Pete the Unstoppable(PG)

[Pete the Unstoppable]

That's right folks, I named this fic after my username, but the main character is a bit younger than me. Lets get this thing started anyway.

Notes:This Fan Fiction takes place 200 years in the future from the anime, so all of the characters from the show are dead.

This fic is rated PG for the following
Mild Language
Somewhat Intense Violence

Chapter 1rince Squirtle and Team Rocket Admin:Harold

In a dark murky swamp there was a large, blue, female turtle Pokemon with a brown shell that had two cannons own the back of her shell. The Pokemon was queen of the swamp and she was nurtering her new born Pokemon that was also blue with a brown shell. Except her newborn had no cannons on it's back and was alot smaller than her mother. There was suddenly a big splash in the water, the dark brown murky water got in the mother and her baby's eyes. When the infant Pokemon opened it's eyes. It could not find it's mother.

The scared and lonely Pokemon looked for it's mother but could not find her, nor anymore of the Pokemon in the swamp. When the Pokemon came to the ground of the forest to search for food it found twenty green wood gecko Pokemon about it's size guarding it's mother. A young tall boy with shiny glaring green eyes and shining blonde hair with a suit was walking by when he saw this incident.

Five of the wood gecko Pokemon charged at the boy and held him to the ground while five more grabbed the small infant Pokemon. The wood gecko Pokemon holding the small turtle Pokemon threw it up in the air, jumped and smacked it with their tails down into the ground. The mother cried out, "Blastoise!"

The boy in a suit managed to get loose of the wood gecko Pokemons' grasp and ran torwards the infant Pokemon. The small Pokemon could tell that the young boy was trying to help but ran torwards the direction of it's mother -it was unwilling to leave without it's mother. The boy followed the Pokemon and kneeled down to where they were facing face to face and said, "Squirtle, I know you love your mother, but I don't think you will be able to save her. There are twenty Treeckos here. We're outnumbered. We can go and get help."

As much as Squirtle wanted to save it's mother it realized the young boy was right, it jumped into his grasp. The young boy ran carrying Squirtle tight in his grasp. The Treeckos didn't care, after all they had Queen Blastoise. The boy, after running hours with Squirtle in his grasp finally made it to town.

The boy saw a young adult wearing sunglasses, a mask and all black and ran up to him. Before the boy could talk the young adult grinned, "Little brother Pete...Yes I know, a load of Treeckos attacked the Queen of the swamp which was a Blastoise and you rescued her son, Squirtle. And now you want me to help stop the Treeckos with my Charizard."

Pete was astounded on how his older brother knew. It was simply impossible, unless...He sent the Treeckos to attack the swamp. Pete's eyes burned with anger. He demanded, "Why did you do that?! How could you send Pokemon to attack a mother of a baby Squirtle? Why are you so cruel?!"

Pete's brother, annoyed answere quickly, "Why the hell do you think, stupid? I joined Team Rocket and I am going to give the Blastoise to my boss. I'll get a promotion for capturing a royal Pokemon! Now, hand over the Squirtle or else!"

Squirtle, who listened to the whole conversation began to glow up white. Pete knew exactly what was happening and knew why Squirtle was doing it. He cried out to Squirtle, "You shouldn't evolve just cause you are angry. If he is able to defeat a Blastoise with ease, what good will it be evolving into a Wartortle? It isn't time for you to evolve. STOP!!!"

Pete's older brother started to smirk and ordered Squirtle, "You better not stop your evolution! My boss will be more happy and I will probably get a higher reward. It's all about me! Now you do as I say, he hasn't even caught you yet! Listen to what I say, I have badges and I have money! Listen to the great Harold!"

Pete began to argue, "Your just a baby, Squirtle, you recently hatched out of your egg! There is no reason whatsoever why you should evolve. It's not going to solve anything! Enjoy being a Squirtle when you have the chance! You will evolve soon enough."

Squirtle, knew that Harold did not give a hoot about him and that Pete did so he stopped glowing, cancelling his evolution. A cellphone in Harold's pocket began to ring. Harold picked it up and it said, "Hurry up and get to headquarters. Your Charizard delivered the weakened Blastoise to me. I want to give you a reward, don't bother with the Squirtle. The Blastoise is gonna get Team Rocket enough money for now."

