Otherwise(yes a pokémon journey comic)(again)

[buhasto]

Otherwise(yes a pokémon journey comic)(again)

oké this is just my first one and Im dutch so expct spell mistakes:
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/100/intro16jp.png


last comic:

 

[Dreams]

One word: LATEST comic!
Another word: KNOWS me!

And that blu thing is the lord of suckage... But keep up the good work!

Rating: 3/10

 

[buhasto]

I already said that Im dutch so I make spelling mistakes and this is my first comic but I will edit the blue thing later

 

[Saorio]

It sucks, dude. Plain and simple. You need to improve this comic, or delete it. It's just not good.

 

[Flaze]

Its Not "shees", try "Sheeshh" there, that sounds and looks better right?

If you correct your spelling errors, It might be a good comics.

 

[Pokefan26]

Bad.
Make the text boxes better.
Spelling is Bad.
Bad bad bad

 

[Bagonclaw]

The spelling is bad, but i'll forgive you, scince youre dutch.
The sweat needs to be edited. Make sure you don't forget.

_BC_

 

[Dark Venusaur]

Need to improve I give you a 2/10 because you tryed

;003;Dark Venusaur;003;

 

[Bagonclaw]

Need to improve I give you a 2/10 because you tryed

;003;Dark Venusaur;003;

Tell him how to improve or else that's SPAM.
Let's not let this thread become a canned meat market.

_BC_

 

[Capt.Miko]

I think it would look better with speech bubbles instead of the dialogue at the bottom because it looks cluttered, or have the text color-coordinated in some way so it is easier to read. And the sweatdrop should be pointier at the top so it looks more like a sweatdrop.

 

[Carpetted!]

Public and reader: Shees!!!!!

No one likes having words put into their mouth.