Thanks for the review! Hopefully the chapter after this one will be funny, for a new Original Character is going to be announced then, as well as the one two chapters after that one. Ah well. Piston Dewott/Piston Honda/o doesn't have much to be worked upon to make him funny...
Chapter 10: Piston Dewott
Hitmonchan entered his new stadium, which he was in when he saw the fight between Dewott and Chansey. This time though, he was the one who would be fighting. Dewott was already at the ring, waiting for him. He bowed in respect once Hitmonchan arrived.
“Greetings, I am Dewott.” The Discipline Pokémon then went into his battling stance.
“Uh… I knew that already.” Hitmonchan took out his Battle Logger and scanned him.
“Piston Dewott. #4 of the Under Used Circuit. Record is 36 wins, 8 losses, 35 KOs. Height is 5’9’, weight is 65 lbs, and age is 22. Random fact: Piston Dewott has a twin brother.”
“Don’t underestimate me, Hitmonchan. Unlike the previous fighters I am very serious about my fighting!” The crowd yelled behind his side, showing that he was quite a popular contender.
*ROUND 1*
Piston Dewott began the fight with a few swift Water Pulse attacks, which Hitmonchan dodged and countered accordingly. “I missed?!” Then, he bowed in respect to his opponent once more. Hitmonchan did what Chansey did and attacked him at this time for a Star.
“Sky Uppercut!”
“Oh man… It hurts!” Dewott was knocked aside, but recovered, and charged up a Razor Shell attack. Hitmonchan dodged, but not the right way and got his as a result. Dewott then continued with two more Water Pulses, which Hitmonchan dodged and countered. The Disclipline Pokémon then kneeled to one side to prepare for another attack.
“Hiy-yah!” Dewott unleashed a strong Revenge attack, however missed due to how big his tell was. “Hmm?” Hitmonchan hit him a few more times and knocked him down for the first time. Dewott ran around to the middle of the ring and muttered some words before falling. “Fwah! The sea… the sea…”
“One…two…three…four…five…” Dewott pushed himself back onto the ring and continued the fight with another Revenge attack, then did a special move.
Dewott hopped back, and jumped a few more times before speaking. “Fury Cutter!” Hitmonchan remembered this attack, but didn’t necessarily know how to dodge it. He tried dodging once, but it didn’t help as he kept getting hit by the bladed scalchop. After getting hit four times, Dewott landed a knockdown on Hitmonchan with a quick Revenge attack. “Fwah hah hah ha!”
“One…two…three…four…” Hitmonchan grabbed the ropes of the ring, and used them to pull himself back up. “Fight!”
Dewott bowed as he got back up, which Hitmonchan used as a Star opportunity. He then punched right before a Water Pulse attack was used for another Star, and executed a Level 2 Sky Uppercut. However…
“Round over!”
*INTERMISSION*
“My brother once told me something. If your head and your heart are at peace, even the heavy fire stays cool.
“Even though you’ve been knocked down once, that still doesn’t mean you’re outta the game! Special moves like that have an opening right as they’re about to hit you! Hitmonchan, counter-punch that Fury Cutter of his!”
“Makes sense. Hey, can I have some of your chocolate again?”
“Sure! Now send that smart sucka right back to his dojo!” Throh handed his apprentice a piece of his chocolate.
*ROUND 2*
Before the next round, Dewott was doing some practice attacks. “One! Two…three… One! Two…three…” A Wobbuffet placed some screen windows around him as he was doing so. The odd Pokémon assumingly was his coach, at least in Hitmonchan’s eyes.
“Fight!” Dewott opened with another bow to his opponent, which Hitmonchan rudely used as an opportunity to attack for a star. After that, one Sky Uppercut knocked Dewott down once again.
“One…two…three…four…five…six…”
Dewott slowly got back up again, and under his breath, complained “Argh… One more round!” He then used a Revenge attack, which easily backfired. Dewott then jumped back for his Fury Cutter attack.
“Fury Cutter!” Right as he was about to make contact, the Fighting type Bullet Punched him in the stomach, instantly knocking him down. “Fwah! The match… is mine…”
“One…two…three…four…five…six…seven…”
“Urgh… Not done yet!” Dewott was a bit scatterbrained as he got back up, and attempted to use his special Fury Cutter attack AGAIN, despite it failing the last time. It proved uneffective, as Hitmonchan countered it, knocking him to the edge of the ring.
“Ugh! I’ve failed… Ugh!” The ring’s ropes struggled to repel him back up, but it didn’t.”
“TKO! Little Hitmonchan is the winner!”
As the live camera focused in on Hitmonchan, he grinned and let out a small, but victorious laugh to the camera.
“Ha, ha, ha. All those old fighters have once told me that “Competitive play is fighting, backed by technique.” … I think you’ve proved that, son! Great fight, great fight!” Doc Throh then handed his apprentice 1350 Pokédollars. “Now that we’re in the larger circuits, the money basis will keep going up!”