Harold hung up the phone and threw a smoke bomb on the ground. Squirtle and Pete were kneeling on the ground coughing. Apparently as young as Squirtle was it passed out. Pete stood back up, reached into his pocket and dropped a red and white ball at Squirtle. Squirtle vanished inside the ball. Pete picked it back up and put it in his pocket and said softly, "Don't worry, we'll find your mother..."

 

[Pete the Unstoppable]

Chapter 2ete & Squirtle Meet the Team Rocket Kid

Pete decided that Squirtle needed some time out of his balls so he threw the red and white ball up in the air and his blue turtle friend Squirtle appeared. Squirtle was still a bit weakened from the smoke bomb Pete's older brother threw on the ground. Squirtle yawned and Pete got a little sleepy and mumbled before he fell asleep, "We should try and get some Gym Badges before looking for your mom, Prince Squirtle. After all they prove how much of an accomplished trainer you are. My brother has all eight from each reigon, we should do that too..."

Pete fell asleep and Squirtle began to shed a few tears since no one was looking. A bald boy about Pete's age with blue gym shorts, sunglasses and a red t-shirt walked up to Pete tapped him on the shoulder. Pete woke up and saw the boy tapping on him. The boy pointed to Pete's Squirtle and shouted, "Hey! If that is your Squirtle, I want to battle you!"

Squirtle pointed to the ground right under the other kid's pocket and it had a white ID card with a red "R" imprinted on it. Pete kneeled down to pick it up and gasped, "You...You are part of Team Rocket and you want Squirtle, don't you?!"

The boy smirked, "Yes...Prepare for trouble and make it double! Team Rocket blasts off at the speed of-" he was cut off.

Pete annoyed hollared, "SHUT THE HELL UP YOU TEAM ROCKET GOON!!!"

The kid, part of Team Rocket was annoyed. He fired a tranqualizer at Pete's Squirtle. Squirtle kneeled down the the ground in pain and it started to get drowsy. Pete, knew he would have to do something and cried out, "Battle me with your Pokemon, not with your lame weapons!"

The member of Team Rocket threw a red and white ball up in the air and an orange dragon Pokemon with wings and blazing flames on its tail appeared. The member of Team Rocket knew he had the upper hand and cried out, "Charizard, Thunderpunch now!"

The dragon like Pokemon stepped over to the weakened Prince Squirtle and punched him with a jolt of electricity in it's hand. Squirtle was about to fall asleep when it opened its mouth and fired a monstrous sized blast of water out of it's mouth. It struck the dragon like Pokemon and it fell to the ground with a loud crash. The member of Team Rocket astounded cried out, "A Squirtle can't learn Hydro Cannon! It is impossible!"

Pete smirked and commented, "Well maybe a Prince Squirtle can though."

Squirtle smiled and then fell asleep. Pete decided not to put it inside it's ball. He bent down and picked Squirtle up. The kid that was a member of Team Rocket said, "You...Just defeated your older brother's Charizard...He let me borrow it..That is the only Pokemon I had with me..."

Pete smiled and looked down at the Squirtle he realized that they might actually have a chance of rescuing Queen Blastoise. Pete had heard about two-hundred years ago that Team Rocket's hideout was in the Viridian City Gym. Pete was not sure if it was still there so he decided after getting seven badges from the Kanto reigon and eight badges from all the other reigons hje would goto the Viridian City Gym. The member of Team Rocket was angry that no one was paying attention to him and shouted out, "You think just cause you beat Charizard you can just diss me?! I do not think so! I'll be back!"

With that said the kid that was a member of Team Rocket fired a red beam from his red and white ball at the Charizard and fled. Squirtle began to open his eyes and realized that the member of Team Rocket had fled. He assumed, probably because of Hydro Cannon. Squirtle was still very weak after being hit by a high leveled Pokemon's Thunderpunch. Pete decided that it was unfair to keep Squirtle in his ball so he decided to let him walk with him, but since Squirtle was still very weak he decided to keep Squirtle in his grasp and carry him home so that he could rest. Just then a bald man with a camera and a black shirt and blue eyes walked over to Pete and said, "That was amazing, how a novice trainer could make someone of Team Rocket flee. And how your Squirtle still had enough energy to fire a Hydro Cannon after being hit by that Charizard's Thunderpunch. How could your Squirtle even know Hydro Cannon in the first place?! I heard that only a Blastoise can learn Hydro Cannon. I sent this in to Pokemon TV and they were impressed. Come on, they want to interview you!"

