Please rate my first Netbattle Team!

[Dark_Force]

Here it is - the first team I made for NB. Please feel free to change any pokes, items moves, evs etc as my team is probably horribly bad.

Snorlax (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Immunity
EVs: 204 HP / 94 Atk / 136 Def / 8 Spd / 68 SDef
Careful Nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Body Slam
- Curse
- Earthquake
- Rest

Tyranitar (M) @ Choice Band
Trait: Sturdy
EVs: 252 Atk / 86 Def / 172 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Focus Punch
- Hidden Power [Flying]
- Rock Slide

Sceptile (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Overgrow
EVs: 6 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Crunch
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Leaf Blade
- Thunderpunch

Metagross @ Choice Band
Trait: Clear Body
EVs: 252 Atk / 74 Def / 184 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Explosion
- Meteor Mash
- Rock Slide

Salamence (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Intimidate
EVs: 58 HP / 252 Atk / 200 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Brick Break
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Hidden Power [Flying]

Feraligatr (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Torrent
EVs: 220 HP / 176 Atk / 18 Def / 96 SAtk
Hardy Nature (Neutral)
- Earthquake
- Hydro Pump
- Rock Slide
- Swords Dance

 

[Delta]

Here it is - the first team I made for NB. Please feel free to change any pokes, items moves, evs etc as my team is probably horribly bad.

Snorlax (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Immunity
EVs: 204 HP / 94 Atk / 136 Def / 8 Spd / 68 SDef
Careful Nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Body Slam
- Curse
- Earthquake
- Rest

This needs a ton more of Sdef since it´s your only switch against zapdos and the like. 496 HP is all snorlax needs

Tyranitar (M) @ Choice Band
Trait: Sturdy
EVs: 252 Atk / 86 Def / 172 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Focus Punch
- Hidden Power Bug
- Rock Slide

HP bird only hits heracross and breloom, though both get a lot of damage by Rock slide/FP. HP bug lets you 2HKO cloydol

Sceptile (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Overgrow
EVs: 6 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Crunch
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Leaf Blade
- Thunderpunch

Sceptile´s best at subseeding

Metagross @ Choice Band
Trait: Clear Body
EVs: 252 Atk / 74 Def / 184 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Explosion
- Meteor Mash
- Rock Slide

Needs more HP, enough for 320 is usually fine

Salamence (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Intimidate
EVs: 58 HP / 252 Atk / 200 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Brick Break
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Hidden Power [Flying]

I prefer rock slide/fthrower in this, btw

Feraligatr (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Torrent
EVs: 220 HP / 176 Atk / 18 Def / 96 SAtk
Brave Nature (Neutral)
- Earthquake
- Hydro Pump
- Rock Slide
- Swords Dance

A lot of things do better than feraligatr in OU. Also, half your team is walled by skarms, get a spinner/maggy or spikes will bite you in the ***

 

[Dark_Force]

Here's my team now - any more changes?

Snorlax (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Immunity
EVs: 141 HP / 94 Atk / 136 Def / 8 Spd / 131 SDef
Careful Nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Body Slam
- Curse
- Earthquake
- Rest

Tyranitar (M) @ Choice Band
Trait: Sturdy
EVs: 252 Atk / 86 Def / 172 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Focus Punch
- Hidden Power [Bug]
- Rock Slide

Sceptile (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Overgrow
EVs: 6 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Leaf Blade
- Leech Seed
- Substitute
- Thunderpunch

Metagross @ Choice Band
Trait: Clear Body
EVs: 77 HP / 252 Atk / 74 Def / 107 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Explosion
- Meteor Mash
- Rock Slide

Salamence (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Intimidate
EVs: 58 HP / 252 Atk / 200 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Dragon Dance
- Flamethrower
- Hidden Power [Flying]
- Rock Slide

Magneton @ Leftovers
Trait: Magnet Pull
EVs: 6 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Substitute
- Thunder Wave
- Thunderbolt