poetry! Advanceshipping

[cryztalwing]

Ok Some poetry that Ash think's to him slef, whill watching May traning her PoKeMoN. This not a one shot, so I might post more advancshipping pome's latter on. I think this pg or pg-13, not sure....


Whill Ash waching May train her PoKeMoN.

"A social Beautifly
On wings of words
Those tireless nights
She completes her traning
In the pale blue moon sky
Where Illumise's dance high
Where dreams are made
And darkness it hides
Her sweetness like rare candy
The kindness of her heart
It touches everyone
Behind her smile and a caring thought

when I whisper your name

I am never innocent
my attention turns to you
and I contemplate the joy
of your smile of your stunning face
the sparkle of your sapphire eyes

the scent of you hair
the sweetness of your smile
the softness of your skin
the fire of your desire
fueling and flooding my own

I am worng…. guilty as charg
when I think about you
sweetnest of a forbedding huge
to show my love wrap in your arms
deep inside it pains me not to show

I am guilty as charg whille waching
I can feel the heat of your Combuskens traning
beneath your caring voice of commands
and the beauty of your poses
Your magnificent hair blowing in the wind

I was never innocent and always
ready to incriminate my slef
giving in to temptation that is forbedding
but all in the end just a touch of your hand
is more than anothe for me, even more than a forbedding huge
May when I watch your traning, when I watch you battle!

And when I imagin you speaking softly to me
my arms are around you
as I pull you close to me
and the warmth of are bodys meet
in a forbedding huge of love, in the heat of desire
my heart pounds, stomach aches
and I see visions of the furter of us together May
traning are PoKeMoN together with are furter children"



so what you think?

 

[Karadur]

that was good a few errors but it was still great

 

[Sakura-chan]

awww...I thought it was really cute. <3 Ash's feelings are really made clear with the way you describe it and your choice of words you chose to string together to make a beautiful advanceshippy poem.

Some errors here and there, but that's all right because mistakes aren't the most important thing (though it still is nice to master the bazillion complex rules of the English spelling and grammar XD)--but the message a writer is trying to send and the picture you're trying to portray. And I think you got that down. =]

Good job!~~

 

[Chelc]

Aww... cuteness~

There were a few grammatical and spelling errors, but meh, oh well. They can easily be fixed. XD; I especially liked the part where you described Haruka's sweetness like rare candy, and how the kindness of her heart touches everyone. Awesome job. =D

 

[cryztalwing]

Ok another pome. I am guesting this is PG-13. thank's for the reply's. This pome is about one of May dream's..


no words are spoken as I dream of being in your embrace
and the passion that I harbored is ferreted out
my heart dances as I dream being near your lips
in our unbridled frenzy of uncontrollable kisses
as you tower over me with my head in your chest
like an zapdos you envelop me in your arms like wings
our two spirits already merging in the energy of us
as if there would be no tomorrow for electric dreams
as if there were no reason left to deny what I feel
and in your warmth I melt like ice meeting the flames of an Moltres
for I have come to the conclusion and confirmation
that your love realized and embodied is eternal

I see myself reflected in the dark depths
of your tender eyes of great yearning fire
and I realize that you can envision yourself
embraced in the pale shimmering sea of mine
There are no obscene barriers between souls
already merged as one in my electric dreams
no walls to hold back love's total expression
no drawn curtains to obscure my growing flames

 

[Uzamaki Hinata]

OMG! OMG! This is really cute! I am so totally for Advancedshipping.... too bad the rest of the world is for pokeshipping. But I love your poems and remember to always right for AshMay!

 

[Anikin]

Yea. I love those two poems of Advanceshipping. It can truly express Ash's fealing towards May all the times he sees her. I love it.

 

[cryztalwing]

thank's for the reply's. Here is a new pome..

~*~*~*~*May*~*~*~*~
Why am I attracted to you?
It's how you make me feel so true.
You make my blood burn with fire.
When I am training with you,my feelings run wild

I remember every moment we share.
No matter how insignificant it might seem, I still care.
When I am down, you lift me up.
You teach me to never give up.

When I look within your eyes, your penetrating glaze is so strong.
It's as though I look at Combuskens flam to long.
I close my eyes, and see you again.
I see the way you smile, and the places we been,

I float and drift like an Altaria around you,
suspended weightless as I look at your eyes so deep.
The sound of your voice sends me in a delerious high,
my head spinning as though I could fly.

I am and always will be the one that loves you without limits.
I anticipate your touch, such tenderness in it.
I have breathed you in and need you with me.
I tremble, the thought of you sharing moments with me.

I dream of you being with me and being in my arms, such a rare treasure.
No one else to you Ash can measure.
Make all my blackness go away from me tonight.
Allow you and I to be connected by a tunnel of light.


~*~*~*~*Ash*~*~*~*~
I see you.
I watch you.
I desire you.

Many times in a single day,
my thoughts wonder to you.
I yearn to kiss you,
huge you,
To be with you.

So many times I have wanted to tell you,
just how I feel of you.
unfortunately,
I will never be able to.