Pete thought this was a hoax. Just cause his Squirtle knew Hydro Cannon and that he was able to drive away a member of Team Rocket he was going to be interviewed on TV. Pete looked down at Squirtle in his grasp though and said, "Let me think about it, my Squirtle is a bit tired."

The man with the camera laughed, "Don't worry, we can get to Viridian City in no time.Plus they have a Pokemon Center there, what are you waiting for?"

Pete gasped, after what he heard about Team Rocket's hideout being in the Gym there before he said, "No way, I think I can get Squirtle healed here in Pallet Town! Team Rocket's hideout is in the Viridian City Gym!"

The man with the camera laughed again, "No silly. That was two hundred years ago. Come on, the interview is inside the Pokemon Center. We can get your Squirtle healed first, okay?"

Pete looked down at Squirtle in his grasp and asked, "What do you think, Squirtle? Being on TV would be fun. I bet you would just love it!"

Squirtle looked up to Pete, nodded, smiled and said, "Squirtle!"

Pete also smiled and yelled out, "Viridian City here we come!"

Just then the kid that was a member of Team Rocket that Pete defeated jumped out of a helicopter with a parachute on his back. When the kid landed on the ground he pointed his index finger at Pete's Squirtle and cried out, "Now I have reinforcements and I have six new Pokemon with me. Now Squirtle, your luck won't be able to get you out of this living hell! And stop bragging about Squirtle, you should know that Charizard's can't normally learn Thunderpunch! But your brother has raised his specially."

 

[Yami Ryu]

Your squritle is power played :< no one likes power players.

Outside of that your story, to put it bluntly, is bland. Mostly because your character has a super amazing Squirtle that, even when half asleep from a tranq, is able to use Hydro Canon, a Blastoise only move which, the woman says only MATURE/STRONG pokemon can learn, or something to the affect. Now I know Char is weak to water. But seriously, the Hydro Canon from the squirtle in that condition, even if that didn't rub me the wrong way, would probably have been like a stronger water gun.

Pete smirked and commented, "Well maybe a Prince Squirtle can though."

Like Misty's Togepi? Oooh speshul speshul.

Sorry but it sounds like your fic is going to be like a train colission. You wanna look away but you can't, and you know how it ends ain't gonna be pretty.

 

[Pete the Unstoppable]

Actually, I wouldn't call it not pretty. If you want the ending sooooo bad, please PM me, I'll be willing to tell anyone the ending and JUST the ending.

 

[Pete the Unstoppable]

Chapter 3rince Squirtle vs. Mother Espeon

Pete looked behind him to see if the man with the camera would help him, but Pete just saw that he fled. Suddenly a black BMW just drove by, the front door on the driver's side flew open. A young adult in in all black, sunglasses, black mohawk jumped out of the BMW and let it keep on driving off. The man said, "Thats right! I put a brick on the pedal. It'll probably drive into a fence but I don't care. I'm rich and that entrance looked cool!"

Pete just glared at the man. He tried to run but the man tripped him. Pete had dropped Squirtle on the ground. The man with the mohawk bent down to pick Squirtle up and he pulled out a black handgun and whispered to Squirtle, "If you try any funny stuff I will have to um...shoot ya!"

Pete gasped. He couldn't believe what he was seeing. He couldn't just let the man shoot Squirtle. Pete knew who he was and hollared at him, "You can't shoot Prince Squirtle! Otherwise, you wouldn't get that promotion you want big brother! So don't even think about it!"

Harold, Pete's older brother, confessed, "True...but this idiot you see behind you that is also part of Team Rocket, but is just a Team Rocket Grunt. So...You can have Squirtle back...You have beaten me..."

Pete's older brother walked over to Pete hand handed Squirtle. He walked back made a right, turned back diagonaly and fired his handgun at Pete. There was barely any sound, Pete now realized what he was doing, but it was too late, it was a silencer, no one would be able to help. The bullet was just one inch above Pete's head. He then rubbed the sweat off of his face.

The kid that was part of Team Rocket had enough, he had just been insulted. He threw a red and white ball on the ground and a duck-like Pokemon that was made out of polygons appeared. Harold laughed and taunted, "Is that all you got? Because if your best Pokemon is a Porygon, you must suck! Go Celebi!"

Harold threw a purple and white ball with an "M" on it up in the air and a small, green, fairy-like Pokemon appeared. Pete gasped, "How...could you catch Celebi?! Legendary Pokemon are impossible to catch!"

