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(PG-13) The Omen Kid ( Just to tell you this is my best for now...)

chrisivy

Well-Known Member
The Omen Kid​
Prologue​



In the world of destruction, there were four sorcerers. Each sorcerer was guarding a treasure and different territory. But these sorcerers never saw each other or know about one another. They only had the assignment of guarding the treasure and their land until it was time, when other guardians took their places. Even spirits of the dead had guarded these lands…

The world of destruction back centuries ago was divided to five big territories. All of the territories had similar names meaning chaos and power. But one land surrounded by water in the dark seas, had a peaceful name. It had the meaning of hope, Nadezda. This name was a hope for other creatures and humans to thrive in their small paradise stranded with water.

The other lands had bitter names…

Acacia-The land of Spirits
Lamya- The land of Danger
Tanek-The land of Death
Tacitus-The land of Illness​

But the lands with bitter names had four gatherings before a spell was cast upon the destruction world. Then they met and had a fight that would change the world and destroy Nadezda. But Nadezda didn’t guard any treasures or territory. It was just a place where you hoped for survival. But the lucky part of this land was a hero was born, the ‘Omen Baby’.








Chapter One
Part One

The Disturbance​



Adren woke that early morning, eager to work. He was eager enough to skip breakfast and run out with his pajamas. It was his day, his day to test his skills on survival. All the kids in Nadezda were to test their skills on a test for survival. It was an obstacle to go far into the jungle of Nadezda and stay there by hunting down your own food. And Adren was up for it.

“Survival Test, here I come! I’m like the coolest kid in Nedazda! There is no way I can die here!” Adren roared when he jumped barefoot out of the abandoned old shack.

The old shack was for repairing boats, but because the lands population decreased. There were only fifty-four humans roaming in the small town of Nadezda. And one of those humans was Adren, who was living alone in the small abandoned shack. But he wasn’t alone; he fed the family of mice in his small shelter with beard and berries he would find. He would play with his ripped old socks and pretend they were puppets when he was trapped inside when it rained. But, he never felt the love of a parent supporting him. And it made him jealous of other kids on the big island.

Surprisingly, Adren was an orphan. He was very clueless, an idiot, and he never paid attention to other things except on food. On the other hand, he was short for his age, and he was very annoying after awhile if he started bragging about himself. He was very selfish and he was a thief.

Adren stole a lot of things such as, fruit, bread, lanterns, trash, and money. But he didn’t steal because he was poor, but that he never had a proper way of living a normal life by trade. “Hey, it’s the bread lady!” Adren would point out when he caught a glance of the lady. But unusually he did not spot her that morning.

The sun slowly rose higher while Adren took his time and walked down the muddy dirt road. His bare feet felt gushy in the thick mud as he crossed fields of rice and fruit. But harvest was hard in a summer morning in Nadezda; the fields were too close to the ocean.
And the sea-level grew higher everyday.

“I will survive through that stupid test, I’ll prove to everyone I can live!”

But Adren made it this far on his own alone. He was already surviving in a funny way. He was living in a way he enjoyed but while thinking about it…he felt something twist his liking of things. He felt different.

“What the hell?” Adren stared down at his fingers. They were tingling.



Adren was about eleven, he had dirty wavy blonde hair and he had a small scar of a cross above his left eye. This scar gave him a lot of mystery to his past and he wondered about it often when, it began to glow bright red. But comparing to normal skin, he a bit tanned. But today, unusually, he was wearing a pair of worn-out pajamas which the color used to be dark blue, turned into a pale bluish color. Everything matched Adren perfectly, even though it was old.

But most importantly about Adren and how to remember him, was his eyes. They were different than other humans. They were not a usual color for eyes, they were violet blue. And they were like jewels; they were very colorful and big. And that was the only part on his face that made others, admire him. But there were other villagers who thought, “He is the ‘Omen Child’! Make his stay away!” And they soon did so and ignored Adren and his admirable looks.


“Hey, kid!” A sixteen year old girl bellowed. Adren heard her and turned around.
It was a blonde haired girl in a rag dress clasping a bouquet of wild flowers in her hands.

Who would be up so early?​

“What the heck do you want?” Adren answered back and stared blankly at the girl.

“I heard you’re the ‘Omen Kid’” She smirked.

So you think you’re so smart, eh?​
Adren thought and sighed. He glanced at her and did a raspberry and laughed, “You believe in those fantasies? Come on, your joking!”

“So do you have some kind of power in your body?” She asked. She seriously believed that Adren was the ‘Kid’.

‘Why should I know? I don’t even know if I’m the ‘Omen Kid’! Stupid Omen! Damn parents!’ Adren thought and wondered. He snorted at her and walked away pretending she never asked him anything.

“Hey, Kid.” She called.

“What?”

“Your some kid, you seem different from other kids. You’ve got a name?” She questioned.

“Adr…”

He stopped and then in a blink of an eye, the girl vanished.

What the hell is going on? That girl just vanished! Adren thought and looked around trying to find any clues to her disappearance. And there, it was her bouquet of wild flowers lying on the muddy road behind him. But the wild flowers seemed different; they were fading to a brown dried-up color, making them seem lifeless. Adren picked the bouquet up and felt the dried leaves tingling in his fingers.

Was it a ghost, a spirit? What was that?​
It mystified him. And then, he turned and began to head toward the center of town in, Nedazda.




Hello readers! I’m chrisivy; I really hope I satisfied your taste on this chapter. I might have a lot of mistakes hidden in some part of the chapter. So please tell me where to look, I can get a bit clumsy sometimes. I hope you liked this chapter. I’m going to continue on chapter one-part two tomorrow. And thank you readers for reading this. I hope this satisfies you. ^_^
Oh, please rate this too. And tell me what was good and confusing.

