please some one rate this team please

[Ultimate Flyzard]

this is the following team i am hoping ot get on either my fire red or ruby.

Blazinken = Bulk Up, Flamethrower, Sky Uppercut, Rock Slide(a alternative would be nice)

Starmie = Surf, Ice Beam, Thunderbolt, Recover

Tyranitar = EQ, Crunch, Rock Slide, Flamethrower

Heracross = Swords Dance, Rock Slide (again alternative would be nice), Brick Break, Mega Horn

Crobat= Mean Look, Toxic, Fly, ??? (not sure thinking sludge bomb for STAB or confuse ray)

and can some one please suggest a thunder type and move set please

thanx Ultimate Flyzard

 

[metafreak]

this is the following team i am hoping ot get on either my fire red or ruby.

Blazinken = Bulk Up, Flamethrower, Sky Uppercut, Rock Slide(a alternative would be nice)
This is good. Dont Replace Rock Slide

Starmie = Surf, Ice Beam, Thunderbolt, Recover
Good.

Tyranitar = EQ, Crunch, Rock Slide, Flamethrower
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Rock Slide
- Taunt
Taunt. Then DD and sweep

Heracross = Swords Dance, Rock Slide (again alternative would be nice), Brick Break, Mega Horn
Good. Again, dont replace Rock Slide

Crobat= Mean Look, Toxic, Fly, ??? (not sure thinking sludge bomb for STAB or confuse ray)
- Sludge Bomb
- Shadow Ball
- Aerial Ace
- ????

and can some one please suggest a thunder type and move set please
Jolteon
- Thunderbolt
- Thunderwave
- HP Grass
- Baton Pass

thanx Ultimate Flyzard

tencharlimit

 

[S:C]

I need some natures before I can do anything. Posting held items would be nice too.

 

[Carpetted!]

Blazinken = Bulk Up, Flamethrower, Sky Uppercut, Rock Slide(a alternative would be nice)
Overheat over Flamethrower, everything else is good.
Starmie = Surf, Ice Beam, Thunderbolt, Recover
Street.
Tyranitar = EQ, Crunch, Rock Slide, Flamethrower
What Metafreak said.
Heracross = Swords Dance, Rock Slide (again alternative would be nice), Brick Break, Mega Horn
Perfect.
Crobat= Mean Look, Toxic, Fly, ??? (not sure thinking sludge bomb for STAB or confuse ray)
Annoyers stink. Do what metafreak said. If you really want an annoyer, Subsitute > Fly
and can some one please suggest a thunder type and move set please

Raichu
Encore
Subsitute
ThunderBolt
Focus Punch

9/10. Solid.