blade. Go read her fic Raven. It is REALLY good. The Wings of Council belong to an author named Topaz, on thepokemontower.com. I believe that everything else is mine.


Kanto—The Indigo League. To most trainers, the two terms are synonymous. Even in Johto, the Indigo League is looked up to because of one solitary thing, and, indeed, after their civil war, they patterned themselves AFTER Kanto. The Indigo League is the only league in the world to have the Elite Four, although there are many rip-offs and cheap imitations. Many other countries may have copies of the Elite Four, such as Johto, yet none match or even come close to the sheer power and prestige of the Elite Four of the Indigo League.

The Elite Four keep their positions by battling trainers, and, if they win, they retain their job. The Elite Four, which actually consists of five trainers, are all masters of their craft. The name is confusing because the Elite Four consists of a Champion and four Elites—Master trainers that have earned the right to be recognized as one of the most powerful in the country, and, often, the world. The champion is, to put it succinctly, the actual Elite of the Elite Four. The actual Elite Four are actually the Elite Second through the Elite Fifth of the Indigo League. If the Champion is defeated, then the new Champion has the choice of keeping the top thre of the Elite Four, and placing the deposed Champion as the Elite Second, or simply choosing their own Elite Four.

For Several Years, the membership of the Elite Four hasn’t changed. However, the positions of those within the Elite Four change regularly. Despite the internal shuffling, for years one Master Trainer has stood above the rest. He is the Dragon Pokemon Elite Master Trainer Lance. He has led the Elite Four, and, because of his position, the Indigo League fairly and honorably for ten stainless years.

The rest of the Elite Four consists of Agatha, a n aging master trainer majoring in Ghost and Poison types; Bruno, the masculine master of Fighting and Rock types; Lorelei, the young master of Ice types; and Karen, a master of Dark Types. While people come close to defeating the Elite Four all the time, Lance stops them all the time, or there would be another Champion in short order.

The Elite Four, or, rather, the Elite of the Indigo League, live on the Indigo Plateau, in a city by the same name. Indigo Plateau is the center of the Kantan Pokémon League. It houses a giant arena where a huge competition is held every year to decide who among the average trainers is the best. This trainer then gets the opportunity to face Lance in a highly publicized match. This is a distinct advantage for the trainer and a direct disadvantage to Lance, or whoever the Champion may be, because the winner of the tournament doesn’t need to go through the Elite Four before he faces Lance, or, if Lance is ever defeated, the Champion of the Indigo League.

However, contrary to popular belief, the Elite Four and the Champion are not the ultimate government in Kanto. After all, if this were the case, a young, headstrong young man or woman could come to power, and squander away everything that Kanto has worked so hard for. Instead, there is a delicate system of checks and balances, which is headed by an elected representative assembly that is the actual power in Kanto. There is a notoriously strong rivalry between the Elite Four and the Representatives, or “Reps” as they are often called by trainers, caused by the sharing of power in the country.

The Elite Four and the Champion live in what could be described as a palace on Indigo Plateau, the center of activity for the Indigo League. The lavishly decorated mansion holds an opulent dining hall, several conference rooms, deluxe suites, offices for each Elite and the Champion, and many other accommodations that are both a necessity or a luxury for Human and Pokémon habitation, including a deluxe training chamber where top-of-the line holography allow Pokémon to keep their edge, or, conversely, for humans to practice their self-defense skills.

The halls of the mansion are lined with thick carpet the color of the sky on a night when the sky is lit up by a full moon’s glow. Tapestries of famous Pokémon and people line the room. From the legendary Gerahid of Tintia who rose up against Stephen the Pillar to every Gym Leader in the history of the Indigo League to the majestic Dratini family to the common Rattata, all manners of people and Pokémon are honored in . Among those on the foremost tapestries are the famous Wings of Council, and the Titan Council, both of which, according to legend, met on Mount Silver about once per decade. The Lati twins, both in their full glory were also displayed. Ho-oh, Lugia, Articuno, Zapdos, and Moltres, the legendary birds, were not on a tapestry, but were displayed on intricate ceiling paintings. The legendary beasts Suicuine, Raikou, and Entei were likewise not on tapestries, but instead were benches, carefully carved in exacting detail.

Lance walked through the halls, his Dragonite and Charizard flanking him, and took all this glory in the breadth of a single second—or maybe he ignored it because he had seen it all before. He had examined every inch of every work of art in every room on every floor of the mansion, so there was nothing new for him. He had been here for ten years, except for some holidays and all of his vacations, of course. As he strode through the halls, his cape billowing out behind him he nodded to aides as he passed, most of whom grinned like little kids and performed a mock salute as he passed, to which he returned, doing his best not to laugh, while others ignored him and hurried about their business. If the saluters thought that this was some kind of military organization, he wouldn’t argue with them, but he knew better. Technically, the league did have something of a martial structure, but Lance usually ignored that aspect of the league. This was a bone of contention between Lieutenant Surge, the Gym Leader of Vermillion City, and himself. Surge had served in the Third Altan Defensive War, and insisted on a very martial state of affairs for the Vermillion City Gym, and thought that the League should have be as well. Lance, however, insisted that it was for the children, and should be fun, not overly strict.

Up ahead in a two hallway, right-angle junction, he saw Karen—The Dark Elite— draped over a bench carved in the shape of a Houndoom with her Umbreon and Sneasel on either side of the ends of the bench, waiting for the other Elites to join him for the meeting Lance had called. They both looked bored, as did their master, as usual. Karen looked up at Lance briefly, then her eyes returned to the book she was reading. Karen was early, as usual. Lance smiled slightly. It was rare for Karen not to be there exactly on time, or a little early. He didn’t think that there was even one time since she’d become an Elite that she’d been late for something. To anyone who didn’t know her, it would look like she was ignoring him, but Karen was notorious for being able to multi-task. Lance was pretty sure that she was keeping an eye on everything, taking in every little detail that was going on around her, while still managing to focus most of her attention onto her book, but she might have been focusing all her attention on her book. That was the problem. You never knew with her. She was a bit unsettling, it was true, but there was nobody that Lance would trust more in a battle to watch his back than Karen. While she wasn’t the best Pokemon battler, her personal melee skills and ability to handle firearms were nearly unmatched from anyone Lance had ever known. Her knowledge of strange words helped him greatly in writing speeches, though sometimes he needed a dictionary AND a thesaurus to understand what she was trying to say in a given situation. Karen had always held a special place in Lance’s heart, and recently he had been catching himself sneaking peeks in her direction when he was sure the Dark Elite wasn’t looking.

From the left-hand corridor from his perspective, Lance could hear Agatha huffing and puffing as she plodded along towards the junction where Karen was waiting for everyone. The woman was getting older and older, and it was harder for her to get around to different places, but nobody would ever suggest to her that she was too old to be training anymore. The only time that Lance knew of that happening was at a press conference, and that young man received a stern lecture and a hard caning as a reward. The old woman was a bit eccentric, but she was a good trainer, and Lance often came to her for advice whenever he wasn’t sure how to do something. Her wise counsel and encouragement had kept him from resigning too many times to count. She was an excellent trainer, and the only reason that she wasn’t the Champion herself was because her Pokemon were getting old as well. They had long since left their primes, but were still a force to be reckoned with, as was Agatha herself. The old woman had a sharp mind, and was notorious for picking out solutions to unsolvable situations. She was rarely on time, but she tried to be. No one could fault her there. It was simply that her age prevented her from moving around quickly, though Lance had heard a rumor that late at night she practiced her self-defense skills, but he wasn’t sure of the veracity of the story.

The short, hunch-backed woman emerged from the hallway, huffing and puffing, glanced around the junction, then shuffled over to a chair that was sculpted in the shape of a Fearow, with the Fearow’s head stretching straight up, and the wings serving as the armrests. Agatha’s two escorts, her Gengar and her Misdreavus flanked her. Her Pokemon were special, too. Her Gengar’s gases was tainted a slight purple, and her Misdreavus’ gases was tainted a strong turquoise. This was, of course, not surprising, considering the length of time that Agatha had been training for seventy-five years, she’d seen and sometimes caught a thing or five.

From the left-hand hallway, Lorelei picked her way out of one of the halls, and looked at Lance, smiled. Lance couldn’t help but smile softly in return. She was the youngest of them there, at the age of twenty-six. She had first joined the Elite Four when she was sixteen, by his request. A Johtan Gym leader, and his good friend, Bugsy, had recommended her. She had been in a coma, however, for most of the first month of his reign as Champion, so he had only had three Elites with him until she got better. And then, of course, she had asked him if she could go out and have a journey before she officially joined. Lance acquiesced, and had chosen a temporary replacement for her.

Bugsy had gone with her on her journey, and had helped her very much, from what he had heard. The journey, which lasted nearly four years, covered much of Johto, Hoenn, and Lorelei's home country of Alto. For some reason, she had avoided Kanto altogether. He had heard that she had been rather outgoing, but nothing of what she had been before she had traveled to Nuschantz with Bugsy. When the pair had come back to Indigo Plateau, and Lorelei took her place in the Elite Four, she was rather animated for several days. Then Bugsy went back to Johto, and she lapsed into silence and depression. She had remained this way for six years, save for the times when the Johto gym leaders Falkner or Bugsy came to visit her. Then she was a little more...alive. Other than that, though, she was generally very quiet, and tried to stay out of the way.

That she had lasted so long was a testament to her strength and skill in raising and dueling Pokémon, although recently her wins had been far and few between. Lorelei had, when he had battled her in the beginning, had used elaborate strategies that had nearly overcome him. She was extremely quiet, and didn’t like the press. She found comfort in books, and rarely talked to anyone except Karen. Karen and Lorelei often had long conversations over books they had both read, which were generally long, and had complex plots. They usually debated in quiet tones about a character’s strong points versus his or her weak points after they’d both read it. They were, hands down, the most intelligent people Lance knew. They were great authors too. They often wrote stories about things that were, at least to his mind, exceedingly strange. Lorelei had even hinted that she was working on her very own novel. They generally wrote about a world where there were no Pokémon, where there were substitutes for them, and the substitutes were called “animals.” It was strange, but it was also amusing. Lance was a mediocre author himself, but didn’t have the imagination to make anything quite so out of the ordinary. Lance smiled as Lorelei hurried to sit down next to Karen, where they began to talk in hushed tones, Karen gesturing towards the book that she was reading.

“HAAAAAIIIIIIL,” Lance heard coming from the hall Agatha had come from, and he inwardly winced. It was Bruno, of course, making his usual noisy entrance, “THE CONQUERING HERO!” came Bruno’s booming voice, as he stomped his way through the halls towards Lance and the others. Karen and Lorelei, annoyed at the interruption in their conversation, glanced up slightly in annoyance, then turned back to each other and resumed their hushed conversation, “HE WHO IS MIGHTIEST IN AAALL THE WOORLD!!!!” It wouldn’t be so bad, Lance considered, if Bruno had the slightest semblance of a singing voice. As it was, he sounded worse than a Golem on Pokénip singing through a sewage grate. “HE WHO IS THE GREATEST IN AAAAAALLL THE WOOOORLLLLLDDD!!!!!” And the said Golem was a few miles away from the said sewage grate. Lance resisted the temptation to cover his eyes and his ears as Bruno lumbered around a corner, his Rhyhorn and his Golem were both using Earthquake in tandem to Bruno’s footsteps. Bruno always wore garish clothes, that clashed in the worst way, or only pants, and no shirt at all. Today, fortunately, Bruno DID wear a shirt. Although Lance wasn’t sure that wearing a bright yellow shirt with dark pants, shoes, and dark gray baseball cap with golden chains and other things of that sort weighing him down around his neck was the best fashion choice. But then, it was Bruno’s life, not Lance’s. Although Lance did have to spend many hours a day with Bruno. Bruno would have been almost every girl’s dream, Lance guessed, if he wasn’t so out-spoken and actually learned how to dress. But, once again, it was Bruno’s life, not Lance’s.

Bruno opened his mouth to begin another verse, when Agatha, who had just reached the junction, held up his hand. “Bruno,” she said in her cracking, English accent, “I think we’ve had enough of your singing for today, thank you.”

Bruno’s face fell, “But I was just getting to the good part of the song!” he whined.

Lance rolled his eyes. Bruno, at age forty-seven, still hadn’t outgrown his adolescence. Lance, at age twenty-nine, was far more mature than the Fighting Elite. Lance opened his mouth, but Karen’s cool voice was there before he could open his mouth, “Bruno,” she said softly in her interesting oriental voice, “I believe that Lance called us together for a reason other than to enjoy your singing. Mellifluous as it may be.” Lance frowned. He hadn’t heard that one before. He made a mental note to look it up.

Bruno shrugged, and his chains jangled together, “Sure, whateva ya say, homeys!” Lance inwardly shrank back. How a grown man of his age could act like this, he had no idea, “I’m down with that!”

Lorelei looked up, “It has something to do with Giovanni, doesn’t it? Or Team Rocket, right?” Giovanni, had fallen on rough time after Lance deposed him as The champion of the Indigo League, and had, several years before, had taken control of an upstart sect of Johto organized crime known as Team Rocket. Since then, he had turned it into something to be feared, even by those that did not live in Johto. Team Rocket had expanded more than a thousandfold than what it had been before Giovani had taken control, and it seemed as if Giovani were specifically targeting Kanto in general, and Lance in particular. To make matters worse, Giovanni had no official ties to Team Rocket, and had taken control of the Viridian City Gym, and had used it as a base for Team Rocket. Lance looked back at Lorelei. She looked worried. “I knew that the Global Police was making a mistake when it targeted Team Rocket.”

She was referring, of course, to the Global Association of Police Agents and Crime Fighters (GAPACF, or Global Police for short), and their recent crack-down on crime. They had targeted kidnappers, murderers, thieves, drug dealers, and others of that ilk, but had specifically targeted Team Rocket, in an effort to force the gang out of Kanto and Johto. The early missions were hugely successful, but lately they had been meeting more and more resistance.

Lance grinned, “Yes, Lorelei, it DOES have to do with Giovanni and Team Rocket.” He looked around, “But I’d prefer to talk about it in the conference room.” He gestured toward a pair of ornate doors with intricately carved designs of an underwater scene. It was the Water Boardroom. An entire room filled with paintings, carvings, sculptures, tapestries, and even an aquarium to show the glory of water. Or something like that. He hadn’t been paying much attention to the people who had designed it when they came to him and asked if they could make it.

Agatha leaned on her cane heavily, “So, it finally came down to the Global Police routing the bloody Rockets out, did it?” she coughed, and Lance wasn’t sure if she could stand on her own without that cane anymore. “Why, in my day, they would have rousted up the local trainers; the local gym leaders; we, the Elite Four;” she glanced at Lance, “And the bloody Champion to help take out bloody Team Rocket.”

Lorelei looked confused, and Bruno’s expression mirrored hers. “Um,” Lorelei said quietly, “What are you guys talkin’ about?”

Lance rolled his eyes, “If we could get into the conference room, I’ll tell you.”

Karen stretched, put her book down, and got up. “I have a feeling I know what this is about.” She said, “I thought you’d be calling us together for something like this ever since that Global Police Agent stopped by your office last night.”

Lance nodded, allowing himself a tight smile. He should have expected that nothing got past the Dark Elite’s attention during the night. He waited as the Elite Four moved into the Aqua Board Room, and took seats around the table. Lance waited until they were all seated, then shut the door and pulled a briefcase out from behind a miniature of a submarine. He placed it on the table and opened it. Inside was a small holographic projector.

Lance took a seat behind the projector. “All right. As you are all aware, the Global Police have essentially declared war on Team Rocket. As I am also sure you are aware of, Team Rocket has shifted its main base of operations from Viridian city back to Goldenrod City, thank goodness.” He activated the holo-projector, and a three-dimensional image of the Viridian City Gym appeared. “However, they haven't completely evacuated their Viridian base, and the Global Police simply don’t have the man-power to eradicate the Rockets in Kanto as well as Johto.” He looked at Agatha, and a triumphant grin appeared on the old woman’s features, “So, the Global Police have asked us to help. Karen and I will handle the Viridian Gym. We’ll be in charge of a commando group of trainers, with orders to confiscate everything in the gym, for the Global Police to look through later.”

Bruno looked up at Lance, a strange expression on his face, “So, what, then. You expect us to sit around here, homey, twiddling our thumbs?”

Lance forced himself not to smile, “Actually, I was coming to your part next.”

He pushed a button, and the diagram of the gym changed to one of a building with garishly bright lights, “This, my friends, is the Game Corner in Celadon City. Among intelligence circles, it's pretty well known that the Rockets run it, and have a base beneath it, but Erika’s let them stay there because of the revenue they provide. However, we can’t let them stay anymore. Not with the atrocities they’ve done, and gone unpunished. Now is the time to punish them. Bruno, Agatha, Lorelei, you three are to rendezvous with Erika, and you four, along with the trainers from the gym and any local trainers who have volunteered to help the Global Police against Team Rocket, are going to go and root out any Rockets from their base below the Game Corner. A Global Police Agent will brief you when you arrive in Celadon. Any questions?”

There weren’t any. Lance nodded, “All right, then. Ladies and Gentleman, we have our assignments, let’s saddle up.”

“Lock ‘n load,” Karen said quietly, but loud enough that everyone could hear her. With that, everyone got up, and moved towards the door. Everyone, Lance noticed, except Lorelei. Lance caught Karen’s eye, and she nodded, and stayed behind in the room. Lance had discussed Lorelei with Karen before, and now, as he had told her, he wanted her to do something to boost her self-esteem. More than likely, she was grateful that she didn’t have to hear Bruno talk about how great he was going to be in the Celadon raid. As for Lance—He had to get going and brief the team that had been assigned to him on their up-coming mission.

Karen returned to her seat, and faced Lorelei, who was still sitting, and was staring at the aquarium blankly. A Goldeen and a Corsola were swimming around each other, and it looked like they were about to fight. “Hey,” Karen said softly, “Are you okay?”

Lorelei jumped, “Hm? Oh, what did ya say, Karen?” she turned around to look at Karen, but the Dark Elite noticed that the other girl’s eyes didn’t quite meet hers.

“I was asking,” Karen said gently, “if you were okay. Is there something bothering you?”

There was a long pause as Lorelei considered this, then she said, “Not really.” There was another pause, “Well,” Lorelei said, “It’s just that…” she hesitated, “I mean, what if it turns out that I’m not really the coun’y champion? That everybody just lets me win ‘cause they feel sorry for me?” Lorelei's eyes slowly came up to meet Karen's, almost begging her to change the subject, or to let her go get ready for her upcoming mission.

Karen stared at Lorelei in disbelief. “THAT’S what’s been bugging you?” she asked incredulously, staring at the Ice Elite in disbelief, “Lorelei, listen to me. you’re in the Elite Four. You’ve beaten all the gym leaders. True, it was after you joined the Elite Four, but you still beat them. Right now, your career average is that you win about half your matches, and most of the matches you lose is because you stop thinking that you can do it! Let’s take, uh, that Trainer who majored in Normal types,” Karen said, referring to a loss the day before that Lorelei should have won easily, “You lost your nerve. You had everything all set up for your win, but you cracked.” The trainer, when he faced Karen, had been defeated easily. But if Karen could say one thing about that trainer, he certainly had resolve.

“He was going to beat me anyway,” Lorelei mumbled, looking at her hands, and shifting uncomfortably, “His Clefairy was tough as an Ursaring. His Chansey was mean as a ‘Doom. I thought it was just better to end quickly than to unneccesarily hurt my Pokemon.” A haunted expression went across her face, and for a split second, there was an expression almost as if she were in real pain. “Nothing should be hurt like that.” she whispered.

For an instant, Karen could only stare at her counterpart in disbelief. Then she started feeling the annoyance beginning to build up within her. She forced it down, though. She forced herself to remain calm. Lorelei was a superb trainer, but the Clefairy she had been referring to had only taken one or two hits from her Umbreon before it went down. The Chansey almost didn’t fight because it was too timid. “Lorelei, there are Chansey nearby. They won't take any permanent damage, you know that! We can stop the fight if it gets out of hand, and heal them almost instantly!” Lorelei stared blankly into the tank, her eyes haunted, and she shuddered. Karen sighed, and forced herself to have a calm voice, “You should have won that fight easily. Look at me.” Lorelei looked about halfway between where she had been looking and at Karen, but didn’t meet the Dark Elite's piercing gaze. “LOOK at me.” Karen repeated, adding a tinge of steel to her voice-allowed her frustration to come through. Lorelei, startled, quickly jerked her head up to look straight into Karen’s gaze, “You are an excellent trainer, one of the best. In fact, I’m pretty sure you could give Lance a run for his money if it came to that. I cannot—WILL not allow you to be like this.” Karen’s glare seemed to shrink Lorelei until Karen was amazed that the girl had even gotten this far. “You sacrificed your life, your hopes, your dreams, your entire teenage life to reach this moment.”

