Heey~! *hugs* Am all caught up- I especially like the 'champion' one, the way you implied the journey that had led up that point. X3 it was very sweet- I may have done it a little more subtly; the name in particular gave away what you'd dodged telling us until the end: who the character was fighting, but I did like the circular taint you gave this, leaving the oshawott and it's accompanying memory until last. Very nice. X3 Perhaps integrating the memories into the piece a little more would make it seem a little less blunt- at the moments the memories seem a little lusty. As it is a pokemon battle, you could integrate them in between an action, just to make it less static- battles are supposed to have highly charged, fast atmospheres, neh? :3
X3 I loved that episode~! with jessie and James' magikarp, right? Brings back memories. <3 hash, I liked the black humor in this. X3 It may have been more effective if you'd kept to either a detached narrator or the POV of the trainer- therefore allowing the repercussions of the magikarp's evolution to be implied rather then stated, but it was fun x3 a nice little ironic scene.
X3 nice descriptions in the last one~! I quite liked the scene you played through: it was summed up nicely by the title. My only qualm is that is was just that, a description- You could, I felt, have put a little more of the characters personalities to make it work a little more by itself- such as the mother's? I know you're pressed for space though. X3
All in all I really liked these~! x3 well done :3