Our friendship,
strong as it may be,
would forbid a love like this,
only a dream, only a wish.

Don't touch what is forbidden .
People all around us,
friend and foe alike,
would try valiantly to destroy us,

You,
May,
would be at a far grater risk than I,
so are friendship must stay nigh.

Therefore,
my undying love and admiration,
will forever remain buried deep,
in a heart that weeps.




~*~*~*~*May*~*~*~*~
One man thought it a lie, one man thought it true;
I knew that it had to be, the day that I met you.
You saw me look, you took me under your wing;
Every moment I had to spare, all the thing's you have to teach

Our fates were woven together, like spinaraks on a web;
And as the webs of which they were, they hung there in their place.
Forever strong, forever beautiful, with both our fates intact;
Until the day of which we found our web was eternally cracked by a rose.

We fell apart as quickly as the time that we were bound;
All the times we shared together, were nowhere to be found.
It seemed to happen all too fast, as if I only blinked;
All the things we had known and loved, gone -- as if extinct.

I then proceeded to question myself, like no one has before;
Asking myself where I went wrong, kneeling closer to the floor.
Tears were falling from my eyes, not once did they recede.
Begging for forgiveness Ash, all I could muster was to plead.

 

[Uzamaki Hinata]

THAT WAS REALLY CUTE! It explains the two perfectly! The way Ash likes her but has to keep it a secret. Oh, I just love it! You're a great poet, keep bringing the advancedshipping poems!

 

[cryztalwing]

~*~*~*May*~*~*~
am I still your wildflower, scarlet velvet
whose scent flows only for you?
am I yet your pleasant garden
of tranquil moonlight strolls
of serene summer days on garden bench
where Combuskens flame thaws your chill?
am I your orchard of ripened fruit
and lush vineyard of passion’s love?

there is only one me, Sweet Love
though others may compare
more favorably in your eyes
do they offer you the love I can?
do their roots entwine with yours?
are their leaves crimson yet in winter
falling gently into your soul
with loving whispers like Chimecho sighs?

am I still the one you think of
when you contemplate depths of desire?
the one you tremble to embrace, to kiss
the one you burn to ravish in the night?
tell me, am I still your wildflower, or
have I faded into just a fragrant memory
Ash, do I still bloom in your heart
capturing your senses with the scent of love?


~*~*~*Ash*~*~*~
Even when the rose lost are way.
You were still by my side.

Even when I thought
I travel alone.
You were by my side.

I feel you in the
deepest stillness of
thought, when silence
is my sanchary.
Emotions swell and rise
from holes too deep
to seek their
end.

Whichever way the wind
is blowing.
You are by my side.
I feel your glow of love
spreading from within.
After searching earthly places
that I could never find
but found myself instead
within a peaceful
mind.

I carry you in heart
in body, soul and mind.
This fire will keep
on burning, until
my life stops
existing.

And....

May your still by my side

 

[cryztalwing]

~*~*~*~*May*~*~*~*~
If he only knew how much I love him
and how my heart achs to see
a young man so loving and tender having to
endure his heart being alone each night
he has friends but living without love

…if he only knew

how I long to wrap my arms around him
under the light of a full moon
with the sweetscent from my Bulbasaur surrounds us
and were the Volbeats and Illumise put on a light show
he is always lonely

….if he only knew

the way my lips would gently kiss away
all the cruel loneliness and sorrow
until his heart began to sing
and untill he knows that thier is some one who loves him
he feels weak, defeated sometimes

….if he only knew

the way our passion would revive him
and give him a reason to keep on
to never give up his dream becoming a master trainer
I could be more than he can imagine
if he only knew….

but Ash doesn’t …yet


~*~*~*~*Ash*~*~*~*~

My soul was empty when I saw that shooting star,
How could I know after making my wish to Jirachi,
That an Angel was travling with me

My soul was so empty and dark,
Thinking I never to know what love is,
I feel so ever torn.

I maid my wish and went back inside,
Crawling back to that place,
that place where I always hide.

Had I not known any better,
that an Angle was there,
that she also made an wish to Jirachi
I could only wonder what she wish for.

I talk to her to see if she was real,
and almost in an instant
with her loving words and caring voice
my wounds, they began to heal.

A soul once empty and dark
Like the blackness of a blackhole in space,
was now emitting rays of light,
so powerful and so free.

I imagine her saying ,"Take my hand Ash,
I will protect you from falling,"
I had cried to the heavens,
and I knew that she was the one.

Like a new PoKeMoN trainer,
with a new start on live,
This Angel I gave
The key to my heart.

I imagine saying to her, "This key that I offer,
now shiny and new,
is the thing I have to give,
for saving me, and I thank you."

You inspire me to battle all challengers ,
from such a beautiful feeling,
The emptiness is filling, the darkness is fading,
And you have become the cause of my healing.

You came to me,
like a beautiful Articuno ,
I am honored just to know you ,
May, the Angel that I love.