Karen leaned forward, and Lorelei flinched, and looked at the floor, her eyes still haunted, and beginning to be tinged with tears. “It's not worth it,” she whispered. “Nothing is worth it, if you're hurt like that, nothing is worth it.”

Karen stared at her. “Hurt like what?” Lorelei ignored her, and Karen sighed. She'd heard the exact same thing many times, but she could never get the Ice Elite to elaborate. “I looked through your trainer file. You were one of the most ruthless trainers out there. You did whatever you had to do to make ends meet on your four-year journey, and get that one last badge. It said that you battled five trainers at once to get a room at the Indigo Plateau Pokemon Center. That you took on Team Rocket almost daily after Giovanni took over, and almost always won. That you won almost ninety-five percent of your reported battles." What happened to you? Karen added silently to herself.

Lorelei’s gaze wandered, and she seemed to shrink in on herself even more, “Long time ago,” she mumbled, “I haven’t been that person for a long time. Not since...” she trailed off, and she seemed to be genuinely terrified. “Don’t worry about me,” she said in a barely audible tone, “I can take care of myself.”

Finally Karen could stand it no longer, and pounded the hard-wood table with one fist. “THAT’S IT!” She hissed in a loud voice, “I will not see you like this anymore!” Karen stood up, and, with one hand on the table for support, leaped over the entire table. She pulled Lorelei out of her seat with one hand, and snatched one of her Pokeballs off of her belt with the other. “Do you see this, Lorelei?” The girl nodded feebly, “When they became yours, they sacrificed their lives, their goals to help you find yours!” Karen slammed it down onto the table. Hard.

“Hey!” Lorelei said, blinking back tears. “D-d-don't talk to me like that!” she wailed, “You have no idea what I've done for them, and what it did to me!”

Karen glared at Lorelei. “I don't care!” she yelled, “You don't care about them!” she slammed the Pokeball back down onto the table.

Lorelei glared at her, and suddenly Karen found herself on her back, Lorelei's hand on her throat, cutting off her air, and Lorelei's face glaring down at her like Moltres out of a nightmare. For the first time in a long time, Karen was actually scared. Where had this Lorelei come from? “I told you,” Lorelei told her coldly, “Be careful with that. And I don't want to hear you say anything like that ever again. I very nearly died for my Pokemon.” Karen nodded, and Lorelei released her. Karen rubbed at her throat, and stared in fear and awe at Lorelei. Was this what Lorelei had been like? If so, then she was truly a force to be reckoned with. Then, abruptly, Lorelei blinked, and suddenly she was the frightned young woman that she had been mere minutes before. She picked up her Pokeball and carressed it lovingly. “But the Normal trainer was too dificult.”

Karen blinked, startled by the transformation. She felt her resolve harden. Somewhere in there was the strong young woman that Lorelei had once been. She had just seen it. She just had to draw it out, and make sure that it stayed. Karen let loose a small grin that she hoped looked genuine, and something in Lorelei's face changed. Karen couldn't quite read what it meant.“They gave you their trust,” Karen said harshly. “Trust that you would train them to the best that you could! Instead, you allow yourself to backslide!”

Lorelei seemed to crumble visibly underneath Karen’s verbal assault. Karen internally winced. She had seen the old Lorelei, but this didn't seem to be going anywhere. How in the world could she draw her back out? She had been so close. “Maybe-maybe you’re right. Maybe I should quit.” She mumbled.

Karen saw her chance, and seized it with both hands. Or, in actuality, two handfuls of Lorelei’s ice-blue tunic. She pulled the Ice Elite up to her face, and began talking again. “I’m right!” she hissed into Lorelei’s face, which was barely an inch from hers, “And you know it! You let your Pokémon down!” Lorelei seemed on the verge of tears, “But it’s not too late!” Karen said, and shoved the girl back down into her chair, “Reclaim what you once had, Lorelei. Fight with all your heart and all your soul when you go to Celadon, and see if you can remember what it was like, being on the road, back when you were merely another trainer! Fighting for what you believed in, to make a difference in the world.” Lorelei said nothing, and seemed to cower before Karen. Karen internally grimaced. That hadn't worked. If anything, Lorelei seemed about ready to resign.

Karen decided to use one last tactic, one which being the Dark-type Elite certainly enhanced her abilities for. “You disgust me!” Karen said, speaking, to her regret, truthfully. Lorelei’s head shot up, the old fire in her eyes, “You have so much potential, but you don’t use it! Instead, you settle for mediocre, when you should be trying to be superb!” Karen saw something in Lorelei's eyes click, much as it had when she was the Ice Queen she had been moments before. Hopefully this would work. “If you’re going to continue to be like this, then you really should just go home.” The fire in Lorelei's eyes was returning in greater force than before, and Karen inwardly grinned. She knew that Lorelei had a pretty bad relationship with her parents, and that she didn't really ever want to see them. “You don’t belong here.” That last bit might have overdone it, actually, Karen thought to herself, but she hadn't been able to stop herself.

Karen turned and stalked out, but saw the Ice Elite out of the corner of her left eye jump out of her chair with balled fists. As soon as she was out of view, she began to saunter away, past Lance, who obviously had been listening. “She’d give ME a run for MY money?” he asked, amusedly in his distinctly Kantan accent.

Karen looked up at him and grinned, “Don’t underestimate her, Lance. She’s a powerhouse, yet so little of her potential has been tapped.”


Back in the Aqua Board Room, Lorelei stood, clenching and unclenching her fists. She hadn't felt like this for a long time. Not for six years, since...She shuddered, but forced herself not to withdraw back into her shell. “You want me to go home, Karen?” she said to thin air through gritted teeth, “You wish. I’ll show you that I belong here. Then we’ll see who’s so smug!” Lorelei stalked out of the room, and looked over to her left, where Karen and Lance were just turning around a corner and out of her sight.

“I'm staying, Karen,” she growled, “And I'm not going anywhere. I am BACK!”With that, she strode down the corridor with fresh confidence in her steps, a sense of surety to her stride. She had a mission to prepare for. She’d show them. She’d show them all. Lorelei was BACK. And she was here to stay. And nobody, not even Karen, was going to make her go home. There was no way she'd go back there.
 
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purple_drake

E/GL obsessed
*waves* hi! ^.^ Thanks for PMing me. Now, I don't have the time to give you an in-depth review like I have done occasionally, but I am definately sticking around. Your interpretation of the characters, while different to mine, is still good and interesting. And then there's Lance. *cough*

^.^ Anyway. Nice work, and luck to you.
 

Ash_Junior

Irredeemable Nerd
MWAHAHAHA!!!

I have come with another chapter!

this is only about halfway through the ORIGINAL (23, 27 page, can't remember which one) Chapter 1, though, lol...

Nine pages of Operation: Celebi. I hope that you enjoy it. btw, I think that there are only three or four scenes in this. if you're wodnering how to make good, long scenes with lots of description...look here.

:D

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It was just another day in the life of Team Rocket for Giovanni. Butch and Cassidy brought home thousands of dollar’s worth of merchandise from various Pokémarts around Kanto and Johto, Jessie and James reported in with yet another screw-up, and there was yet another dire threat for them to face. Giovanni was almost bored by the sheer monotony of it all. Almost. This Global Police thing had started out as a minor irritation, but now, it was becoming a far more serious problem. They had already managed to thwart his plans to steal the Pokemon from the breedery just outside of Goldenrod—a plan that would have gone off without a hitch, but now five of his men were dead, and another seven injured, not to mention the three Rockets that were captured—His plan to raid the warehouse of the Goldenrod Pokemart—He had lost another seven rockets there, ten injured, but thankfully no one was captured. And all they had to show for it was a handful of ordinary Pokeballs. Empty, of course. Both of the strikes had taken weeks of preparation, and no one was supposed to be hurt. Now, because the GP had barged in, twelve of the Global Police, three Rockets, and four innocent civilians as well.

That would all change, and it would change soon. He had just finished briefing Butch and Cassidy via holo-phone on the problem, and they had just left the Viridian Gym with a contingent of Rockets to wipe out a strike force of the Global Police. He was currently inspecting the base underneath the Celadon Game Corner, and from what he saw, he had nothing to worry about. The Global Police, or anyone, for that matter, would have a hard time getting into the base without taking heavy losses. This was, of course, assuming that they even tried to, considering that in the day, there were dozens of civilians all around. And during the night, constant watches were kept, and the entire base was on a state of heightened security. Nevertheless, he had insisted on issuing hand guns to all Rockets in Kanto and Johto, just as a precaution. The operatives in other countries didn’t need guns, yet. After the Game Corner inspection, he was due to leave for the Orange Islands, to check up on the third largest cell of Rockets on the planet.

As he looked over yet another piece of machinery, he couldn’t help but be annoyed by the incessant whining. Stopping his examination of the machinery, he turned and glared at Jessie and James. “Shut up!” he hissed, “You two are NOT getting guns! I made my decision, and that’s final!” The morons would probably just shoot each other before they figured out how the guns worked.

“But, boss!” James whined, “How are we supposed to be as good as the other Rockets if we don’t have guns and they do!” Of course, that might not be such a bad thing.

Giovanni leveled his glare on the boy, but the idiot just stood there and blinked, probably not even realizing that his boss was mad at him. “How many times do I have to tell you? The guns are for emergencies ONLY!” he bellowed, and slammed his fist down hard onto the machinery next to him. “Besides, I gave you a chance to be as good as everyone else BEFORE I issued guns. For NINE STINKING YEARS! But were you good? No!” to say that he was getting really annoyed now would probably have been the understatement of the century, “No,” he repeated, “You screwed up assignment after assignment! Whenever I gave you an assignment as easy as delivering a suitcase to a Rocket, you gave it to an Officer Jenny!” His fist whipped out, and caught James on the side of the head. It was a lucky thing that it was only Butch’s shipment of jelly beans that James had bungled, or they would have been in very serious trouble. Of course, Butch was still pretty mad at James.

He turned to Jessie, “And YOU!” he roared. If any Rockets had to come close to Giovanni, they tried to give him a wide berth. They ALL knew not to interrupt him when he was talking to Jessie, James, or Meowth, And to stay way back if he was talking to all three of them. The other rockets were liable to have their heads handed back to them if they so much as got Giovanni’s attention, unless they were Butch or Cassidy, the undisputed Boss’s pets. “YOU’RE the BRAINS of the outfit, or, at least, you’re supposed to be! If anything, your plans are even more stupid than James’!” Another fist whipped out and caught Jessie on the side of the head.

“You’re both failures, you know that? Why couldn’t you be more like Meowth here?” Giovannia demanded, and glared at the humans, not speaking to each other for several seconds—stewing.

Jessie and James looked at each other sheepishly, then looked down at Meowth, who was preening himself. “AND YOU!” Giovanni grabbed Meowth by the neck, “WHY COULDN’T YOU BE MORE LIKE PERSIAN!” He threw Meowth into James, who caught him, but stumbled back into Jessie. Just that quickly, they became nothing more than three objects taking up space on the floor.

Giovanni glared down at them. “Get out of my sight,” he snarled, turned and stalked out of the room.

Jessie looked at James, and James looked back. They were in trouble again. They had better lay low for a few days, Jessie decided, or—
“Hey!” James exclaimed, “I’ve got an idea!”

“Wonderful,” Meowth complained, “Da Human scatterbrain has yet anotha idea ta get us inta trouble.”

“No, no no!” James said, “Let’s think about this for a minute. You guys have heard of Professor Oak, right?”

Jessie stared at James, “Heard of him, how can we not? He’s on the news almost every night. He’s always got something or other going on.”

James brightened, “Exactly! He’s usually got a few Global Police guys with him, right?”

Jessie stared at James, not sure if she should jump into the idea right away or not. “Go on,” she said cautiously.

“Well, since the Global Police People are all in Johto now, there’s no one to stop us from helping ourselves to Oak’s research and Pokémon. It’ll get Giovanni into a better mood, won’t it?” James asked, looking around for support.

Jessie stared at James in shock, “James. That might be the best Idea I’ve ever heard from you in…” she trailed off, and thought about it, “Well, that’s the only idea you’ve ever had, but it’s still good! Let’s go tell Giovanni, and we’ll get going.”

“Whoa, whoa whoa!” Meowth said, “yous are gonna tell Giovanni about dis? He’s in a bad enough mood already. If I could tell yous what to do, I’d tell yous to surprise ‘im.”

James looked at Jessie, “He’s got a point. I mean, wouldn’t Giovanni just get mad again and fire us?”

Jessie shrugged, “Good point. Let’s go.”

The three of them hurried towards the door, with James in the lead. James only tripped twice on the way out.

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Lorelei, Erika, Agatha, and Bruno sat in a diner across from the Game Corner, discussing tactics. Restaurant was a nice place, with cobble-stone flooring, stone tables, and the best part was that the eating area was outside. The pastoral restaurant was in stark contrast to the Game Corner across the street, with it loud, boisterous music; bright, glaring neon lights; and even had people out front yelling out the latest number the lottery had gotten up to. “I don’t know what they’re doing,” Erika said in a quiet voice, “But Rockets have been coming and going more often than usual the last few weeks.”

“Do you think that the Global Police thing has something to do with it?” Agatha asked.

Erika shook her head, “I don’t think so. The Rockets had been lying low, trying not to draw attention to themselves. But recently you’ve been able to tell a Rocket by whether or not he’s wearing a sidearm.” Erika was a small woman, petite, and had a tan that suggested that she spent long hours in the sun. Truth be told, she didn’t train her Pokemon very hard—they trained themselves. Her green eyes glanced around, warily, and she shoved a strand of her amber hair back over her shoulder. “Don’t keep an eye out for them, though, and if you see one, don’t stare at ‘em.” She said quietly.

Lorelei gaped at Erika, “You’re kidding me. They’re using guns?”

Erika glared at Lorelei, “Not so loud. Rockets have spies all over this city. You want one of their sleeper snipers to come out of hiding just for us?” Lorelei quieted down, and Erika relaxed somewhat, “Sorry. You live in Celadon, or Viridian, I hear, for long enough, and certain precautions become second-nature. Anyway, they’ve been wearing side-arms, and a large group recently headed out of here. It looked like they were heading for Johto.”

Agatha leaned forwards, “ We’ll pass that along. What can you tell us about the Game Corner?” the old woman asked, then coughed several times until she took a drink of water.

A waiter approached with their food, and Erika waited until the man had retreated back to the kitchens, “If you’re expecting a fight, it’s not good. They’ve got people every twenty feet or so, it’s crowded in there, and movement is hampered at best—impossible at worst. There are rumors that there are as many as thirty levels to the place, but if there is more than one level, I’ve only seen the top one. Slot machines, craps tables, you name a gambling thing, it’s there. At the back left corner as you come in, there’s a bar, and directly in front of it is a dance floor, with a band stage off to one side. I’ve got some of my trainers in as the band for today, to cut down on that risk. There’s not much to the stage…just a raised bit of ground with outlets, spotlights—stuff like that.” Erika looked up, as if to draw inspiration out of the sky, “Let’s see here, what else is there? Oh! There’s a bookcase in the rear right corner, and behind that is a narrow corridor to the restrooms. If there really is an entrance to lower levels, I’d bet that it’s there. At any one time, there are probably a couple hundred people, with a maximum capacity of about a thousand, but that’s a really crowded place, if there’s that many.”

Agatha bit her lip, “This doesn’t sound very promising. We need to time it so that we have a minimum of civilian casualties.”

“Plus, they could have sleepers,” Erika pointed out, and leaned forward, “Look, I don’t think that this is a very good idea. Ever. Are you guys willing to wait until dark? Rumor has it that they have a barracks down there in the alleged lower levels.” She shrugged, “I would imagine that we’d be able to capture quite a few Rockets.”

Lorelei shook her head, “No, that’s not a good idea.”

“Why not?” Erika demanded, “It’s better than any I’ve heard you come up with.”

“Because in five minutes, the Global Police are attacking in Goldenrod, Lance and Karen area attacking in Viridian, and we are supposed to attack in five minutes.” Lorelei pointed out. “Didn’t you read the memo? We’re supposed to execute a three-pronged strike, so that no Rockets will be able to escape.”

Erika sighed, “I know,” she said quietly, “It’s just that I don’t see this working as well as a night strike.”

Lorelei leaned forward, “If we do a night strike, It’ll prove to the Rockets that we’re cowards, and can’t do anything overtly.”

Agatha smiled, and laughed in her cracking voice, “I agree with Lorelei. I have to admit, It’s good to hear what I was about to say coming from someone that’s less than half my age.”

Lorelei looked at Agatha, “Thanks,” she mumbled falling back into her laconic ways for a brief instant, “I think.”

Bruno nodded, “I agree,” he said, food spilling out of his mouth.

The three women all looked away. “Then it’s settled,” Lorelei said quietly, “We go in as soon as we finish eating.”

Erika looked around the table, saw everyone nodding and sighed, “All right. If that’s what you want. But believe me. It would be better if you had waited.”

The three women, and Bruno finished eating in silence, pausing only occasionally to glare at Bruno when he belched loudly, and got to their feet, Agatha insisted on paying, and after she had done so, the four casually made their way into the game corner. Instantly, every sense was under attack.

The smell of sweat, smoke, alcohol, and too many bodies too close together for too long was overpowering; the sound of raucous music and screamed lyrics assaulted their ears; and the strobe lights hurt their eyes. Bruno seemed to like the music, but the surprising thing was that Agatha was the only one who seemed fully comfortable. Lorelei glanced around curiously and fearlessly, as if no one could touch her, but looked extremely out of place. Erika glanced around as if she might be under attack any second. Bruno, easily distracted as he was, started bobbing his head in time to the music and would have gone over to the dance floor if Agatha hadn’t grabbed his arm.

The women eyed him warily, then they too split up, moving out to scope out the Game Corner. Lorelei wandered around the various gambling venues, occasionally taking part in one or two of them. Bruno, of course, was immediately gyrating on the dance floor, oblivious to everyone around him except for those immediately around him, the mission all but forgotten. Agatha hurried towards the hallway that Erika said held the restrooms, and entered the restroom immediately. Erika, bored because she had seen it before, wandered over to the bar and ordered a Root Beer. Everyone kept an eye out for Rockets, guns, or anything else that could pose a threat. Numerous trainers and other sorts of people wandered about, several wearing Rocket uniforms, but Erika recognized several more Rockets by their pictures.

Erika glanced around, and spotted Lorelei looking at one of the latest gambling machines. She wasn’t sure what it was called, but all she knew was that it was big, had digital screens, and had a whole lot of bells and whistles. Literally. She glanced over towards the hallway where Agatha had gone. It had been about three minutes, and, Erika was mildly surprised to see the old woman coming back out.

That meant it was time. Reaching into the small green purse she carried with her, her hand settled around the small pistol with its silencer, and pulled it out. The barkeep saw it, and his eyes widened as he bent down to get something from underneath the bar. Erika’s left hand grabbed the handle of her glass mug, and she swung it up into the barkeep‘s face as her right hand came out of her purse, pistol in hand. Without a second thought, she aimed for the nearest Rocket and fired, while her left hand was releasing her Pokemon. The bullet slammed into the rocket, though the detonation wasn’t heard due to the muffler and the noise that already enveloped the room. It struck him several inches to the left of his lung, and he fell over backwards, over a table with his fellow Rockets. One of them glanced up at her, startled, and abruptly he reached for his belt. Erika’s aim shifted slightly, and he was down too, wounded, but not mortally so. Then her Pokemon’s Vine Whips came into effect, and she was suddenly on a chandelier above the room. It gave her partial cover, and a superb firing position. Agatha, Lorelei, Bruno, and the band were beginning to fight as well. Her trainers pulled their own silenced guns and began firing nonlethal shots.

