Pocket Hearts II (sequel to my old Pokemon/Kingdom Hearts Rp)

[turboredeemed]

(Ok, you mods out there DON'T ban me, I have been working on this new version of Pocket Hearts II for a few months)

The plot takes place 2 years after the original Pocket Hearts, and the portals to the Kingdom Hearts Worlds have been Popping up all over the 3 Major Regions of the World of Pokemon. Like in the original, you need a weapon (to defend yourself agaisnt Villains and Heartless), and six fully evolved Pokemon, and legendaries are summons you get throughout the RP. The Thirteenth Order has regrouped. There are a lot of new things, such as fusions with other Characters in RP, combo attacks (also with other characters in the rp) (You need permission for both from the character you want to do these with, and ask who gets the dominant body if you are temporaily fusing with another character), new worlds (including Pride Rock [Lion King World], and Land of the Dragons [Mulan World]), and most of the old Worlds, only they are bigger than before. Teams Rocket, Magma, and Aqua have just found out about the portals reappearing and are teaming up with the worlds' villains, and the Heartless. If you were in the Original Pocket Hearts RP, you may join as your old character, if not you have to be a completely new character.

The portals (and whatver movie the Kingdom Hearts Worlds are Based on, except for the worlds made exclusively for Kingdom Hearts Games, labeled for their importance in the games)

Twilight Town (like Traverse Town in the original game)-Littleroot Town
Land of the Dragons (Mulan)- Blackthorn City
Agrabah (Aladdin)-Desert Underpass
Olympus Coliseum (Hercules)- Route 45
Pride Rock (Lion King)- Safari Zone (the one in Kanto)
Halloween Town (Nightmare Before Christmas)- Route 123
Timeless River (Steamboat Willie)- Vermillion City
Disney Castle (King Mickey's Castle)- Cerulean City
Castle Oblivion- Violet City
Atlantica (Little Mermaid)- Olivine City
Beast's Castle (Beauty and the Beast)- Cinnabar Island
100 Acre Wood (Winnie the Pooh)- Viridian Forest
Hollow Bastion (Maleficent's Castle in original Kingdom Hearts)- Power Plant
Port Royale (Pirates of the Caribbean)- Seafloor Cavern
Destiny Islands- Cianwood City
Deep Dive- Route 107

THE SIGN UPS! (thanks to Tauros_Rider2 for helping me remember)

Name: Eric
Gender: Male
Weapon: Jungle King Keyblade
Pokemon: Sceptile, Rhydon, Kingdra, Crobat, Donphan, Gyarados
Personality: Easy to anger, but mellow and trustworthy
Alignment (Good or Evil): Good
Physical Descriptions
Regular: The boy trainer from Pokemon Emerald, if you want more info, imagine the boy trainer from Ruby and Sapphire wearing more green and white, but still soem red and black.
Pride Rock: A teenage white lion with a dark grey mane, with his Pokeballs around his neck
Halloween Town: Like The regular, onyl wearing all black with pale skin and wampire fangs.
Atlantica: The regular as a Merman, Poekballs around his waist, has a dark green tail.
Timeless River: A black and white cartoony version of the regular.

 

[Tauros Rider2]

Okay where is the Sign up form?

 

[turboredeemed]

Oh, my bad! I will edit my post for the sign up form!

 

[RaZoR LeAf]

Evidently you have NOT been working on it for the past few months, because I am once again asking the same questions of the plot that have been asked in your last attempts over 6 months ago.

(Ok, you mods out there DON'T ban me, I have been working on this new version of Pocket Hearts II for a few months)

Evidently you have NOT been working on it for the past few months, because I am once again asking the same questions of the plot that have been asked in your last attempts over 6 months ago.

The plot takes place 2 years after the original Pocket Hearts, and the portals to the Kingdom Hearts Worlds have been Popping up all over the 3 Major Regions of the World of Pokemon.

What happened in the original Pocket Hearts? History, outcomes, cause and effect. Why have portals been popping up?

Like in the original, you need a weapon (to defend yourself agaisnt Villains and Heartless), and six fully evolved Pokemon, and legendaries are summons you get throughout the RP.

Why, why and how?

The Thirteenth Order has regrouped.

Who?

There are a lot of new things, such as fusions with other Characters in RP, combo attacks (also with other characters in the rp) (You need permission for both from the character you want to do these with, and ask who gets the dominant body if you are temporaily fusing with another character)

How does that work, and why does it take place ((this sort of information does not go in the plot. it ruins the flow of the story. information goes AFTER the plot))

new worlds (including Pride Rock [Lion King World], and Land of the Dragons [Mulan World]), and most of the old Worlds, only they are bigger than before.

Describe.

Teams Rocket, Magma, and Aqua have just found out about the portals reappearing and are teaming up with the worlds' villains, and the Heartless.

Who?

If you were in the Original Pocket Hearts RP, you may join as your old character, if not you have to be a completely new character.

You expect people to remember their original characters, or do you have them all saved for their convenience?

