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Thanks for all the reviews!
So, thanks again, for all your support and criticism that has helped me become a better writer!
I was so eager to post the final chapter that I forgot to triple-check. That, and the program I use is an arse, and doesn't register when I'm typing short words some times. (It must have thought I had typed "O" and "nce", correcting the latter to "Ice". It's a little thing, and I've been contemplating using a new program for writing and editing.I guess I'm still Lear the ins and outs of writing.Slow down when it comes to editing
Thanks! I felt that the transition in Blue's focus was something that could have gone really bad, and I'm happy that you were happy with it!But here, it's great because it says so much about his shifting priorities
Cheers!an enjoyable read
Thanks! I really wanted to show what it was like to be Blue, and how he handled it all, so I'm really happy you thought it was "true to Blue" (Can't help noticing rhyme )I don't really know what kind of an ending I expected, but this one is very true to Blue, as this fic has been throughout.
Red always had this stoical personality in my mind that could not be hindered, and that he was above trivial things, like, y'know, life. But I wasn't sure if it was actually a good twist. Glad to hear that it was good!I like your interpretation of Red
Yippee!Excellent stuff.
Yeah, I took on your comments previously and tried my absolute best. I find it's harder in first person, especially in this Fic, with switching tenses each chapter. But I'm a fan of this style now, and it will be present in my next works.you've got a lot better at keeping the tenses regular, too, which is great.
So, thanks again, for all your support and criticism that has helped me become a better writer!