Hysterical crowds ran for the door, and they would be intercepted by gym trainers, just to be sure that no Rockets escaped. No one would be able to get to where she assumed the door to the lower levels was, but that wouldn’t keep people from below coming up. Except that she saw one of her trainers taking up a position behind the Ghost Elite.
She spotted another Rocket, aimed, fired. His hand yanked away from the gun he was reaching for, and shrieked in pain. Then everything went down the tubes. Some Rocket somewhere got a gun out, and let out a shot. And it was Lorelei that screamed bloody murder. Erika whirled around, and fired. Not having time to take proper aim, she feared that he would die, but there was no time to worry about it, because another shot rang out, and someone else screamed, and Erika didn’t recognize the voice, and feared it was a civilian. Pokemon’s attacks flew all over the place, and a stray Flamethrower snapped the chain holding the chandelier up, and suddenly Erika was thrown back into the fray of battle. With a snarl, she put the gun into her belt and pulled out the two small knives she kept in hidden compartments of her sleeves for just this sort of occasion, and began fighting in some very messy close quarters combat. She made a mental note to change the clips on the gun before she had to do ranged combat again. Most of the people in the Game Corner now were Rockets, and a few were running towards the door.

Lorelei had made her way towards Agatha, and was leading three of Erika’s Gym Trainers in a charge towards the stairs to the lower levels, which had revealed themselves, and Rockets were boiling up them. Erika didn’t have time to keep track of her, and turned back to her own battles.

Bruno wasn’t taking down many Rockets, but what Rockets he did bring down looked like high ranking Rockets. Erika looked around for the nearest group of Rockets and charged, waving her tiny knives in a threatening manner.


A dark figure slinked through the dark streets of Celadon City. It was night, but few of the lights were still on. The attack on the Rocket Game Corner had damaged power lines to most of the city, leaving vast portions of the metropolis without power. Team Rocket had taken a lot of damage, and it would take them a long time to rebuild. There were rumors floating around from those who still had electrical power that the Elite Four had attack the Game Corner, with the help of the local Gym Leader, and the Viridian Gym had also been attacked by Lance, the Champion of the Indigo League, Karen, the Dark-type Elite of the Elite Four, and a collection of local trainers that had volunteered to help with the raid had helped in both raids.

According to some sources, the main fighter in the Celadon raid was Lorelei, who had broken through her losing streak, and managed to become the focal point in what some were beginning to call the Celadon Slaughter. Team Rocket, caught totally by surprise, had been routed in two hours, which was surprisingly short, considering how much ground the Elites had to cover. The Elites, Erika, and Erika’s gym trainers swept through the building like wild-fire, encountering real resistance only on the lowest floors.

However, there had been numerous civilian casualties, but as of yet no deaths, however, approximately fifteen were in the hospital, however. Only two Rockets had died in the raid, an impressive statistic, although approximately three hundred of the four hundred fifty Rockets that were captured were wounded. The figure knew that, and she also knew that if she didn’t get back to her retrieval point in the next five minutes, she would be stuck in Kanto for a very long time. She had gathered valuable intelligence about Kanto in general, and the individual cities and leaders in particular.

For instance, she hadn’t known certain things about the various gym leaders that were stationed all over the country. However, she had known that the rulers of the said towns were the gym leaders. She hadt known that the gym leader was decided not by election, but by whoever was the gym leader at that particular time. She had known that the process by which a gym leader became a gym leader was actually a “Survival of the Fittest” type of succession, in which the gym had many different trainers, all vying for supremacy, and, ultimately, the gym leadership. The person who had been a gym leader for years had no guarantee that he would remain a gym leader in a week.

She had also managed to gather a lot of information about Professor Oak and his research projects. It hadn’t all been published, as her masters had assumed, and the populace of Kanto, she knew, would not accept all of them with open arms if they were exposed. He had known this, and yet he had continued his experiments. Because of this small fact, the Pokémon Prof had given her and her masters a valuable piece of blackmail that they could use against him.

Who was she? She was quick, and she was silent. She was deadly, and she was prolific with all types of equipment. She was fast, and she had an eidetic memory. She wore a loose-fitting black garment that fit her to her exact standards, made by the finest tailors in her home country. Not an inch of skin was exposed. She was stealthy. She was the best in Special Operations that her country had ever made in its entire history. They needed her now more than ever, as they prepared to execute their greatest land grab in history, with the most men in history, with more at stake than anybody else in history, period and full stop. She had scouted this route when she had first come to the country five years before, and she had scouted it many times since. There was rarely anyone along this particular course she chose through the city that had come to a stale-mate so suddenly.

The last stretch….yet she did not run. The figure was content to continue her stealthy approach to the door. She achieved the door, opened it quietly, and slipped through. Ducking through a small entry-way, the figure darted into a broom closet, and emerged in a form-fitting black suit that she had been wearing outside, but now her face was exposed and her long red hair flowed over her shoulders, down her back, and almost down to her waist. Her turquoise eyes impaled anyone that crossed her path, and they instinctively moved out of her path. Her stride, no longer the short, stealthy movements of one not wishing to be seen, was now a strong, long march as she walked through the halls. The rhythm of her feet never slowed nor sped, but maintained an even tempo, even as she climbed the stairs.

Her muscled arms and legs kept anyone from staying in her way for longer than it took to catch sight of her. If anyone had ventured a guess as to her profession, they likely would have said that she was an acrobat. Her real job—that of a spy—was not outside of the realm of imagination as a person looked upon her. After walking a certain number of steps, she stopped, turned crisply at a right angle to her left, unlocked the door, opened it, and stepped through all in one smooth motion.

Inside the room, it was dark, but thanks to the low-light contact lenses that she wore, she could see perfectly. As had been arranged, and Alakazam was waiting for her in her room. She nodded to it, and it nodded back. Through an assortment of hand gestures, she motioned to the things that she had labeled for remote teleportation. The Alakazam nodded once, and a bright light seemed to enfold them. If anyone had slowed down a tape slow enough, it would have looked like a bright silver light forming over their heads, then moving down at an alarming rate that enveloped them both. It was, in fact, the technique known simply as Teleport, which is exactly what it did. In the blink of an eye, the two stood on top of a platform inside a facility with brightly polished walls that gave no clue that this location was actually thousands of miles away from Celadon City.

No one spoke as she strode off the platform and out of the room, but there seemed to be a collective sigh of relief as she left the room. She strode into a room, and, after exactly one minute, emerged in an entirely different uniform. The uniform was completely black, except for a bright red stripe that ran down the exact middle of the side of the uniform. She walked—no, it was more like she stalked—down the hall, and entered a room labeled only as “Debriefing.” It would take days for her masters to extract all of the information she had gained from her, but she was willing to take as much time as was needed.

She was, after all, the best spy in the infamous Engaran spy league. And her previous mission had been, after all, vitally important to the continuing supremacy over the rest of the world.

And once the campaign began, there would be no stopping for Engara, or for the world. It would be a one-time ordeal. If it failed, then Engara would cease to exist. If it succeeded, the entire world would be under Engaran control. When it was all boiled away, that was what it came down to.

Either glorious success…or a pitiful failure.

Special Agent Anne Peters was willing to sacrifice her life to ensure that her country had success. Her country, her master, and her religion demanded it. As she demanded for herself as well. And when she set her mind to something, there were few that could have stood before her.

And most of those were dead.
 

purple_drake

E/GL obsessed
'And most of those were dead.' I'm guessing someone we know has met her before? :D I can't say I'm a big fan of original regions (just call me hypocrite, since I've got one in the works myself) but so far yours isn't bad.

I was pretty surprised when you let the gym leaders and even normal trainers use guns during the 'Celadon Slaughter', and it didn't really have the air of a pokemon-based arrest. Also, Erika is the grass-type gym leader, why couldn't she and her trainers just sleep powder the whole building? They could've figured out who was Rocket and who wasn't afterwards and been able to take the underground levels by surprise without as many casualties.

I haven't taken note of little mistakes, but your biggest problems in terms of grammar is that you tend to overuse commas, especially since you use it instead of a full stop just before someone speaks, like this:

Erika shook her head, “I don’t think so. The Rockets had been lying low, trying not to draw attention

That should be a full stop. The person is speaking, yes, but it's not necessarily a continuation of their previous action. Occasionally you might find the need to use a comma there, but such instances should be few and far between. Your generally overuse of commas is connected to the fact you also overuse the word 'and', especially when you get into the action. Such as this:

Not having time to take proper aim, she feared that he would die, but there was no time to worry about it, because another shot rang out, and someone else screamed, and Erika didn’t recognize the voice, and feared it was a civilian.

This sentence is way too wordy. If you have to use 'and' too many times, find another way to phrase it or separate it into more than one sentence. If you can find another conjunction or make it a new sentence, it should also cut down on your comma usage. Something like, 'Not having time to take proper aim, she fear the he would die; but there was no time to worry about it, because another shot rang out. Someone else screamed but Erika didn't recognise the voice and feared it was a civilian.'

One last thing I wanted to mention is when Anne Peters teleports to the platform, you don't mention there's anyone else there at all, and then you're like 'everyone was silent'. Who everyone, where everyone? You should mention that beforehand.

Anyway ^.^ Luck to you.
 

Ash_Junior

Irredeemable Nerd
crap. I knew I should have done a more careful going-over instead of just copy/pasting it from the old one, and adding in a few new things.

When I write now, I actually don't do the blahlahblah, "blahblah blah."

that was worked out a couple times ago.

The majority of this was written at least a year, maybe more ago, so...

>.<

I can't say I'm a big fan of original regions (just call me hypocrite, since I've got one in the works myself) but so far yours isn't bad.

well....

there are going to be at least two major created countries in this fic...with at least another two playing a semi-major role....

Tintia and Engara are the main ones. Anne's in Engara right now, actually...basicaly, their claim to fame is being fanatic followers of a religion whose central figure is named Lont, and having the best Special Forces/spynet around.

Tintia, the other one...

that'll be introduced in a chapter or two.

:D

maybe three.

lol.
 
M

Mew-Holder

Guest
purple_drake said:
'And most of those were dead.' I'm guessing someone we know has met her before? :D I can't say I'm a big fan of original regions (just call me hypocrite, since I've got one in the works myself) but so far yours isn't bad.

I was pretty surprised when you let the gym leaders and even normal trainers use guns during the 'Celadon Slaughter', and it didn't really have the air of a pokemon-based arrest. Also, Erika is the grass-type gym leader, why couldn't she and her trainers just sleep powder the whole building? They could've figured out who was Rocket and who wasn't afterwards and been able to take the underground levels by surprise without as many casualties.

I haven't taken note of little mistakes, but your biggest problems in terms of grammar is that you tend to overuse commas, especially since you use it instead of a full stop just before someone speaks, like this:



That should be a full stop. The person is speaking, yes, but it's not necessarily a continuation of their previous action. Occasionally you might find the need to use a comma there, but such instances should be few and far between. Your generally overuse of commas is connected to the fact you also overuse the word 'and', especially when you get into the action. Such as this:



This sentence is way too wordy. If you have to use 'and' too many times, find another way to phrase it or separate it into more than one sentence. If you can find another conjunction or make it a new sentence, it should also cut down on your comma usage. Something like, 'Not having time to take proper aim, she fear the he would die; but there was no time to worry about it, because another shot rang out. Someone else screamed but Erika didn't recognise the voice and feared it was a civilian.'

One last thing I wanted to mention is when Anne Peters teleports to the platform, you don't mention there's anyone else there at all, and then you're like 'everyone was silent'. Who everyone, where everyone? You should mention that beforehand.

Anyway ^.^ Luck to you.


is this how much ya usually write
mew
 

purple_drake

E/GL obsessed
is this how much ya usually write
mew

o_O Oookies...

Usually it depends on how many mistakes I can find, how many I can be bothered correcting, and how well I know the author.

Next time, Mew-Holder, please review the fic, otherwise your post can be classified as spam.
 

Ash_Junior

Irredeemable Nerd
Duck, Lance’s instincts screamed at him! Without thinking, he dropped to the ground, and a Scyther’s sharp scythe claw swung through where his neck had been seconds before. He rolled backwards, and the Scyther's other arm scythe struck the ground where he had just been. He came up with a left punch that hit the Scyther on its left torso, and rolled away is the Scyther's right scythe came up and nearly sliced him in half. Suddenly, Lance heard a roar and he dropped to the ground moments before flames shot by overhead, and struck the Scyther, who cried out in pain before collapsing to the arena floor. Lance looked up at his Charizard, and nodded his thanks. He got up and dusted himself off, and looked around. He and Karen had come in alone, and were meeting stiff resistance. Karen was working her way over to the living area of the gym, her Pokemon going in front of her as a sort of buffer while he and his Pokemon were trying to keep the Rockets busy.

Then he didn’t have time for anything else. Three Rockets were charging towards him and his Pokemon—their Pokemon deployed in front of them. He had his Charizard with him, but the rest were elsewhere. Somewhere he heard his Dragonite roar out in pain, but he couldn’t allow himself to be distracted. In came an Umbreon, and he rolled to the side, grabbed its tail, and threw it into a Rocket, who tumbled over backwards. One Pokemon temporarily down, seventeen in this group to go, and still two more trainers. Then a Raticate was launching itself at his leg, and a roll and a swift kick knocked it aside. He felt rough hands grab him, and he knew that he was out of time. The humans had arrived. Poor Charizard was overwhelmed, when suddenly, with a screech like some feral bird of prey, his Aveamon swooped in, grabbed the Raticate and an Espeon, darted up high into the gym with its powerful cerulean wings, and hurled them into the ceiling of the gym before coming back down for another pass.

Lance didn't get a glimpse of the beautiful Flying/Dragon type, but he knew that it would never give up until it either Aveamon had freed him, or the dragon-type was dead. Most trainers had never seen an Aveamon before. He certainly hadn’t, when he had visited Alto for the first time. This particular Aveamon was one of the youngest of the species to ever leave the island.

Suddenly, the Aveamon slammed into the Rocket holding him, and Lance was momentarily disoriented by the black tail feathers before he managed to fall forward, and roll to the left. It was a move that saved his life. The Umbreon had returned and had leaped towards him. He glanced up at his Charizard, and saw it on the ground, panting. From somewhere, another Scyther was coming in, its arm raised for a killing blow against the Charizard. Lance pulled a ball from his belt and held it towards the fire type, “RETURN!” he called out loudly.

One of his Pokemon was down, but he still had five left. Draman, his tiny Psychic Dragon came barreling out of nowhere and knocked aside the Umbreon, who responded by sinking its teeth into its attacker’s golden tail. Howling in pain, Draman flew into the air and dislodged the Umbreon by smashing it into a Rocket’s head, then flew off, its golden body glittering in the bright light of the Viridian Gym.

Lance was fighting hand to hand now, and he had to watch it. He didn’t know how many people the Rockets had in reserve, so he couldn’t afford to get too beat up.

Left, right, block. He dodged another punch, then brought up his left foot and slammed it into his opponent’s knee. As the Rocket instinctively bent down, Lance’s foot came up, and the man groaned his protest at what Lance had chosen for its target. With a final sucker punch to the gut, the man went down.

Lance had no time for victory, as he was immediately grabbed again from behind. Acting on pure instinct, the Champion of the Indigo League grabbed the man’s head, and hauled him over his shoulder, and onto the ground. The Dragon Trainer reached for one of the Rocket’s hands, and jerked it behind the man’s back, while keeping a knee on the man’s back. With his left hand, he reached into a pocket for some handcuffs, and put it onto the man’s hand, and reached for the other one. He had just grabbed it when a Charmeleon dropped onto his back, slamming him onto the ground. Lance rolled over, and raised a hand to punch the fire type, when a burst of water spread over him. It was from his water dragon, Draqua, who, not very good at battling, had been circling the top airspace of the gym with its enormous twenty-five foot wingspan, and lending a hand wherever she could.

Lance rolled to his left, content to let his dragon handle it, and rolled right into his Tundramon. An ice dragon, it was a Pokemon he had captured in the Ski Resort country of Nuschantz. Its light blue scales glittered as it turned to confront a threat to Lance, he took cover under her silver-white wings for just a moment. This particular Tundramon had brown feet, not Blue or Black, which meant that while it may have been a superbly strong battler, it would never have been accepted by any of its own species. Tundramon have looked down upon the blue and black-footed Tundramon of Nuschantz, and he doubted anything would change that.

Lance darted away, and tackled a Rocket who was about to fire his gun at Lance’s Arachnadrago, a prize he had captured on a trip in the dense forests north of Pewter City. The Bug Dragon was very small, like all Arachnadrago., and was hued a very bright red, and speckled with brown and black spots. Its purple head head came up, and its dull green topknot whipped around. It spotted something behind Lance, and leaped into the air. Lance dropped to the ground, knowing that something was coming after him, and a Tri-attack missed him by inches. Arachnadrago's small tail whipped over Lance’s head a second after he was down, and slammed into the Fearow that had fired at Lance.

From elsewhere came frightened screams, and as Lance punched the Rocket in the jaw, he heard many of them calling for surrender, a cry that was soon taken up by all the Rockets in the gym. Lance stood up and dusted himself off, and looked at Karen, who was grinning stupidly at him. he gave her a mock salute, which she returned. Exhausted, bruised, and bleeding in a half dozen places, he looked around as his team landed. It was odd, he thought to himself, that only two of his Pokemon would be recognized by the average Kantan trainer, but his edge of type advantages he wouldn’t otherwise would have had was what kept him in business, and was why he was still the champion.

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Lance stood behind the cameras in Goldenrod City's main Television Studio, the rest of the Elite Four flanking him, looking at a news reporter who was looking decidedly excited, and more than a little flustered. And why shouldn’t she be? Not only was this her first real broadcast, she was about to announce the biggest news that she would probably ever report in her life. Plus the Elite Four, the five most famous people in the region, were watching her.

Out of the corner of his eye on his left, he could see Lorelei, standing with a firmness in her posture that he had never seen before. He had been impressed with Erika’s report on the battle, and Lorelei’s effectiveness. Lance wondered exactly how the shy young woman had given way to this new Lorelei.

Behind him he could smell Karen’s perfume behind him and slightly to his right. She was the only one that hadn’t told him about her battle. He had been there, of course, but she had been out of his sight for most of the time. Still, she didn't really like talking about her battles.

Bruno, he could barely see on his right, was still wearing his garish outfit from before, and looked very much the worse for wear. According to Erika, he had tried taking on three powerful rockets by himself, and had lost miserably.

Agatha’s raspy breathing could be heard from behind him, and slightly to his left. Erika had said that she had, to quote the Celadon Gym Leader, “Kicked a lot of Rocket derriere with that cane of hers.”

The young woman anchor looked at Lance again, as if for assurance that she’d do a good job, and Lance smiled and nodded encouragingly. She took a deep breath and smiled at him, then composed herself for the upcoming news report.

Lance had traveled all the way to Goldenrod for this announcement, but felt that it would be worth it. He was going to watch JNN, or the Johto News Network, broadcast the first mention of the capture. JNN was one of the most widely viewed TV networks anywhere, and Lance had let them in on the secret first.

“This is JNN breaking news,” the recorded voice that Lance had come to know so well said, along with the musical chime. The woman took a deep breath, then smiled as the red light on top of the camera indicating that the camera was recording turned on. “Ladies and Gentlemen.” She opened her mouth to continue, then looked down at the desk, where she had her hands folded in front of her. She looked up, a jubilant grin on her face, “We are pleased to announce that Giovanni, former head of Team Rocket was caught just hours ago by Agatha, Lorelei, and Bruno of the Elite Four, and Erika, gym leader of Celadon City.”

Lance smiled, and knew that it wouldn’t be long before the rest of the news networks got this information, and knew that even now his press secretary was calling a press conference to confirm JNN’s story. It was the way of the press to flock to anything that smelled even remotely like a story, and chase it until it bore fruit. Still, there wasn’t anything left for him to do here. Lance turned and caught the eyes of his fellow Elites. He nodded and gestured towards the door, and they all left the studio.

“Well,” Karen said as soon as the door shut behind them, “Now the world knows.”

Lorelei nodded, “Now they know.”

Agatha coughed, and said, “Lance, sonny, you better organize a Kantan militia.”

Bruno looked at the old woman in shock, “Agatha, why would he want to do that? We just beat Team Rocket, both here and in Johto. Their power base is completely gone, and I doubt that there are many members left in the world at large.”

Agatha shuffled along beside Lance, using her cane for support. “How little you know of the way things are,” she muttered, then spoke louder. “Team Rocket is but one face of many. Besides, once the other Rocket groups hear once we’ve done, they’ll come back here to Kanto to try and wreak revenge on us. It would only be prudent to have a little something waiting for them.”

Bruno digested this, then a thought occurred to him. He looked at Agatha, who was walking ahead of him, with a puzzled expression on his face, “Huh? What do you mean, Team Rocket is one of many?”

Agatha turned around, and rolled her eyes. “Team Rocket, Team Magma, Team Aqua. Those were the three major gangs in the world, at least last week. Would you agree?”

Bruno nodded cautiously, “Go on,” he said, her gaze fixed on Agatha.

