Please, need help

[Mr.Palkia_7389]

;445;
Nature: Adamant
Item: Life Orb
Moves:
Earthquake
Stone Edge
Fire Fang
Outrage
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;260;
Nature: Quite
Item:Muscle Band
Moves:
Earthquake
Brick Break
Surf
Ice Beam
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;466;
Nature Adamant
Item: Scope Lens
Moves:
Thunderpunch
Ice Punch
Earthquake
Cross Chop
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This good?

 

[The Tail]

;330;
Nature: Adamant
Item: ?
Moves:
U -Turn
Earthquake
Dragon Claw
Draco Meteor
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;445;
Nature: ?
Item: ?
Moves:
Earthquake
Dragon Rush
Rock Slide/Stone Edge
?
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;260;
Nature: ?
Item:?
Moves:
Earthquake
Hydro pump
Surf
Ice Beam
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Don't mind if you change pokemon and moves. But I really need some sugestions.
And if you're going to post things like Sp102 and HP Ice, you will have to explain it to me, because I will have no idea what your talking about.

Edit: I was also thinking about an Elektivire, but he don't know who I should replace.

;466;
Nature Adamant
Item:
Moves:
Thunderpunch
Ice Punch
Earthquake
Cross Chop

My suggestion:
Flygon/Lonely/item:Razor Fang/EVs: (its effort values)Speed & attack
Moves:
Earthquake
Dragon Claw
Flamethrower
Return

Garchomp/Adamant/item:Life Orb/EVs:Attack
Moves:
Eathquake
Dragon Claw
Protect
Giga Impact

Swampert/Quiet/item:Quick Claw/EVs:Sp.attack & attack
Moves:
Ice Beam
Surf
Protect
Eartquake

Electivire/Lonely/item:Scope Lens/EVs:attack & speed
Moves:
Thunderbolt
Protect
Earthquake
Rock Slide

 

[Jessie&James]

Edit: I was also thinking about an Elektivire, but he don't know who I should replace.

If you want to swap one of the Pokemon with Electivire, then swap out Flygon since you already have one dragon Pokemon in your team.

 

[arceus03]

Fire Blast > Draco Meteor for Flygon IIRC.

Garchomp, Jolly (+Speed, -SAtk)
Item: Choice Band
-Outrage
-Earthquake
-Stone Edge
-Fire Fang/Crunch
Standard CB Chomp

Item: Yache Berry
-Swords Dance
-Earthquake
-Outrage/Dragon Claw
-Fire Fang

Brick Break > Surf for Swampert, I think.

Is this for the BT? If so, you have a huge Dragon & Ice weakness.

 

[Mr.Palkia_7389]

Well I will get rid of the flygon and here is the new team:

;445;
Nature: Jolly
Item: Choice Band
Moves:
Earthquake
Stone Edge
Fire Fang
Outrage

;260;
Nature: Quite
Item:Quick claw
Moves:
Earthquake
Brick Break
Surf
Ice Beam

;466;
Nature Adamant
Item: Scope Lens
Moves:
Thunderpunch
Ice Punch
Earthquake
Cross Chop

Is that better?

 

[Anti-Cloner]

Electrivire:
Nature: Adamant
Item:
Thunder
Ice Punch
Earthquake
Cross Chop
You have two pokemon benefiting from rain dance, so why not?
Scope lens increases acc if you move AFTER the foe.
Bright Powder to reduce acc, Electivire loses Hp quite easily.
-Danny

 

[Mr.Palkia_7389]

Electrivire:
Nature: Adamant
Item:
Thunder
Ice Punch
Earthquake
Cross Chop
You have two pokemon benefiting from rain dance, so why not?
Scope lens increases acc if you move AFTER the foe.
Bright Powder to reduce acc, Electivire loses Hp quite easily.
-Danny

I don't quite understand the last part. Should I teach somebody rain dance?

 

[Anti-Cloner]

It could be Swampert, but its your own choice
Thunder: 100% accuracy in rain dance
Water moves: x1.5 in rain dance after the STAB
But swampert has a perfect moveset so... again, its your choice

 

[Anti-Cloner]

It could be Swampert, but its your own choice
Thunder: 100% accuracy in rain dance
Water moves: x1.5 in rain dance after the STAB
But swampert has a perfect moveset so... again, its your choice
Srry.. double post

 

[Mr.Palkia_7389]

It could be Swampert, but its your own choice
Thunder: 100% accuracy in rain dance
Water moves: x1.5 in rain dance after the STAB
But swampert has a perfect moveset so... again, its your choice

Well if he has a perfect move set then I will leave him. And what about electivire and garchomp are they good?

EDIT: and whats with this scope lens thing? it says increases attack power by 1.5 but can only attack once?

 

[Anti-Cloner]

That's a choice band or you are talking about. the pokemon holding it can only use one type of move and if you have a weakness, that may not be good. Electivire and Garchomp look good
-Danny

 

[Poke-friend]

This team needs little to no improvement.

I actually prefer this set for Garchomp:

Garchomp @ Life Orb
Adamant Nature
Ability: Sand Veil
-Swords Dance
-Dragon Claw
-Earthquake
-Stone Edge

The main powerhouse in most teams.

For Swampert, try:

Swampert @ Muscle Band
Adamant Nature
Ability: Torrent
-Waterfall
-Earthquake
-Stone Edge
-Avalanche

This is the QuakEdge combo plus STAB Waterfall and Avalanche.

Electivire is fine.

I would suggest adding a special pokemon though...

 

[manafi7]

Pretty good team over all. Give Electivire an expert belt and think about getting a special sweeper.

 

[Mr.Palkia_7389]

thanks for the sugestions everyone. I will soon make this team.

Edit: this is for something else, so I can olny have 3 pokes