~*~*~*~*May*~*~*~*~

A touch of your heart alone is required
to know that your love lives
and though you turn your eyes away from me
my love you still have

and I here in darkness wait in hope of other times
when happiness might stay
in future time of grace for us at last
when are love have its day

but if we are torn apart separated from each other
then give me what you can
for love is nurtured in kindred hearts
of a PoKeMoN coordinator and a trainer

and if fate decrees that I never be able agian to
look deeply into your eyes
then caressed by your words alone
my love lingers on and not despised

a touch of your heart a distant kiss
will warm my thoughts afar like a dream
no distance great can destroy are love
my heart is where you are Ash



~*~*~*~*Ash*~*~*~*~

Inspiration doesn't flow when the river
runs wild with excitement of a journey to
somewhere you want to be with the one you love forever
the well runs dry when there's a touch
of love in the air mixed with happiness
a sweet feeling of contentment within

Still the need is greater than my will
I have seen the end of ho-ohs rainbow
climb to the mountain top
I fell lik I drank from the fountain of youth
walked with my eyes wide open through
the rain, while your image floated above me in the clouds

I imagine your voice calls to me, whisper my name
my own voices in my head ask me to speak/share on their behalf
but my embarrassment won't allow me to share, even whisper

though I hear your voice inside my head it wants me to shout like an Loudred
scream out-loud for all to hear of this beautiful emotion
and still... I know some things are,must be sacred...

kept private...between lovers only May..




So what you think?

 

[cryztalwing]

So what do you think? Good? Bad? need's more work?




~*~*~*~*May*~*~*~*~

“Courageous” yes , that is your title
not only does the blood of legends
course through your veins
you are a brave, strong trainer
who has looked life dead in the eye
and conquered many of its obstacles and lived
not only did you won my affection
you gain my respect

you are a turely a rare and precious blend
of strength , tenderness, bravery,
of amazing PoKeMoN battling skills, a and invaluable humor
of sensible dreams and fantasys , thow dense at times
the sound of your voice makes me smile
the joy of your laughter elicits my own
and the wisdom of your battling tactics
sharpens and refines my own coordinator skills

I want you to know the great depths of my love
I know your heart is capable of feeling, giving
and to think that no girl has ever
returned those depths, that loyalty the way I have
causes me to feel true sorrow for you
I don’t know if we will ever be more
than the very close and trusted friends we are
but this secert feeling is for you, Ash I love you


~*~*~*~*Ash*~*~*~*~

There was no mistakin,
my existence became shaken,
when I fell in love with you.

I felt an inclination,
my heart burst with admiration,
when I was near you.

Rayquaza and Deoxys collided from my infatuation,
Why do I hide my feelings I have for you?,
whenever I looked at you.

My heart burst with passion,
flames within burn in the same fashion,
when I imagin of kissing you.

Every star in the sky is for us,
a love story of Jirachi, Clefairy, and Clefable,
when I fell in love with you.

My eyes look at you with desire,
my blood burns with fire,
when I hear your voice.

Forever I cherish these feelings in me,
you are my true love, as true as your deep blue sapphire eyes.
Forever fascinate, captivate, tease me,
in return, I forever yours May.


~*~*~*~*May*~*~*~*~

I just can't get enough,
like a Venomoth drawn to your Charizards flame,
you provoke my desires,
hugging devoutly in your arms is what I wished.

Your penetrating eyes,
imaging you whispering my name
I'm at the height of my ambition.
I'm want to break all the rules with you.

I desire for your tender touch.
Yearning, I'm on the thorns for hope for you.
My eternal love for you never ends.
Only you can give me what I want Ash.

 

[Jemi Rose]

Awesome job! I feel that you have put much passion in this poem for this two characters!

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[Uzamaki Hinata]

I totally agree with Jemi Rose, its perfect!

 

[cryztalwing]

Hey, thank's for the reply's! I appreciate it...

~*~*~*~*May*~*~*~*~

I want to be THE ONLY ONE
who truly won your heart
I want to be that eternal flame deep down
that warms your empty soul and
lights the darkness of your eyes

I want you to know my secrets
understand and appreciate each one
my weaknesses and my strengths
to admire my potent power and grace has an coordinator
and to fortify me in my weakness

I want to freely express myself
and to keep travling the world with you
but I need the sanctuary of your arms
to run to whenever I am lonely
hurt, confused or just in need of your touch

I want to know your thoughts
and share all your dreams
I want to be challange in battle by you
like the beautiful coordinator I am
I need to be cherished, romanced, and loved

never taken for granted or ignored
I need to know for certain
that you can’t achieve you goal of becoming a master trainer without me
you have to say it and show it
and if you don’t.... one day you look around and I might be gone

I need to feel your arms around me with your tenderness
sometimes all I want is gentle love, to know you care
like going some were quite and romantic just being along with you
were others can not bother us sharing an intimate moment
and all I expect is you to understand my feelings Ash.

 

[Karadur]

love it,and the others I missed,keep th awesome work up!

 

[HarleyScarow]

Poems are easy to make. But good ones are hard to. Like the way that you make them long and use good words.