“Team Rocket is not the criminal mastermind that you thought it was.” Agatha said, then paused to cough and catch her breath again. “I’m old, but I’ve seen a thing or two in my time. And one of those things was that when I traveled around the world, even farther than Lance here, there was always a gang that oppressed people, or warred against each other. Wherever I went, there was always something more. Something,” she coughed again, “Something that oppressed people. There were many teams, but there can only be one root. One parent that all the gangs around the world cling to. Whether it’s Team Magma, Team Rocket, Team Blizzard, Team Geo or whatever their name is, there will always be another gang to take the place of another.”

Lance was already calculating what to say in his speech when he asked for a Kantan Militia, and who to ask to lead it. Surge could be a commander of the Vermillion Militia, but Erika, Misty, and Brock probably wouldn't know the first thing about warfare. Sabrina and Koga, however, were other matters entirely. Blaine could help a little, but he was getting a little old.

Lance bit his lip. What Agatha said was confirming his worst fears. He had noticed the discrepancy in his travels as well, and by Karen’s downcast head, he was pretty sure that she had as well. Only Bruno and Lorelei, who hadn’t traveled that much in their lifetime, and were still relatively young, had no idea that this was coming.

Lorelei frowned. “Didn't Bugsy beat 'em all when they tried to take over Johto?” she demanded.

Agatha laughed. “He defeated their overt faces, child, but they've still got their covert side. And besides, with their defeat, it's unlikely that they're just going to sit down and die. We've injured their pride, now. They're in it for the long haul.”

”There’s a bit of poetry about this kind of thing I read a while back,” Karen said quietly, and Lance could just imagine Bruno rolling his eyes, as he knew he was. “It went something like this. “Raiders of darkness,” Karen began to recite,
Marauders of light.
There are those that make a big mess,
With the opposition worsening the blight.

War never solved anything

That couldn’t have been solved

By hearing love sing

That all their differences could have been absolved.
Instead forever and always they shall clash,
yet never above the other rise.
Over this world they eternally shall hash,
until once more the Titans shall rise.



Lance looked at her, stunned that she knew that poem, “That was written by Devon Harding,” Lorelei spoke, as if reading Lance's mind. “Can't believe she was such a moron,” he thought he heard her say. “Can't believe she completely ignored me.”

Lance looked at her, and she smiled sweetly at him. He shook his head and turned back towards Karen, but his hand brushed Karen's. Whatever he was going to say completely evaporated. Karen smiled at him, and her smile gave him butterflies in his stomach.

“It was a poem called ‘The Time of the Titans.’” Karen said, shifting her focus to Lorelei. Lance shook her head, and forced himself to concentrate on something other than Karen. “Devon Harding had been an Altan warrior in the Gerahid era,” Karen explained, turning to Bruno and Lance, “but most people didn’t realize that she also wrote poetry, mainly with a love theme. Most concerned a guy named Gerahid. This is one of her more popular non-love poems, and tells of the struggle between good and evil. I think I've heard it read at military academy graduations.”

“That’s….” Lance stared at her, “I didn’t realize you dabbled in Altan poetry.”

Karen shrugged, “They wrote the best poems, histories, and other things of that sort of most eras. Why shouldn’t I read their poems? Their best work is from the Gerahiddian era, mainly from Harding.” Lance’s gaze met Karen’s and for a moment, Lance was captivated by her eyes. They were brown, he noticed, with flecks of brown in them. They were….beautiful.

“PLEASE!” Bruno shouted, getting glares from various people working in the lobby of the studio, and Lance looked away from Karen, blushing slightly. Only Agatha caught this small movement, and she smiled slyly, “You can’t tell me,” Bruno continued. “that some girl that lived a long time ago knew anything about the end of the world! I mean, what could she know about that sort of thing?”

“She was one of the brightest minds in that time,” Lorelei offered quietly, “She studied mythology, history, languages of the world, science—you name it, she studied it.” Her face brightened, and Lance could tell that this was one of her favorite subjects, “Of course, she also loved to write. Up to about a year before her mysterious death in a strange battle in Tintia, she kept a very detailed diary about her life.”

“Right,” Agatha put in, pushing open the door and walking out into the bustling street of Goldenrod City, “One of the focal points of her books was her crush on Gerahid.”

Bruno rolled his eyes, “Okay, okay, so some chick—“ the three women in the group glared at him, but he didn’t seem to notice, “That wrote love poems knows so much about the end of the world?” he shook his head, “Sorry, man, but I’m not buying it.”

Lance put his arm around Bruno and grinned, “Ah, don’t worry about it, Bruno, you don’t have to buy it, you’re just buying us dinner!”

Bruno groaned, “Is it too late to say that I buy the chick’s poem now?”

Agatha laughed, a harsh, cruel laugh, “Yes, Bruno. It is indeed too late.” Suddenly Bruno found the top of his head hurting, and he raised his hands to his head, “And always remember,” she said in her scratchy tone, “I am NOT a chick.” She chuckled dryly, “I’m more like an old hen by now.”

Lorelei, Lance, and Karen laughed, but Bruno looked uncomfortable. “Oh, come on, Bruno, it can’t be that bad.” Lorelei said in a light tone, “I mean, you get to make it up to her by buying us ALL dinner at the most expensive place we can find.”

Bruno groaned again, “Somehow that doesn’t make me feel any better.”

Karen grinned, “Excuse me, did my ears deceive me?” she chuckled, “I believe that my colleague said that it was to make up to Agatha, not make you feel better.”

Lance put his arm around Bruno, “Come on, man,” he said, “It’s not that bad. I’ll tell you what. You take Agatha, and I’ll take Lorelei and Karen.”

He was only half serious, and saw that Karen looked startled for a second, before she realized he wasn’t serious, and he heard Bruno complaining, apparently not having realized that he was joking.. Lance felt a lump in his throat as he looked at Karen. He looked away, and in his peripheral vision, he saw Karen do the same. No. Now was not the time to be thinking thoughts like that.

Lorelei, Bruno, and Agatha walked ahead of them, and Lance and Karen fell behind them. For one brief moment, they looked at each other. Really looked at each other. Lance looked into her eyes. It was like looking into the eye of a hurricane. Her emotions seemed to swirl around in her eyes. And as they held each other’s gaze, it seemed as though a part of her that had been closed for a long time was being opened up for fresh air.

“Hey!” it was Bruno’s voice, “You guys coming or what?” his head was poked out the doorway of one of Goldenrod’s most prestigious restaurants, “If you don’t come in soon, I’m not paying for you!”

Then, suddenly, whatever had opened inside of Karen slammed back shut, just that quickly. Karen blushed, and turned away, “I’m coming!” she called, hurrying towards the restaurant, “We were just, uh, talking.”

Lance’s gaze followed her after she entered the diner. Yes. They had been talking. But not with their mouths. It was as if some sort of telepathy had taken place. But they would talk in the normal fashion. And soon. For a long time. Lance would make sure of it.

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Engara. If you asked a random person on the streets of Celadon City, they wouldn’t know where to begin to look for it on an unlabeled map. Seven out of ten people in Kanto and Johto haven’t even heard the slightest hint of any suggestion of Engara’s name in their life. Yet it is the second most powerful nation in terms of military strength in the world, just ahead of Neragosh, and just behind Tintia. Its corporations and organizations span the entire globe. There isn’t a major city in the world that Engara doesn’t have active or passive operatives inside its borders. There’s not a country in the world that some gang of Engaran origin isn’t operating in. Whether you’re talking about Team Rocket, Team Aqua, Team Magma, Team Geo, Team Terra, Team Blizzard, Team Psi, or Team Vengeance, the Engaran Special Forces Corps, or even some of the other gangs that populate the world, most have an Engaran origin or at least Engaran financial backing.

While the Engaran military machine is second only to Tintia’s, but Engara’s spy net and Special Operations are second to none. From simple espionage to the most complex sabotage, the Engarans are the best, toughest, meanest bunch of bullies ever to have come out to the sand box of life. The only thing that’s keeping them from bullying around the comparatively weaker countries is the country of Tintia. To understand the blood feud between Engara and Tintia, it is necessary to go back to the beginning of both countries.

Hundreds of years ago, the North-western hemisphere of this world of Pokémon was controlled by a ruthless leader known only to history as Stephen the Pillar, although Pokémon and Tintians call him Stephen the Butcher. Stephen had a religious dislike of Pokémon, and instituted a crusade against them, with the sole intent of wiping them out. Forever.

The inhabitants of an island chain west of the focal point of Stephen the Pillar’s rule backed him whole-heartedly, and provided the bulk of the troops for the invasion. As a result, Stephen treated them well, and gave them the tart in life they needed by receiving the bulk of the new manufacturing facilities, as well as playing home base to Stephen’s mighty fleet of warships.

Back on the mainland, however, the crusade, though some might call it a Jihad, was not going so well. What began as a small band of peasants revolting against Stephen because of his crusade had erupted like wild fire to a full-blown civil war after he butcherred ten thousand Pokemon in a single day, in the mainland's capitol city of Elentar, known today as the Indigo Plateau after the bloodbath. Pokémon and humans fought side by side against a human only army. Towns were torn apart as Stephen demanded religious subjugation of Pokemon, but many refused. And those that refused faced the wrath of Stephen the Pillar.

For one hundred years, the war raged, until Stephen the Pillar and all of his sons were finally killed. The rebels, who came to be known as Tintians, splintered into four groups, and each group claimed one fourth of the territory they had taken from Stephen the Pillar, who had come to be known as Stephen the Butcher because of massacres he instituted to rid himself of rebels and Pokemon. The first group, the true Tintians, claimed an out-of-the way corner of the continent where the legendary grass type Gratomere held sway over the entire region. Gratomere made the proud dragons work for him, and fight in his armies. With the armies that were still mustered from their part of the old Pillaric territory, they marched in and conquered Gratomere, but never managed to defeat him. Instead, he was banished to what became known as the Dank Forest—a large forest, then much larger then than it is now.

Tintians freed the dragons, and, in return, the Dragons offered their support and the advice to never, under any circumstances, to land on Dark Isle. Dark Isle was a dark, forbidding place. A former volcano, it is a barren and desolate place, where only the strong survive to find food, never mind survive indefinitely. Making the best of what they had, the Tintians knew and believed that the best defense is the best offense. Their military grew to be the largest in the world. Yet they decided to stay out of world politics, and concentrate on their own beeswax.

The other three territories, which came to be Janera, Johto, and Kanto, fought amongst themselves in petty squabbles, until Kanto and Johto allied together and fought against Janera. Finally, after too many of their men were dying in battle, Johto, Kanto, and Janera agreed on a system of war that was both civilized, and minimized the losses of life. One person, in command of a miniature army of Pokémon, would fight another person, who was in command of another miniature army of Pokémon. Whoever won the battle would receive prestige, and his country more honor, and influence, because when he won, he won for his country. This is where the ancient art of Pokémon training has its roots.

The Engarans, however, already had an elaborate spy net set up, and was watching all these events with greater and greater anticipation. Unbeknownst to most history scholars, just when the fighting between Janera, Johto, and Kanto was the fiercest, the Engarans launched an assault on them, citing religious reasons. It would have worked, if they hadn’t overlooked one tiny problem. As a landing point, they chose Tintia.

Tintians had always been a very xenophobic country after the defeat of The Pillar, but the appearance of thousands of Engaran troops sent their army into motion. In less than a single day, the Engaran invasion force had been destroyed. The entire fleet was sunk by aquatic and avian Pokémon. The entire invasion force wiped out by a combination of human ingenuity and Pokémon power. It didn’t take long for the Engarans to see the light and start deploying Pokémon along with their men, despite some religious leaders' contentions to the contrary. Engarans are famous for holding grudges. This is one grudge that they have never forgotten. It is unlikely they ever will.

To this day the conflict still stands. Engara versus Tintia, man against Pokemon. It is almost amusing in a way. Two huge military powers, each with enormous armies, yet neither of them will commit to a slugging match. With one large exception. The single case of what anyone would call war happened at the end of the Gerahiddian era. They mounted a titanic offensive and invaded Tintia. The battle raged for a week, but the Tintians finally won, after a tremendous loss of life. Historians of that time period are not clear about the details of that battle, but it is widely known that Gerahid, the greatest general Tintia ever knew died that day, along with Devon Harding, a well-known Altan warrior, poet, and amateur historian. Ever since then, Engara has been content to take pot shots at Tintia through raids every few months, more to test their defenses than anything else. Although historians warn that Engara is due to try something major soon, most people either ignore the news or pretend they didn’t hear.

But in the near future, they would wish they had. Deep in the bowels of the Engaran archipelago lies the Engaran Central Military Command building. Inside the building, down two levels, and east to Gamma sector lies the headquarters of the Engaran Special Forces Unit, the back-bone of the Engaran Army’s power.

The director, who never gives out his name, wears only a simple black suit, and only appears to brief the top agents on the most important missions. He sits behind a simple wooden desk with thin sheets of paper on top of it. Nobody that worked in Gamma Sector was quite sure what he really did, and no one had the courage to ask him.

“Peters,” he was saying to one of his agents who had just come from three days of exhaustive debriefing, “I’m sure you understand the security risks that Giovanni places to Engara. He knows too much about us. I want him eliminated before he causes us trouble. Is that clear?” he asked, looking at the agent in front of him.

“Crystal, sir.” The woman said, staring straight ahead, with military precise posture.

“Also, The Elite Four are getting to be a problem. They’ll be able to break our plans down if they’re still around. While you’re there, will you also activate the sleeper Elite? I would really appreciate it.”

Other than a slight glimmer of eagerness in the woman’s eyes, there was no change in her expression. “Sir, yes sir, it will be done sir.” She said with military efficiency.

“Then what is your mission?” he asked, “Repeat it to me.”

“Eliminate Giovanni, activate Sleeper Elite. Avoid being detected, sir.” The woman said smoothly, emotionlessly.

The man nodded, “You have it.” He leaned forwards, “I want this to be clear, Peters, we can have no mistakes.”

The woman nodded slightly, “I understand. There will be none. Giovanni will be dead within seventy-two hours. The sleeper will be activated shortly after that.”

The man nodded, “Very good, then. We have just over a month before Operation: Celebi begins in earnest.” He leaned forwards again, “The invasion of Kanto must take place in exactly one month, or all our plans will be for naught.”

The Engaran Special Agent looked him in the eye, “Everything will be ready by then, sir. I stake my life on it.”

The man in the black suit smiles faintly, “Oh, you are, Peters, make no mistake of that. You most certainly are. Remember, everything is running on a very tight schedule. There is no time for playing cowboy this time. Dismissed.”

With a curt nod, the woman got up, and sauntered out of the room, on a mission that no other could perform. There was only one who could activate the sleeper Elite. There were few who imagined the power held within the Elite. There were few, indeed, that knew that the Elite was a sleeper. A sleeper that held sheer, raw power. No one else could imagine it. No one else had embraced it as she had. No one else…could control the sheer power of a near legendary Pokémon genetically engineered for its power.

Nobody. And that went doubly for Kantan scum who had no idea of what a real fight was like. The woman’s features turned into a smile, but it was more like an evil grimace than anything else. No one would know, no one would expect what would come next. It would come out of nowhere and throw them into disarray.

Soon, very soon, the Engarans could finally begin wreaking revenge upon their age-old enemies. Soon, very soon, many things in this world would change. Forever.
 
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AKEBOSHI

Guest
Holy frick, your first chapter at size 7 is four A4's long o.o; Anyway, I can learn from this :D I really love the part whre Karen tried to get the best out of Lorelei, and Bruno owned X) *subscribes*

"She'd give ME a run for MY money?"

So, it means that Lorelei would cut out Lance's pay?
 

Ash_Junior

Irredeemable Nerd
that's an expression, Kidodi.

it means that Lorelei might be able to take on Lance.

er...

yeah.

that's the best thing that I can think of to describe it.
 

purple_drake

E/GL obsessed
NOOOOOOOOO!! Don't tell me you're a Lance/Karen shipper! *cries*

*cough* Okay, I'm over it. :p Sorry, I'm not much of a supporter of shippings, and the only one I can see with Lance in it is Lance/Flannery (blame Quackerdrill for that. Ebil.)

Anyway! Nice revealing history, some of which I already knew from your RPG, but you still have to watch out for some comma misusage, repetition, and I spotted some random capitalization in there too.
 

Ash_Junior

Irredeemable Nerd
crap.

I thought I was original there, with Lance/Karen.

once again, I don't really know who Flannery is.

Yeah, you've told me, but I don't know who Flannery IS.

lol.

oh, but don't worry.

they don't end up together.

*evil grin*

there's a plot twist--pretty big--about ten or so pages (MS word) ahead.

I think that's how long it was.
 

purple_drake

E/GL obsessed
crap.

I thought I was original there, with Lance/Karen.

lol, it's hard to be original with shippings anymore. I dunno what it's called but I'm pretty sure I've seen it somewhere.
 

Ash_Junior

Irredeemable Nerd
Chapter 4....

it gives a little bit more history...

:D

you guys have no clue what is about to happen.

For those of you who have read the previous version of this, this is the start of what had been Chapter TWO.

:p

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Years ago, when humanity was just finding itself in the world, a race of beings known as the Titans ruled the earth. They knew that in time, humanity would become too powerful, and would either wipe themselves out, or be wiped out by Pokemon. To prevent this, they created extremely powerful Pokemon, which they called Protectors, but came to be known as Legendaries. If humans or Pokemon ever got too powerful, the Legendaries would step in, and prevent one or the other from killing themselves or the other. At least, that was the plan.

One of the Titans by the name of Lokrye became tired of sharing power, and secretly raised up an army of Pokemon and humans against them. He created powerful devices that would allow him to be more powerful than any of the other Titans. He held off from using them, however, as once he used them, he would never be able to negate their effects.

Then, Lokrye was betrayed, and the Titans were swift in their retribution. Lokrye, driven to nearly the point of defeat, used his devices, and became more powerful than any thing the world has ever seen. To prevent anyone from using his devices and becoming as powerful as him, he destroyed them, and then began a counter-offensive against the Titans.

The other Titans could not hope to ever defeat him on their own, they knew, so they asked the Protectors, the Pokemon, and the humans to assist them in their war on Lokrye. The Protectors and Pokemon quickly agreed to help, but the humans, who were at that time mostly settled in one area, were wary of the Titans, and refused.

The Titans, undeterred, began one of the bloodiest wars ever fought. For a time, it looked as if Lokrye would be defeated, but then the Dark Titan himself entered the fray. Thousands of Protectors were killed that day, as well as millions of Pokemon and nearly half of the Titans.

Then, when all hope seemed lost, a charge by the humans, led by a warrior named Gerahid, broke the rear ranks of Lokrye, and fought their way to him. Unfortunately, human weapons of that time were of no match to the sheer power of the Dark Titan. In desperation, Gerahid picked up a weapon of a Human Titan, and stabbed Lokrye with it. No one is quite sure what happened next, but when it was over, Lokrye was gone, as well as the other Titans.

Time passed, but the island on which the battle took place never recovered. To this day, it is a black, barren island to which few go, and even fewer return. Its active volcano occasionally spews lava, and covers over everything that is on the island.

Millennia passed, and mankind spread out over the earth. The vivid memories of the battle became a story that was passed from one generation to the next, growing less believable with each telling. Eventually, the battle became a thing of myth and legend, and was no longer believed to actually have happened.

But that was not the end of Lokrye. He had grown too powerful for that. Somehow, from wherever he was, he reached back to this world, and talked to a young man by the name of Tadorae while he was sleeping. Lokrye told him that his name was Lont, and that he had been unfairly imprisoned. He gave Tadorae instructions, and gave him specific tasks to complete. He told Tadorae that once the tasks were complete, he would be free, and that Tadorae and his followers would have power beyond their wildest imaginings.

Tadorae knew that he could not complete the tasks of Lokrye on his own, and began recruiting others to his cause, calling Lont a god, and himself a prophet. Before long, he had an army, and he set about conquering the world, one of Lokrye's first tasks.

Within seven years, Tadorae conquered most of the known world, and the rest of the known world was living in fear of his armies. He ordered the construction of a magnificent temple to Lont on Dark Isle, as the island on which the finaly battle with Lokrye had begun to be called. Tadorae, for his part, was a fair ruler, and treated his subjects fairly. Unfortunately, not all of his family did the same.

His first-born son and heir, Stephen, was appointed as ruler over what is today Kanto, Johto, Janera, and Tintia. At first, he was called Stephen the Pillar, because he cracked down on crimes being committed within his territory. Stephen's lands quickly became the safest places to live. Then there were no more robbers to kill, and, because his now aging father had assigned him a large piece of land in the very heart of the empire, there were no more enemies to fight. His soldiers began to grumble against him, and Stephen knew he had to do something.