The portals (and whatver movie the Kingdom Hearts Worlds are Based on, except for the worlds made exclusively for Kingdom Hearts Games, labeled for their importance in the games)

Twilight Town (like Traverse Town in the original game)-Littleroot Town
Land of the Dragons (Mulan)- Blackthorn City
Agrabah (Aladdin)-Desert Underpass
Olympus Coliseum (Hercules)- Route 45
Pride Rock (Lion King)- Safari Zone (the one in Kanto)
Halloween Town (Nightmare Before Christmas)- Route 123
Timeless River (Steamboat Willie)- Vermillion City
Atlantica (Little Mermaid)- Olivine City
Beast's Castle (Beauty and the Beast)- Cinnabar Island
100 Acre Wood (Winnie the Pooh)- Viridian Forest
Hollow Bastion (Maleficent's Castle in original Kingdom Hearts)- Power Plant
Port Royale (Pirates of the Caribbean)- Seafloor Cavern
Destiny Islands- Cianwood City
Deep Dive- Route 107

So what's the actual plot? You haven't said what anyone is going to do. Save the world? Stop the evil people? Seal the portals? Nobody knows.

Name: Eric
Gender: Male
Weapon: Jungle King Keyblade

What's a keyblade? Where has that come from there is NOTHING in the plot about them. Explain.

Pokemon: Sceptile, Rhydon, Kingdra, Crobat, Donphan, Gyarados
Personality: Easy to anger, but mellow and trustworthy

Is he Mellow and trustworthy when he's angry?

Alignment (Good or Evil): Good

There's nothing in the plot saying you can be evil. What are the evil people meant to do?

Physical Descriptions
Regular: The boy trainer from Pokemon Emerald, if you want more info, imagine the boy trainer from Ruby and Sapphire wearing more green and white, but still soem red and black.

3 months and you still can't describe anything. Pathetic.

Pride Rock: A teenage white lion with a dark grey mane, with his Pokeballs around his neck
Halloween Town: Like The regular, onyl wearing all black with pale skin and wampire fangs.
Atlantica: The regular as a Merman, Poekballs around his waist, has a dark green tail.
Timeless River: A black and white cartoony version of the regular.

What the hell is that about?

 

[turboredeemed]

To answer your questions, RaZoR LeAf, in the original Pocket Hearts, the good guys defeated Ansem (who is the villain in the original Kingdom Hearts), and closed all the portals.
You need 6 fully evolved Pokemon obviously for battles (you can also fuse with your Pokemon temporarily), a weapon to fight off the Heartless and other evil thingies, and Legendaries are summons because I don't want people to have all legendaries, it ruins all the fun, and I wanted to have them, but I wanted to limit them to summons, like Genie and Mushu (in all the Kingdom Hearts Games), but they have importance to the plot in their worlds.
New worlds will also appear in kingdom Hearts II, and I will add more new worlds when I find out about them. A Keyblade is Sora's (the main character in the Kingdom Hearts Games), and looks like a kickass key/weapon. And, No, he is not necessarily mellow and trustworthy when he is angry. The evil characters work together on the side of the darkness, they work with the Heartless, Villains (such as Jafar In Agrabah, Ursula in Atlantica, etc), and teams Rocket, Magma, and Aqua. There are multiple physical descriptions because there are soem that only fit in a certain world, such as there is a specific description for Atlantic because all the others will drown. Pride Rock, Halloween Town, and Timeless River have their own descriptions to blend in, because you can't be a goth (like in Halloween Town) in Pride Rock.

 

[Yami Ryu]

And yet Turbo, instead of including that in your first post, or let alone; you're plot. You leave it out. And it seems you didn't answer everything Dan was pointing out. Atleast from that mass of text block. Seriously, the only thing I understand about your plot, is the basic gist it's a cross over with KH and PKMN, but it's like you didn't even do any reaserch for the 'worlds' as Mushu didn't come from a dragon land, he was an ancient guardian of Mulan >.> .. well no he was actually a gong ringer for the other sprits. But anyways;

You really have only done the bare necicities(I know I tyoed this --; ) and took the lazy route ONCE AGAIN. As I see no difference really from this rp to the last ones. Outside of it being in no way an improvement.

I think I shall help Dan a bit. Not flame you ... just sort of tear apart your weak attempts at answering;

A Keyblade is Sora's (the main character in the Kingdom Hearts Games), and looks like a kickass key/weapon.

WHAT does the Keyblade look like. Is it a Key on some sort of chain and bladed? is it small, is it large, is it something big enough to SMASH THINGS WITH!? Or is it infact a key and a little blade on a chain. You just gave a pale, poor, half assed and lacking attempt to tell people what a Keyblade is.

The evil characters work together on the side of the darkness, they work with the Heartless, Villains (such as Jafar In Agrabah, Ursula in Atlantica, etc), and teams Rocket, Magma, and Aqua.

Which as you know, they would have been defeated in the first KH game, or RP, or the Heartless would have eaten them or somthing for losing, as which happened to several villians in the PS2 game. Then there's the fact you don't explain what the heartless are/could be/look like/what they do, or who Jafar or Ursula are, or what the ETC could be. And once more try to play on the fact 'if you play it you know it so I don't have to do any effort into it', and once more this could have been something you could have added to the plot, but once again. LEFT OUT.

