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Penthouse of the Vampire King (Rated R) SU

Discussion in 'Sign Up' started by VampirateMace, Feb 1, 2019.

  1. VampirateMace

    VampirateMace Internet Overlord

    Alright, looks good.
     
  2. VampirateMace

    VampirateMace Internet Overlord

    GoldenHouou (Samael - Angel, Slayer/Exorcist, Sorcerer) Accepted


    Monster Guy (Adam - Human, Slayer, Sorcerer) Pending, looks good in general
    - The op pendent is op in an op game, at 8+ powers (some of which are undefined). I would say pick if it gives him damage resistances, hightens his physical ablities, or gives him new abilities. But, He should already have better physical attributes then a normal human from the years of training, if that helps you decide. You coul also have multiple talismans, but use some restraint.

    & (Cadence - Human, Exorcist, Chef, Witch, Wizard) Pending, looks good in general
    - The Halberd, is it iron or silver? It reads like you just didn't decide.
    - There's a sentence fragment in the armor description "It is decorated with various The skirt"


    Everyone else, it's been about 2 weeks, let's get those SUs finished up.
     
    Last edited: Feb 15, 2019
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  3. Vern

    Vern Why not both?

    All right, I've finished my SU! Hopefully there's not too much wrong with it.
     
  4. Monster Guy

    Monster Guy Jigglypuff again

    K, I think I fixed it.
     
    Last edited: Feb 15, 2019
  5. VampirateMace

    VampirateMace Internet Overlord

    Vern (Chloe - Human, Slayer, Uni Student, Witch, Sorceress): Pending, minor stuff.
    - Can we move the magic resistance to the hood? It already has that type of enchantment and talismans should really only do one thing.
    - Um the non-specificity of her weapon collection is not great. I assume you'd mention if she had any magic weapons. Maybe make a short list of her go-tos after the sword?

    Mon: Way better.
    - Weapons look good.
    - The talisman is way more reasonable, but talismans should still have just one purpose. But if you want to split the currently listed powers between two items though (one that gives him strength/speed, and one that gives resistances), that would be just fine.
     
  6. Monster Guy

    Monster Guy Jigglypuff again

    The magic resistance has been split into a bedazzled bracelet.
     
  7. VampirateMace

    VampirateMace Internet Overlord

    Mon, Vern: Okay, I think you're both good to go.
     

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