Then his father died, but not before proclaiming Stephen the next prophet of Lont. But the bloody legacy of Stephen, who became known as the Butcher, is written of elsewhere, and needs not be repeated here.

Hundreds of years passed, and somehow, Lokrye was able to escape from whatever prison the Titans had put him into. It was only through the skill and daring of the Tintians that he was put back into wherever it was that he came from.

Tintia—The very name evokes a feeling of dread and unease. It is a country unlike any other. The very name is enough to make those who share a border with the xenophobic country be quiet for hours on end. For Gym Leaders to close up for the rest of the day, and the Elite Four to shiver in their very boots. Tintia is an enigma, and it is a certainty. It is reality, but also myth. It inspires fear, and it inspires courage. But most of all, it is powerful.

The most powerful nation on the face of the planet, Tintia has kept evil at bay for hundreds of years. The fanatical religion known as Lonticism is their enemy. Lonticism believes that somewhere within Tintia lies an extremely powerful being named Lont that will some day come to judge the world, and grant ultimate power to his followers. Anyone on the streets of any League country probably would not have heard of Lonticism, as it is generally considered a dead religion.

Tintians know better.

Tintia is a small country, but rich in both rare flora and fauna. It is regarded as the Elite of the Elite for Pokemon Trainers, its warriors who are partnered with Pokemon second to no one. Tintia does not have a League, and instead trains its humans to battle with and against Pokemon. These Pokemon receive training from both Pokemon and human from an extremely young age. This combination makes Tintians extremely dangerous people to cross.

Indeed, the Tintians have gained a reputation for their fighting, and it is said, though never to a Tintian’s face, that Tintia is run by thieves and gangs, which is pure nonsense. Tintia is ruled by a republic, but a republic careful to preserve its heritage, and, as such, has allowed only a limited number people into the country each year, of which a large number are Professors. The fact that few outsiders travel to the country each year is the reason that the rumors of Tintia's mob government began. While only about two thousand people are allowed into the country each year, there are two professions that are permanently banned from Tintia. Lawyers, and Pokemon Trainers. While it might seem odd that Pokemon Trainers are not allowed into the country, it does make sense when one takes into account that Pokemon are held in such high esteem that they are considered equal to humans.

Elections are held every five years, and every President rules for five years, but is accompanied by a Legislative branch of the government. This lower house, consisting of Pokemon affixed with translators, who were elected by the Pokemon from around the country, and an upper house, consisting of human beings who are elected by the citizens of Tintia, and another, mid-house, which consists of a mix of human and Pokemon representatives.

Another interesting characteristic of Tintia is that Pokemon and men live as equals, not as owner and pet or trainer and battler, and that the Pokemon are actually given a vote in elections.. Because of this, Tintia has become a refuge for many Pokemon, who in many other countries are nearly extinct, and became a haven, protecting entire species from annihilation, though it may have been incidental.

The Justice system in Tintia differs much from the rest of the world. As every Tintian citizen is a member of the Tintian Army, nearly every Tintian has someone that has a higher rank than they do. The main difference between justice in Tintia and everywhere else in the world is that there are no juries, and each case has four judges. These four judges are all Psychic types, and can tell instantly who is at fault, or who is guilty. This elegant, yet simple plan has saved Tintia hundreds of hours of time.

Tintia is also home to the famous Beech laboratory-of which Silph Company is a subsidiary, and has researched many things, including the famous Pokemon Storage System. The famous inventor Bill Dugan actually lived in Tintia for several years, but has a summer cottage in Kanto.

Geographically, it is settled over the northern borders of Kanto, and is the closest country on the planet to the island country of Alto. It has two major islands-the Dark and Dragon Isles.

Dark Isle is the shattered remnant of the island on which Lokrye was long ago defeated. It has never recovered from that battle. The now-extinct volcano stands as a vanguard over the barren, volcanic plain. The flowers that spring up in the Spring were either choked out by the brambles that seemed to thrive on Dark Isle, or die because of adistinct lack of soil. Dark Pokemon have flourished here for centuries, eating the massive fish populations that live just off-shore, taking advantage of few people or Pokemon that are foolish enough to step foot onto the island. The few early, hardy settlers that set out to colonize the island were found ripped to shreds—massacred.

In modern times, only powerful trainers go to the island, and then only for a short time, and always live in fear of the legend of the Lokrye. The legend is now whispered fearfully from one to another in dark alleyways, the storyteller and the listener alike glancing around fearfully. It is one thing to scoff at the legend of the Titans sitting at home or in a restaurant somewhere, where the very temperature of the air can be adjusted, but it is much harder to disbelieve the legend while you were on the island, solidified lava under your feet, a perpetual darkness brought on by ash still in the air from the volcano’s many eruptions, and dark Pokemon jumping out from on all sides.

To the south of Dark Isle looms an overgrown forest that few dare to enter. On a map, it looks like some kind of Pokemon’s head opening its mouth wide to swallow Dragon Isle, and at what would be, if you thought of it as a head, its neck appeared to be a thin collar on a map. What looks like a collar on the map is actually an extremely tall wall that prevents any of the extremely dangerous grass Pokemon that resided in the forest to escape. Armed sentries, along with their Pokemon, are posted at half-mile increments along the whole of the wall, which stretches a full ten miles.

The sentries often report wild scrabblings on the other side of the wall, and strange wailings that very often have brought stout sentries to their knees, sobbing in fear. Many thought that these scrabblings were because of the legend of Gratomere, the Legendary Grass Type. Very few people or Pokemon have passed the gate, and fewer have returned alive. Most of the travelers through the forest were found washed up, torn to pieces, along Dragon Isle’s eastern shoreline.

Situated due south of the distant island country Alto, Dragon Isle is one of the last hideaways of the noble Dragonkind. Mankind and dragons have lived side by side, as a mutual agreement of don’t-catch-don’t-kill. Majestic spires and eyries abound on Dragon Isle, and it was there that the dragons prefer to make their home, though some actually began to live in the town. Some Dragons, such as the tiny Wenhirs, the wind type Dragons, live there, but are extinct everywhere else.

There is always a glorious celebration whenever a new dragon was born, whether in the city or miles away atop some lonely peak. Some dragons have volunteered to leave the island, but no dragon has ever been forced to leave the island with a trainer without there being swift and terrible retribution on the citizens of Dragon Town, as the city on the island was called. There was actually a war when the young Team Rocket attempted to do such a thing, and it took three hundred years to rebuild the town to its former glory-such was the wrath of the dragon-kind.

The countryside is studded with mountains, of which, the small mountain chain in the Northwest is the most prominent example. It is said that beyond that point, Pokemon stronger than imagination roam, and from there, powerful Pokemon such as Auroura and Borealis first appeared. In legend that was too far back to be fully remembered, it is said that there was a portal to another world somewhere in the middle of that landmass, which, if one had an imagination, looks rather like Mew.

The River Rainbow flows through the country like a ribbon, nearly cutting the country in half with its shimmering flow. The main waterway for the country, it runs from Rubyville, a town that is situated on Ruby Mountain, all the way to the Dark Sea. Both Dragon and Dark Isles are in the Dark Sea, and, beyond Dark Isle, the Dread Sea begins.

The Dread Sea was named in ages past, when mankind and Pokemon lived harmoniously side by side, yet both were too afraid of venturing through the sea. It is said that some travelers actually did cross the sea, and return back to the mainland telling of the marvels of Alto Island. Most were laughed into silence, and never brought the subject up again. Yet others left the mainland after being laughed at, and never returned. Everyone hushed this up as much as possible; After all, no one wanted to hear about people disappearing all the time, though some latter day historians believed that those travelers went back to Alto.

Children in Tintia, unlike most Leagues are not allowed to get Pokemon licenses. Instead, they are drafted into the Tintian Army. They then go around the country, studying at the assorted gyms, and gathering the certificates of completion that are received after every gym is complete, and grants them a promotion. Once an army grunt has completed every gym, they are promoted to officer-ship. Only officers are allowed to have Pokemon as travelling companions. Unlike many leagues, the Tinted Army founders decided that they wanted children to remember information, rather than rely on technology to have information on Pokemon. Potential officers, unless they had completed another league, are required to study under Professor Beech for a year before they could have their officer apprenticeship. In the country, there are seven gyms.

Very few people knew what lived in the long, mountainous stretch between Pewter City and Stratatown. Only two trainers have ever successfully made the entire journey on foot, though dozens had set out. Those two trainers were the current President and Vice President of the Tintia-Mitchell and Katrina Jordan. They married just after they graduated from the Tinted League, in a record nine months.

The Tintian Army Headquarters on Dragon Isle, where the mainstay type of the army is largely based on its name-sake island, are a collection of buildings that consisted largely of arches and porticos, with a small plaza-like opening in the center of each building. In these plazas, type specific training takes place. In the largest plaza in the central building, Tintians are trained as commanders of armies in strategic exercises, and, sometimes, paint-ball matches. Sometimes Pokemon are promoted over humans, and sometimes it is the other way around. Tintians have no qualms about using guns, unlike the majority of the world.

In this headquarters, in the Western sector, Intelligence division, there lies the offices of Major Redd Thompson. He is in charge of Tinted Army Intelligence, and has a fair amount of say in the military itself.

A military man at heart, Thompson thrived on rigidity and discipline, as evidenced by his immaculate desk, and tidy office. A few pictures of his family were all the comforts he allowed himself. The walls of his office were bare, and he often criticized others for having things on their walls that “distracted them from their work.”

Thompson never quite fit into the computer age, and still used hard copies, paper, and copier machines to do all his work. He decried computers as “a worthless waste of money that is evidenced when the electricity goes out,” and that he’d “rather have something that can be read after an Electro-Magnetic pulse hits.” As a result, it is often assumed that he has a messy desk, but he keeps up with the paperwork easily, and is often finished with his scheduled work before his workday is over. But then, there was usually more than scheduled paperwork to do on any average day.

Thompson wasn’t happy. Things in Kanto were coming to a head. The Indigo League couldn’t possibly know that. They couldn’t possible know how many Engaran agents had been implanted into the league, and into the populace in general. They couldn’t know that with Giovanni gone, the responsibilities of the entire team would fall to Engaran agents, who went by the aliases of Butch and Cassidy.

His phone rang, and his finger punched the speaker button instantly, “Yes?” he demanded abruptly. He was never one to not answer calls, but he didn’t take well to trivial calls. Everyone in the Intelligence sector, probably a major portion of the military knew that.

“Sir, I thought you’d want to know that the Engarans pulled an agent out. Agent Peters, we believe.” Came the voice of his Jynx receptionist. There was some slight crackling, but Thompson, as always, attributed that to the translator.

“Where was the extraction point?” he demanded instantly.

“Celadon City.” Was the crisp, immediate response.

Thompson sat, considering that for a moment. “Very well. I expect a report on my desk in half an hour.”

“The Intel team thought you’d say that, and they’ve got one prepared for you, sir.”

Thompson chuckled. Seven years of playing hardball finally paid off. People were starting to anticipate him. “Very well, bring it in, and the meeting of the intelligence heads is still on, correct?”

His door opened, and the Jynx who preferred to be called Darya waded through, “That’s right, sir,” she said, plopping a thick report down on his desk. “Is there anything else?”

Thompson looked at the report hungrily. He wasn’t sure what the Engarans were up to, pulling Peters out just now. She was their best agent, and had the best cover. He was going to make sure he found out. “That’ll be all for now, Darya.” He attacked the report before the Jynx even had a chance to turn and leave.

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“I still say it doesn’t make any sense!” Thompson insisted, rubbing the bridge of his nose. He had been arguing with the other Intelligence chiefs for half an hour, and they had all seemed to agree to disagree.

“Why doesn’t it make any sense?” Ruffles, a heavy-set man, he was the director of Tinted Army, Special Operations Training, but was required to attend the meeting in case one of the others were eliminated. His three yellow crests usually became inflamed when he was annoyed or angry, and they were inflamed to about the average point that they usually got to. Ruffles was standing up, waving his four arms about as he argued again and again over this issue. Ruffles was a Machamp, but a Machamp who was very sensitive about his name, and his hobby, raising goldfish. He placed his lower right hand on the back of his chair and demanded, “They’ve had her in Kanto for a couple of years, now. Surely she’s gathered some good intel by now!”

“I agree with Thompson,” Sandra, a petite, woman, with a sharp tongue countered. Her long body, short feet, and long tail may have made her out of place in other countries, but right here, the Furret fit right in. “They’d have a shot at even more intel now that Giovanni is captured.” she said, her light brown fur ringed with dark brown rippling.

“Not if Butch and Cassidy succeed him,” Ruffles shot back, waving his upper two arms in the air as his lower two grasped the back of his chair, “They’re trained Engaran agents. If they’re in charge of Team Rocket, they’ll have the Rocket spy net as well as the Engaran Spy net. It makes sense to bring her back.”

"Yes, but the Engaran Spy Net is far superior to Team Rocket's Spy Net!" Thompson retorted shortly. Mentally he sighed. Why did meetings always have to become shooting matches like this, he wondered.

“Please,” Old Faithful, one of the oldest Intelligence Chiefs at the table said quietly. Old Faithful was the smallest at the table, and had a turquoise skin that was beginning to turn dark blue. a large shell over his back, combined with his baby-like features gave away his species. He was a Squirtle, but at the same time, he was beginning to form Wartortle-like features. Small ears were beginning to form on the sides of its face, and his tail was beginning to lengthen. It had been his hypothesis when he was younger that if he waited long enough, he would eventually become a Blastoise, without evolving, and he had been encouraged in recent years by the growing features, that would have been anomolous to younger Squirtle. Standing a little over one and a half feet tall, Old Faithful had to stand on his chair to see everyone else, and had no qualms whatsoever about doing so. “Can we return to the topic at hand?" he asked softly, "Thompson and I have to give a report to Mitch and ‘Trina in just under an hour. What are our options, if Butch and Cassidy do take over Team Rocket, and decide to pursue further aggression against Johto or Kanto?”

Ruffles and Sandra glared at each other, then looked at their hands, and said nothing. “This Peters business is bad news,” Old Faithful continued quietly, looking at each of the other three intel directors in turn, “If they have returned her, it means they think they no longer need intelligence about Kanto. This has happened only once before, and that was when Engara and Neragosh tried to invade Alto.”

“We stopped them then,” Ruffles said, being his usual over-confident self, in an annoyed tone, “And we’ll stop them again!” he slapped all four of his hands onto the table, “Our military matches theirs. We’ll keep them from invading Kanto.”

“My only concern about that,” Sandra said quietly, “Is that they have probably already thought of that." the Furret looked around the table, meeting each Intelligence Head's gaze with her own, "and have already introduced a factor of which we have no awareness.”

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Pallet Town was a small town, with not much going for it except for the Oak Lab, Jessie mused, as she watched the inhabitants of the town--no, it wasn't a town, more like a hamlet--scurry about their every-day lives. She was in the place's only restaurant, but she had to admit it had good food.

It was nice not having to hear Meowth complain about everything, though that would change when she took him out of his Pokeball. He had protested vehemently, and it eventually came down to forcing him inside. He would be a dead giveaway, she considered as she put another bite of lasagna into her mouth, if he were outside of his Pokeball and started talking.

Both she and James had had their hair cut, hers to shoulder-length, his, shaved almost completely off in what the barber had called a "buzz cut." Jessie had also died her hair black, with streaks of her original red remaining. Jessie shifted in her seat, and tugged on the pants she was wearing. Despite her every attempt, she couldn't get used to it. Of course, the face that she wasn't wearing her Rocket uniform that she had worn for years probably factored into it. She sighed and looked down at her shirt. It was the one thing she liked about this whole disguise. It was a simple affair, basically a T-shirt with ruffled sleeves, and "I Heart Saffron City," emblazoned in bold letters across its pinkness. Well, she didn't like the pinkness, yes, but she had to look like an average trainer.

She looked up at James, who was busy shoveling soup into her mouth. She crinkled her nose, at the fact that his soup was mainly some kind of sushi, but then, he was paying for his own meal. James had chosen to get some comfortable hiking boots, blue jeans, and a shirt made out of denim, with no designs but plenty of pockets. She stared at him. Now that he was out of his Rocket uniform, he actually looked kind of....cute.

The thought jolted her, and she shook her head and looked back down at her lasagna, and cut another piece off and put it into his mouth. Jessie wondered why she was still here, and not setting off for Johto. Team Rocket had been annihilated in Kanto. It was only a stroke of fortune that they were hadn't been captured yet. If James hadn't come up with this hare-brained plot to steal Oak's research....

Her train of thought trailed off. She would not think about what it might have been like if she had stuck around in the Game Corner. She swallowed the lasagna, and put another piece into her mouth. Why was she still planning on doing something for Team Rocket? Team Rocket was doomed, as far as anyone was concerned. No one could bring it back, in the shape it was in now.

Then she heard a familiar voice calling out a name. She stiffened, and shot a warning glance over to James, who looked ready to leap out of his seat. "Don't even think about it," Jessie said in a low tone, "You'd blow our cover."

James nodded slowly, and a little resentfully as the black-haired youth scuttled past the diner and caught up with someone out of view. It was Ash Ketchum, and James was probably itching to get his Pikachu, but they had a different job now, and she'd make sure that James stuck by it. Especially considering this whole stupid mission was his idea.

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MWAHAHAHA!!!!!

and yes, I am a Jessie/James shipper.

so sue me.

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New Bark Town wasn't much of a town. It wasn't much of anything. It was the Johto equivalent of Pallet Town, in that the only thing keeping the town going at all was a Pokemon lab. The only difference, really, was that this lab belonged to Professor Elm. But soon, the town would be only a memory.

It was nearly dark. The perfect time for an attack. The diurnal Pokemon would be at the top of their game, and the nocturnal Pokemon would have energy to do the most damage. Butch narrowed his eyes. He had warned the Global Police to stop their harrassment of Team Rocket four days before, in a press release sent to the JNN studios. The Global Police had ignored it. This was their punishment for doing so.

Butch was tall, with an average build and blue hair. His dark uniform identified him as one of Team Rocket's elite. The white gloves that he normally wore had been traded in for dark gloves that wouldn't stand out in the dark.

Somewhere, he knew, Cassidy, his partner, was commanding the other half of the strike force. Slightly taller than himself, Cassidy had golden hair, a petite build, and didn't suffer fools gladly. But then, neither did he. That was, Butch mused amusedly, the result of their Engaran upbringing. These fools he was about to lead into battle had no idea that Team Rocket would eventually be destroyed, only to make way for Engaran annexation.

Kanto needed to be taken, Butch knew, before Lont would return. He felt a little guilty that he couldn't tell the Kantans or Johtans, or even his fellow Rockets about Lont, but he knew that if he was going to help his home country bring be around when Lont returned, he would not be able to tell anyone about him, yet.

Stephen the Pillar had been the first to have dreams from Lont, and told him that he needed to accomplish certain tasks, and if he could accomplish them, his power would be unmatched in all the world.

Stephen the Weakling, as he was known in Engara, had failed, but Engara carried on his legacy, and tried to accomplish Lont's tasks, so that they might be the inheritors of the power it would take to destroy the accursed Tintians, who repeatedly stopped them from spreading the knowledge of Lont, even after explanations had been given. They had, in fact, been instrumental in Stephen the Weakling's failure to accomplish Lont's tasks.

Butch's eyes narrowed, and smiled slightly. He felt honored to have been chosen as one of the first to help bring about the return of Lont, and the ultimate destruction of the accursed country Tintia.

Butch's radio clicked, and he knew that Cassidy was in position. Butch glanced down at his armament. He held two uzis, a heavy assault sub-machine gun across his back, thirty grenades, about fifty magazines of ammunition in a bandolier, and two short swords in case he had to engage anyone at short range. But that wasn't all.

At a glance and a nod from him, four shoulder-launched RPGs were given to himself and three trusted others, and the four of them aimed the missile launchers at pre-assigned targets. He and Cassidy would be targeting the lab, and the others would take out important buildings such as the Officer Corps Headquarters for the town, the Global Police Station, and other buildings of that ilk.

He had been given direct orders from Giovanni not to attack any civilians unless he were first attacked by them. Engara had given him no such orders, but he bowed to Giovanni's original orders. He had told his men, and they had all aquiesced. Butch supported the RPG with one hand, and reached down to his radio and clicked twice, counted out five beats, aiming at the specific point he had been assigned, and pulled the trigger. Just before he had pulled the trigger, he had taken a slight breath, as had the rest of the men and women in his small grouping, to prevent himself from inhaling any of the vapors.