And, No, he is not necessarily mellow and trustworthy when he is angry.

Well isn't that special.

There are multiple physical descriptions because there are soem that only fit in a certain world, such as there is a specific description for Atlantic because all the others will drown

Yet you really left that helpfull hint out of the supposedly edited sign up, and even your descriptions are pale attempts at anything. Hypothetically; I have no god damn idea what the boy from Ruby/Sapphire looks like, as I don't play Ruby/Sapphire. Or that I don't play emerald either. What do I do when I want to interact with your character? I don't know his eye coloration, skin tone, hieght, wieght set, clothing atire, etc. He's just as blank to me as his personality.

Even with 'pictures' or 'sprites' as 'description' you are supposed to still give description.

Which you did not.

 

[turboredeemed]

To look on more details of the worlds, go to http://www.khinsider.com

 

[Yami Ryu]

To look on more details of the worlds, go to http://www.khinsider.com

Details for what, what you decided to not put in? That is not acceptable. I don't see any Role Play sign ups that link to outside information sources just to allow the player to skip having to do anything at all to describe over half of the plot, sign up sheet for their character or any other vital information.

One again Turboreedemed, it seems you failed.

Edit: Oh wait, I see. Detail for the worlds. Yet you skipped over everything else I said. Maybe you should use your eyes Turbo, and re-read what I wrote. Think that may help you. A whole bunch. Maybe even re-read what Dan wrote too.

 

[turboredeemed]

Thanks! *looks around just to get to the character limit on the forum*

 

[Yami Ryu]

Thanks! *looks around just to get to the character limit on the forum*

Alright Turbo, you just spammed in your own thread. And that is pretty- well I could say something but I've already annoyed Dan twice about bordering on the flames so I'll keep to the meaning of my post. If you have to be told to completely read a post by a mod, maybe you need another short vacation?

Seriously, you could have improved on your characters; such as the lion. Alright, what does the white lion look like? What color white is it? Does it have a mane? How big is it? Half grown? Full grown? How are the pokeballs around the neck? Is their no mane? And how would he explain the pokeballs to other lions? How would he even use them while in lion form?

You could have even now, gone back and edited your post in what Dan pointed out. What everyone has pointed out, yet you still blithely ignore it as if you're above the rules, you border on spamming as such also, and you act like this is your best, when it's not. It's your un edited original probably five times before-hand posted sign up.

 

[turboredeemed]

To answer your question, Renegade, the Pokeballs would be aroudn his neck in a chain, like Sora's Necklace in Kingdom Hearts II, go look at some pics of him in that world, also the color of the lion is off-white, he is a teenage lion, and he has just the top of a cream colored mane.

 

[RaZoR LeAf]

Why have you not written ANY of this into your RPG? Why is it still in seperate posts scattered throughout the topic?

 

[Yami Ryu]

To answer your question, Renegade, the Pokeballs would be aroudn his neck in a chain, like Sora's Necklace in Kingdom Hearts II, go look at some pics of him in that world, also the color of the lion is off-white, he is a teenage lion, and he has just the top of a cream colored mane.

Oh, that's so helpfull. What if I don't want to go look up a picture of Sora, just to allow you to get out of describing that necklace. What if there are no pictures I can see, or they're all suddenly X-boxed?

And why is your description still;

Pride Rock: A teenage white lion with a dark grey mane, with his Pokeballs around his neck

, and you do know white lions are extinct in the wild, so that'd pretty much have you spotted as something unusual to the lions anyways, right? But I wouldn't really be complaining that much if you actually desribed the lion and not his age. A teenage lion, well, there are alot of possibilities and factors, he could be shorter or taller than an average lion, or stocky, or even lithe and thin.

Yet you don't even attempt to help people visualise your character. And Dan is pointing out what I pointed out. You have failed to edit anything into your sign up. You have failed to aknowledge anything outside of a pale and very, lacking, attempt, no wait, half assed attempt, to try and appease the points we are making.

When all you're doing is making people more annoyed at this inane idiocy.

 

[turboredeemed]

Come on, when I posted the ORIGINAL Pocket Hearts for the first time, It was a hit!

 

[Yami Ryu]

Come on, when I posted the ORIGINAL Pocket Hearts for the first time, It was a hit!

Question: Did it actually have a plot, description, details, yada yada to it? Did you even write it? Did someone else write it for you? It might've been a hit back then, but it seems you're flunking out now Turbo. You don't try and become better, you still haven't attempted to do anything to your first post to edit in information it seems, do you really think you can continue to get people joining your role plays with half arsed sign ups?

You fail in describing the;

Who:
Why:
What:
Where:
When:
How:

That a role play needs to thrive and survive. There's barely any plot, to your sign up. And you expect people to love it? Somehow I fear the original had more to it than the sequal.

Why don't you actually attempt to work at your sign up now? You had plenty of time.

To quote Dan;

3 months and you still can't describe anything. Pathetic.

 

[RaZoR LeAf]

Enough, Renegade you're not helping.