Pikachu's Adventure

[DiarugaEX10]

Proluge:
One day when Pikachu,Mukurru,Sceptile,Charizard and Aipom were eating Pokeblocks a giant warphole sucked them in to Adventure Island. Meanwhile in Johto the Pichu Brothers were sucked in too but they didn't notice.

Thats the end of the proluge I will update it tomorrow if you don't like it pm me;107; ;munchlax; :172bros: ;025; ;172; :025n172: :025ball: :surfpika: ;386-a; ;493; ;151;

 

[Draconis]

This is most certainly not a prologue. It's barely two sentences, let alone a proper prologue. A proper prologue is at least one page long in Microsoft Word. There is no description at all. This just is basically a statement. The use of smilies in a fic, is highly looked down upon. I highly suggest you read the fic rules, and advice for aspiring authors thread before submitting a bland, tastelss, uninteresting fic. I also highly suggest you use a proper word program, like Microsoft Word, instead of typing two measely sentences in the reply box, and calling it a fic.

 

[Zephyr Flare]

Please, read the Rules, Advice for Aspiring Authors and possibly evn other people's fanfictions, you need it if you think it's fine to post so little.

Sandra