The jet engine in the rocket caught, and roared forward, sending a blast of heat back over his unit. An explosion rocked New Bark Town. It was the Lab. Butch had been firing from up on top of a hill, slightly inside the forest, and so it would take his missile longer to reach its target. That was Cassidy's missile. She was closer, and it had taken less time. Butch got up and motioned his men forward, discarding the RPG, and taking hold of his uzis, he charged forwards. More explosions rocked New Bark Town, and screams could be heard, mixing with the sharp staccato of gunfire. Once again, that was Cassidy's team. Butch made a hand-motion with his right arm, still holding the uzi, and his Mightyena, Hitmontop, and Primeape charged forwards to take the initial blow, along with the Pokemon of the nine others in his group.

Mightyena led the pack, and let out a loud and terrifying roar. Butch heard Cassidy's Houndoom respond in kind, and even more screams began to erupt. Trainers began to pour out of Route 29, releasing their Pokemon, but as they began to enter the town, several more Pokemon and gunmen emerged from the trees near the path in a flanking maneuver, and cut them down. More trainers emerged from the Route, but more Rockets hidden in the tree sprayed bullets at them, and the trainers retreated. Butch sprayed his own rounds ahead of his charging Pokemon, eliminating as much resistance as he could.

Suddenly, there was a loud "BOOM" and one of the men charging with Butch went down. The Rocket immediately recognized it as the sound of a shotgun, and saw movement where he had guessed the sound came from. He glanced at his Pokemon, and saw that they were too close to their enemies now for him to be spraying rounds indiscriminately. He raised his uzis and began firing at the window where he had glimpsed the movement, along with several others of his troops.. Another scream joined the cacophany of noise, and the shotgun went off again, this time taking out the upper part of the window-pane. Butch was close to the building now, oh, so very close, and motioned his men onwards. Taking out a grenade, he pulled out the pin and hurled it through the broken window, then hurried to catch up with his group. With a roar, the wall blew out, and portions of the roof flew into the air, and crashed down between the groups of fighting Pokemon, who were battling furiously at the second block of New Bark Town. The Rocket Pokemon were pushing the Pokemon back quickly. Butch knew that in every direction, the same scenario was being played out.

He heard another gun belch, but it was too far off for it to be targeting his men. Four more gun uzis opened up, targeting whoever had fired. Then another explosion rocked the town, and a small house tore itself apart. Butch smirked. That grenade had been Cassidy's. They didn't have ordinary grenades. They had modified theirs to increase the explosive yield.

Rockets were peeling off to charge into houses, two per house, and in almost no time at all, there was only one Rocket by himself, and Butch quickly caught up. Another gun opened up, and the man went down, spitting up blood. Butch raised the Uzis and pulled the triggers. Four rounds spat out of the barrels before he heard them click. They were out of bullets. Throwing them away angrily, Butch rolled to his left and pulled the assault rifle to a firing position, peered through the scope, and let loose with a barrage of bullets that ripped apart the walls of the building the woman, he saw, had been firing from, and reached the woman. The last Butch saw of her was her spinning away. from the window. To make sure she wouldn't present a problem, he pulled the pin out of another grenade and threw it through the window.

He kept moving forward, and suddenly he was in the rear of the Pokemon battle. He raised his rifle, took careful aim, and pulled the trigger three times in quick succession, and a Rattata that had been preparing for an attack went down. He heard someone cry out, and someone lunge at him, forgetting, or, more likely, not caring that there was a battle of Pokemon between them, but an Ice Beam reached her first and flung her back, until she hit the railing of what looked like a grocery store. She flew through it, and through the front window. Part of the roof over what looked like a boardwalk collapsed.

Gunshots were now more sporadic, and the main sounds were the Pokemon battling, and occasional screams, and sometimes an explosion or two from a grenade. Butch continued firing whenever he had a clear shot, and the Johtan Pokemon were eventually pushed back, until they were all unconscious or dead. Those that were unconscious were very lucky to be alive, and had either gotten that way before Butch and other Rockets had arrived, or had fainted too quickly for them to target.

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Finally, they had all the trainers and inhabitants of New Bark Town in what passed for a square, in the middle of town. Two wrecked buildings that had been the Telephone Company for New Bark Town and the Global Police Station were facing the square, and both were nothing more than smoldering piles of rubble. Cassidy, across the square, grinned and gave him a quick salute with both her uzis. Butch smiled faintly. She hadn't forgotten to reload. Well, that wasn't exactly fair. He hadn't had time. He gave her the same courtesy with his rifle.

The trainers and citizens of New Bark Town were gesturing screaming out at the top of their lungs that they wanted to surrender. They were hemmed in by the Pokemon, so he wasn't worried about them for the moment.

Butch checked with one of his men to make sure that all the people and Pokemon were out of the buildings, then marched the men and women from the buildings and the square to the airstrip, next to a ruined terminal that had taken no fewer than two RPG hits, and the skeleton of a plane that had taken another. The inhabitants of New Bark Town and visiting trainers that remained were no larger in number than twenty-two.

Butch waited as his men did their jobs. Some were checking them for Pokemon or weapons. Looking around, Butch saw that they were all here. His men. Except for the six that had been reported killed, and three others were doing their critical job inside the town. One of those that had died had been an explosives expert, but nothing Butch could do would fix that now.

Then the last three of his men returned to camp, one handing him his uzis. he nodded his thanks and promptly reloaded them, before putting them back into their holsters. One of the men seemed to have some kind of control device in his hand, and the village folk looked at him nervously, wondering what it was for and what he would do. With a nod from Butch, he showed them.

The remaining buildings in New Bark Town tore themselves apart in bright red fireballs that lit up the countryside as if it were as bright as day. Anything or anyone still inside the town were instantly incinerated by sheer temperature. Butch hadn't expected to feel any heat at the distance he was from the nearest of the buildings, but felt it he did. a cry from the distraught inhabitants of what had been New Bark Town could be heard from behind him, but Butch ignored it.

Instead, he reveled in the heat. This was a warning to the Global Police, and if they ignored it, then it would be repeated over and over until they got the message. But there was an entirely different reason he enjoyed the heat as it washed over him.

It was one step closer to the Lont's return, and the absolute power he had promised to whoever did his biddings. It would be Engara that accomplished his tasks. It would be Engarans that recieved the power. Including himself.

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Lance looked up from his opponent's fainted Aggron, then back to his panting Dragonite, and then he looked at the trainer that had nearly defeated him. "I must be losing my touch." Lance chuckled, and the other trainer laughed along with him.

"One more Ice Beam, and that Dragonite would have fainted, and then I'd be the Champion." the trainer smirked. He reminded Lance of himself, so long ago when he was that young. The boy was about fifteen, with short, sky blue hair tied into a ponytail, and wore camouflaged clothing, though probably more for looks than for usefulness.

Lance laughed and clapped him on the shoulder. "Come on," he said, recalling his tired Dragonite so it wouldn't have to walk, "Let's go to the Pokemon Center. he turned to the trainer, who had said his name was Steven. "Nice job with the TM, there," he said, "But, just for fun, let's not say who won when the reporters ask us, okay?"

Steven chuckled. "Yeah, no problem."

Lance grinned harder, "And lets shake hands with each other as soon as we leave."

"You got something against the press?" Steven asked, trying to keep from laughing.

"Well," Lance said, "It's nothing personal against them, it's just that when you've got no privacy whatsoever because of them, you tend to get fed up."

Steven laughed, "Yeah, I imagine you would."

Lance pushed open the doors to the Indigo Plateau Pokemon Center/Pokemon Mart, and was surprised to see only three reporters there, but they weren't looking at him. In fact, they were huddled around a TV, ignoring anyone and everyone else.

Lance frowned. "That's odd." he muttered to himself.

"What is?" Steven muttered back.

"There are usually thirty or so reporters whenever someone manages to challenge me." Lance muttered in return.

Lance walked up to the desk and gave the Joy his Pokeballs. "Nurse Joy, Both me and Steven need our Pokemon healed."

Nurse Joys--the epicenter of warmth, knidness, and whacks over the head if you battled Pokemon too hard--were all cousins. There were dozens of them around many different countries. Lance wasn't exactly sure how it was possible to have so many identical relatives, but somehow the Officer Jennies did it too. Nurse Joys, standing about five feet, eleven inches had red, curly hair crowned with a nurse's hat with the Red Cross symbol on it, they usually had brown eyes, and wore smocks like you'd find in a hospital. They usually oversaw Pokemon Centers, and ran the Healing Machines. "Oh, so it's Steven, is it? How did the battle go?" Nurse Joy asked.

"Pretty well." Steven said, glancing around.

"Yeah, but I'm still the Champion," Lance said, giving Steven a punch to the shoulder. He looked around the room, then back to Joy. "Is something going on? There's usually a lot of press whenever I'm challenged." Nurse Joy opened her mouth, and Lance rolled his eyes, "And, please, Nurse Joy, I don't want to hear about how hard it is to get mud stains out of carpets again, okay?"

Steven snickered, but a glare from Nurse Joy stopped that. "I'm not sure. I heard something about Team Rocket, New Bark Town, and Professor Elm's lab."

Lance's face paled, and he darted over to the TV. What he saw sickened him. It was New Bark Town. At least, the rubble that remained. "Once again, it has been confirmed that Team Rocket is behind this attack that left twenty-two survivors out of New Bark Town's population of two hundred fifty." Fires were still smoldering in the remains of some of the buildings, providing a little light to help with the floodlights that covered the entire town. "Team Rocket has said that this is a warning to the Global Police, and that if they do not stop harassing Team Rocket, more towns will go the way of New Bark Town." the screen cut to a recorded scene of something that was obviously earlier that night. There was a man and a woman there, but he couldn't see them. All he could see were the infernos behind them. They were talking, but he couldn't hear them over the roaring in his ears.

Rage bubbled up from deep inside of him and threatened to boil over. Even though this hadn't been his country, it was still Team Rocket's fault. He had put a stop to it in Kanto, and he would help defeat them in any way he could in Johto. He wheeled around and stalked out the automatic opening doors. He didn't realize where he was going until he trotted up the steps and barged through the doors of the Indigo Mansion. He stalked down the hall down to Agatha's office and ripped the door open. Agatha was sitting in a chair with her eyeglasses on, going over something or other, and looked up to see him standing there. "You interested in helping me make a Kanto Militia?" Lance asked, the fury of seeing an entire town and most of its inhabitants gone still fresh in his mind.

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There's nothing like the feel of fresh, rich dirt under your fingernails, Karen mused, especially when it was night, and the already cool air was being cooled further by a slight breeze. She was in her personal garden. Well, not exactly. It was for anyone, but very few people came out here at all, and she was the one that did the most work on it, besides the gardeners. There was something about cultivating earth that she just enjoyed.

Her Mightyena sat beside her, drinking in the many scents of the flower section of the garden, andkeeping a weather eye out for anyone that might come close. Her Sneasel, Murkrow, Houndoom, Sableye, and Tyranitar were elsewhere, and Karen knew that all but Houndooom were looking out for her safety. Houndoom was, as usual, raoming around the mansion grounds, finding out what he could find out.

Karen thought back on her past, on her childhood. She had been the same as every other little kid in Celadon City. She had bragged to her friends that she would score highest on the Pokemon knowledge tests, and that she would be one of the few to get a Pokemon from Professor Oak. She had, too. But on the first day of her journey....

She shook the memory away. But something, like a mental echo of the girl she had met that day remained. It kept repeating her name over and over. Then, Karen realized with horror that it wasn't an echo. It was a mental presence. No. She had done everything. She would not go back. They would have to kill her. She felt whatever it was drawing herself inside of herself, and something....snapped. That was the only way she could describe it. Suddenly she realized that she could erect mental guards against....her. With a slow feeling of dread in her stomach, Karen realized that SHE had come back.

She was shaking, and someone was shaking her, and she heard that awful voice calling her name. She had to get out. Get out. Get out. Must get out. Must get out. Get out now. now! NOW!!! Inexplicably, her anger rose to a level she had never before had, and her hand snaked out and grabbed the arm that was shaking her, and she heard Lorelei scream.

Whatever it was that had risen within her dropped out of her mental sight, and she couldn't think of what it could possibly have been, and couldn't find it. "Lorelei?" Karen croaked, suddenly realizing that her throat was dry.

"Yeah, it's me." she was frowning, and looked concerned. "What were you doing?"

"Gard-" she stopped, and swallowed, trying to get some saliva back into her mouth, "Gardening. Why?"

"Because your Mightyena ran and got me, and when I saw you, you were writhing on the ground. You were like that for an hour, and for the last fifteen minutes, your Mightyena was growling at you. Like....I don't know what it was like."Just promise me it won't happen again, okay?"

"It won't happen again," Karen said, rubbing her throat, and wondering exactly how long she had been out. She glanced at her watch. Two hours? That couldn't have taken two hours!

"You sure that you're are okay?" Lorelei asked concernedly.

Karen sat, staring at Lorelei, for a few seconds, recalling that touch from her past. The mental touch. Something was about to go wrong. Very, very wrong. But there was no reason to worry Lorelei. "Yes," Karen lied. "I'm fine."

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Bruno growled deep in his throat and took a swing at the punching bag in front of him. Idiot idiot idiot. He jumped up and his momentum carried him around in the air to bring his leg connecting solidly with the punching bag, and landed agilely on the balls of his feet, with another fist slamming into the punching bag. He was dimly aware of his Pokemon training around him. With another roar, he launched another series of punches and kicks into the punching back. Idiot idiot idiot. He had lost again. Not just once, but five times!

Punch, punch, kick, punch. Bruno's face beaded with sweat, and he shook his head, and drops of sweat flew everywhere. He had only a pair of cut-off jeans on, and was going after the punching bag like it had killed a relative. He had lost. Another fist slammed into the punching bag. And not once or twice, either. His kick sent the punching bag flying a short distance. He had lost all five of his matches, and would have lost more if Lance hadn't cancelled the rest of the challenges for the day. He whirled around and launched another kick at the punching bag.

His arms were screaming for a rest, and so were his legs, but he kept going. He knew he was the weakest of the Elite Four. Yet another fist slammed into the punching bag, and he was gasping for breath. Yet he didn't diminish his assault. If anything, he increased it. If only there was a dark and Rock Pokemon. He'd go out in find it, and expend most of his energies to training it up to defeat those annoying Psychic types. Suddenly, the entire punching bag flew across the training area and landed next to the door, and rolled against it.

Bruno suddenly realized the door was opening, and it was blocked by the punching bag. The door closed slightly, then the door was opened harder. It still wouldn't open. Bruno hurried over and moved the punching bag away from the door, and watched as the door opened to reveal Lorelei. She was holding three Pokeballs. "Hello," she said softly. "I was just coming in to train."

Bruno nodded, and turned around sharply. "Sure." he said, picking up the chain of the punching bag and turning back across the room to put it back into its place. "I mean, you don't really need to train, do you?" he asked hotly.

"And what is that supposed to mean?" Lorelei demanded, her own temper suddenly flaring at Bruno's tone. “Are you still mad because I beat you at the Allnian Tournament all that time ago?” she demanded.

Bruno stopped, but didn't turn around. “No.” he said quiety. “That's the past, and I can't change it.”

“Then what's going on?” Lorelei demanded, pushing her hair back and putting it into a ponytail.

“You don't want to know." Bruno replied quietly. He made sure that he controlled his feelings about his being so much weaker than the others, but he didn't want to talk about anything close to it, in case his control slipped.

Lorelei stepped forward, annoyed, but not angry. "I do wan to know, Bruno. Something's been bugging you for a long time. Ever since I became an Elite, in fact. And I KNOW that you haven't told anyone what's the matter."

"I've told my barber,” Bruno muttered.

“What was that?” Lorelei asked.

“Nothing,” Bruno replied. “I thought you came here to train." Bruno remarked darkly. He did NOT want to talk. Under any circumstances.

"I did. That was before I saw how worked you were over something." Lorelei said, giving her voice a more plaintive note. "Bruno, please. Just try to talk about it."

Bruno whirled around, his face clouded. "No." he said, "I won't. This conversation is over." he said with finality, and turned around. Lorelei stepped forward to follow him, but suddenly his Machamp was a living wall between them.

Lorelei sighed, "Fine, then." she said, "Be like that." she moved off to another area of the the gym, "See if I care." she muttered, but couldn't resist taking one last glance back at Bruno, who was trying to get the punching bag reattached to the ceiling, and wondered what in the world was bothering him.

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"This isn't getting anywhere!" Lance said frustratedly, and tossed a piece of paper onto Agatha's desk. "We keep running into the same problems: Where are we going to get funding? Will the people approve of this? Who will fight? Will we accept only volunteers, and, if so, how do we know anyone's going to show up?"

Lance sighed and slouched in his seat dejectedly. "I'm never going to get this done." He sighed, and looked at his hands. He had been trying to put together a charter for the Kanto Militia for the past two hours. His nerves were shot, his brain was fried, and he was annoyed with Team Rocket for having done something to necessitate his having to form a militia.

He looked up at Agatha. She was the main reason he had been a champion so long. She worked behind the scenes, doing her work, and doing a fair amount of his while explaining how everything worked. "I need a walk," he muttered.

It wasn't that Agatha's chair that he was sitting in was cramped. No, it was soft, and he sunk in quite a ways when he sat down. That was why he usually sat in it when he came to visit her. She had a rather unique office, in that it doubled as a suite. The room was high and domed, and had constellations placed on the ceiling. Other than that, it was sparsely decorated.

"At midnight?" Agatha said in an amused tone, "Are you serious? I would think that you would want to get to bed. That's where I'm off to in about five minutes. Well, the loo first, of course.”

Lance glared at her, “Too much information,” he muttered, then snorted snorted. "It's not like I'd run into anybody."

A coy grin slid across Agatha's features. "You absolutely sure about that?" she asked, letting her amusement creep into her voice.

Lance looked at her, "What are you talking about?"

Agatha chuckled, "I just mean that you seem to spend a lot of time near the garden when you're out taking walks at night, and you just “happen” to get on the same lifts that she does."

Lance looked up at her, his fingers running over the finish of her hard wood desk, "Eho you talking about, and what are you implying?" he asked, careful to keep his emotions hidden.

"Oh, come now." Agatha said wryly, "You didn't really think you could pull one over on me, did you, Lance? I've known you for twenty years, now, and I know how you are."

Lance raised an eyebrow, a feat that he'd practiced for years until he could perform it, "What do you mean?" he asked, having a feeling that he wouldn't like where this was going.

"You know what I mean," the old woman said, a crafty smile on her face. "Aren't you going to tell Karen how you feel about her?"

For one split second, Lance felt as if his insides were twisting themselves around one another as he panicked. Then he forced it down and forced himself to remain casual, "How I feel about her?" he said, suddenly wanting to look anywhere in the elderly woman's austere office except right at her. Suddenly, she reminded him of some sort of school principal or something. Someone that knew what he wanted to hide, and he had to convince her that he didn't have anything to hide, even though that wasn't true.

Agatha leaned forward, "Look, Lance, I know that this is your personal life, but we are living in dangerous times. I want your word that no matter her fate, you'll make decisions with a level head, not emotional decisions. This is the only reason I brought this up."

Lance wallowed, "Yeah, I'll make sure that I'll make objective decisions." Even as he said the words, however, he wondered if he'd be able to make good on the promise.

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It figured that the Kantans would have lax security, Anne Peters thought as she held the small computer she had used to hack the security mainframe in her left hand. Their security was no match for her. Not that any security in the world would have been to keep her out, but their security was almost non-existent by her standards. It had been a simple matter to transport herself through the air vents and down to their penitentiary.

Finding it had been no trouble at all. She had simply gone on a tour of the palace, slipped away at her first chance, and returned to the tour group at the end. It had been the third such tour she had been on, to ensure that they didn't have a head count at any time during the tour. It had been a simple matter to reconnoiter the place. It might have taken others more time than it had taken her, but she was the best, and no one else was as good as she was. Even the stinking Tintians knew that.

Her gaze fixed on the Scumbag in front of her. "Giovanni." she hissed softly. He had been her mentor, her guide through the ins and outs of Engaran culture, military, and social structure. "How low the mighty have fallen." her former teacher. She had been assigned to kill her former teacher. Her father figure.

"How much have you told them?" she demanded. She needed to know exactly how much of their plans he knew of. What damage to the followers of Lont he could cause. Then, once he had told her, she would kill him. It was that simple.

"I have told them nothing." the former leader of Team Rocket glared at her, his stubble irritating her right hand, but she ignored it.

