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Perfect Kirby (Da Comic!)
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Magical Trevor
Guest
hm er um. Speech bubbles need a bit of work. But This is the first kirby comic I like
I would almost have said "Don't doublepost". Why does everyone use that Treeckachu avatar?
Some things to work on:
-Why does everyone fly?
-Title screen is messy.
-Text boxes are messy too.
-Watch grammar and spelling.
Since it's an intro, I can't rate the story yet.
Some things to work on:
-Why does everyone fly?
-Title screen is messy.
-Text boxes are messy too.
-Watch grammar and spelling.
Since it's an intro, I can't rate the story yet.
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Red_Apple_Can
Guest
Hahaha. You like PK too? The people who made it are awesome. Nice comic. Although the BGs are non-existant.
Davis the Gamer
Banned
That really hurts.mutten641 said:
To be honest, remaking the perfect kirby flash series would be harder than you think. You'd have to make sprites of Phill, Professer 1.99, and the other members of the institute. And the jokes are flash jokes. You can't remake Flash jokes in comic form.
And judging by the horible grammar, backrounds, and text bubbles aswell as the style mixing, the comic phailed. Sorry to disapoint.
And Perfect Kirby is not a remake of PD. It is a whole new series based off of Perfect Dark and various videogames.
Great flash series.
Terrible comic remake.
Use of Paint default colors is a terrible idea.
The bubbles are screwed up.
There is a lack of a background. Just a Paint-Blue screen.
There are spelling errors.
This is an intro and nobody like intros.
But at least you did Kirby's emotions right.
Terrible comic remake.
Use of Paint default colors is a terrible idea.
The bubbles are screwed up.
There is a lack of a background. Just a Paint-Blue screen.
There are spelling errors.
This is an intro and nobody like intros.
But at least you did Kirby's emotions right.
That's kinda good but needs work. Asuming a lot of it.
Since I like Kirby, A LOT. I think its ok. There is a spelling error when Kirby talks on the strip. Still can't rate is because its an intro...
Try not using blank, in my point of view, backgrounds. If you work on it more, it might be better^^
Since I like Kirby, A LOT. I think its ok. There is a spelling error when Kirby talks on the strip. Still can't rate is because its an intro...
Try not using blank, in my point of view, backgrounds. If you work on it more, it might be better^^
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Magical Trevor
Guest
I sota got the 1st comic I'd still like to see a bit more. I'm not sure if a plot is coming on