Harold sighed and shouted, "Well, I'm not battling you so it isn't any of your buisness! Anyway, I used a freakin' Master Ball, you idiot! It can catch ANY Pokemon with a hundred percent accuracy!"

Pete realized that since they were battling he had the chance to flee, he ran north with Squirtle tight in his grasp. He kept on running until he saw alot of tall grass. He decided though that he would have to keep moving so he ran forward. Pete then saw a small, brown, fox Pokemon eating some berries. The Pokemon saw Pete and said in fear, "Eevee!"

Pete was suprised, he had heard that Eevees do not live in the wild. And he could tell that it was an Eevee because all a Pokemon can say is their name or parts of their name. The Eevee started to run so Pete reached into his pocket and threw a red and white ball at the Eevee put suddenly the ball just flew back in Petes hand. A purple cat-like Pokemon, with a red jewel on it's head and a tail shaped like a "Y" came from behind the Eevee and charged at Pete. Pete laid Squirtle down on the ground as the cat-like Pokemon headbutted him in the stomach. Pete kneeled down in screamed out in pain and dropped the red and white ball on the ground.

Pete then knew that the cat-like Pokemon was the Eevee's mother. So he decided that since he wanted the Eevee so bad and that it would be horrible to break up a family he would just have to catch both of them. Pete cried out, "Squirtle, use Water Gun on the cat Pokemon!"

Squirtle listened and fired a small jet of water from it's mouth at the cat-like Pokemon. The cat-like Pokemon jumped over the jet of water and behind Squirtle then bended her tail and smacked Prince Squirtle in the face. Squirtle stopped firing the jet of water was hit was knocked back to Pete's feet on the back of it's brown shell. Squirtle quickly got back to it's feet though, the cat-like Pokemon would not stop protecting it's baby Eevee though and cried out, "Espeon!"

Pete then knew that cat-like Pokemon's name was Espeon. Pete didn't give up though, he cried out, "Squirtle, turn around and use Ice Beam now!"

Squirtle then turned and so did Pete around to the direction of the Espeon. Squirtle fired a beam of ice out of it's mouth at Espeon. Espeon used it's tail to break the ice and shards of ice flew in Squirtle's face. Squirtle kneeled down to the ground in pain. Pete then hollared at Espeon, "Do you know who I am? I'm Pete and I'm unstoppable! And do you know who you are fighting? Prince Squirtle! We don't want to harm you. We just want to befriend you! We'll catch Eevee along with you so your family won't be broken up, I promise!"

Espeon didn't believe Pete though and it fired a multi-colored glowing beam at Squirtle. Pete knew Squirtle was about to be badly hurt so he cried out, "Squirtle just, do something! I don't know any more moves that you know!"

Squirtle began to shine as the multi-colored beam hit him. He flew back into Pete's hand very weak, but stopped glowing and released a multi-colored beam at Espeon thatv was twice as big as the one that Espeon had sent at it. Espeon could not avoid it and it knew it was about to face defeat so she just stood there and took the blow. Espeon fell down knocked out. Pete was astonished and gasped, "Squirtle, I had no idea that you could use Mirror Coat! Anyway, sorry Espeon and Eevee but I will take good care of you two."

Pete put Squirtle down on the ground and picked up the red and white ball on the ground that Espeon had used it's psychic powers to block. Pete then threw it at Espeon, and she vanished inside of it. The ball tossed and turned a little bit but it stopped. Pete had caught Espeon. He turned back to see the baby Eevee crying as it's mother had been captured and beaten. Pete saw the sorrow in the Eevee's eyes and said, "It's gonna be okay. Just let me catch you so that I can take care of both of you..."

The sad Eevee ran into a deep patch of grass where the grass was very thick. Pete realized that what he had just done was horrible and he had to set things right by capturing that Eevee so that it could re-unite with it's mother. Pete walked into the dark patch of grass that Eevee ran into and Squirtle followed Pete walking side by side with him.

Meanwhile...Harold was alone back in Pallet Town that kid that was part of Team Rocket and sighed, "Oh well, I'll get my idiot brother later...I had the joy of defeating all six of that kid's Pokemon with my Celebi that wasn't even touched!"

 

[Treeckoman7]

Awful!

Listen to say it in the nicest sense your story is awful. Listen you should read some works by authors like Breezy and others, they have really good stories! It still sucks.[BANNER][/BANNER]