"You do not lie." she said, and she knew that Giovanni knew that she knew he was innocent of treachery. "So, therefore, I will follow the orders of my commander. You will not have a chance to betray us."

Suddenly Giovanni was ripped out of her hands, and was flung onto the lone cot in the cell, but the video recorders that others would try to view later would not be able to see the force that did it. As he lay there, convulsing in agony as one by one his internal organs burst apart, Anne Peters turned around, and walked out of the room.

A short visit to the Security Center would be in order, to erase any evidence of her being there. Then she would return to Engara, and receive another assignment.

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and...Steven is back!

the list of characters that were carried over from HHNF is up to three (Lorelei, Bruno, Steven)! Bugsy WILL make an appearance later on, and so will Falkner.

Other Johto Gym Leaders that'll show up will be:

Chuck, Claire, Morty

And Sabrina will play a role in this, as in my fics, she's actually Agatha's daughter.

heh...I've been reading through the third hcapter I've written before, and what little I had of Brock, Ash, and Misty...

*sighs*

good times.

I especially like the way I made Misty and Brock argue. Don't worry, you'll get to see it. and no, they aren't major characters. Just a cameo.

oh, btw, Gary's got a cameo too!
 

Ash_Junior

Irredeemable Nerd
crap.

I just looked over the first chapter, and that's what it is.

you see, you might be wondering why Lorelei is speaking with a Southern Accent. There's an easy explanation for that. And that is that I copied/pasted the ORIGINAL chapter (the one that I had edited) instead of the new one. in the new one, Lorelei gets up in Karen's face.

:D

I'll fix that as soon as I get home.

>.<

this just proves, once and for all, that I'm a moron...

lol
 

Ash_Junior

Irredeemable Nerd
w00t!

next chapter! this is...Chapter 5!

Also, please go back to Chapter 1 and reread it, because this time I DO have the actual rewrite up. I accidentally posted the wrong chapter the first time. so this time it's a bit different. :D

this chapter is a little shorter, but it lays one big whammy down.

also, just for visual reference...

This:

http://www.pokemon.co.il/info/characters/prima.jpg

is actually pretty close to what I thought Karen looked like. the first time that I went to SPPF's Character Bio thing, and saw Prma, the first thing that went through my mind was "That's Karen!"

Now, ironically, THIS is what I had always thought that Lorelei looked like:

http://www.serebii.net/manga/karen.gif

yeah, as you can see from the URL, it's Karen. It doesn't make sense to me that an Ice Elite has black hair, and a Dark Elite has white hair...so for the purposes of this fic , the black hair/glasses person (known as Prima in the anime) is Karen. the white haired person who looks like they could beatyou up in two seconds (known as Karen in the games) is Lorelei. it fits absolutely perfectly. :D

on a side note, apparently this is Karen from the anime

http://sc.groups.msn.com/tn/71/80/TheFirePokemonConnection/6/253.jpg

you would not believe how hard it was to find that. But that's just htere for trivia.



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Karen stared at the flower in front of her in awe of its simple beauty. It was of a variety that opened only at night, but she wasn’t sure exactly what kind it was. Its five petals were each a soft creamy white at the center, and were yellow, orange, and a bright pink as the two-inch petals extended from the stamen, pistils, and the rest of the reproductive organs of the plant. The flowers themselves were held aloft by at least thirty purplish-brown thin tubules that waved softly in the wind.

Chimera Duonems, she remembered they were called. She hadn’t known much about them when she had first visited the garden, and had learned that a chimera plant, or animal for that matter, was an organism created from two separate genetic identities, and were put together through grafting, genetic engineering, or transplant-in the case of animals or humans-from one genetically distinct organism to another.

The Duonems, she had learned, were from the two of the Duotremmin and the Terrestrial Anemone, a plant that had been genetically engineered from the aquatic Anemone to survive outside of the water. It had taken almost four centuries to get the cellulose structure strong enough, she had learned, to support the weight that would have been otherwise supported by water. The Terrestrial Anemones were very expensive, and were very much a collector’s item. The Duotremmin was a night-blooming plant that was common in the nation of Effeular, but were again very rare because of the civil war that had plagued the country for years.

Karen watched the fronds of the Chimera Duonems float back and forth, and thought about the contact that she had experienced, and how it could compare to the truly unique plant that someone had somehow procured from Silph Company. Who would have thought that on the first day, an event would change her life forever? She felt herself falling back into the memory, and knew that she had to face her past again if she were to be of any help to anyone in any time.

She heard footsteps behind her, and turned to ask who was there, and caught a glimpse of her past. A past that she had worked so hard to forget. Her Mightyena growled, and took a step forward.

Then the pain hit her. Pure, searing, unadulterated pain. Pain that seared through her mind, through her limbs, through her body. Pain that would not stop. It seemed to her that she would die. Her memories flashed through her mind. Yes, she would die. She heard her Mightyena howling in pain, as if it could possibly know what she was going through. And perhaps finally justice would be done to her. Despite all this, she couldn’t help but allow a hair-raising shriek to escape her lips, mixing with the cries of pain that came from her loyal Pokemon, Mightyena.

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Lance shut the door to Agatha’s office, having finally completed the charter for the Kanto Militia, and having balanced the budget. He knew that he should get to sleep, so he set off down the corridor. But as he neared his quarters, he felt himself quicken his pace and walk past his rooms, and found himself heading for the garden. Could what Agatha have said be true? He wondered.

Then he heard the scream. It was coming from the gardens. He began to run. He suddenly realized it was from Karen, and instantly he was on alert. If something was hurting her, the most self-sufficient person he knew, he would have to be careful, or suffer the same fate.

As he rounded a bend in the shrubbery, he came upon a sight that would haunt him to the end of his days. A stunted, wicked-looking creature. Its fur was a dark, rich violet that almost seemed to signify royalty, as in the days of old, when purple dye was a rare commodity. It had three cranial ridges-two where ears would normally be, and another, rounded ridge that looked like some kind of head-butting tool-and hands that looked like they were used mainly in battle. Hooked, four-fingered hands with claws that were at least four inches long, and looked as solid as steel nails were attached to long, burly arms. Its body, covered in the short purple hair that covered all of it, was just as muscular, but seemed to have another, harder layer of skin that probably would function as some kind of armor underneath. Its legs were shorter versions of the arms, obviously useful for running, and their feet each had four toes. Each one had a nail on it that looked to be useful for digging, but the biggest one-the one closest to the creature’s median-had a large, six-inch claw that looked vaguely like something that came off a creature from a history book. A Velociraptor, Lance recalled. Its tail was long-at least four feet, if not longer-and thick, and looked capable of breaking bones if the creature had any mind to.

But the most frightening thing was not its appearance, but its hold that it had on Karen. She was surrounded by some kind of silver light, and almost looked like she was being held straight up by the creature by her head, if not for the good foot or so of separation between skull and hand. The silver light, energy, or whatever it was surrounded Karen’s entire body, and while he was certain she had been screaming a moment ago, she was now unconscious. Nearby, her Mightyena lay on the ground, the entire posterior half of its body simply gone.

With a yell, Lance charged forward, not sure what exactly he was planning on doing, but the creature looked at him and with a contemptuous flick of the wrist, Lance was thrown back into the wall of shrubbery, and there he stayed, the creature’s power holding him there.

And then, with a yell, four people who Lance had thought were gardeners charged the creature, each armed with some kind of low-profile cross-bow and some other device that he didn't recognize in their other hand, with at least half a dozen Pokemon to a person with each of them. Some kinds he recognized, but there were many others that he did not. Suddenly, the force that held him to the shrubbery was gone as the creature concentrated on its battle.

Suddenly, a hand was in his face, offering to help him up. Lance took it gladly, and got up. The sounds of the battle were getting louder, and, Lance saw, the gardeners had discarded their crossbows in favor of some kind of short sword. How had they gotten those in here, he wondered. “LET ‘EM HAVE IT BOYS!” he heard someone shout from behind him, and half a dozen more men and women charged past, each wearing the uniform of someone working in grounds maintenance or mechanical maintenance. Many more Pokemon charged with them, whipping past Lance and concentrating solely on the beast. Karen was on the ground, now, Lance saw, and took a staggering step towards her, and stumbled forward, his brain sluggish. He wasn’t sure what happened to him, but felt a firm hand grasp his shoulder and pull him back to his feet.

“It's good to know that those Psionic Dampeners actually work in combat!” someone laughed, and that laugh was echoed through the entire group.

He looked back to the battle, and saw the creature was losing. Then, without warning, it teleported away. “Is everyone okay?” he heard someone shout from behind him. Probably, Lance thought dimly, whoever it was that was keeping him upright.

With some difficulty, Lance turned around as affirmatives rang out from throughout the garden. “Who-who are you?” Lance asked as he got his first glimpse of a man he would get to know very well. The groundskeeper’s uniform fit his physique nicely, and he was clean-shaven, with sharp eyes, and a mop of tangled black hair.

“Mike Givven.” He said, helping Lance to a bench so that he could sit down. “I’m with Tinted Intelligence. We thought you fellows might be under fire soon, but we didn’t imagine in our wildest dreams they’d move so quickly.”

Lance’s mind raced. Whatever else the creature had done to him, it had slowed down his mind, and all this was a bit much to take in. “You’re with Tintia?” he muttered as he tried to regain his sense of balance.

“That’s right. We have a great deal to discuss with you.” He looked over at Karen, who was being attended by the others in what Lance guessed was Givven’s team. “And with her, as well. We need to know exactly why she was targeted above anyone else.”

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“She’s suffered severe neurological trauma,” the doctor said, “If we hadn’t gotten to her when we had, there would not have been anything else we could have done. I guess we owe our Tintian friends a bit of gratitude. Not that raiders and bandits deserve any such thing.”

Lance was a little more aware now. He was in the Palace’s medical quarters, and the doctor had just summed up a report on Karen’s condition. The elderly man had been serving as the doctor for humans for as long as anyone could remember, but he seemed uncomfortable having eleven Tintians in his med-lab. They stood off to the side, still wearing their groundskeeper and maintenance garb. Karen was hooked up to some kind of machine that was monitoring her every move, not that she made any. She was on life support, the doctor had told him. She couldn’t live without it. She wouldn’t be able to breathe, and her heart wouldn’t be able to pump.

“She’s stable for the time being,” the doctor continued, “But I wouldn’t advise moving her any time soon.”

Just then, another man in a maintenance jumpsuit burst through the door, “Major!” he said, ignoring everyone else, apparently knowing that their cover was blown, “Giovanni’s dead.”

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“You can't tell them the truth!” Givven insisted. “If the Engarans knew for one instant that Karen was out of the running, they'd be all over you like Polleen on a berry farm.” He had somehow found out about the press conference that Lacne had called, and had barged in on a meeting of Lance and the remaining Elites.

“Why?” Lorelei demanded suspiciously. “Why should we trust you? The public has a right to know!” She had never been one to give her trust easily, and she was having an even tougher time trusting Tintians.

Givven grimaced. “I can't tell you that. I'm sorry, but I can't. I can only warn you that if you tell Kanto about Karen, you will be putting yourself in GRAVE danger!”

Agatha glanced at the Tintian, then back at Lance. “I'm inclined to agree with him, Lance. I'm sorry, but all the Tintians I know have been honorable. And I've never heard them give bad advice.”

Lance's eyes narrowed. “Agatha, I'm the Champion. The people have a right to know.”

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Lance looked out over the hundred or so reporters that were gathered in front of him. This wouldn’t be easy, he knew. Not under any circumstances. But these circumstances…

He took a deep breath and began his announcement. “Ladies and Gentlemen, Karen has suffred a serious injury. I'm afraid that she is in a coma. We don't know when she'll wake up. Because of this, I have decided to appoint a temporary Elite. Based in no small part on the recommendations of Lorelei, I have decided to appoint the Steel monotype specialist Steven. He will be the first Elite that trainers face, and then Bruno, Lorelei, Agatha, and eventually me.”

He took a deep breath. He hadn’t gotten any sleep the night before, and hadn’t even had a chance to freshen up. He knew that he looked like a mess, but, frankly, after the night he’d had, he didn’t care. “And then there’s the other reason I called this press conference.”

Once again, he took a deep breath. He didn’t like the press. In fact, he hated them, but they shaped people’s opinions, so he had to go through with this, “Ladies and Gentlemen, I regret to inform you that Giovanni will not stand trial.” He held a hand up before the press could shout out their questions at him, “I assure you, were he still alive, he would indeed stand trial, but I regret that he died last night.”

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Thompson turned the TV off, and turned to the other three Intel heads. “Well, ladies and Gentlemen, from what we’ve heard from Givven, it appears that we now know what it is they were keeping in reserve. The Engarans have apparently decided to unleash their precious Advanced Generation Mews. We’re not sure quite yet what series it is, but this is a very dangerous threat. Both to us, and the rest of the world.”

”The last time they sent one of those against Tintia,” Old Faithful said slowly, underscoring his point, “We were barely able to defeat it. We, with the most powerful military in the world, barely won that battle. This does not bode well for Kanto.”

Ruffles looked at Sandra, and the Furret looked at the Machamp, “What can we do to help the Kantans?”

“We can do nothing to help them, until they ask for our help.” Thompson said immediately, then a wry grin appeared, “If we go by the rules, that is.”



Sandra smiled slyly, “And we’ve never really played by the rules, have we?” her grin was matched by Thompson, and was punctuated by a quick shake of his head.

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It had been just over thirty hours since that attack on Karen, and she had been in shock for twenty-eight of them. For the other two hours, she had been in a coma, and she showed no signs of coming out of it. All the members of the Elite Four, including the newest member, Steven, an Elite of the Steel type, had spent time with Karen, but none spent more time than Lance, who had spent twenty-two hours at her bedside, leaving only for his managerial and administrative duties as Champion that couldn’t be dealt with in paper format. Fully five of those hours were battles, as Steven hadn’t been used to fighting battles one right after another for an extended period of time, and Lorelei and Bruno had been doing the sloppy jobs that Lance had become accustomed to lately. The reason that Agatha had been defeated as many times as she had been, was that she was preoccupied with Karen’s condition; the fact that the Indigo League Tournament was going to take place in just under a month and the trainers were training harder than usual, and that her daughter; Sabrina, was coming to the Indigo League to help prepare her fiftieth wedding anniversary.

Lance looked up from the book he was reading on Dragon Isle in Tintia. The sudden appearance of Tintians, however, had sparked his interests in the country once more. There was no change in Karen. Still asleep. He sighed and went back to reading his book. The Champion had been fascinated with Tintia for years, and had been trying to get into the country for years to visit Dragon Isle, the island that Dragon types ruled. Lance wasn’t sure how this was possible, and he was very interested in visiting Tintia to find out. However, because of their strict laws on visitors from outside the country, he hadn’t been able to get a visitor’s visa. He had been meaning to talk to Professor Oak or possibly Professor Elm to see if either of them had ever been to Tintia, since Professors were more often accepted more often than others. Lance wasn’t sure if he would ever be accepted into the country, because he had heard that Pokemon trainers were despised by most Tintians. Lance frowned. He would have to ask Givven later why they did..

Lance sighed and put down his book, and looked over at Karen. She still wasn’t awake. He sighed, and put down his book. It wasn’t like he was going to be able to concentrate, anyway. He put his hand on hers. It was cool, though on the warm side of the scale. He sighed, and looked at her face. Her raven hair fell down around her peaceful face, and reached down to the light blue hospital smock. Why do they always have those weird smocks? Lance wondered to himself. He had never been in one, but if he ever did get in one, he knew that he would feel uncomfortable.

“Hey Karen,” he said, pushing a lock of hair back behind her ear, like he had been doing at least four times an hour for the last six hours. It simply refused to stay put. “How are you doing?” he had heard that people in comas could hear people talking, so he had been talking to her off and on for the last several hours. “It’s Lance. I’m not sure what got you, but it hasn’t shown up again.”

He looked down at his book, “I’ve just been reading up on Dragon Isle, you know, in Tintia, home of the brigands and our buddies? Oh,” he said, wincing slightly, “that’s right. You haven’t met Givven yet. He’s an okay guy, and everything, but I still wouldn’t trust him with anything more than taking out the garbage.” Lance sighed, and scratched his head, “Even then, being a Tintian, he’d probably go through it to see if he could steal anything. Nothing good ever came out of that country.”

Lance sighed, and ran his fingers through Karen’s Umbreon’s fur. The midnight-colored feliniod creature gave him a cool glare. Almost like an accusation. What it was supposed to be accusing Lance of, he hadn’t a clue.

“It hasn’t been the same, Karen,” he said quietly, “Something’s been missing around here. Everyone’s a little more…depressed. Lorelei hasn’t won a single match since the accident, Bruno’s started eating large amounts of junk food, and Agatha’s up all night.” Lance sighed again, then reconsidered, “Of course, that may be because of all the tea she drinks all day, and because this Psycho-‘scuse me, Psychic,” He almost paused. Karen had always laughed when he had done that. “daughter of hers is coming to help her plan her wedding anniversary for whoever he husband was.”

“But more than anyone, I’ve missed you. I’ve been here, at your side for a long time now. I don’t know how many mandatory meetings I’ve missed, how many appointments I’ve blown off. I just want to be here, next to you, when you wake up.” Lance looked at the Dark Elite’s face, and imagined Karen laughing, or giggling at some stupid joke he had just made. Her eyes would be scrunched up, the ends of that wonderful grin turned up, and the laughter wouldn’t come just from her voice….it would be from her eyes as well.

“Karen, I want you to know that I’ve appreciated your support through the years…” he smiled slightly, basking in warm memories, “You were the champ when I came here. You gave me that smile of yours, and your eyes were the thing that took me in. They took me in, Karen. And they’ve never let me go.”

Tears began to form in Lance’s eyes, “Karen, if you can hear me, that was when….” He hesitated. Did he really? He had been denying it to everyone, including himself. “That was when I first fell in love with you.” He said quietly. “Your courage, your determination….your drive to succeed.” He took one of her hands in his, and couldn’t help but shed tears as he felt the coldness with which it was gripped. “You don’t know how many times I’ve wanted to give up, and only kept on going because you and your encouragements were right there for me.” He smiled slightly, “Sometimes your methods were a little more direct than I would have liked but they always helped me.” Lance looked at his watch and scowled, “I am REALLY sorry, Karen, but I have to use the bathroom and get out of here.” He got up, picked up her hand, and kissed it. He glanced up to make sure that his Dragonite was standing guard over Karen. He didn’t trust anybody else besides someone from his own team to guard the woman he loved.

He had never liked hospital rooms, and hospital bathrooms even less. But he had no choice. He had waited too long, and now he REALLY needed to go. With one last look at Karen, he turned towards the hospital room’s bathroom. Little did he know that that was the last time he would see Karen. Alive. He entered the bathroom quickly, and shut the door. It was the only thing that saved his life.

An instant after he locked the door, an explosion rocked the room, and something lodged against the door. Lance pounded against it, but whatever it was wouldn’t budge. Lance glanced around. No room for his big guns, but then, he didn’t need them right now. He just needed to get out there, where he had slightly more room to maneuver. His hand reached for his belt, but hesitated when it came to selection.

Draman, Arachnadrago, or Aveamon? They were the only ones small enough to trust in the close quarters combat that was sure to follow, and there was only room for one in the crowded restroom. He pulled Draman’s Pokeball from his belt and released the Psychic Dragon. It roared, glanced around, and gave Lance a look of confusion, an instant before it began screaming in agony. Its eyes glowed blue, and it shook for several seconds, before it turned a baleful blue gaze onto Lance. Why, hello. It is good to see YOU again. a Psychic’s telepathic voice echoed through his mind, with a power that was impossible for his dragon to have had. It would have had to come from a very powerful Pokemon somewhere nearby Draman. You do not know how fortunate you are. You are to be spared, for you still play a part in the forthcoming of Lont. We shall meet again.

There was a fiendish shriek from outside the door, and screams that Lance recognized as coming from his Dragonite, Karen’s Umbreon, Sneasel, Murkrow, Tyranitar, Houndoom, Sableye, and the strange Dragon she’d never let him touch. His own screams and that of his Draman echoed through the small cubicle-like room, until he finally succumbed to the darkness that had been so inviting ever since the first waves of Psychic pain struck him.
 
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Elemental Charizam

Sudden Genre Shift
Advanced Generation Mews... would those be Mewtwo? That was never really followed up in HHNF...

So the Kantans think of Tinitians as brigands? I suspect Engaran propoganda worming its way through, or perhaps its just a self contained rumour; after all, Tinitia is very cut off, and most people dislike huge millitary powers on their doorstep.