-chrisivy;munchlax;
 
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cooler3o5

OmegaBeaver! lml,
Woah I like it a lot and by the omen do you mean the movie the omen the one about the son of the d.e.v.i.l.
 

chrisivy

Well-Known Member
Yeah sorta like that. I'm glad you liked it. I watched the omen. It's cool huh?
 

cooler3o5

OmegaBeaver! lml,
well yes though I was a little scared at first but now I look back at it and it was nt that scary.
 

chrisivy

Well-Known Member
Chapter One Part Two

Chapter One
Part Two​

Adren walked through the corn fields after he encountered the mystifying young lady who simply disappeared. It made him more curious about himself after she had asked so many questions. But now it didn’t matter, his survival test was today. It would make him more tense thinking about it, so he cleared his mind and shut his eyes.



“I heard you’re the ‘Omen Kid’” She smirked.



‘Damn it!’ Adren scowled when he remembered her lines playing over and over. It kept repeating and boggling his mind. The words were playing tricks on his head making it seem it was a big lie.

“No, I’m not the Omen Kid.”

He stopped in the road, opened his eyes and looked up at the pale yellowish morning sky. Then sun seemed high in the sky now, time was passing quickly than he expected. But passing over to the other side of the island took along time, even though Nedazda was the smallest territory in the destruction world.

There was nothing interesting in the island. Nedazda was boring place, it didn’t protect any treasures. It didn’t have mystical creatures and castles. It was just a plain island far away from evil and darkness, stranded in the middle of the blue seas. And it made other adventurers on Nedazda curious to what was going on the other territories. And whenever some curious adventurers set sail for the seas they never comeback to Nedazda, ever.

On Nedazda sometimes it was hard to thieve. Sometimes food would be scarce and hunting would be difficult. And during this season, the survival test was preformed. It was prove if you could thrive on your own in a dimension on any part of the island. But obstacles and tests were also to trick and frustrate the survivor who took the test. It was like a big maze with no finish line, you had to figure out way to get out of it on your own.

“This is gonna be so exciting! I’m so- gonna survive this ****’n test!” Adren shouted.

Then from out of no where a long arm coiled Adren’s neck and pulled him back. Adren looked up and saw the pale face.

“What the hell? Who the **** are you?” He croaked and tried to pull the arm off his neck.


He didn’t reply. His cold dark eyes just glared at Adren. Then he spoke, “Do you actually think the test id that easy for a loser like you?” Then he got Adren by his neck and threw him down on the muddy pathway.

Adren fell on his back into the thick mud where is face was buried. Now, his face and his pajamas were covered in mud. How stupid at unfortunate Adren was, but then a spark of anger rose out of him when he finally got on his feet. He glared with hatred and began to think that his foe wanted an opponent to fight with.

“What the hell was that for?” Adren said spitting out the dirt from his mouth. He whipped the mud off his face with his sleeve and stared at the tall boy in a kimono. Then a burst of laughter just poured out of him.

“Ha, you’re wearing girly clothes!” Adren pointed.

“And you seem like you have no manners or any respect for other people. Do you even know who I am?”

“Hell no. But I don’t care because; I’ll blow your socks off when I pass that survival test! You’re a girly-girl!” Adren snorted and laughed.

“Look at yourself, Loser! Can’t you see your miserable yourself?” He muttered.

“Who are you?”

“Kazuhi Imura, I came from Lamya, the land of Danger. Who are you, some farmer’s boy?” He inquired. Then he flicked off a long black bang that was covering his left eye and he swayed his long ponytail behind him. But he didn’t seem girl at all, his kimono was a blue navy color patterned with sliver dragons and butterflies. And Adren then grew rather jealous after taking another look at Kazuhi.

“What’s with the girly look? And anyway, Lamya is too far away from here! Your just a fat big *** liar!” Adren said as his face grew red. Then he noticed Kazuhi wasn’t lying. His face was solemn. He was very serious and unique in someway that Adren didn’t understand.

“I came from Lamya to search for the ‘Omen Kid’. Have you heard about that kid?” He asked and approached slowly towards Adren.

“What the hell? What do you mean you searching for...that kid?” Adren grew worried.



They’re searching for me!​


Adren expression soon changed and Kazuhi grew suspicious. ‘What a stupid idiot. He probably never heard of the ‘kid’.’ Kazuhi wondered and then glanced at Adren’s face.
‘His eyes, they’re violet!’ Kazuhi though and made an amused face.

“Stop looking at me! I don’t know anything!” Adren shouted.

“You’re the ‘kid’.”

Kazuhi grew embarrassed. He blushed and then saw Adren backing away one step at a time.

“Hey, kid!” Kazuhi called.

“I don’t know anything!” Adren said in a frightened way and ran back up the road to his shack. Now, he would miss his chance for the survival test. Others are searching for him….But why?

‘I’m a scaredy cat! I know!’ Adren thought as he was running down the muddy road as fast as he could. His feet grew tired as he pushed himself to run away.


His Kazuhi following me? Was I fast enough to run away?​



Then he fell when he wondered about these questions. He just grew tenser wondering about it. Adren groaned when he felt the pain tingle through his right ankle. It was new to him, he never sprained it before.

“OWCH! CRAP!”​

He howled when he tried to stand up. But soon he slipped onto the mud. He tried again.
But he couldn’t.
End of chapter One


OK~! Hi I’m chrisivy, again. Thanks for the support and everything. I hope this time I go some attention from others. I suspect something in wrong so please tell me, I would edit this chapter. And next time will be chapter two. I will be planning to send that in tomorrow. Thank you folks.;165;
 

castor

New Member
This is good.

But I don't really think you should separate the chapters...
 
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