please read this love fanfic!!!!!!

[mewcorina1]

part 1
it was party night.May,Max,Misty,Ash,and Brock were there.may in a puffy red and pink dress,misty in a long straight blue dress and the boys in tuxedos.Then all a sudden,a crowd of screaming girls came.

may:i wonder what was that all about....
all a sudden.........
may:what in the-!!!!what are harley and drew-ahhhh
ash:calm down...........
max:1 question.just why are you worrying?it's not like you have a crush or something!
may:U LITTLE!!!!
drew:calm down ladies...........hehe...........
harley:hey,what about me????aren't i famous?
may shouting:YES!!!FOR MAKING A FOOL OUT OF ME!!!!!!!!!!!!
harley and drew:may?
girls:HELLLO???WERE WAITING!!!!!!!WE WANT YOUR AUTOGRAPH!!!!!
drewk,ok.
drew wrote on their papers.
girls:THANKS DREW!!!!
may:wow.....didnt know he was that famous.......
misty:well,why are we standing out here and not dancing?
ash:yah!!let's go dance.
brock:hey.what ever happened to me?
misty grabbed ash's hand and danced.then,a little girl about max's age appeared.
mimi:are you max?it mimi,your friend when we were little!
max:hi mimi.
mimi was in a flare orange dress with her blonde hair out.
the two held eachothers hands.
may:i think i will get some punch.

 

[Yami Ryu]

How about you read the rules, instead of reading this, ne?

RULES

They are good in helping you learn not to spam with crap script like this. Or atleast show that you can't script unless it's proper and not lazy noob style done in the reply box in 15 seconds script.

So you read the rules, while I have to pester a mod to close this.

 

[mewcorina1]

omg!!!violence herE!

part 2

may got her punch and stared outside.the wind blew her hair.may then turned around.
may:harley,what do you want idiot???
harley:no matter what,i am always mad at you.
harley hit her arm.
mayww....
drew was staring at harley.
harley:i hate you!!
harley made may lean and was about to fall.drew then appeared.he saved her!
harley:i was-just ummmmmm-having fun!!hehe!!!!!!
drew was calm for a moment.
harleylease-be -um-calm!!!!
harley left.
may stared into drews eyes thinking,am i in love or what?i cant decide.
drew:you're ok,right?

 

[Dragonfree]

Yes, by all means do read the rules. Firstly, this doesn't even go here in the first place (there is a special forum for shipping fics); secondly, you're using bad script format, which is not allowed; thirdly, that chapter is way too short; fourthly, I'm afraid your spelling/grammar/punctuation (especially the last) are quite awful and you're in desperate need of a beta reader or at least a spellchecker; fifthly, don't use smilies in fics; sixthly, don't type out chapters in the reply box.

I'm sorry, but I have to close this.