Chapter 10: Piston Dewott
Hitmonchan entered his new stadium, which he was in when he saw the fight between Dewott and Chansey. This time though, he was the one who would be fighting. Dewott was already at the ring, waiting for him. He bowed in respect once Hitmonchan arrived.
“Greetings, I am Dewott.” The Discipline Pokémon then went into his battling stance.
“Uh… I knew that already.” Hitmonchan took out his Battle Logger and scanned him.
“Piston Dewott. #4 of the Under Used Circuit. Record is 36 wins, 8 losses, 35 KOs. Height is 5’9’, weight is 65 lbs, and age is 22. Random fact: Piston Dewott has a twin brother.”
“Don’t underestimate me, Hitmonchan. Unlike the previous fighters I am very serious about my fighting!” The crowd yelled behind his side, showing that he was quite a popular contender.
*ROUND 1*
Piston Dewott began the fight with a few swift Water Pulse attacks, which Hitmonchan dodged and countered accordingly. “I missed?!” Then, he bowed in respect to his opponent once more. Hitmonchan did what Chansey did and attacked him at this time for a Star.
“Sky Uppercut!”
“Oh man… It hurts!” Dewott was knocked aside, but recovered, and charged up a Razor Shell attack. Hitmonchan dodged, but not the right way and got his as a result. Dewott then continued with two more Water Pulses, which Hitmonchan dodged and countered. The Disclipline Pokémon then kneeled to one side to prepare for another attack.
“Hiy-yah!” Dewott unleashed a strong Revenge attack, however missed due to how big his tell was. “Hmm?” Hitmonchan hit him a few more times and knocked him down for the first time. Dewott ran around to the middle of the ring and muttered some words before falling. “Fwah! The sea… the sea…”
“One…two…three…four…five…” Dewott pushed himself back onto the ring and continued the fight with another Revenge attack, then did a special move.
Dewott hopped back, and jumped a few more times before speaking. “Fury Cutter!” Hitmonchan remembered this attack, but didn’t necessarily know how to dodge it. He tried dodging once, but it didn’t help as he kept getting hit by the bladed scalchop. After getting hit four times, Dewott landed a knockdown on Hitmonchan with a quick Revenge attack. “Fwah hah hah ha!”
“One…two…three…four…” Hitmonchan grabbed the ropes of the ring, and used them to pull himself back up. “Fight!”
Dewott bowed as he got back up, which Hitmonchan used as a Star opportunity. He then punched right before a Water Pulse attack was used for another Star, and executed a Level 2 Sky Uppercut. However…
“Round over!”
*INTERMISSION*
“My brother once told me something. If your head and your heart are at peace, even the heavy fire stays cool.
“Even though you’ve been knocked down once, that still doesn’t mean you’re outta the game! Special moves like that have an opening right as they’re about to hit you! Hitmonchan, counter-punch that Fury Cutter of his!”
“Makes sense. Hey, can I have some of your chocolate again?”
“Sure! Now send that smart sucka right back to his dojo!” Throh handed his apprentice a piece of his chocolate.
*ROUND 2*
Before the next round, Dewott was doing some practice attacks. “One! Two…three… One! Two…three…” A Wobbuffet placed some screen windows around him as he was doing so. The odd Pokémon assumingly was his coach, at least in Hitmonchan’s eyes.
“Fight!” Dewott opened with another bow to his opponent, which Hitmonchan rudely used as an opportunity to attack for a star. After that, one Sky Uppercut knocked Dewott down once again.
“One…two…three…four…five…six…”
Dewott slowly got back up again, and under his breath, complained “Argh… One more round!” He then used a Revenge attack, which easily backfired. Dewott then jumped back for his Fury Cutter attack.
“Fury Cutter!” Right as he was about to make contact, the Fighting type Bullet Punched him in the stomach, instantly knocking him down. “Fwah! The match… is mine…”
“One…two…three…four…five…six…seven…”
“Urgh… Not done yet!” Dewott was a bit scatterbrained as he got back up, and attempted to use his special Fury Cutter attack AGAIN, despite it failing the last time. It proved uneffective, as Hitmonchan countered it, knocking him to the edge of the ring.
“Ugh! I’ve failed… Ugh!” The ring’s ropes struggled to repel him back up, but it didn’t.”
“TKO! Little Hitmonchan is the winner!”
As the live camera focused in on Hitmonchan, he grinned and let out a small, but victorious laugh to the camera.
“Ha, ha, ha. All those old fighters have once told me that “Competitive play is fighting, backed by technique.” … I think you’ve proved that, son! Great fight, great fight!” Doc Throh then handed his apprentice 1350 Pokédollars. “Now that we’re in the larger circuits, the money basis will keep going up!”
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