In any case, the plot thickens. On Karen x Lance, I have seen it once before in Pokeplayer's fic, and of course a few have observed that their rooms are right next to each other :rolleyes: XD

And yes, the above means I finally revewed! 5/5: :snowlax:
 

Ash_Junior

Irredeemable Nerd
Elemental Charizam said:
Advanced Generation Mews... would those be Mewtwo? That was never really followed up in HHNF...

So the Kantans think of Tinitians as brigands? I suspect Engaran propoganda worming its way through, or perhaps its just a self contained rumour; after all, Tinitia is very cut off, and most people dislike huge millitary powers on their doorstep.

In any case, the plot thickens. On Karen x Lance, I have seen it once before in Pokeplayer's fic, and of course a few have observed that their rooms are right next to each other :rolleyes: XD

And yes, the above means I finally revewed! 5/5: :snowlax:

actually, there was a Mewtwo in HHNF. one of the last chapters. :D

The Advanced Generation Mews will be playing a pretty major role in this. :D

and it's the latter. generally, people dislike what they don't understand. That was my thinking, anyway.

I didn't know that their rooms are right next to each other.
 
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Ash_Junior

Irredeemable Nerd
When Lance awoke, the first thing he felt was a heaviness on his chest, and something sticky trickling over his body. With a shout, he jumped to his feet, and felt whatever it was slide off of him onto the floor. He lunged for the light switch, but when he flipped it, nothing happened. Then he remembered the thing outside in Karen’s room, and he swung into action. “What do you want?” he demanded in a large voice, trying to open the bathroom door. Something was blocking the door, and it simply would not open.

Lance growled deep in his throat, and pulled a Pokeball from his belt, “Go, Draman!” he said forcefully, but nothing happened. No red beam, no Psychic Pokemon, nothing.

Lance frowned into the tiny, pitch-black room. “Draman?” he asked, confused. Then he remembered that he had called out his Draman, and the sheer power that whatever it was had funneled through his dragon. “Return!” he whispered, hoping that what he suspected was not the case. The ruby red beam briefly illuminated the room, and showed him his Draman, bleeding through the orifices that passed for ears, but otherwise appeared fine.

He growled deep in his throat, the other Pokeballs on his belt forgotten, the only thing he was thinking about was getting to his Dragonite. He had left it out there with Karen. Was she okay? Had anything happened to Dragonite? He had to get to them! He slammed his body against the door, yelling something. He was never sure later what it was he was yelling, but he was just yelling. As he repeatedly slammed himself against the door, he felt the hinges begin to give, but it felt like something was wedged against the door. For a split second, he thought about simply taking the door off of its hinges, but then he remembered that the hinges on this particular door were on the outside, mixed in with its beautiful wood grain.

Lance froze. Wooden door? He felt the door again, and there was no question about it. Lance took a deep breath, and got up onto the toilet, as far back as he could go, and pulled Charizard’s Pokeball from his belt, and released the fire dragon, grabbing a breath of air and closing his eyes tightly before the searing pain of fire and light burned into his senses. Without a word, Lance pointed towards the door. There was a slight pause, as if Lance hadn’t been seen immediately, then with a roar, the sizzling sound of wood being turned into charcoal was heard, and a cry from his Charizard made Lance open his eyes.

Charizard was standing in a dark room. Where there had been a window, there was now only rubble. Where the door was, the ceiling had been collapsed. Lance pushed past his evolved Charmeleon and looked at the bed, and his lunch nearly made a guest appearance.

Karen was gone. Gone! She was gone!

But that wasn’t all. Her Pokemon had been slaughtered. Her Umbreon, horribly mutilated, lay with its head at an obscene angle over the Dark Elite’s Houndoom, who had been torn asunder. Worse things had happened to Karen’s other Pokemon, and as Lance scanned the room, his gaze settled on a corpse in the far corner of the room.

With a cry of dismay, he rushed over to his Dragonite. His friend. His starter. What was happening here? Why was Karen gone? Why would someone have done something like this? The next thought that he had chilled him to the bone. Who could possibly have been powerful enough to defeat the Pokemon? They were all elites themselves! They were the cream of the crop. The best of the best.

And they had been slaughtered, like Rapidash too old to be anything but glue.

As Lance straightened from the body of his dead dragon, a fire awoke in his eyes that had not been seen in some time. It was the fires of revenge. Whoever had done this would pay, and it would be by his hand that they were brought to justice. No matter what. As Lance reached for his belt, he vowed from that moment on that he would train until he could train no longer, and not simply his Pokemon, but with himself. No matter what it took, he would find whoever did this, and destroy them.

Whoever did this was sick. From the mental contact, he could now, in hindsight, remember the sheer maliciousness of the voice. He had no doubt that whoever contacted him mentally did this as well. But who could possibly do such a thing?

The Champion of the Indigo League of Kanto had a pretty good idea where to start looking. All he had to do was some research, into this Lont fellow, and his “forerunners”.

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“I wonder what did this.” Bruno said, his muscles straining to lift yet another piece of rubble off of another section of the Indigo League Pokemon Center. He shook his head, and glanced over where the Pokemon Mart section of the building had been. Only the counter now remained.

“I saw it,” Lorelei piped up, directing her Ice types in pulverizing the larger pieces of rubble so that she, Bruno and his team could move them more easily. “It was at least six feet tall. It was purple, and had a long tail…it was shooting some kind of silver energy out of its hands. Almost looked like Mew.” She looked over Indigo Plateau, “Whatever it was, it left a mess.” The once gleaming paradise now had a hundred-meter swath slashed through it, leading from the Pokemon Center, cutting through the Colloseum, and into a portion of the Palace.

Bruno sighed, and picked up another piece of rubble, and put it onto the nearby cart that he and his team had been filling all day, over and over. The rubble would be taken to some factory or something to pound it into pulp. He wasn’t up on all the details, just what he had to do.

It was a lot, he knew, but he had to pitch in to do his little bit, just like the ordinary trainers did. They were coming from all over to help pitch in with the clean up, and help with the rebuilding. Ecruteak City, Viridian City, Fuschia City, and one person he had met had said that he had come all the way from Hoenn to help with the clean up. They all cared about the Indigo Pokemon League, and were willing to sacrifice a part of their lives to make it better.

Which was all that they would be doing, although they didn’t realize it, the moment they set foot upon the marble steps of the now-ruined Indigo Colloseum. The place was wrecked, and would likely remain so as a memento for a while, if he knew Lance, and a newer, better Colloseum would be built, in every way twice as good as the predecessor. The Pokemon Center, he was sure, and the Pokemon Mart would be built into the Colosseum as well.

Bruno looked up at Lorelei, then glanced away as her Jynx smashed another big piece of rubble with an Ice Beam. Lately, he had been more and more attracted to the young woman. Ever since the Rocket raid. She was strong, self-sufficient, and a powerful fighter. She had a great personality, if a bit abrasive, and fun to be around. Plus she was beautiful.

He forced himself to stop thinking about Lorelei, and turned back to his work. He put his hands around the larger of the newer pieces of rubble, and moved it onto the truck that was getting rather full. Other pieces were being put in as well by the rest of his team.

The sound of another Ice Beam powering up, the shrill trilling of the energy a split second before it was released, a slight wind caused by the Doppler affect, then a sound almost like a Christmas tree ball breaking amplified a hundred times was heard again as yet another piece of rubble was split into smaller pieces.

Lance had claimed he hadn’t seen the monster that had done this, and nobody had any reason to disbelieve his claims, but when Lorelei had described what she had seen to Lance, he had gone completely pale, and had rushed off to the library.

Bruno grabbed another piece of rubble, and hefted it onto the truck. The Champion had been working like a man possessed, but not in the clearing away of the rubble. He had said that he had some research to do, and had locked himself into the Indigo Library, which hadn't suffered any damage, coming out only to eat quick meals before rushing back.

“Hey Bruno!” a familiar voice fell upon his ears, and the Fighting Elite looked up to see a young man with brown, spiky hair, a pendant with a relief of an oak tree on it around his neck, and an Arcanine at his side. If Bruno remembered correctly, and he was pretty sure he was, this was Gary Oak, Professor Samuel Oak’s Grandson. Gary had been hanging around all year, ever since being beaten in the semi-finals of the Indigo League Tournament by the young trainer Richie. Gary had been sulking all year, and had left a couple of months before to train by himself.

Obviously, this had pulled him out of wherever he had been. “Where do you need me?” he asked quietly. While prone to fits of bragging over his Pokemon and their impeccable training, especially when around his arch-rival, Ash Ketchum-a nobody from Pallet Town who had risen to great heights-he was still bound by the same thing as most every Kantan was. Duty, loyalty, and patriotism. The earnestness in young Oak’s eyes reminded Bruno of himself so long ago, before he had seen what the world had to offer.

“You got fire types with you, I assume?” Bruno asked, eyeing the large dog appreciatively. Growlithe and Arcanine were rare, and Bruno rarely dealt with them, being that his specialty was the fighting and occasionally ground types. But he had learned to give them his utmost respect. He had always held a special respect for Gary's Arcanine, though, ever since that single Pokemon had wiped out half of his team.

The young trainer grinned, “I’ve got Arcanine, here, my Magmar, Espeon, Hitmonlee, and Kingler.” He plucked five Pokeballs from his belt, and displayed them for Bruno to see. “Where can you use me?”

Bruno pointed over at a giant crane at one of the worst sites, “Go over there. Last I heard they were short-handed.” The brown-haired trainer nodded appreciatively, and headed off in a jog.

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Despite all the confusion in the Indigo Plateau, it was peaceful out in the surrounding forest. At least it was, until “Are we there yet?” was heard in a whining tone.

“Almost.”

“How far is almost?”

“Almost is almost, all right?” From out of the brush, a tall, bronzed man stepped forward, glancing at a map, then at the surrounding area, the position of the sun, and back again.

“No, it’s not all right!” a short kid with black hair, jeans, and a Pokemon League T-shirt complained, “You said we’d be there in half an hour. Guess what. That was three hours ago!”

“Pika!” a short, yellow rodent with a tail like a reverse bolt of lightning added, hopping onto the boy’s shoulder, and handed him an orange Pokemon League baseball cap.

“Just shut up, both of you!” it was a feminine voice this time, and a girl that looked to be about fifteen stepped out of the brush, wearing her hair in a single red ponytail, dangling down her back. “It’s bad enough I had to buy an Electabuzz T-shirt,” the green shirt to which she was referring, adorned with the name of a Johtan baseball team, hung on her rather thin frame, “But now I have to listen to you guys complain? This is cruel and unusual punishment!” she ended in nearly a shout.

The leader rolled his eyes, “Keep your shirt on, Misty, we’re there!” he pulled aside a tree branch, and looked over Indigo Plateau. Ash and Misty came up on either side of him.

There it lay, not a mile in front of them. Indigo Plateau, home of the Indigo League, the Elite Four, and the fabled colosseum. And, of course, “Nurse Joy,” the bronzed man said in a dreamy tone, already beginning to drool slightly. “Just a few more minutes, and I’ll be giving her the opportunity to make my acquaintance.”

The girl, known as Misty, chuckled, “Yeah, and then it’ll be a few seconds before she gives you the opportunity to make the acquaintance of her palm on the side of your face, Brock. You ALWAYS have bad luck with Joys. Why don’t you switch to something else, like normal people, and not always hitting on people’s cousins?”

“Hey!” the bronzed man who had been called Brock said, “They’re not YOUR cousins…Besides, What do you care? You can’t get a date to save your life.”

The girl’s eyes narrowed, “And there’s gonna be nobody to save yours!” she leaped at Brock, and tackled him to the ground.

The boy with the black hair stood next to a tree, staring at Indigo Plateau, dumbfounded and in shock. “Hey, hey guys.” He said, standing stock-still, simply staring at the city before him, “Somethings wrong.” The yellow rodent on his shoulder stared at the city, and scratching its head. “I see smoke.”

The other two teens got up immediately and came to stand next to the boy, and as they scanned the city, they found that they couldn’t find it, either. “You’re right,” the girl said, in a worried tone, “Ash, what do you think has happened?”

The trainer shook his head, “I’m not sure, but I have a feeling that we’re going to find out.”

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Ash Ketchum stepped through the great arch of the Indigo League, flanked on both sides by statues of famous men and Pokemon, and felt Butterfree fluttering around in his stomach. What had happened here? He could hear sirens, people shouting, and Pokemon attacks going off all over the place. He swallowed hard. What had happened here? There was no one in the anteroom to greet him, no one to check his badges at the inner door. With a sinking feeling in his stomach, he pushed open the inner door, and saw the horror that had befallen the Indigo Plateau.

He felt sick to his stomach, and staggered back against the Plateau’s gatehouse for support. Someone or something had moved like a bulldozer through the Plateau, mowing down everything in its path from the gatehouse to the Palace. Nothing that had stood in its way could possibly have survived.

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Lance felt terrible, standing in the middle of what had been the Indigo Colosseum, talking to literally thousands of trainers, young and old, trying to convince them to join the militia he was forming. He was pretty sure it would be easier after this had happened. “This episode has proven to me that we here in Kanto are entirely unprepared for the real world. For years, we’ve been basically telling everyone that everyone is basically good.” Lance looked down at the podium, and his notes, then back up at the people gathered in front of the lectern. “I have always disagreed with this, and nothing has proved it to me better than Team Rocket’s brutal razing of New Bark Town, the Slaughter of its people and their Pokemon, and the destruction of Professor Elm’s research. Professor Elm himself died in the attack, unfortunately, and I offer his family and their country my condolences. My good friend Karen was recently kidnapped in a rather explosive attack on the Indigo Mansion as well.

“While we cannot do anything to change what happened to the late professor, we can take steps to ensure it will never happen to anyone else again.” There was some murmuring in the crowd, and Lance took a deep breath, looked at his notes to keep from staring at everyone else, then looked into the bright lights, flashes, and faces of trainers who trusted him to make good decisions, and said, “I’m proposing that we create a militia to protect Kanto. To augment the Global Police and the Officer Jennies and Jakes, and be the first line of defense in the event of any invasion.” Lance didn’t really think an invasion was likely, but the Tintian, Givven, had insisted he put that line into his speech. “I call on all good trainers of Kanto to join its militia to help protect the country. Altans are being flown in to instruct the trainers to defend themselves in areas such as martial arts, basic handgun instruction, and other areas of that sort.” Givven had wanted Tintians to do the training, but Lance, and the rest of the Elite Four, except for Agatha, for some reason, had put their feet down on that point.

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From the back of the crowd, a woman with hair died blond watched Lance’s speech under the brim of her fedora pulled tight over her eyes. She smiled coldly. The dimwit Champion was giving himself a war, though he didn’t yet know it. She turned and walked back to the Pokemon Center, where “Jasmine,” was staying for the night. She didn’t especially like using an alias, but it was part of her job. Once she reached the lobby of the Center, she made straight for the vid-phone array, slid the one-time scrambler onto the mouth-piece, and dialed the number she had been given. She knew that it would be rerouted all over the globe before arriving at its final destination, yet it was picked up on the third ring. “Hi Dad,” she said, using the code system that had been set up. “Dad” was actually four times her age, and was the head of the Engaran Special Forces and Intelligence branch of the Engaran Armed Forces. “Just wanted to let you know that I’m finally in the Indigo Plateau, can you believe it?”

Actually, it hadn’t been that hard, getting from what was left of New Bark Town to the Indigo Plateau. Not for someone as adept at changing her form and personality to fit the need as Cassidy. “Really?” the Director’s voice came in, “Have you seen anything interesting yet?” She was being asked if she had any information that he could use. Even though the transmission was supposed to be secure, it didn’t hurt to have a little secrecy.

“Well, I heard that Karen of the Elite Four was kidnapped, and I just got back from Lance announcing that there’s going to be a Kanto militia now.” She glanced at her watch. She had five minutes left before the chemicals in the scrambler went dead, and her call would become unscrambled, and people would be actually ableto tell what was going on.

“Really?” the director asked, “That’s too bad about Karen. She was a very good trainer.” Cassidy frowned. That part of the code meant that Karen had been undercover for Engara. But how could she be? “Are you going to join the militia?” Okay, so he was ordering her to join. That was fine, but-

“Yeah, I’d thought about it. Hey dad, what did you say about Karen? I never thought she was that good.” Cassidy chewed on her lower lip. Had Karen really been an agent all this time, and she had never known anything about it?

There had to be some kind of mistake. There was no way-NO WAY-that that Elite could have been a sleeper. Or an agent of any kind. The history was just too airtight for that. She had checked it herself. “Oh, no.” the director said, “She was a VERY good trainer.”

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Butch looked across the negotiating table, “No,” he said, shaking his head impatiently, “Team Rocket cannot afford to pay you to attack Kanto for us.” He was looking at the heads of Teams Aqua and Magma, Joan Paula Jones and Jiang Fernandez, respectively. It was actually a miracle they were in the same room and not hitting each other, let alone talking to each other, “After the Kantans raided us, and our losses in Johto, we simply don’t have the resources to spend on something like this.”

Jiang, a tall asian-looking individual who had red hair, of all colors, and a southern accent. A truly unique individual, he led one of the now two strongest teams in the world. “So,” he drawled, “What do you think WE should do? Excuse me for asking, but this whole thing seems a bit....off. Like you in Rocket would get the bigger end of the stick.”

Butch sighed. He missed having Cassidy with him. While he understood she had been reassigned, he had grown to like her companionship, if not her herself. Besides, she was the more diplomatic of the two. His patience was beginning to wear thin, and he wasn’t sure how long he could keep up his cool.

Joan glared at her contemporary. While Jiang was tall and unique, she was short and looked roughly like any other female, and could easily dissapear into a crowd, with her brown hair and green eyes. “While I do not share his view,” she said softly, “Team Aqua simply cannot commit the resources you would need unless Magma did. We can’t leave ourselves weak to an attack by the Magmans.” She glanced at Butch, “I’m sorry, I truly am, but I cannot help you.”

“But don’t you see?” Butch asked impatiently, “Divided you cannot stand alone.” He repeated the line that had been drilled into him so many times by the reading material he had been given for this assignment, “Team Rocket had been stronger than both of you combined just one short month ago. Both of you recognize this fact, yes?” they both nodded slowly, unsure of where he was going with this, “Yet it only took the Johtans and Kantans, combined, less than a week to reduce us to a pitiful rabble.” Fernandez and Jones stared at Butch, both refusing to look at the other. “Apart, you cannot hope to stand against the unity of Kanto and Johto. Together, they have one of the strongest armies in the world. Especially now that Kanto is making its own militia.

“How long,” Butch began, off on another tack than he’d been ordered to do. “Before they come after you?” he queried, “They’ve taken down Team Rocket. How much longer will it be before they decide to target you? Lance has made it exceedingly clear that he wants to see the world rid of all gangs like you two and me are part of. Do you really think he’ll leave you alone?’

Jiang and Joan glanced at one another for a split second, then focused back on Lance. Butch’s heart soared, but he was careful not to reveal it. He didn’t want to scare them off when they were just beginning to crack, “The Global Police are starting to hunt down the last remnants of Team Rocket right now,” Butch said, “And they’re close to finding our secret warehouse in Fuschia, which is where, if you remember, Joan, the documents regarding the Aquan attack against Mt. Moon last year are kept, and, Fernandez, the records on the attack against Cinnabar six months ago were also kept. They find that, you’re both going down.” Butch smiled slyly, “Which is what you’re going to be doing anyway, if you keep going on this course.”

Joan frowned, “What do you mean?” she asked, a tinge of nervousness in her tone.

Butch smirked, “Why, simply that Rocket Intel has determined that Teams Magma and Aqua will very shortly come under attack by the newly established Kantan militia, Global Police, Altan military, and independent trainers from Johto and Hoenn.” The leaders of Magma and Aqua looked at each other in horror. Butch smiled. This information was all true, and so was what followed next, “we have learned, however, that Kanto and the Global Police are the main instigators in this war.” He looked at the two leaders, “Destabilize them, and you will have at least a year to prepare a stronger defense.” His cool glance went from Joan to Fernandez, “Team Rocket is willing, and is in the process of recalling all units to Johto and destroy the establishment of the Global Police in that country.” He smiled, “That just leaves Kanto. Are you two available?”

Joan glanced at her counterpart, then back to Butch. She nodded, as did Fernandez a second later, “Good,” Butch said, “I’ll leave the planning to you two.” He got up from his chair and offered them both one of his hands, “This has been a very successful meeting,” he said, smiling, “Let’s do this again sometime. Now, if you’ll excuse me, I have a plane to catch.”
 
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